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1.
就业类
2.
品质类
(
勤俭
)
Direction:
Write an essay of 160
—
200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you
should
1) describe the drawing briefly,
2) explain its intended meaning and
3) give your
comments.
(
一
)
介绍背景段：
失业人群巨大，暗示再就业十分必要
(
二
)
论证分析段：
失业人群的现状，再就业的重大意义
(
三
)
个人评价段：
如何让中国的就业状况稳定发展
分步写作
：
第一段
1.
介绍背景
2.
描述图片
3.
介绍文字
4.
过渡
1
、介绍背景
在这样一个激烈竞争的社会，很多人处于失业的状态
In a world moving on the wheels of fierce competition, many employees have lost their
jobs.
2
、描述图片
如图所示，
一个求职者正站在梯子旁边，
期待着自己能找到一份新的工作，
梯子能
帮他进入再就业的碗里
As is illustrated in the sketch, an applicant is standing beside a ladder, expecting to find
a new job/saying
wonderful, with the ladder helping him.
3
、文字描述
在图片的中间的碗上写着中文汉字：再就业
In the middle of the cartoon lie some
Chinese characters reading: re-employment.
4
、过渡
尽管图片很简单，但却生动显示出下岗员工对于再就业的渴望
Despite
its
simplicity,
it
vividly
reveals
the
desire
of
being
employed
again
from
the
bottom of the
laid-
off workers’ heart.
第二段：
1.
(
主题句
)
：再就业
?
2.
列举因素
3.
举例论证
4.
本体喻体
1
、
(
主题句
)
毫无疑问，大量的待业状态不利于社会稳定
?
Undoubtedly,
the
existence
of
large
number
of
unemployment
is
adverse
to
the
social
stability.
?
Undoubtedly,
finding
a
job/employment,
exerts
a
profound
impact
on
both
the
unemployed and the whole society.
2.
列举因素
(
原因结果
)
?
由于缺乏职业技能或者其他原因，有些员工被解雇
?
Owing to the lack of professional skills or the like, many employees were fired.
2.
列举因素
(
普遍特殊
)
?
更糟糕的是，越来越多大学生刚刚毕业就面临失业
?
Even worse
，
college graduates in growing number are in times of the unemployment just
after leaving school.
3.
举例论证
(
普遍示例
)
?
很多学生找工作有难度，从而出国或者考研就是一个例子
?
A case in point is that having difficulty in finding jobs, many undergraduates go abroad or
further
their study.
2.
列举因素
(
透析本质
/
原因结果
)
?
并非为了事业上的成就感，很多人工作是为了生活下 去
.
因此，帮助这些人再就业非
常重要。
?
Rather
than
the
sense
of
accomplishment
in
career,
many
people
work
just
to
make
a
living.
Hence, it is quite vital to help them find a job
again.
4.
本体喻体
?
图片中的碗代表中工作机会，很多求职者想要进入那个碗
?
The bowl in the drawing epitomizes job opportunities, into which many applicants make
every effort to get.
第三段：
1.
客观评价
/
个人评价
2.
提出建议
3.
展望未来
1.
客观评价
?
如果高失业率持续下去，整个国家经济和稳定将受到影响
?
Were the high unemp
loyment rate to continue, the country’s economy and stability would
be badly affected.
1.
客观评价
?
情况如此严重，国家发改委还有很长的一段路要走
?
The
present
situation
being
so
critical,
the
National
Development
and
Reform
Commission still have a long way to
go.
1.
客观评价
?
总之，有必要扭转低就业率的趋势
?
By and large, it is rather imperative to reverse this disturbing low employment rate
trend.
1.
个人评价
?
如果让我评论
,
我将会极力支持对于失业人群的帮助
?
Were
it
left
to
me
to
comment,
I
would
be
strongly
in
favor
of
helping
the
unemployed find a job.
2.(
提问
)
?
我们应该如何解决整个问题？
?
How should we address this problem?
3.
提出建议
?
首先，只有政府投入更多的资金才能缓解就业压力
?
Initially,
only
by
pouring
more
investment
form
the
government
can
the
employment
pressure be relieved.
3.
提出建议
?
其次，待业者应该自己想办法去找到一份工作养活自己
?
Secondly,
the
ones
who
are
in
need
of
a
job
should
strive
for
finding
a
job
to
support
themselves.
4.
展望未来
?
如果这些措施被采取，那么社会稳定和高就业率将不再遥远
?
With all these measures adopted, the prospect of social stability and high employment rate
will be far from
dim.
（完成）
第二篇作文：
勤俭，节约
thrifty
，
frugal, economical
文章布局：
(
一
)
介绍背景段：
人民生活水平提高，忽视了勤俭的美德
(
二
)
论证分析段：
人们不够节俭的原因，及危害
(
三
)
个人评价段：
如何能够变得更加节俭
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