红楼梦之十二金钗新高考英语作文写作指导与解读——热点写作话题：网络购物(以苏北七市三模为例)

新高考英语作文 写作指导与解读

——

热点写作话题：网络购物（以苏北七市三模为例）

南通和苏北等七市联考的英语考试的写作，

这属于比较流行的社会现象，

和往

年的 网络投票，

网络购物排名等都是一类的，

很接近考试了。

前几天我 刚结束了高考最后一

讲，基本也讲到了此类作文的写法。今天我继续写一下。

作文题

请阅读下面有关中国在线外卖现状调查的柱状图及相关文字，

并按照要求用英语写一篇

150

词左右的文章。

The scale of consumers of fast food delivery service in China

The fast food delivery service

，

which depends on the already-existing restaurants

，

can cover a

larger

place

with

more

customers

without

taking

the

seats

of

restaurants.

Under

the

current

economic and market condition

，

the fast food delivery service has been the new battlefield of the

fast food giants in China. Even MacDonald's and KFC

，

the two international fast food giants are

fighting against each other for more market share in China's fast food delivery industry.

However

，

Jing

Linbo,

Deputy

Director

of

the

Institute

of

Finance

and

Trade

Economics

，

the

Chinese Academy of Social Science

，

thought that the fast food delivery is the new growth point of

fast food enterprises. But the fast food enterprises should have certain comprehensive strengths

to do this service

，

which is thought to be different from the traditional food industry in some

aspects.

Besides

，

with

the

development

of

the

new

industry

，

there

also

emerge

problems.

And

some

observers have given their warnings. They warn that if the fast food enterprises take no notice of

the hidden problems

，

they will lose the customers in the competitive market gradually.

【写作内容】

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1.

用约

30

个单词概述上述信息的主要内 容；

1

2.

结合上述信息，简要分析外卖盛行的主要原因；

3.

请从消费者角度谈谈你对外卖的看法及建 议，用

2-3

个理由支撑你的观点。

写作指导

一、如何写概括：

由于这是概括信息，因此无需详细描述图表，只要反映一个问题即可。

要点：

number of consumers increase from 2011 to 2018.

2. The fast food delivery service has attracting many giants in China.

3. There are some hidden problems.

联句：

With the number of consumers climbing dramatically from 2011 to 2018

，

the fast food delivery

service has attracted many giants in China. But some hidden problems can't be ignored.

（

30wds

）

写作秘诀：

目前的文章概括基本分两类：新事物流行

（一般好的方面）

；

消极现象流行。

因此概括就是：

现象流行

+

评论（人们欢迎或人们反对或二者兼有）

记住这些结构：

with…popular; despite the disadvantages/advantages; raise doubts

二、如何写正文

第一个写作要求：写外卖流行的原因

根据最近三年的作文规律，原因等一定先从材料中找，我们不难找到以下的：

the already-existing restaurants

，

without taking the seats of restaurants

（总结：节约时间，提高效率）

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