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2018
济南市中考英语作文指导范例
主题
1:网购
随着社会的发展,网上购物成为一种新型的购物方式。请根据下表提示,谈谈
网上购物的利与弊。
要求:1.语句流畅,书写规范。2.包含提示内容,并可适当发挥
。3.词数
100
左右。4.文中不能出现人
名、地名等
真实信息。
思路解析:
Advantages
< br>(优点)
方便(
convenient
< br>);
24
小时营业;
不用排队
Disadvantages
(缺点)
看不见物品
;容易受到欺骗(
be
cheated
);
不能享受和朋友一起购物的乐趣
经典例文:
Nowadays
many
people
prefer
shoppi ng
online
which
is
popular
in
our
daily
life.
Generally,
its
advantages
ca n
be
seen
as
follows.
< p>First,convenience
is
the
< p>mostimportant
advantage,
you
can
buy
anything
as
you
like.
Besides,
you
don’t
have
to
queue
with< /p>
other
shoppers
and
it< /p>
is
often
open
for
24
hours
a
day.
But
coin
has
two
sides .
Its
disadvantages
are
al so
apparent.
One
of
the
negative
aspect
is
that< /p>
you
can’t
actually
see
the
real
products,
so
y ou
may
be
cheated
easily.< /p>
To
make
matters
worse,
many
people
will
miss
the
best
opportunity
to
get
along
well
with
t
heir
friends
by
shopping
t ogether.
From
the
comparison
between
these
positive
an d
negative
effects
of
shop ping
online,
we
should
take
it
reasonably.
Only
by
this
way,
can
we
live
better
with
shopping
online.
写作指导
适用题型:说明利弊题型
提醒:注意连接词的使用,例如:generally,firstly,
secon dly,besides,then,in
addition
等
< br>解析:这类题型一般采用总分总的写作结构
第一步:说明事物现状
第二步:事物本身的优缺点(或一方面)
第三步:你对现状(或前景)的看法<
/p>
1
Nowadays
many
pe ople
prefer
A
because
it p>
has
a
significant
role(重要角色 )
in
our
daily
life.
Generally,
its
advantages
c an
be
seen
as
follows.
First,
---------
(
A的优点之一)
Besides,
---------
(A的优点之二)
But
every
coin
has
two
sides.
The
negative
a spects
are
also
apparent.
One
of
the
important
d
isadvantages
is
that
--------- p>
(A的第一个缺点).To
make
matters
w orse,
---------(A的第二个
缺点).
< br>(结尾
1)From
the
comparison
between
these
positive
and
negative
effects
of
-------- -
(事物),
we
should
take
it
reasonably.
Only
by
this
way,
can
we
----- ----(对前景的预测).
(结尾
2)Through
the
above
analysis,
I
beli eve
that
the
positive
aspe cts
overweigh
the
negative
p>
ones.
Therefore,
I
would
like
to
---------(我的看法).
主题
2:传统文化
假设你是王明,你的美国朋友
MIK E
想通过你了解中国的传统节日。请你根据提示,给
Mike
写一 封
e-mail,向他介绍我国传统节日春节的情况。
内容提示
:1.春节是中国最重要的传统节日;
2.春节期间人们的主要活动(节前、除夕、节日期间)< /p>
提示词语:
Spring
Festival,
traditional,
decorate,
on
the p>
eve
of
the
festival,
get
together,
set
off
fireworks,
lucky
money
Dear<
/p>
Mike,
How
are
you?
I’m
really
glad
that
yo u
are
interested
in
tradit ional
Chinese
festivals.
There p>
are
many
traditional
fe stivals
in
China,
such
as< /p>
Spring
Festival,
Mid-Autumn
< p>Dayand
so
on.
I’d
p>
like
to
introduce
the
Spring
Festival
to
you.
< br>Spring
Festival
is
the
most
important
traditional
holid ay
in
China
which
usually< /p>
lasts
for
15
days.
Days
before
the
festival,
people
begin
to
clean
t heir
houses
to
sweep
any p>
bad
luck.
Besides,
we p>
also
decorate
our
houses
with
paper
cuts.
Then,
on
the
eve
of
the
f estival,
family
members
will
get
together
to
celebrate
the
new
year
and
wa tch
the
Spring
Festival
Ga la
on
TV.
At
midnight,
we
usually
set
off
fireworks
to
welcome
the
N ew
Year.
During
the
festiv al,
kids
will
get
luck y
money
from
old
people
and
people
will
visit
their
relatives
and
friends
< p>to
wish
one
another
a
happy
year
and
good
< p>luckon
the
first
day
of
New
year.
By
th e
way,
you
are
welcome
to
spend
Spring
Festival
< p>withus
if
you
have
< p>achance
in
the
futu
re.
Best
wishes!
Yours,<
/p>
Liu
Wei
2
写作指导
适用题型:传统文化题及书信邮件类题型
提醒:注意连接词的使
用,例如:firstly,
secondly,besides,then,in
addition
等
解析:这类题型一般采用总分总的写作结构
第一步:引出主题
第二步:主题含有的细节
第
三步:总结主题或者发出邀请(发出邀请适用于书信或电子邮件等)
Dear
How
are
you?
I’ m
really
glad
that
you
are
interested
in
---------.< /p>
There
are
many
XXXXXXXXX p>
in
China,
such
as
----------
and
so
on.
I’d
like
to
introduce
the
---------
to
you.
XXXXXXX
is
the
most
important
XXXXXXX
in
China
which
usually
lasts
for
XXX
days .
Days
before
the
fest ival,
---------.
Besides,
------ ---.
Then,
---------.
During
the
festival,
---------.
By
the
way,
you
are
welcome
to
spend
------
wi th
us
if
you
have
a< /p>
chance
in
the
future.
< p>Best
wishes!
Yours,
-------
英语书信或邮件常见写作模板
开头部分:<
/p>
How
nice
to
hear
from
you
again.
Let
m e
tell
you
something
about
the
---------.
I’m
gl ad
to
have
received
your p>
letter
of
日期
I’m
pleased
to
hear
that
you’r e
coming
to
China
for
< p>avisit.
I’m
writing
to
thank
you
for
your
help
during
my
stay
in< /p>
---------.
结尾部分:
With
best
wishes.
I’m
looking
forward
to
your
reply.
I’d
appreciate
it
if
you
could
reply
earlier.
< p>主题
3:共享单车
假定你是红星中学初三学生李华。你的美
国朋友
Jim
在给你的邮件中提到他对中国新近出现的一种共
享单车“mobike”很感兴趣,并请你做个简要介绍。请你给
Jim
回信 ,内容包括:
1.
这种单车的使用方法(如:APP
查看 车辆、扫码开锁等);
2.
这种单车的优势;
3
.
你对这种单车的看法。
注意:1.
词数不少于
80;
3