手工课2020届高考英语作文：热点话题解读与指导：网购与实体店(解读苏州高三期末考试一模)

高考英语作文：

热点话题解读与指导：网购与实体店（苏州高三期末考试一模）

这篇作文的话题是关于网络购物。

可能这是我们最常遇到的话题了，

所以 大家肯定有话可写，

然而就有可能产生千篇一律的句子。譬如，网络购物无非与

save

time,

convenient,

low

cost

等等。这样写下去就会遇到一堆

it is convenient for me to…

等等。

请阅读下面文字

,

并按照要求用英语写一篇

150

词左右的文草

Susu:Good to see you!It's been a while since I last saw you.

Zhouzhou:Good to see you look lovely in that did you get it?

Susu:I got it know online shopping is quite popular these days.

Zhouzhou:I my friends still prefer to shop in real stores.

Susu:It seems people have different opinions.

Zhouzhou:What do you think?

Susu:I think online shopping is just are thousands of shops and they never close.

Zhouzhou:But

in

real

stores,you

can

talk

to

the

salespeople

and

ask

questions

about

the

products.

Susu:Well,I

think

the

salespeople

always

talk

too

s,the

same

thing

often

costs

less

online.

Zhouzhou:The product may be cheaper,yet sometimes you have to pay more for the delivery.

[

写作内容

]

1.

用约

30

个词概括上述信息的主要内容。

2.

你更愿意在网上购物还是在实体店购物

?

请说明理由

(

不少于两点

)

。

如何写概要：

文章就是两个学生讨论网络 购物和在实体店购物的利弊，

然后两个人有不同的喜好。

概要写

< br>作有同学写网络购物越来越流行。

这是不对的，

因为越来越流行不是文章的 观点而是里面人

物的观点。所以我们写概要一定要绝对忠实于原文。

< /p>

关键是如何措辞造句，我依旧采取我前面一贯的风格：概述事实，表达人物观点。

事实：

Online shopping and going to physical stores each come with both pros and cons

观点：

Susu and Zhouzhou have different opinions and preference

合并：考虑用非限制性定语从句。

（可能你说 ，

你怎么老用这种句子？这其实就是一种思维方式，

一旦形成了，

就会成为写作

风格。

）

Online shopping and going to physical stores each come with both pros and cons, about which

Susu

and

Zhouzhou

held

a

discussion

with

different

opinions

and

showed

their

preference

respectively.

如何写正文：

本文思维非常广：

Positive side:

1.

时间角度：

time-saving, energy-saving, convenient

2.

经济角度：

affordable, low price

3.

选择：

seas of commodities, comparison

Negative side:

1. low-quality and even fake commodities

2. fraud, hackers, trap

采用以退为进法，即最后先说 网购肯定有弊端，但是只要我们做了什么，就会避开弊端的。

这篇文章重在如何设计结构和造句：

Frankly, online shopping appeals to me more. First, boasting of great convenience, it saves the

trouble

of

queuing

up

or

an

exhausting

journey

of

searching.

Just

a

click

on

the mouse

allows

netizens

to

purchase

their

favorite

products

whenever

possible.

Besides,

online

shopping

is

characterized

by

providing

seas

of

commodities

at

affordable

prices,

which

facilitates

products

comparison and helps make a better decision.

总结：

第一句是主题句。我有意把所有的主题句写得非常短而精致， 这样下面就可以写长句子了，

长短结合才美。我这里用到了不少句型，考生是直接可用的 ：

boast of…/ be characterized by…

具有什么特征

save the trouble of doing…

避免了什么麻烦

Just a click on…allows…

这是物称作主语，和

allow

一起搭配。

第二句写特征和第四句写特征的句式结构是不一样的，

目的是为了体现句式的多样化。

每个

句子的造句都是围绕因果，譬如：

First, boasting of great convenience

（原因：

因为方便）

, it saves the trouble of queuing up or the

exhausting

journey

of

searching

（最后几个词是名词短语）

.

Just

a

click

on

the

mouse

allows

netizens to purchase their favorite products whenever possible.

（拓举例展解释）

Besides, online shopping is characterized by providing seas of commodities at affordable prices,

which facilitates products comparison and helps make a better decision.

（定语从句表示结果含

义）

Despite concerns about low- quality and even fake commodities, the rules and regulations which

have

been

put

in

place

can

effectively

send

alarm

bells

ringing.

Besides,

it

is

our

continuing

supervision

and

improving

awareness

of

threats

that

ensure

a

reliable

online

shopping

environment and keep it going on the track.