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2020
届高考英语作文征文投稿书面表达热点话题猜押试题
征文投稿
Ⅰ.
作文升格
[
题目
]
(2019·
长沙四校一模
)
< br>假定你叫李华，
你校英语报
English
for
Teens
正在举办以
“
我最喜
爱的上学日
(school
da y)”
为主题的英语征文活动。请你写一篇征文向
该报投稿，内容包括：
1
．你在这天要做什么；
2
．你为什么最喜欢这天。
注
意：
1.
词数
100
左右；
2
．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
[
问题作文
]
ⅠIn my opinion, of the fifth school
days each week, I like Thursday
most,
which I have interesting subjects to learn and
colorful activities to
Ⅰjoin.
In
the
morning,
I
have
my
favourite
subject,
Chinese,
in
which
Mrs.
Chen
always
give
us
wonderful
teaching.
Her
reading
lessons
art
such
well?organized that I achieve many every time.
Most important, she
never
Ⅰ
makes
us
embarrassing
when
we
make
mistakes.
After_clas
s_this_day,_together_with_my_friends,_I_go_to_the_
English
_Corner_of_our_school._There_are
_foreign_teachers_but_some_college
_stud
ents.
We
talk
about
that
we
are
interested
in
freely.
As
well
as
making more friends there,
I've gained a lot about English.
That's my favourite school day!
[
我来升格
]
第一步：规避错误
——
保基本
上面文中共有
10
处错误，请改正。
答案：
第一句：
fifth→five;
which→when
或
which
前加
on;
join
后加
in
第二句：
give→gives
第三句：
such→so; many→much
第四句：
important→importantly; embarrassing→embarrassed
第六句：
but→and
第七句：
that→what
第二步：词句靓化
——
上档次
1
．升级词汇
Ⅰ
：
Persona lly
2
．升级词汇
Ⅰ
：
participate
3
．把句< /p>
Ⅰ
合并升级为定语从句
After_cl
ass_this_day,_together_with_my_friends,_I_go_to_th
e_Eng
lish_Corner_of_our_school_where_th
ere_are_foreign_teachers_and_som
e_colle
ge_students.
第三步：优化结构
——
争满分
请把上面习作进行合理分段。
Personally, of the five school days
each week, I like Thursday most,
on
which
I
have
interesting
subjects
to
learn
and
colorful
activities
to
participate
in.
In the morning, I have my
favourite subject, Chinese, in which Mrs.
Chen
always
gives
us
wonderful
teaching.
Her
reading
lessons
are
so
well?organized
that
I
achieve
much
every
time.
Most
importantly,
she
never
makes us feel embarrassed when we make
mistakes.
After
class
this
day,
together
with
my
friends,
I
go
to
the
English
Corner of our school where there are
foreign teachers and some college
students.
We
talk
about
what
we
are
interested
in
freely.
As
well
as
making
more friends there, I've gained a lot about
English.
That's my favourite
school day!
Ⅰ.
整篇训练
假定你是李华，
某英文报社向即将毕业的高中生征稿，
主 题是
“
向
成年出发
”
，请 你根据下列要点用英语写一篇短文向报社投稿。
1
．你的心情；
2.
你 的人生规划
(
学业、事业等方面
)
。
注意：
1.
词数
100
左右；
2
．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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