五年级上册英语作文

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小学英语五年级上册各单元作文范例及点评

My English Teacher

Miss Tang is my English teacher. She’s very pretty. She is tall and thin. She

has two big eyes and a small mouth. Her hair is long. She likes cats very much.

And she likes singing and dancing, too. Her English is very good. We often play

games in English classes. She is very kind to us. We all love her.

【要领点评】

这篇作文的题目是

“

我的英语老师

”

，是一篇介绍人物的作文。小作者开门见山， 直接

点题，首先介绍了英语老师的姓名，然后逐一介绍了她的外貌特征、喜好、英语水平 、

上课特点以及师生情感等。同学们在写作文时，要注意使用自己最熟悉的词

组

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，以免

写出一些错句子。写作 时要注意意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确、书写清晰、规范等。

My Days of the week

I’m a student and I am in Grade 5.I get up at six o’clock every day. I have

breakfast at half past six, and go to school at seven o’clock. I have classes from

Monday to Saturday. I have an English class on Friday and I have a PE class on

Tuesday. I don’t have to go to school on school, and I like to go swimming on

that day.

【要领点评】

这篇 作文的题目是

“

我的一周

”

，

小作 者没有说一些空话，

而是从自己的亲身经历写起，

叙述了自己一周七天的 所作所为，并特别强调了星期天的喜好，写得自然、流畅。

同学们写作文时要注意人称及谓语动词的变化，要依据提示，结合自己的实际，写

自己身边熟悉的事情。

My Favourite Food

Do you know what this is?

Guess! Its colour is yellow. It’s long and thin. It

looks like a small boat and crescent. Oh, it is a banana. Do you know what that is?

Guess again! Its colour is orange. It’s round. It looks like a small ball and a small

lantern. Oh, it is an orange. I like then a lot. I like ice-creams. I like to chew gum.

Chocolates and candies are yummy. I like them very much.

How about you? What’s your favourite food

?

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