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2015
年高考英语冲刺模拟作文精选六篇
假如你是李华，
最近你从报纸上看到一家涉外酒店招聘暑期兼职工的广告，
请 你根据下列要
点提示写一封应聘信。
1.
李华，女，
18
岁，身体健康。
2.
擅长英语，口语流利。
3.
性格外向，交际能力强。
注意：
1.
词数
120
左右。
2.
书信格式已经给出，不计入总词数。
3.
可以适当拓展。
Dear
Sir
or
Madame,
___
__________________________________________________
_________
_____________________________
_________________________________
_____
__________________________________________________
_______
Yours,
Li
Hua
Dear
Sir
or
Madame,
I
am
writing
in
response
to
your
advertisement
in
the
newspaper.
My
name
is
Li
Hua
and
I
am
18
years
old.
I
think
I
will
be
fit
f
or
the
job
as
a
waitress
in
your
hotel
this
summer
vacation.
Myadva
ntages
are
as
follows:
Firstly,
I
am
healthy
and
strong.
I
can
work
for
long
hours
in
sum
mer.
Secondly,
my
English
is
excellent.
I
can
speak
English
fluently
and
have
no
difficulty
communicating
with
foreigners.
Finally
,
I
a
m
outgoing
and
good
at
communicating
with
others.
As
a
result,
I
am
popular
among
my
classmates
and
teachers.
I
would
appreciate
it
if
you
could
give
me
the
chance
to
work
in
your
hotel.
I
’
m
looking
forward
to
your
reply.
Yours,
【解析】
试题分析：
要求考生给一家招聘暑期兼职工的涉外酒店写应聘信。
要符合提示 所给要求，
保
证字数在
120
左右。
亮
点
分
析
：
文
中
运
用
了
较
好
的
从
句
和
复
合
句
，
如
开
头
用
复
合
句
介
绍
自
己
“
My
name
is
Li
Hua
and
I
am
18
years
old
…”简单却能使内容清晰，条件
状
语
从
句
“
I
would
appreciate
it
if
you
could
give
me
the
chance
to
work
in
your
hotel.
”
等
；
文
中
多
处
运
用
到
好
的
固
定
短
语
，
如
“
in
response
to
…
”
“
be
fit
for
…
”
“
have
no
difficulty
in
doing
sth
”
“
be
good
at
doing
sth
< p>”等；第二部分根据提示介绍优点，较好的运用了连接词
“
Firs tly
…
Secondly
…
Finally
…”
，
使文章逻辑层次分明，
条理清晰；
最后有适当的扩展，
1
并且结尾有礼有节，是一篇较好的考场作文。
考点：考查应用文写作
假如你是新华中学的学生李华。<
/p>
某学生英文报正在招聘兼职的学生记者，
你向应聘。
请根据
以下要点给该报社写一封自荐信。信的开头已经给出。
1.
写信目的
:
对兼职记者感兴趣，决定应聘。
2.
自身优势
:
知识面广
,
英语水平高，写作能力强；
3.
有过类似的经历（学校广播站记者）
；
4.
性格外向，善于交际，乐意与他人合作。
5.
个人要求
:
希望能收到回复，并被聘用。
[
写作要求
]
1
．只能使用
5
个句子表达全部内容；
2
．信中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
3
．信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总数。
[
评分标准
]
句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。
Dear Sir,
I am a student
from Xinhua Middle School and I am glad to learn
that you need a few
more
part-
time English reporters. …
Dear Sir,
I am a student
from Xinhua Middle School and I am glad to learn
that you need a few
more
part- time
English
reporters.
Interested
in
the
job,
I
am
writing
to
apply
for
it
because
I
think
I
am
quite
fit
for
it.
As
a
student,
I
have
not
only
a
wide
range
of
knowledge but also a good command of English.
Besides, I am so good at writing
that
I
have
ever
had
such
a
similar
experience
as
working
as
a
reporter
for
my
school
broadcasting
station. Also I am easy-going, skilled at
communicating and always
willing
to
work
with
others
cooperatively.
I
am
looking
forward
to
your
timely
reply
and hope that I will be lucky enough to
take the job.
假设你是李华，前儿天你参加了
Cloud Travel Agen cy
组织的长白山三日游。下面是该旅
行社的广告，请根据下面广告中箭
头所指内容对其不实之处向消费者协会写一封投诉信。
2
注意：
1.
词数
100
左右
;
2.
可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.
信的开头和结尾已为你写好。
Dear Sir or
Madam,
I
’
m writing to express my complaint about the service of Cloud Travel Agency.
________________________
__________________________________________________
____
__________________________________
______________________________________
Dear Sir or Madam,
I
’
m writing to express my complaint about the service of Cloud Travel Agency.
A
few
days
ago,
I
joined
a
three-day
trip
to
Changbai
Mountain
with
this
travel
agency.
I found a few differences between their
ads and action.
As
they
say,
they
provide
a
large
air-conditioned
bus,
but
we
only
rode
in
a
shabby
bus
without any air-conditioner. Yes, they served us
lunch, but the food tasted
terrible,
some even with sand. We didn
’
t enjoy any kind of shower; we only bathed
in
cold
water. As
for sightseeing,
the guides led us to several expensive souvenir
shops, which wasted us much
time. As a result, two scenery spots were left
unseen
in the end.
We do
hope something can be done to prevent such things
happening again.
Regards,
Li
Hua
试题分析：
考查应用文中的书信的写 作。
根据下面广告中箭头所指内容对其不实之处向消费
者协会写一封投诉
信。
要点是以该旅行社的广告呈现出来的，
动笔前要好好审题，
仔 细的阅
读旅行社的广告会发现有
4
点和实际不符合，
要把要点说明清楚，
审题时注意本文使用一般
过去式，
描述要点时要运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。
难点在于选择词
汇和句型，可以灵活运用省略句，倒装句和强调句型准确表述。
As
they
say,
they
provide
a
large
air-conditioned
bus,
but
we
only
rode
in
a
shabby
bus
without
any
3