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The World Expo in 2010（世博会）英文作文-



The World Expo in 2010(2010年世博会)-



The World Expo in 2010-



Shanghai will host the 2010 World Expo. The World Expo has a long history but it has never been held in Asia. So the 2010 World Expo is an honor for all of the Asians. Our government-



has promised that it will be the best one. And Shanghai, as a host city, will have more chances to develop quickly. As a student in Shanghai, I should learn English well so that I can be a volunteer in the Expo to help foreigners know more about Shanghai.-



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How To Be A Lovely Citizen(如何成为一个可爱的上海人) -



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Great changes have taken place in Shanghai and more and more people throughout the world are focusing their attention on Shanghai now. As a citizen of Shanghai, I feel I must spare no efforts to do my bit. First, I decide to help plant more trees to make our city more beautiful. Second, I should obey seven nos and be good at learning from others. Third, I should study hard so that I can do something better for my city in the future.-



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u3000u3000Directions : For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Certificate Craze On Campus. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: u3000-



u3000u30001)近几年大学校园内出现“考证热” -



u3000u30002)产生这一现象的原因 -



u3000u30003)你的看法 -



u3000u3000Certificate Craze On Campus -



u3000u3000_______________ __________________________________________________ ______________ -



u3000u3000________ __________________________________________________ _____________________ -



u3000u3000_ __________________________________________________ ____________________________ -



u3000u3000行文思路 -



u 3000u3000本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析产生这种现象的原 因，提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”对该现象的看法，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。 -

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u3000u3000根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述近几年大学校园内的“考证热” ;分析越来越多的大学生热衷考取各种证书的主要原因;阐述“我”对大学生“考证热”的看法。 -



u3000u3000高分范文 -



u3000u3000Certificate Craze On Campus -



u3000u3000In recent years, getting a certificate has become a new craze among college students. [1]Just randomly ask a student on campus what he or she is busy doing, [2]Quite possibly, you may get the answer [3]that he or she is preparing for a certificate [2]of some kind. [4]Why does this craze appear? -



u3000u3000[4]There are mainly two reasons behind this phenomenon. First, [5]it is the employment pressure that forces college students to get more certificates. With the admission expansion of colleges, a lot more graduates have to face the fierce competition in the job market. How can one make himself more competitive? More c

ertificates at hand, maybe. Second, diploma and certificates are still important standards [6]by which many employers measure a person’s ability. In order to increae the qualifications for a job, the students compel themselves to run from one exam to another. -



u3000u3000[7]From my point of view, we should be more rational [8]when it comes to certificates, [9]since certificates [2]do not necessarily prove one’s ability. Being crazy in getting certifications blindly is [10]nothing but wasting time. To conclude, we should focus on improving our ability [10]but not getting a certificate of no practical value. -



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u3000u3000[1]祈使句使用恰当。randomly意为“随意地，随机地”。 -


u3000u3000[2]限定词使用恰当，使文章表达更严谨，增强了说服力。 -



u3000u3000[3]that引导同位语从句，修饰the idea。 -



u3000u3000[4]设问句引出原因，容易引起注意。 -



u3000u3000[5]强调句型，此处是强调主语。 -
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u3000u3000[6]which引导非限制性定语从句，充当介词宾语。 -



u3000u3000[7]用于引出“我”的观点。 -



u3000u3000[8]“当谈到或提及…时”。 -



u3000u3000[9]since引导原因状语从句，表示既定的原因，常译为“既然 ”。 -



u3000u3000[10]“只是，仅仅”。“而不是”。 -



u3000u3000佳句临摩 -



u3000u30001.佳句：You may get the answer that he or she is preparing for a certificate of some kind. -



u3000u3 000临摩：离婚率上升尽管令人难过，但却是不争的事实。 -



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u3000u30002.佳句：Diploma and certificates are still important standards by which many employers measure a person’s ability. -



u3000u3000临摩： 在过去的三十年，发展中国家在许多方面都 取得了很大的进步，其中包括健康水平的提高。-



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u3000u30003.佳句：From my point of view, we should be more rational when it comes to certificates. -



u3000u3000临摩：我认为，对于 我们来说，更重要的是尽可能提高自己的能力而不是获得更多的证书。 -



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u3000Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Students’ Pursuit for Famous Brands. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: -



u3000u30001)现在很多大学生都喜欢追求名牌 -



u3000u30002)产生这种现象的原因是什么 -



u3000u30003)你如何看待这一现象 u3000 -



u3000u3000Students’ Pursuit for Famous Brands -



u3000u3000________ __________________________________________________ _____________________ -



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u3000u3000行文思路 -



u3000u3000本题属于提纲式文

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u3000u30003. 佳句：Therefore, college students should attach more importance to cultivating a good character rather than pursuing famous brands. -



u3000u3000临摹：很多同学 经常玩电脑游戏，这是浪费时间，而不是一种有益的放松方式。 -



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u3000u3000Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write A Letter Applying for a Bank Loan. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese： -



u3000u30001)简单介绍个人情况u3000 -



u3000u30002)说明申请助学贷款的原因、数额 -



u3000u30003)保证会合理利用贷款并表明还款的决心 -



u3000u3000A Letter Applying for a Bank Loan -



u3000u3000_____________ __________________________________________________ ________________ -



u3000u3000______ __________________________________________________ _______________________ -



u3000u300 0_________________________________________________ ______________________________ -



u3000u3000行文思路 -



u 3000u3000本题属于情景式命题，要求写一封申请信。根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：简单介绍自 己的情况，表明写信目的：申请助学贷款;说明申请助学贷款的原因、数额;保证合理利用贷款并表明还款决心， 最后表示感谢。 -



u3000u3000高分范文 -



u3000u3000A Letter Applying for a Bank Loan -



u3000u3000Sep 12th, 2008 -



u3000u3000To whom it may concern, -



u3000u3000I am a freshman of Lianhe University, [1]majoring in Applied Physics. I am writing in the hope that I may obtain a bank loan to support my study in Applied Physics for the following four years. -



u3000u3000My parents are both laid-off workers, so it’s [2]beyond their power to finance me through the college education. [3]To make matters worse, my mother has suddenly fallen ill and is expecting a major operation. [4]Therefore, [5]with the college tuition becoming a much heavier burden on my family, I am compelled to apply a RMB20,000 bank loan. -



u3000u3000[6]I give you my promise that the loan would be used properly. [4]Meanwhile, I’ll [7]spare no effort to work hard both in the study and my future career in order to pay back the loan. I would be greatly obliged if my application is granted. And I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. -



u3000u3000Sincerely yours, -



u3000u3000Song Xue -



u3000u3000【亮点点评】 -



u3000u3000[1]“主修…”，现在分词作伴随状语。 -



u3000u3000[2]“超出…的能力范围”。 -



u3000u3000[3]“使事情更糟糕的是”。 -



u3000u3000[4]过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。 -



u3000u3000[5]“with+宾语+宾补”的独立结构。 -



u3000u3000[6]“我保证…”，that引导同位语从句。 -



u3000u3000[7]“不遗余力”。 -



u3000u3000佳句临摩 -



u3000u30001.佳句：To make matters worse, my mother has suddenly fallen ill and is expecting a major operation. -

u3000u3000临摩：令人更迷惑不解的是，很多飞机都从大海上离奇消失了。 -



u3000u3000_______________________ __________________________________________________ __. -



u3000u30002.佳句：Therefore, the college tuition becoming a much heavier burden on my family, I am compelled to apply a RMB20,000 bank loan. -



u3000u3000临摩：由于周围交通不便利，人们只得步行回家。 -



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u3000u30003.佳句：Meanwhile, I’ll spare no effort to work hard both in the study and my future career in order to pay back the loan. -



u3000u3000临摩：全国人民都不遗余力地 支持北京举办奥运会。-