首当其冲造句雅思学术类小作文

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下面有几个图、

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什么类型的图标

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图表的主题

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整体趋势感受（可选）

Below there is a table indicating/describing/illustrating/depicting the amount of members of a

college bookshop. In general, great/dramatic difference could be easily identified from the table.

Below

there

are

four

pie

charts

indicating

the

percentage

of

mothers

who

work

after

having

children of different groups. In general, dramatic difference could be easily identified among the

four charts.

1.

描述：

It is easy to see that the percentage of mothers who do not work after having children

drastically

declined

as

their

children

’

s

age

grow

up/as

their

children

grow

up

(from

70%

among mothers with child 0-2 years to 26% with child 10 years old or more).

2.

数据：

Starting from

70% among mothers with youngest children of 0-2 years,

the percentage

plunged to

54% among mothers with child 3-4 years and that percentage

continued to drop

to

38% as children grew up to 5-9 years old,

and finally stopped at

26% among mothers with

child 10 years old or more.

描述：

In contrast, that percentage of mothers working part-time after having children increased

gradually

（

from 19% to around 45%

）

.

描述：

Similarly

，

the percentage of those who work full-time after having a child also increased

significantly.

数据：

Among those with child aging between 0-4 years, 11% of them have been working full-time

and that percentage rise/grow/increase/climb up to 14% among those with child aging between

5-9

and

then

soared/rocketed/nearly

doubled

up

to

26%

among

mothers

with

child

aging

10

years plus.

It

is

interesting

to

see

that

for

those

with

child

aging

0-4,

a

disproportionate

percentage

of

mothers would choose to stay at home ( 70% of mothers with child aging 0-2 and 54% of mothers

with child aging 3-4

respectively

).

On

the

contrary,

when

children

grew

up

to

be

over

5

years

old,

a

large

percentage/ratio/proportion of mothers would choose/prefer to work part-time (with 48% and

45% respectively).

To

sum

up,

the

pie

charts

might

be

able

to

indicate

that

as

children

grow

up,

an

increasing

amount of mothers would prefer to find a work/get employed.

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Below

there

is

a

bar

chart

depicting

the

difference

between

percentage

of

males

and

females

holding officer grade in a company. In general, evident difference could be

easily

identified.

As

the

level

of

officers rising

from

grade

E

to A,

the

percentage

of

male

holding

such

position

obviously

rocketed

rapidly

(from

approximately

25%

to

95%).

In

contrast,

however,

that

percentage

of

females

plummeted.

Starting

from

over

75%,

the

percentage

of

ladies

holding

higher level rank in this company

drastically

plunged to

barely

over 10%. Through comparison,

the

bar

chart

shows

that

among

those

who

are

holding

Grade

C

level

positions,

the

gender