绿叶对根的情意作文-各民族风俗
微技能六 心理描写
心理描写就是对人物内心的思想活动进行描写。描写人物的思想活
动，能反映人
物的性格，展示人物的内心世界。所以，心理描写也是刻画人物思想性格的重要
手
段之一。当然，心理描写还可以细腻、生动、真实地展示人物的心路历程，从
而更好地揭示出人物的性格
特点。通过对人物心理的描写，能够直接深入人物心
灵，揭示人物的内心世界，表现人物丰富而复杂的思
想感情。也可以让文章更生
动，有新意，并且能写出自己的看法和感受，让文章更充实。
语言输入——素材积累，为续写奠基
Ⅰ.词汇积累
1．horror n．恐惧
2．frown n. 皱眉
3．open－mouthed adj.
目瞪口呆的，惊愕得张大嘴的
4．expectation n. 期望
5．annoyed adj. 恼怒的，气恼的
6．unintentionally
adv. 非故意地
7．tiredness n. 疲倦
8．mutual
understanding 互相谅解，相互理解
9．muster up courage
鼓起勇气
10．capture the attention 吸引注意
11．be
completely in a mess 完全一团糟
12．be under no
illusion about sth 对某事不存幻想
the belief
that... 相信……
14．in the expectation that...
期待……
15．feel out of place 感觉很不适应
16．show
no signs of tiredness 毫无倦意
17．an admiring
gaze 赞赏的目光
18．an envious glance 嫉妒的目光
19．offend sb unintentionally 无意中得罪某人
20．keep drifting away 走神
Ⅱ.佳句背诵
1．Color rushedfloodedrose to her cheeks when
she realized she was being watched.
意识到有人在看她，她顿时涨红了脸。
2．Her face lit
upbrightenedglowed when I gave her the
present.我给她礼物时，她
的脸上焕发出了光彩。
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更多心理描写佳句见P
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“语料积累”。
语言输出——层级训练，让续写添彩
Ⅰ.基础练习——补全句子
1．His eyes
grew__wide__with__horror at what she had done.
看到她所做的事，他惊恐地睁大了眼睛。
2．He putheld his head
in his hands, greatly__annoyed．
他双手抱头，十分生气。
3．He straightened up and
looked__at__me,__open－mouthed．
他直起身，目瞪口呆地看着我。
4．The beauties of the West Lake in spring were
beyond__his__expectation．
西湖的春景要比他所预想的更加美丽。
Ⅱ.综合演练——完成读后续写，注意心理描写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语
续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短
文。续写的词数应为150左右。
I was doing
a big clean－up recently and my kids were helping
when my son, Freddo,
came across a knotted
handkerchief with an old dark brown coin
inside.“Mum, can I
have this? Can I play with
this coin？”he asked.I took one look and was
immediately transported to another time.
In 1991, there was a time when my friend and I
worked in a backward African country,
Niger,
hit by sandstorms and burning were many things I
found difficult
about this place—the climate
and beggars were my biggest after
finishing
five months of nursing work there, we moved on to
work at a health clinic in
neighbouring
country, Burkina Faso.“It’s much greener in the
Coke
tastes better，” the locals assured
us.
Yet the fact was quite the ng by taxi at
our destination in Burkina, we
began to
unload.I was reaching for my larger piece of
luggage when, out of the
darkness, a motorbike
with two men approached t warning, one of the
men grabbed my daypack as the motorbike swept
close seconds, the pair
were out of sight,
swallowed up by the night.
With my passport,
money, traveller’s cheques all in the bag, I was
in deep
frustrating! All I wanted was to
leave this hellhole! Then, walking
through
Burkina’s streets one day, I was stopped by an old
woman who thrust her
hand in my face.“Cadeau
(‘gift’ in French)! Cadeau！”she cried.I’d had
enough! I
was extremely tired of the country:
its poverty, its thieves, the heat, the dust
and...everything! I told her angrily and
firmly in French, “I have no ‘Cadeau’．I
have
no money.A thief stole all my money two weeks ago
and now I can’t get out of
your country.I
cannot give you G！”The beggar woman listened
my great surprise, after hearing my words, she
gave me a broad smile.
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Paragraph 1：
She reached into the pockets
of her dress.“Then I will give you a cadeau，”she
, she placed an old dark brown coin in my
surprise，I looked
at the coin, then at the
that moment, I ①felt__rather__ashamed(感到很羞
愧),
②ashamed__of__my__terrible__attitude__towards__the
__old__woman(羞愧自
己对这位老妇人的恶劣态度)．In spite of her
poverty, she was able to give me
something
priceless.I had taken it for granted that beggars
would only receive
something from others, yet
the coin from the beggar woman in Burkina
③tru
ly__changed__my__view__towards__them(真正改变了我对他们的看法)
，and
④her__smile__hit__the__deepest__of__my__h
eart(她的微笑深深地印在我的内
心)．
Paragraph 2：
There was a slight touch on my hand; looking
down, I saw my son looking at me,
curious.“Mum，can I have this? Can I
play with this coin？”he repeated.“You
can’t
play with it, honey.” I touched my son on the head
and said slowly，“This
one’s is ⑤an__unforgett
able__precious__memory__(难以忘怀的珍贵记
忆)to and let
me tell you a story.”