台阶作文高中英语读后续写与概要写作 微技能五 情绪与情感描写

微技能五 情绪与情感描写
在读后续写中，描写人物的情绪与情感是常用的描写方法， 恰当的情绪与情感描
写能够表现文中人物的性格，推动事件的发展。在描述人物情绪与情感时要突出文章的中心，与人物的性格吻合，符合事件发展的逻辑。要选用恰当的词句通过
情绪与情感描写精确 地刻画人物的内心世界。
语言输入——素材积累，为续写奠基
人物喜乐


Ⅰ.词汇积累
1．happy adj. 愉快的，高兴的；美满的
2．cheerful adj. 快乐的
3．excited adj. 兴奋的
4．joyful adj. 欢乐的
5．pleased adj. 欣喜的，高兴的，满意的
6．enjoy vt. 喜爱
7．brighten vt. 使快活
8．delight n. 欢喜，愉快，高兴
vt. 使快乐，使喜欢
9．pleasure n. 愉快
10．passion n. 热情，激情
11．be fond of music 爱好音乐
12．a satisfied look 满意的表情
13．brighten one’s heart 使某人心情愉快
14．yell with delight 乐得大叫
15．set one’s heart at rest 使某人安心
16．be wild with delight 欣喜若狂
17．be in high spirits 精神高涨
18．be excited with joy at the success 为成功而欣喜

19．be on the top of the world 心满意足，非常幸福
20．a mixture of excitement and happiness 既兴奋又开心
Ⅱ.佳句背诵
1．The smile on her face shone like a diamond.
她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光。
2．Her flushed face was shining with excitement.
她激动得满脸通红。
3．Tears of happiness poured down Susan’s cheeks.
幸福的泪水顺着苏珊的脸颊流下来。
4．Her cheerful spirits and hearty laughter infected the whole class.
她那欢乐的情绪和爽朗的笑声感染了全班同学。
5．She wore a shining smile on her face.
她脸上带着灿烂的笑容。
人物悲忧消沉

Ⅰ.词汇积累
1．tear n． [常用复]眼泪，泪珠
2．sob v. 啜泣，抽噎
3．sorrow n. 悲痛； 忧伤
4．desperate adj. 绝望的；无望的
5．sadness n. 悲伤， 忧愁
6．pain n. 痛苦
7．release vt. 释放
8．grief n. 悲痛
9．a broken spirit 意志消沉
10．cry one’ s heart out 悲痛欲绝
11．with a heavy heart 怀着沉重的心情
12．with a sinking heart 心情沉重地
13．with a sorrowful heart 怀着忧郁的心情
14．be seized with panic 惊慌失措

15．put him into a sentimental mood 让他很伤感
16．fall into despair 陷入绝望
17．a strong sense of loss 强烈的失落感
18．make one’s heart bleed 使某人悲痛
19．be down in spirits 情绪低落
20．lose one’s spirit 垂头丧气
Ⅱ.佳句背诵
1．He stood silently, tears rolling down his cheeks.
他静静地站着，眼泪顺着面颊流了下来。
2．In those days he was in low spirits.
那些日子里他情绪低落。
3．Her hands were shaking and she was on the point of crying.
她的手在颤抖，快要哭出来了。
4．They were immersed in sorrow.
他们沉浸在悲痛之中。
5．Hearing the news, so desperate was he that he drowned sadness in wine.
听到这个消息，他绝望地把悲伤淹没在酒里。
人物怨怒

Ⅰ.词汇积累
1．displeasure n．不高兴
2．glare v. 对……怒目而视
3．frustrated adj. 失意的；失望的
4．annoyed adj. 恼怒的，气恼的
5．rage n. 愤怒
6．cross adj. 生气的，不高兴的
7．complain constantly 不断地抱怨
8．flame with anger 气得满脸通红
9．be displeased at one’s conduct 对某人的行为感到不满
10．be easily annoyed at trifles 易为琐事而恼火

11．get madcross at sb 对某人勃然大怒
12．have a worried look 愁眉苦脸
13．ignore a complaint 对抱怨不予理会
14．expressvoice a complaint about 对……表示不满
15．run out of the room in a burst of anger 怒气冲冲地跑出房间
16．stamp one’s foot in anger 愤怒地跺脚
17．feel discouraged 感到泄气的
18．feel puzzledconfused 感到困惑的
Ⅱ.佳句背诵
1．His voice trembled with anger.他的声音因愤怒而颤抖。
2．He could hardlyscarcely contain his rage.
他几乎控制不住怒火。
3．They stopped arguing and glared at each other.
他们停止了争论，相互怒视着对方。
4．He gave me a look of burning anger.
他愤怒地看了我一眼。
5．This failure leaves the child depressed and frustrated.
这次失败使这个小孩灰心丧气。
人物其他情绪

Ⅰ.词汇积累
1．serious adj. 严肃的，庄重的
2．shame n. 羞愧；耻辱
3．yawn v. 打呵欠
4．forgive vt. 原谅
5．kindly adj. 仁慈的； 和蔼的； 友好的， 体贴的
6．hopeless adj. 没有希望的，绝望的
7．anxiety n. 焦虑
8．find...highly stimulating 觉得……非常刺激
9．a forgiving spirit 宽容的精神

10．with a kindly spirit 以和蔼可亲的态度
11．not in the least is he interested in... 他对……一点也不感兴趣
12．mixed with the emotion of anxiety and hope 混合着焦虑与希望的情绪
13．set off strong feelings 引起强烈的情感
14．be hopelessly addicted to 对……彻底上瘾
15．under the domination of these emotions 在这些情绪的控制下
Ⅱ.佳句背诵
1．He loweredbentbowed his head in shame.
他羞愧地低下了头。
2．I decided to go for a walk to clear my head.
我决定去走走，清醒一下头脑。
3．He felt his cheeks burning with shame.
他因为羞愧而感到脸颊发烧。
4．She looked at her father straight in the eye and answered his question truthfully.
她直视父亲的眼睛，诚实地回答了他的问题。
5．My heart was in my mouth when I walked into her office.
我走进她的办公室时，紧张得心都到了喉咙口。
语言输出——层级训练，让续写添彩
Ⅰ.基础练习——补全句子
1．Her smile lit__up__the__whole__room．
她的笑容照亮了整个房间。
2．The woman was__delighted__at the recovery of her stolen jewels.那位妇人对找回
被盗的珠宝感到非常高兴。
3．Unforgettable were her eyes that shone__like__diamonds and lips held
in__a__steady__smile．
令人难忘的是她的眼睛像钻石一样闪闪发光，嘴角保持着稳定的微笑。
4．She burst__into__tears and ran out of the room.
她突然哭了起来，跑出了房间。
5．She sobbed，hiding__her__face__in__her__hands．

她掩面哭泣。
6．His attitude made__me__extremely__annoyed．
他的态度使我极为恼火。
7．Don’t get__mad__at__me．I did it all for your own good.
别生我的气，我这样做完全是为了你好。
8．His face suddenly grew__serious．
他的表情突然严肃起来。
Ⅱ.综合演练——完成读后续写，注意情感描写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语 续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短
文。续写的词数应为150左右。
Ali and his younger sister, Zahra, lived with their parents in a poor
mother was very sick and their father was struggling to find a job,
and they had only a little money with which to buy they had not paid the rent
for several months, the landlord was breathing down their necks.
One day, Ali took Zahra’s shoes to a shoe repairman to be fixed, but he lost them on
the way wasn’t until he got home that he realized he had lost the
was afraid that his parents would be angry and disappointed, so he begged his sister to
keep it agreed and the two decided to share Ali’s running ’s
school hours were in the morning, so she would wear them school, she
would rush back and give them to could then run to his school, which began in
the gh he ran as fast as he could, Ali often arrived late and was
warned by the school.
Ali heard about a long distance race that was held for the boys in the he
learned that the third prize was a new pair of shoes, he decided to take ran
home excitedly and promised his sister that he would win her the new shoes.
The day of race had a strong start, but halfway through the race he began
to get tired and his legs began to g more and more exhausted he thought
only of Zahra and his promise to ng of the new shoes he would win for his
sister gave him strength, and he stayed right behind the two fastest runners,
determined to finish ly, as the finish line drew near, another runner

collided (碰撞)with Ali from behind and he crashed to the ground.
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Paragraph 1：
Ali looked up and saw the other boys rushing ng to give up at this point,
he jumped to his feet and ran as fast as he dashed across the finish line and
won the fourth ng he would ①let__her__sister__down(让她妹妹失望),
Ali ②couldn’t__help__sobbing(情不自禁哭了起来)．Just then he suddenly heard the
announcement from the broadcast that he won the third prize as the runner who
collided with Ali was disqualified for breaking the g the shoes close to his
chest during the award ceremony, Ali ③felt__overjoyed__and__relieved (感到非常
高兴，并如释重负)as he eventually won the shoes for his sister.
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Filled with delight, Ali walked home could not wait to see his sister and
share the thrilling his arrival, Ali found Zahra was waiting
④was__really__nervous (非常紧张)whether her brother would bring her what she
was expecting.“Zahra, see what I have got for you.” he took the prize out of his bag
with his trembling instant Zahra saw the shoes, her face ⑤lit__up(高兴起
来)．⑥So__thrilled__was__she(她非常激动) that she threw herself at Ali.“Thank
you! Ali.” ⑦Tears__of__joy__welled__up__their__eyes (高兴的眼泪流了出来)as
the brother and sister hugged tightly together.