雾作文之雾霾的冬天作文

雾霾的冬天作文


【篇一：有关雾霾的作文及评语】

雾霾

陈硕垚

今天早晨，我看见了很大的雾霾。正准备上学 ，忽然爸爸说:“今天
不上学了。”我说：“为什么，不就小小的雾霾吗。爸爸说：“雾霾会
对 身体造成危害。就这样爸爸和我讲了一些关于雾霾的危害。

冬雾有“冬季杀手”之称，加上 工业废气、汽车尾气、空气中的灰尘、
空气中的细菌和病毒等污染物，附着于这些水滴上，人们在日常生
活和出行中，这些物 质会对人体的呼吸道产生影响，可能会引起急
性上呼吸道感染（感冒）、 急性气管支气管炎及肺炎、哮喘发作，
诱发或加重慢性支气管炎等。特别是小孩呼吸道鼻、 气管、支气 管
黏膜柔嫩，且肺泡数量较少，弹力纤维发育较差，间质发育旺盛，
更易受到呼吸道病毒的感染 。人长时间处于雾天中，可引起气管炎、
喉炎、肺炎、哮 喘、鼻炎、眼结膜炎及过敏性疾病的发生，对 幼儿、
青少年的生长发育和体质均有一定的影响。此外，大雾天气空气质
量差，抵抗力较差的糖 尿病患者极有可能出现 肺部及气管感染而加
总病情。

今天这一天让我知道了，我们要保护坏境，不会再有这样的雾霾天
出现。

评：这篇 文章引用了大量的文字，让读者能非常清晰的认识到雾霾
的危害，但是如果能结合着你所了解的由雾霾引 发的较多学生得病，
就更有说服力了；这篇文章有点虎头蛇尾，作者不能写出治理雾霾
的有效措 施，这是又一个不足之处。

雾霾

赵虞伟

望一眼 窗外，突然看不见蓝天，白云，天地一片灰暗，连对面的楼
房只有朦胧的轮廓。这就是雾霾。雾霾天气形 成有以下几个方面的
原因：1%大气空气气压低，空气不流动时主要因素，由于空气不流
动，使 空气中的微小颗粒聚焦。漂浮在空气中。2地面灰尘大，空气
湿度低，地面上的人和车把流使灰尘搅动起 来。3汽车尾气是主要的
污染物排放，近年来城市的汽车越来越多，排放的汽车尾气是雾霾
的一 个因素。4工厂制造的二次污染。5冬天取暖排放的（02）等污
染。其中2`3.4.5条都是我们人 类造成的。

为了减轻污染，请大家保护环境。现在城市里的汽车越来越多， 几
乎每家都有一辆汽车，汽车使大家生活更加快捷，但尾气却一直在
污染我们的环境。我们大家 应该少开车，尽量不开车，从一点一滴
开始保护环境。我们要爱护地球，保护环境自己做起。

评：整篇文章开门见山的写出了对雾霾的认识，能比较清楚得勾勒
文章，在第一自然段列举了 几条现在雾霾多的原因，条理比较清晰。
但是在写面对雾霾的呼吁上写的就不那么具体了。

【篇二：关于雾霾天气的作文】


关于雾霾的英语作文

（一）

今年(2013年)除夕到正月十五期间，北京雾霾天气出现的天数占到
50%以上，严重影响了老百姓的生活和健康。请写一篇短文，描述
一下北京雾霾的情况，分析 雾霾出现的原因，并提出治理雾霾的措
施。 注意：词数不少于100词。
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参考范文：

during the 15 days from new year’s eve to lantern festival,
beijing was affected by smog for more than half the time,
because of which people suffered a lot. on the road people

drove slowly because they could not see clearly. people also
suffered from many illnesses caused by smog.

the smog in beijing has been caused by many factors, in
which the increase of cars in the city area plays an important
role. the cars send off a lot of poisonous gases, which in turn
adds to the already serious air pollution.

in my opinion, the number of cars should be limited. we
should call on the people to use more public transport. only in
this way can we expect to have more sunny days.

(二)

假如你是李华， 你的笔友mike从电视上得知前段时间北京多个地
方出现雾霾(haze)，非常担心，写e- mail询问有关情况，请回复。
回复应包括以下要点：

1.实况描述; 2.对生活造成的影响;3.成因简析与教训;4.你个人的情况。
要求：

1.词数100-120; 的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
dear mike,

thank you very much for your concern.
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li hua

参考范文： one possible version:

dear mike，

ur concern. last months several places in beijing were
blanketed with thick yellow fog. everything around
disappeared from our sight. some highways were closed.
traffic jams were commonly seen in the streets. many people,
especially children and seniors, even found it difficult to
breathe. as a result, local hospitals were crowded with people
who had problems with their noses and lungs. part of the
cause was the dry weather, but the severely damaged
environment contributed a lot to this nightmare. personally i
didn’t get any health problems in the haze because i stayed
mostly to make a significant change we really have
to do more to protect our environment. to live a better life we
have to push on with the economy, but it wound be
meaningless if we have to achieve it at the cost of our
breathing air.

regards!

yours，

li hua

【篇三：雾霾作文】


关于 雾霾 的英语作文（篇1）

recently,haze 阴霾weather has become a daily one right here
in large part of are forced to wear the mask to
avoid breathing poisonous有毒 it is necessary to find
out the reason why leads to that and work out the
we trace the cause for haze weather ,the main points are as
follows ,first,china s air quality standards are rather lax松 and
evaluation 评估factors are limited,so you will see that current
air appraisal评价 system has defects不合格.second,some
people just go for economic interests instead of turning out
products according to relevant law and regulations法律法
规.they tend to use obsolete陈旧 equipment in which they are
high likely to emit发出 a great deal of wasted ,across
our society ,relevant protection awareness 意识has not built
up so that people havent formed a habit of using green
product and saving energy 节能as much as for
the sake of convience to go out,people rely more and more on

travelling and working by car while car is the main cause for
the haze weather

to settle this problem,a series of measures should be taken as
,we should strengthen加强 air monitor检测器 to
lower the levels of small particulate ,we
should enact颁布 more strict 严格laws and regulations and
keep perfecting our current law on environmental protection to
regulate调节 people s daily action and the industrial
production and punish those factories that ignore the
protection and keep emitting发出 dangerous material that
cause ,we should develop green and energy-saving
energy to lower the emission发射 of haze and improve air
far as i am concerned ,if we work together to be able
to do such measures ,our environment will getting better and
better and haze weather will vanish completely.

关于 雾霾 的英语作文（篇2）

haze is air pollution in which is mixed up with dust, smoke
and other dry

particles ,and it obscure the clarity of the sky and interacts
with the natural environment .阴霾是空气污染和灰尘,烟雾和其他
干燥粒子,它掩盖了清晰的天空,与自然环境进行交互。

雾霾原因this kind of air pollutant come from a variety of
natural and manmade sources. natural sources can include
windblown dust, and soot from wildfires. manmade sources
can include motor vehicles, and industrial fuel burning, and
manufacturing operations. the one of the main cause that
touches off haze is manufacturing operations. many factories
were over measure produced the smog that had over the
standard and the smog seriously influence the air become air
pollution.

这种空气污染物来自各种 自然和人为来源。天然来源可以包括风沙、
烟尘从森林大火。人为来源可以包括机动车辆、工业燃料燃烧 和制
造业务。触动了烟雾的主要原因之一是制造业务。许多工厂测量产
生的烟雾对标准和烟雾严 重影响空气成为空气污染。

雾霾危害the components that make up haze may have
negative effect on peoples health especially that of the
children and the elderly. also not excluded are those who have
certain diseases such as asthma, allergy, and pneumonia and

lung disease. workers working in the open air have a high risk
in their health.

组件构成烟雾可能对人们的健康有负面影响特别是儿童和老人 。也
不排除是某些疾病如哮喘、过敏、肺炎和肺部疾病。工人工作在露
天有很高的风险在他们的 健康。

解决方法 one of effective solutions to help eliminate haze is to
make some chemistry changes during the manufacturing
process,so it could reduce harmful emissions which are
produced by manufacturing operations

一个有效的解决方案,帮助消除烟雾是让一些化学变化在制造过程中,
所以它能减少有害排放产生的制造 业务。

关于 雾霾 的英语作文（篇3）

during the 15 days from new year’s eve to lantern festival,
beijing was affected by smog for more than half the time,
because of which people suffered a lot. on the road people
drove slowly because they could not see clearly. people also
suffered from many illnesses caused by smog.

the smog in beijing has been caused by many factors, in
which the increase of cars in the city area plays an important
role. the carssend off a lot of poisonous gases, which in turn
adds to the already seriousair pollution.

in my opinion, the number of cars should be should
call on the people to use more public transport. only in this
way canwe expect to have more sunny days. 关于 雾霾 的英语
作文（篇4）

dear bill,

i’m glad to receive your letter,thank you for your caring for the
weather and my i’d like to tell you something about
the smog.

since the winter last year,the smog has occurred a lot of
has done great harm to our daily traffic
accidents happened just because of the heavy smog
weather,more and more people have to go to see the doctor
because the serious disease caused by the smog,quite a lot of
flights have to be put off,a great number of people have to stay
at home for fear of the poisonous air caused by the smog.
people have realized the great harm caused by the smog and
the importance of protecting the all over
the country are taking measures to reduce

the smog government suggests people go to work
or school with the public traffic, such as the bus and the
we should plant more trees. according to me,
i will go to school by bike or on foot, and i won’t throw the
waste addition, i will tell the people i meet to
protect the environment as possible as they you like
to tell me some good ideas?i’m looking forward to your reply.

yours,

li hua