法制教育征文-中国环境问题
2020年山东高考英语作文题目解析
及高分范文
【考题再现】
假
设你是新华中学的学生李华,你的美国朋友Tom一周前给你发电子邮件,询问你暑假里
的打算,但你因
准备期末考试未能及时回复。请根据以下要点给他回邮件:
1. 未及时回复的原因;
2.
你假期的打算(如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等)。
注意: 1. 次数:120~150;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【试题点评】
今年的书面表达题目延续
山东省一贯的提纲作文命题习惯,时隔一年之后重新回到“书信
题”的大框架中,考了一篇“以道歉信为
外衣,以活动安排为主体段”的提纲作文,相当
于10年山东卷(道歉信)和07年四川卷(假期安排)
和合体。这种作文是我们平时经常练习
的,因此套路很完善、套话很丰富。此外,本文中需要同学们翻译
的难句不多,因此,只
要在备考过程中有意识地了解过高考英语作文的提分方法,掌握了常用的亮点词汇
、加分
句型和过渡词,并加以针对性训练,这道题目应该不难写。
【经典套路】
第一段:问候+写信背景+写信目的
第二段:“道歉”部分(相当于“写信背景”)
第三段:“假期安排”部分
第四段:补充说明+客套话
【高分范文】
Dear Tom,
How are you doing? (问候)
You asked me in your last letter about my plan for
the coming summer vacation.(写信背景) I am sorry
that I didn’t reply without
delay.(写信目的)
How I wish I would read and reply your email
as soon as I received it.
However, I was busy
preparing for my final exam at that time, which is
vital
for
me. As a result, I had no
choice but to completely focus on my study. I
believe
that if you were me, you would
make the same choice.(第二段为道歉信常见套路)
By the way,
I have a busy schedule for my summer
vacation.(主题句) First and
foremost, I would do
a part time job, so that my interpersonal skills
would be
improved.(拓展句1) Additionally, I will
take a short trip to Beijing to take a
summer
course in the New Oriental School.(拓展句2) Last but
not least, maybe I
will
work as a
volunteer for the school as a teaching
assistant.(拓展句3)
These are my plan for the
summer vacation. What’s yours? I am looking
forward to your earliest reply.(以合理的客套话结尾)
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