三字经读后感600字专题02 观点与建议-2021年高考英语应用文写作必备素材与核心句式集锦

2021年1月19日发(作者：学糕)

2021
年高考英语应用文写作必备素材与核心句式集锦
02

观点与建议

【真题再现
1
】

（
202 0
年，天津卷，第二次高考）
假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津。你校于
6
月< br>8
日
举办了成人礼活动，你的英国朋友
Chris
很想了解该活动。你 于当晚给
Chris
回一封电子邮
件，介绍关情况，内容包括
:
< br>(1)
成人礼活动内容
(
成长点滴回顾、观看校友抗疫事边录像
)；

(2)
对活动的感受；

(3)
对自己未来的展望。

注意
:

(1)
词数不少于
100
；

(2)
可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行方连贯；

(3)
开头已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇
:
成人礼

the coming
-
of age ceremony



新冠脑炎

COVID
-
F9

Dear Chris,

I’m so glad to hear from you.

________ __________________________________________________ _____________________
_________________________ __________________________________________________ ___

Yours,

Li Jin

[
参考范文
]



Dear Chris,

I am so glad to hear from you. The coming
-
of
-
age ceremony was held in our school on June 8
th

this month. During the coming
-
of
-
age ceremony, the headmaster congratulated us on stepping into
the adult, reviewing the growth period that we had experienced. After that, we all watched the video
of alumnus fighting against the epidemic.

Through the activity, what I felt is that I am able to shoulder the responsibility and make us
stronger and more determined. When faced with the difficulties and failures, I must overcome them.
In the future, I will be a good doctor to heal the wounded and rescue the dying, devoting myself to
my work.

Best wishes
！

Yours,

Li Jin

[
写作分析
]

这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。

第一步
:
审题。审题的目的是获 取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。
第一，
假如你是晨光中学的李津。
你校于
6
月
8
号举办了成人礼活动，
你的英国朋友
Chr is
很
想了解该活动。你于当晚给
Chris
回一封电子邮件，介绍相关 情况，内容包括
:(1)
成人礼活
动内容
(
成长点滴回顾，观看校友 抗疫事迹录像等
)2.
对活动的感受。
3.
对自己未来的展望。
第二，人称为第一人称。第三，时态为一般现在时，一般过去时和一般将来时。

第二步
:
布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。
第一段
:
成人礼活动内容
(
成长点滴回顾，
观看校友抗疫事迹录像等
)< br>。
第二段
:
对活动的感受；
对自己未来的展望。第三段，表达期望。< br>
第三步
:
确定关键词汇和短语
:congratulate
sb
on
sth.,
be
faced
with,
heal
the
wounded
and
rescue the dying, devote oneself to doing sth.
；
< br>第四步
:
确定较为高级的句子
:that
引导的定语从句和现在分词作 状语
During
the


coming
-
of
-
age ceremony, the headmaster congratulated us on stepping into the adult, reviewing the
growth period that we had experienced. that
引导的表语从句
Through the activity, what I felt is that
I am able to shoulder the responsibility and make us stronger and more determined.
时间状语从句
的省略句
When faced with the difficulties and failures, I must overcome them.

第五步
:
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接
:After that, besides, however.

第六步
:
注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。

[
范文点评
]

文章思路清晰，
语言规范，
段落整 齐，
语篇连贯，
层次清晰。
使用了较为高级的句式
:that
引导的 定语从句和现在分词作状语
During
the
coming
-
of
-
age
ceremony,
the
headmaster
congratulated us on stepping into the adult, reviewing the growth period that we had experienced.
that
引导的表语从句
Through the activity, what I felt is that I am able to shoulder the responsibility
and
make
us
stronger
and
more
determined.
时间状语从句的省略句
When
faced
with
the
difficulties and failures, I must overcome them.
等高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，
整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。

【真题再现
2
】
（
2014
·
安徽卷）
为了帮助中学生健康成长，
某中学英文报 开辟了
“
HEART
-
TO
-
HEART
”
专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑
Jamie
，收到一封署名为
Worried
的求助信。信中该同学向你
诉说了自己的困扰：
近日容易发脾气，
使正常的学习和生活 受到了影响。
请用英文给该同学
写一封回信。

内容要点如下：

1.
表示理解并给予安慰；

2.
提出建议并说明理由。

注意：

1.
词数
120
左右；



2.
信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；

3.
信的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：
temper n.
脾气，情绪

Hi Worried
，

I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a bad time at the moment.


































































































Yours,

Jamie

[
参考范文
]

Hi Worried
，


I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a bad time at the moment. The truth is everyone
will have one of those periods when things seem to be wrong, so you don’t have to worry so much.
The
important
thing
is
to
learn
to
control
your
temper
so
that
you
may
not
do
or
say
anything
you’ll regret. Here are three useful tips:


First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. This is a good way of letting your anger
out without hurting others or yourself. Second, go outdoors and play team games with your friends
，
as
physical
exercise
is
an
effective
way
to
get
rid
of
anger .And
third,
remain
optimistic
about
your future. Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.




I hope you’ll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.

Yours,

Jamie

[
写作分析
]

本篇书面表达属于提纲作文。内容是用英文写一封回 信。写作时注意以下几点：
1
、仔


细阅读有关提示：为了帮助中 学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“
HEART
-
TO
-
HEAR T
”
专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑
Jamie
，收到一封署名为
Wo rried
的求助信。信中该同学向你
诉说了自己的困扰：
近日容易发脾气，
使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。
请用英文给该同学
写一封回信。

内容要点如下：

1.
表示理解并给予安慰；

2.
提出建议并说明理由。

弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确要点就是主要内 容。
2
、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在
提纲的范围内进行分析、
构思和想象。 要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。本
文写作时可以按照提示的
3
个方面 的内容进行介绍。
3
、
根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、
语态；就本文而言 应该用一般现在时为主。
4.
注意写信格式。

[
范文点评
]

文章思路清晰，
语言规范，
段落整 齐，
语篇连贯，
层次清晰。
使用了较为高级的句式
: that
引导的宾语从句
I'm sorry to know that you're having such a had time at the moment.
定语从句
so
…
that
引导的目的状语从句
The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you
may not do or say anything you'll regret.

高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。

【经典演练】

随着智能手机以及电脑的普及
,
人们越来越喜欢自拍 ，然后将自拍照上传到社交网站上
和朋友分享。
请结合下面的提示
,
以
“
Why do People Like Selfie?
为题写一篇文章，
向某英文
报刊投稿。内包括：

1.
自拍的现状
(
人群、特点
)
；

2.
说明自己的情况；

3.
分析这种现象的原因。



注意：
1.
词数
100
左右；

2.
可适当增加细节
,
以使行文连贯。

[
高分范文
]

Why do People Like Selfie?

With easier access to smartphones as well as computers, selfie has become more and more
popular among people recently. With regard to this phenomenon, my opinions are as follows.

To start with, if you are a teenager who loves taking selfies, it can't be denied that you are
following the trend. Besides, it is the younger generation that accounts for the majority of selfie
lovers. Equipped with modern devices, they always have new ideas and tend to be self
-
centered.
However, it
is a pity that
I
have never
tried taking a selfie before, but as a
teenager,
I can still
understand their feelings.

To
conclude,it
is
reasonable
for
them
to
appreciate
themselves
with
the
coming
of
smartphones. More importantly, taking selfies and posting therm online is really convenient and
amusing.
< br>[
句子改写
]
用
what
引导的从句改写范文划线的句子
What's more important is that taking selfies and posting them online is really convenient and
amusing.

[
佳句临摹
]

佳句
1;... it can't be denied that you are following the trend.

临摹
1:
不可否认他是最伟大的科学家之一。

It can’t be denied that he is one of the greatest scientists.

佳句
2:... it is a pity that I have never tried taking a selfie before...

临摹
2:
非常遗憾我没能参加你的生日晚会。