高考作文之浙江省高考英语作文评分标准

2021年1月25日发(作者：司母方鼎)
浙江省高考英语作文评分标准


【篇一：全国卷高考英语作文评分标准与范文】

1
全国卷高考英语作文评分标准

1.
本题总分为
25
分
,
按
5
个档次给分。

2.
评分时
,
先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次
,
然后以该档
次

的要求来衡量
,
确定或调整档次
,
最后给分。

3.
词数少于
80
和多于
120
的
,
从总分中减去
2
分。

4.
评分时
,
应注意的主要内容为
:
内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的
数量和准确性、上下文的连贯性。

5.
拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面
,
评分时
,
应视其对交际的
影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写汉词汇用 法均可接受。

6.
如书写较差
,
以至影响交际
,
将分数降低一个档次。


各档次的给分范围和要求


ⅰ
.
第五档< br>(
很好
);(21-25
分
):
完全完成了试题规定的任务< br>

⑴覆盖所有内容要点

⑵应用了较多的语法结构和词汇
,


⑶语法结构或词汇方面有些 许错误
,
但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高
级词汇所致
;
具备较强的语 言运用能力
,


⑷有效地使用了语句间的连接成分
,
使 全文结构紧凑完全达到了预期
的写作目的


ⅱ
.
第四档
(
好
):(16-20
分
)
完全完成了试题规定的任务

⑴虽漏掉
1
、
2
个次重点
,
但 覆盖所有主要内容

⑵应用的语法结构和
词汇能满足任务的要求


⑶语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确
,
些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂
语法结构 或词汇所致


ⅲ
.
第三档
(
适当
): (11-15
分
)
基本完成了试题规定的任务


⑴虽漏 掉一些内容
,
但覆盖所有主要内容⑵应用的语法结构和词汇能
满足任务的要求


⑶有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误
,
但不影响理解


⑷应用简单的语句间的连接成分
,
使全文内容连贯整体而言
,
基本达
到了预期的写作目的

ⅳ
.
第二档
(
较差
):(6-10
分
)
未恰当完成试题规定的任务


⑴漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容
,
写了一些无关内容

⑵语法结构
单调、词汇项目有限


⑶有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误
,
影响了对写作内容的理解


⑷较少使用语句间的连接成分
,
内容缺少连贯性信息未能清楚地传达
给读者< br>
nbsp;
ⅴ
.
第一档
(
差
):( 1-5
分
)
未完成试题规定的任务


⑴明显遗漏主要内 容
,
写了一些无关内容
,
原因可能是未理解试题要
求


⑵语法结构单调、词汇项目有限


⑶较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误
,
影响对写作内容的理解


⑷缺乏语句间的连接成分
,
内容不连贯信息未能传达给读者。

2
高考英语作文范文


it’s useful and necessary to discuss learning habits. as we all
know, good learning habits can make your study go to
succeed. as a student, we should pay more attentions to our
habits which we develop in our study
。


i’m sure “repeat” is a best habit. do you develop the habit? if
we want to improve our study, we should repeat what the
teachers taught us again and again, and then we can
understand or remember the knowledge which the teachers
demand us to master. how to develop the habit? the first step,
set a timetable, and stick to carry out the plan, don’t stop
。


在看过全国卷高考英语作文评分 标准和相关范文之后
,
想必同学们对
于自己的英语作文的努力方向
,
已经了然于胸了
,
希望同学们都能写出
既规范又充满文采的英语作文。

【篇二：
2014
年浙江高考英语作文范文】


2014
年浙江高考英语作文范文：

dear mr. wang,

knowing that our li
brary is going to buy books, i’d like to give
some suggestions.

what we need most are popular science books. usually
popular science books explain basic principles of nature in a
simple and interesting way. they help us understand science
subjects better and arouse our curiosity about scientific
discoveries.

in addition to reading for knowledge, we read for fun and
inspiration. that is why i recommend another category of
books
：
literary books. classic works, written by masters,
present great thoughts through fascinating stories and
language. they not only offer us joy and excitement, but also
encourage us to think critically.


i’ll be glad if you can consider my recommendation.

yours sincerely,

li yue

【篇三：
2016
年浙江新高考《考试说明》英语写作样
题】


2016
年浙江新高考《考试说明》英语写作样题


第一节：应用文写作（满分
15
分）


假定你是李明。上 周末学生会组织部分学生去附近社区进行了一次
义务劳动，受到居民的欢迎。请你给校园英文报写一篇报 导。活动
内容包括：

1.
打扫卫生；

2.
浇灌花木；

3.
帮老人干家务。


注意：

1.
词数
80
左右，题目已为你写好；

2.
可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。


students’ voluntary work in a neighbourhood


第二节：读后续写（满分
25
分）


阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

a funny thing happened to arthur when he was on the way to
work one day. as he walked car. he tried again and again but
couldn’t get the car moving. arthur stopped and asked, “it
looks like you’ve got a problem, ” arthur sa
id.


“ i’m afraid so. i’m in a big hurry and i can’t start my car.”


“is there something i can do to help?” arthur asked. looked at
the two “thanks. if you’re sure it wouldn’t be too much trouble,
you could help me these suitcases into a taxi.”


“ no trouble at all. i’d be glad to help.”

the young man got out and took one of the suitcases from the
back seat. after placing it on the ground, he turned to get the
other one. just as arthur picked up the first suitcase and
started
！

park avenue had been quiet a moment before. now the air was
filled with the sound of the the crowd in front of the bank.
people asked each other, “what happened?” but everyone had
a different answer.

arthur, still carrying the suitcase, turned to look at the bank
and walked right into the young woman in front of him.

she looked at the suitcase and then at him. arthur was
surprised. “ why is she looking at me like that?” he thought.
“ the suitcase! she thinks i’m”

arthur looked around at the crowd of people. he became
frightened, and without another thought, he started to run.


注意：

1.
所叙写短文的词数应为
150
左右；

2.
应使用
5
个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.
续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4.
续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

paragraph 1:

as he was running, arthur heard the young man shouting
behind, “stop, stop!”

paragraph 2:


the taxi stopped in front of the police station and arthur…


第二节：概要写作（满分
25
分）


阅读下面短文，

根据内容写一篇
60
词左右的内容概要。

getting rid of dirt, in the opinion of most people, is a good
thing. however, there is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt.

in the early 16th century, people thought that dirt on the skin
was a means to block out

disease, as medical opinion had it that washing off dirt with
hot water could open up the skin and let ills in. a particular
danger was thought to lie in public baths. by 1538, the french
king had closed the bath houses in his kingdom. so did the
king of england in 1546. thus began a long time when the rich
and the poor in europe lived with dirt in a friendly way. hey iv,
king of

france, was famously dirty. upon learning that a nobleman had
taken a bath, the king ordered that, to avoid the attack of
disease, the nobleman should not go out.

though the belief in the merit(
好处
) of dirt was long-lived, dirt
has no longer been regarded as a nice neighbor ever since the
18th century. scientifically speaking, cleaning away dirt is