赞美老师的好词-千秋诸葛我评说
专题
提纲类作文
1.
【
2 017
年安徽】
书面表达。假如你是李华,你们学校将举行
“ p>
弘扬中华传统文化
——
戏曲进校园
”
展 演活
动,你打算邀请你的美国朋友
Mike
参加。请你根 据以下提示用英文给他写一封电子邮件。
1.
时间:
7< /p>
月
1
日下午
2
点;
< br>2.
地点:学校操场;
3.
内容:文化展览、节目 表演等。
提示词:戏曲
opera
n
.< /p>
表演
performance
n
.
< br>注意:
1.
词数
80
~
10 0
;
2.
可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.
信中不能出现与本人相关的信息;
4.
开 头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear
Mike,
I
know
you
are
intere sted
in
Chinese
traditional
< p>culture._________________________________ _________
______________________________
__________________________________________________
____________
___________________________
__________________________________________________
_______________
________________________
__________________________________________________
__________________
_____________________
__________________________________________________
__________
Yours,
Li
Hua
【答案】
One
possible
version:
Dear
Mike,
I
p>
know
you
are
interested
in
Chinese
traditional
cultur e.
Now,
I
have
a
piece
of
good
news
to
share
with
you.
There
i s
an
activity
about
Chines e
traditional
operas
at
2: 00
p.m.
on
July
1.
It
will
be
held
on
< p>theplayg
round
in
our p>
school
and
all
t
he p>
teachers
and
students
will< /p>
attend.
On
that
day,
p>
a
culture
show
and
ma ny
wonderful
opera
performances< /p>
will
be
put
on.
It's
a
chance
for
you
to
learn
more
about
Chin ese
traditional
culture.
Come
and
join
us!
I
think p>
we'll
have
a
great
ti me.
I'm
looking
forward
< p>toyour
early
reply.
Yours,
Li
Hua
写作亮点:这篇短文
内容涵盖了题目要求的所有要点,表达准确,意思连贯,符合逻辑。文章脉络清晰,
自然
流畅,首先通过分享好消息来引出展演及展演时间,进而介绍展演地点及展演内容最后提出邀请。同
时文章还使用了一些常用的句式和短语,这为文章增色不少。在学习中注意积累,掌握一些常用句式及
短
语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。
考点:提纲类作文。
2.
【
2017
< p>年
山东青岛】书面表达。
某英语杂
志社对部分中学生的周末活动做了问卷调查(结果如图),请你写一篇英语短文
参加征文活动。< /p>
内容包括:
1.
简要描述调查结果。
2.
谈一谈中学生应该如何度过一个有意义的周末(至少两条)。
要求
:
1.
词数:
80-100
。开头已给出,不计入 总词数。
2.
文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。
We
did
a
survey
about
< p>middleschool
students’
weeken d
activities.
Here
are
the
results.
【答案】
We
did
a
survey
about
middle< /p>
school
students’
weekend
a ctivities.
Here
are
the
re sults.
We
found
that
about
fourty
percent
of
the
students
often
do
their p>
homework
on
weekends.
And p>
the
number
of
the
stu dents
who
play
computer
games
on
weekends
is
abo ut
thirty-five
percents
of
the
students.
Only
fifteen
< p>percentsof
the
students
like
reading
and
about
< p>tenpercent
do
other
thi ngs.
As
students,
It
i s
our
duty
to
study
hard.
but
we
must
learn
to
relax
on
weekends
s o
that
we
can
learn
better
nexk
weekdays.
Althou gh
it
is
fun
to
rela x
by
using
the
Internet
but
spending
too
much
time
on
computer
games
is< /p>
not
good
for
students.
I
think
the
best
wa y
to
relax
is
through
< p>exercise.It
is
healthy
for
our
mind
and
body..
I
also
think
we
sh ould
do
more
reading
becau se
it
can
open
our
e yes
to
the
world.
If
so,
I
think
our
weekends< /p>
will
be
more
meaningfu
l.
【解析】
考点:提纲类作文。
3.
【
2017
年山东德州】书面表达。
假如
你叫张明,你的外国朋友
John
发来邮件,请你介绍中国的传统节日。请根据表 格内容提示及要求给他
写一封
80—100
词的回信。< /p>
Festivals
1
The
La ntern
Festival
2
The
Mid-Autumn
Festival
3
…
Time
In
January p>
or
February
In
the< /p>
middle
of
autumn
…
…
mooncakes
Food
yuanxiao
Activities
Watch<
/p>
lantern
shows
and
drag
on
dances
Watch
the
mo on;
Tell
the
story
of< /p>
Chang’e
…
Meanings
Pray
for
health
and
< br>happiness
for
the
whole
p>
year
Celebrate
harvest;
get
together
with
the
p>
family
…
参考词汇:
pray
for
祈求;
harvest
丰收
要求:
1.
描述节日
1
和节日< /p>
2
,并自主选择节日
3
进行介绍,包括节日名称、时 间、美食、活动方式及意义等;
2.
语言通顺,要点齐全,意思连贯,条 理清楚,书写规范;
3.
文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称;
4.
文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
From<
/p>
To
Subject
Dear
Glad
to
receive
< p>youemail.
You
asked
me< /p>
about
festivals
in
China.< /p>
Let
me
introduce
some
< p>importantones
to
you.
First
of
all,
I
wan t
to
introduce
the
Lantern
Festival.
It
comes
in
January
or
February._______________ ____
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__________________________________________________
_______
________________________________
__________________________________________________
__________
_____________________________
__________________________________________________
_____________
__________________________
__________________________________________________
________________
_______________________
__________________________________________________
___________________
____________________
__________________________________________________
_____________
Zhang
Ming
John
An
introduction
of
Chinese
festivals
Can
you
tell
me
something
about p>
the
festivals
in
your
country?
I’m
looking
forward
to
hearing
from
you.
< br>Yours,
Zhang
Ming
【答案
】
One
possible
version:
< p>Dear
John,
Glad
to
receive
your
email.
You
asked
me
about
festivals
in
China.
Let
me
introduce
some
important
ones
to
you.
First
of
all,
I
want
to
introduce
the p>
Lantern
Festival.
It
comes< /p>
in
January
or
February.
On
that
day,
we
eat
yuanxiao,
go
to
watch
lantern
shows
and
dragon
dances
to
pray
for
heal th
and
happiness
for
the p>
whole
year.
The
Mid-Aut umn
Festival
is
in
the
middle
of
autumn.
It
is
a
time
for
the
fami ly
to
get
together
and
celebrate
harvest.
At
nig ht,
the
whole
family
eat p>
delicious
mooncakes
and
tel l
the
story
of
Chang'e
while
watching
the
big
bright
moon.
The
Spring< /p>
Festival
is
the
most
important
for
us
Chinese.
It's
the
beginning
of
a p>
new
year.
We
usually
eat
dumplings,
meat
and
< p>someother
nice
food.
To
welcome
the
new
year,
we
do
some
cleaning,
bu y
new
clothes,
set
off
fireworks
and
visit
our p>
relatives.
Everyone,
young
or
old,
has
a
happy
smile
on
their
faces.
Can
you
tell
me
something< /p>
about
the
festivals
in
your
country?
I’m
looking
forward
to
hearing
from
you.
Yours,
Zhang
Ming< /p>
【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇表格作文。根据提示,可
节日。对于几日的介绍主
要涉及节日名称、时间、美食、活动方式及意义几个方面。由于介绍节日情况,
所以主要
采用一般现在时态,但是要注意第三人称单数的运用。在自选节日介绍时,要选择自己熟悉的节
< br>日来介绍,这样语言及内容才会丰富。
考点:提纲类作文。
4.
【
2017
年山东泰安】写作。
如
今,很多城市出现了一种绿色出行方式
――
共享单车(
bike- sharing
)
,
它因环保、便捷而备受青睐,但同
< p>时也引发了一些问题。请你根据提示以
“Bike-sharing”
为题写一篇英语短文,表达自己的看法和建议。
要点提示:
A
dvantages
Be
convenient,
les s
pollution,
reduce
the
tr affic
pressure
(减缓交
通压力)
Take
exercise…
Problems
Advice
注意:
1.
短文应 包括以上要点,可适当发挥,以使行文连贯;
2.
文中不得出现真实的人 名、校名及地名;
3.
词数:
80-100
(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数)
。
Bike-sharing
p>
Today,
as
a
greener
means
of
transportation,
bike -sharing
is
becoming
more
and
more
popular
in
many p>
cities.
___________________________
__________________________________________________
_______________
________________________
__________________________________________________
__________________
_____________________
__________________________________________________
______________
【答案】
One
possible
version:
Today,
as< /p>
a
greener
means
of
t ransportation,
bike-sharing
is
b ecoming
more
and
more
popu lar
in
many
cities.
It
’
s
known
that
it p>
has
many
advantages.
So
it
’
s
enjoyed
by
lots
of
people.
First
of
all,
it
’
s
very
convenient
for
people
to< /p>
go
somewhere.
Also,
it
helps
to
reduce
the
tra ffic
pressure.
There
will
be
less
pollution
because
of
bike- sharing.
Besides,
bike-sharing
h elps
people
take
more
exer cise.
In
this
way,
it
< p>’s
helpful
to
peopl e
’
s
health.
However,
it
also
brings
some
problems.
For
example,
some
people
throw
them
away
after
using
bikes.
Even
so me
people
damage
them,
and
some
bikes
are
stolen .
[
来源
学
*
科
*
网
]
Throw
away, p>
damage
(毁损)
,
be
stol en…
Civilized
(文明的)
,
follow
the
rules,
take
goo d
care
of…
In
my
opinion,
everyone
should
try
to
be
civilized
and
fo llow
the
rules
of
using
bikes.
As
long
as
we p>
take
good
care
of
bikes,
it
will
make
our p>
life
better
and
better,
and
our
environment
will
< p>bemore
beautiful.
【解析】
考点:提纲作文。
5.
【
2017 p>
年山东枣庄】
书面表达。
把书面表达答案写在答题卡第七节的
横线上。
Write
a
review
of
the
following
story
in
about
90
words.
The
re view
has
to
include
the
following
p
oints:
1.
The
name
of
your
revie w.
2.
The
idea(s)
of p>
your
review.
3.
The
reason(s)
for
your
idea(s). p>
4.
Something
you
decide
after
you
consider
all
the
information
in
the
story.
“
Cock-a-doodle-doo!”
< p>criedthe
cock
(公鸡)
.
He
stood
in
the
farm-y ard
and
cried
aloud,
so
that
all
people
might
hear
him.
“Cock-a-diidke-doo!
< p>Howuseful
I
am,
for
I
always
get
up
first.< /p>
And
I
cry
about
as p>
soon
as
the
sun
r
ises
to
make
all
people
in
the
house
wake.”
“Cluck!
Cluck!
Cluck!”cried
th e
hen
from
the
yard.
She
was
walking
about
wit h
three
pretty
little
chic kens,
and
trying
to
fi nd
some
food
for
them.
“Cluck!
Cluck!
Cluck!
I’m
more
useful
than
you.
A lmost
every
day
I
lay
< p>a
nice
fresh
egg
for
my
master’s
(男主人)
breakfa st.
Then
think
how
useful< /p>
I
am
to
my
mistress< /p>
(女主人)
.
How
many
nice
things
does
she
make
with
my
eggs
for
th e
children?
She
could
not< /p>
get
on
well
without
eggs.”
【答案】
The
Use
< p>ofthe
Cock
and
the
< p>hen
The
cock
is
always
gets
up
first
an d
cries,
“
Cock-a-diidke-doo!
”
to
wake
all
people p>
in
the
house
up.
The
hen
is
useful
t he
one
hand,she
tries
to p>
find
food
for
pretty
little
chickens;on
the
other
hand,she
lays
a
nice
egg
for
her
master ’s
mistress
makes
many
things
with
her
eggs
f or
the
could
get
well
with
eggs.
I
n
a
word,both
the
cock
and
the
hen
are
is
wrong
of
them
to
see
their
own
use
only
instead
of
seeing
each
other’s
use.
【解析】
试题
分析:短文主要考查分析能力及写作整理信息的能力,用自己的语言对于公鸡和母鸡的行为做出评价,
并要写出自己这样评价的理由。要注意所写的句子应该符合英语语法,不要遗漏要点。
写作亮点:短文用了一些短语和句式,如:
get
up
起床;
wake
sb
up
把某人叫醒;
< p>tryto
do
sth
努力做某事;
find
food
找到食物;
it
is+
形容词
+
介词
(of/for)+to p>
do
sth
做某事是怎样的;
用了一些过渡句或短语,
如:
On
the
one
h and,on
the
other
hand
,
In
a
word
等,使句子上下文过度自然。
< p>考点:提纲作文。
6.
【
2017
年浙江金华】书面表达。
假如你应邀参加一个国际读书会,并将分享自己读过的一
本好书。请根据下列表格中的要点,用英语写一
篇短文,介绍你要分享的书。
Key
points
(要点)
Words
< p>andexpressions
for
reference< /p>
(参考词汇)
What
the
name p>
is
Who
wrote
it
< br>What
it
is
about
Wh
y
I
like
it
The
Old
Man
and
the
Sea
Ernest
Hemingway,
America
Fisherman,
Fight
against
f ish
and
nature
Meaningful,
p>
never
give
up,
Well-kno
wn
sentence:
“Man
is
not p>
made
for
defeat
(失败)
.”,
…
注意:
(
1
< p>)可选择使用所给的书名及内容,也可另选书籍;
(
2
)短文内容可适当增加;
(
3
)文中不得出现真实的人 名和校名;
Interesting,
helpful,
…
Well-known
sentence:
…
…
…
…
(
4
)词数:
80~100
;
(
5
)短文首句仅供选择使用,不计入总词数。
短文首句:
The
book
I’d
like
to
share
with
you
is
The< /p>
Old
Man
and
the
Sea.
【答案】
The
book
I p>
’
d
like
to
share
with
you
is
The
Old
and
the
Sea,
written
by
an
American
writer
Ernest
Hemingway.
This
book
tells
about
a
fisherman
wh o
is
lucky
enough
to
catch
a
huge
fish
at
< p>sea,but
finds
it
hard p>
to
take
it
home.
On p>
the
way
back,
he
has
to
fight
against
the p>
fish,
and
the
sea
as< /p>
well.
What
I
like
< p>mosta
bout
the
book
is
that
the
fisherman
n ever
gives
up
when
meeting
with
difficulties.
I
stil l
remember
the
well-known
from
the
book:
Man
is< /p>
not
made
for
defeat.
This
tells
us
that
nothin g
seems
terrible
as
lo
ng
as
we
have
a
stro ng
will
and
a
brave
heart.
【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇给出材料作文。要求
介绍自己读过的“老人与海”这本书。主要从书名,作者,内容,
喜欢书的原因(即从中
学到了什么)几个方面叙述。适当的介绍文中的名句。在运用语言时,不要拘泥于
一种形
式,注意一个意思可
以有多种表达形式。遇到想不起来的词或句型时,可以找同义词、近义词或同
义句来代替,这样可以节省时间。在写作时,尽量用自己有把握的方法来表达,用自己最
熟悉、最有把握
的词句,文章要以叙述清楚为主,避免大量词句堆积以至冗长,尽量少用
没有十分把握的“大词”或比较
复杂的语法结构和句型。
写作亮
点:这篇短文结构合理,行文流畅,内容丰富,其中长句,复合句的运用非常熟练,为文章添彩。
如:
定语从句
This
book
tell s
about
a
fisherman
who
is
lucky
enough
to
cat ch
a
huge
fish
at
se a,
;
表语从句
What
I
like
most
about
the
book< /p>
is
that
the
fisherman
< p>nevergives
up
when
meet ing
with
difficulties.
;宾语从句
I
still
remember
the
< p>well-knownfrom
t
he
boo k:
Man
is
not
made
f or
defeat.
等。
考点:提纲作文。
7.
【
2017
年浙江丽水】假设你是
Li
Ming,
你的笔友
Lisa
想了解在毕业之 际
,
你将为母校做些什么有意义的
事
.< /p>
从下表所列的五项内容中
,
至少选择两项
,
用英语给
Lisa
写一封电子邮件
.
Do
something
for
My
Schoo l
Volunteer
to
do
(cle an
up
the
school,
…)
Give
suggestions
(organize
more
activities,
…)
Write
to
younger
schoolmates
(how< /p>
to
use
time,…)
Give
something
away
(such
as
< p>books,…)
Make
the
s chool
more
beautiful
(plant
< p>trees,…)
…
[
来源
:Z
§
xx
§
]
注意:<
/p>
(1)
文中必须包括所选内容括号内的提示
,
并适当 发挥;
(2)
文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息;
(3)
词数:
80--100
;
(4)
短文开头供选择使用
.
不计入总词数
. p>
Hello
Lisa,
How
is< /p>
it
going?
It’s
time
for
me
to
leave
school.
You
ask
me
what
I
< p>cando
for
my
school.
_________________
__________________
__________________________________________________
________________________
_______________
__________________________________________________
___________________________
____________
_________________________
__________________ ________
Li
Ming
【答案】
Hello
Lisa,
How
is p>
it
going?
It
’
s
< p>timefor
me
to
leave
school.
You
ask
me
what
I
can
do
for
my
school.
Here
are
my
pla ns
that
l
would
like p>
to
share
with
you.
Fi rst
of
all,
I
will
v olunteer
to
do
some
cleani ng
with
my
classmates,
suc h
as
cleaning
the
wind ows
and
sweeping
the
floor s.
To
keep
our
school
< p>clean,we
will
ask
our p>
schoolmates
not
to
litter p>
at
school.
Also,
I
< p>willgive
away
my
favori te
books
to
the
school
library
so
that
our
you nger
schoolmates
can
read
more
good
books.
And
I
will
call
on
more
s choolmates
to
do
so.
[
来源
学§科§网
Z
§
X
< p>§X
§
K]
It
’< /p>
s
really
hard
for
me
to
say
goodbye.
I
w ish
my
school
to
have
< p>abetter
future.
(98
wor ds)
Li
Ming
Possible
version
2
Hello
Lisa,
How
is
it
going?
It
’
s
time
for
me
to
leave
school.
You
as k
me
what
I
can
do p>
for
my
school.
Here
a re
my
plans
I'd
like
p>
to
share
with
you.
Fi rst
of
all,
I
plan
t o
write
a
letter
to
the
younger
schoolmates,
telling
them
to
value
the
< br>people
around
and
get
a long
well
with
them.
And p>
l
will
share
my
succe ss
and
failure
in
study, p>
too.
Also,
I
will
giv e
some
suggestions
on
ho
w
to
make
our
sch ool
better.
More
trees
and
flowers
must
be
planted.< /p>
More
after-class
activities<
/p>
should
be
organized
so
that
our
schoolmates
can
< p>joinin
them
to
relax. p>
I
hope
all
of
our
younger
schoolmates
can
l ive
and
study
happily
in p>
our
school.(98
words)
L
i
Ming
【解析】
写作亮点:短文思路清晰,
逻辑性强。句式变化多样,连词使用恰当。如:
To
keep
ou r
school
clean,
we
will
ask
our
schoolmates
not< /p>
to
litter
at
school.
,
I
will
give
away
my
favorite
books
to
the p>
school
library
so
that
< p>our
younger
schoolmates
ca n
read
more
good
books.
,
More
trees
and
flowe rs
must
be
planted.
More p>
after-class
activities
should
be
organized
so
that
< p>ourschoolmates
can
join
in
them
to
relax.
IFirst< /p>
of
all,
,
Also,
等。学习 中注
意总结
,
牢记一些固定句式及短语
,
写作时就可以适当引用
,
使文章的表达更有逻辑性
,
更富有条理
.
考点:提纲作文。
8.
【
2017
年浙江绍兴】书面表达。
76.
某英语教育网站正在开展主题为
“How
can
a
teenager
have
a
successfu l
life?”
的讨论,为此你采访了一些同学(结果见下表)
。请据上经用英语写一篇短文参与讨论,并阐述你的观
点。
同学主要观点
?
?
?
?
努力学习
尊重父母
服务社会
计划未来
……
(至少两条)
你的观点
注意:
(
1
)短文必须包括 表中所有内容,可适当增加细节;
(
2
)你的观点至少两 条;
(
3
)词数:
80—100
;
(
4
)短文首句仅供选择使用,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:尊重
respect
短文首句:
p>
I
have
recently
done
a
survey
about
how
a
teenager
can
have
a
succe ssful
life.
【答案】
I
have
recently
done
a
surv ey
about
how
a
teenager
can
have
a
successful
life.
Most
students
believe< /p>
it
’
s
necessary
to< /p>
study
hard.
After
all,
study
plays
a
key
role< /p>
in
their
life.
They
also
agree
they
should
respect
their
parents,
who
< p>lookafter
them
every
da y.
Besides,
they
’
re
< p>readyto
serve
the
socie ty
and
in
their
opinio n
it
’
s
really
mean ingful.
What
’
s
more,
they
think
each
teenager
< p>issupposed
to
make
a
good
plan
for
future.
From
my
point
of
v iew,
we
need
to
make
some
good
friends
so
that
we
can
learn
from
e ach
other.
Also,
we
must p>
be
active
and
exercise< /p>
more
to
keep
healthy
because
it
’
s
important< /p>
to
a
successful
life.
< p>【解析】
试题分析:英语教育网站开展主题为“
How p>
can
a
teenager
have
a
successful
life?
”的讨论,采访了一些同学 p>
参与讨论,写出他们的观点及自己的观点。因为是叙述同学的现在的观点,所以句子应该用一
般现在时,
叙述同学的观点用第三人称,叙述自己的观点用第一人称。注意不要遗漏要点
,所写的句子应该符合英语
语法,不能是汉语式的句子,要使用一些高级词汇及句式。<
/p>
写作亮点:短文用了一些短语和句式,如:
do
a
survey
about
sth
关于某事做调查;
respect
their
parents,
尊敬
他们的父母;
look
after
照顾;
make
a
good
plan
for
sth
为某事做一个好的计划;
make
some
good
friends
交一
些好朋友;
keep
healthy
保持健康。
用了宾语从句, p>
如:
Most
students
believe
it
’
s
necessary
to
study
hard.
What
’
s
more,
they
think
each p>
teenager
is
supposed
to
make
a
good
plan
for
future.
用了
because
引导的原因状语从句 ,
如:
Also,
we
must
be
active
and
exercise
more
to
keep
healthy
becau se
it
’
s
important
to
a
successful
life.
增加了< /p>
文章的亮点,也是提分的经典句子。
考点:提纲作文。
9.
【
2017
年四川南充】书面表达。
< p>假如你是李华,
你的笔友
Frank
是一名美 国中学生
,
打算今年暑假来南充旅
游。请你根据以下思维
导图
,
用英语写一封
给他介绍一下南充 。
要求
:1.
语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,书写规范 ;
2.
必须包含思维导图所给的提示,并做适当发挥;
< br>3.
行文中不得出现真实人名,校名或地名(思维导图中提及的除外);
< br>4.
词数:
80-100
(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词 数)。
Dear
Frank,
I'm
to
hear
that
you
will
come
to
Nanchong
this
summer
vacation._________________ __________________
_____________________
__________________________________________________
_____________________
__________________
__________________________________________________
________________________
Hope
to p>
see
you!
Yours,
Li<
/p>
Hua
【答案】
Dear
Fran k,
I’m
glad
to
hear
that
you
will
come
to< /p>
Nanchong
this
summer
vacat ion.
Nanchong
is
a
great p>
city
with
a
long
hist ory.
You
can
watch
Nor th
Sichuan
Puppetry
and
kn ow
about
Chen
Shou,
a
< p>well-
known
historian.
He
wrote
a
book
called
Records
of
the
Three
< p>Kingdoms.