世界上最搞笑的作文近三年(2017_2019)中考英语满分作文解析(北京卷)

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要求学生为网站投稿，

谈论自己的做法和想法。

任务设置贴近时代、贴近生活、贴近学生，体现了对写邮件、制作海报、投稿等实践活动的考查，鼓励学

生学以致用，以用促学，更好地促进了学生语言运用能力的发展。

题目①

Dear Peter,

I’m glad to receive

your email. As it is required

，

you are supposed to hand in the poster

before next Friday.

Being

your

close

friend

，

I

am

extremely

willing

to

share

some

ideas

about

designing

the

poster

with you. First and foremost

，

the basic safety rules are of great importance

，

which should be

included in your poster. In the second place

，

following the safety rules is so meaningful and

crucial

that

you

had

better

remind

your

readers

of

its

significance

and

advise

them

to

be

careful

both

in

and

out

of

school.

Last

but

by

no

means

least

，

if

I

were

you

，

I

would

add

a

few

suggestions

about safety awareness

，

considering that better safe than sorry. In addition

，

it is a good idea

for you to draw a few pictures on your poster so as to make it more lively and acceptable.

If there is anything more that I can help with, please let me know.

Yours,

Li Hua

【名师点评】

这篇作文要求我们以李华的身份 给

Peter

写一封邮件，告诉他关于制作关于安全教育的主题海报的相

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关事 宜。由题目中给出的提示问题可知，短文中应包括以下内容：首先告诉

Peter

海报上交的时间；然后

和他分享一些设计海报的想法。第二个内容应该是短文的主体。题 目中并没有规定具体的写作内容，学生

们应联系自己的实际生活，展开合理的想象，将这 些内容补充完整后，用正确的英语表达出来，这是写作

中的一个难点。短文应以一般现在 时为主、第一、二人称来叙述。写作时应注意：首先要合理安排短文内

容，

叙述应有层次、

有条理。

可以使用一些表示先后顺序的词或短语，

如

First,

Second,

Last

but

not

least

等等。题目 中给出的提示词应该在短文中用上。其次应注意文章的表达，英语句式的结构与汉语是不同的，

< br>因此不能根据汉语思维逐词翻译，应该从句式的整体考虑，先确定主干结构，然后添加修饰成分。为提升< /p>

作文档次，应注意使用一些高级词汇、短语以及复合句、非谓语动词等复杂结构。同时语句 之间使用恰当

的连接成分，使文意上下连贯，表达流畅。

【写作亮点】

这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者 根据题目要求，给

Peter

写邮件，告诉他制作主题海报的一些事情。

短文有以下几个优点：首先文章内容完整，结构清晰，符合题目要求。除题目中给出的开头和结尾 ，短文

主要包括两个内容：第一段用一句话告诉

Peter

上交海报的时间；文章的中心和重点是放在了第二段上，

这一段中作者和

Peter

分享了一些制作海报的想法。主要从四个方面进行阐述，内容非常详实，并使用了< /p>

First and foremost, In the second place, Last but by no means least, In addition

等短语， 分清

了这一段的层次，叙述非常有条理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范 ，用词准确，并使用

了较复杂的句式结构，表现了作者较强的语言运用能力。短文中较好 的句型有：

Being

your

close

friend

，

I am extremely willing to share some ideas about designing the poster with you.

、

In the second

place

，

following the safety rules is so meaningful and crucial that you had better remind your

readers

of

its

significance

and

advise

them

to

be

careful

both

in

and

out

of

school

、

In

addition

，

it is a good idea for you to draw a few pictures on your poster so as to make it more lively and

acceptable.

等等。

题目②

Self-discipline plays an important role in our life. To be honest, I am a person who is

self-disciplined. I used to follow all kinds of rules and hand in the tasks appointed on time

at

school.

And

I

could

not

only

respected

all

my

teachers

but

also

get

on

well

with

my

classmates.

At home, I was able to balance housework and homework. I usually made a plan in advance to make

it easier to achieve my goal. After finishing all the task, I developed the habit of going to

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bed early and going to bed early. In the society

，

I spared no effort to improve myself all the

time.

In a word, I have benefited a lot from being self-discipline. First of all, I have had many

good habits, which makes my life easier and more regular. Secondly, my life and my study have

been to high efficiency so that a lot of time has been saved. Thirdly, being self-disciplined

has prepared me for a better and brighter future. In the future, I will continue to be a

self-disciplined person.

【名师点评】

这篇作文要求 我们以李华的身份，用英语写一篇短文给某网站投稿，谈谈为了增强自律意识，你做过

什 么，以及这样做给你带来的好处。根据题目中给出的问题可知，短文应包括以下内容：首先谈一谈为了

个内容应主要使用现在完成时。注意谓语动词的正确形式。题目中并没有规定具体的 写作内容，学生们应

联系自己的实际生活，展开合理的想象，将这些内容补充完整后，用 正确的英语表达出来，这是写作中的

一个难点。写作时应注意：首先注意内容的完整、充 实，学生们可以结合自己的实际生活，写一写自己平

时的做法。注意叙述应有层次、有条 理。其次应注意英语的表达问题，英语句式的结构与汉语是不同的，

因此不能根据汉语思 维逐词翻译，应该从句式的整体考虑，先确定主干结构，然后添加修饰成分。为提升

作文 档次，应注意使用一些高级词汇、短语以及复合句、非谓语动词等复杂结构。同时语句之间使用恰当

的连接成分，使文意上下连贯，表达流畅。

【写作亮点】

这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者 根据题目要求，介绍了自己第自律的认识，结合自己的实际谈论了自

律的好处。短文有以 下几个优点：首先文章内容完整、充实，短文主要分两段：第一段中作者介绍了自己

在家 里、

在学校以及在社会上是如何遵守规则，

进行自我约束的。

这一 段的内容叙述很有条理，

从

at

school,

At home, In the society

三个方面进行介绍。 第二段中作者主要阐述了自律给自己带来的好处，使用了

Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly

，从三个方面进行介绍。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人 称，谓语动词形

式准确，语法规范，句式结构文章，且使用了较高级的词汇和复杂句式， 提升了作文档次，展现了作者扎

实的写作功底。

文章中较好的句型有：< /p>

I

used

to

follow

all

kinds

of

rules

and

hand

in

the

tasks

appointed

on time at school.

、

I usually made a plan in advance to make it easier to achieve my goal.

、

First

of

all

，

I

have

had

many

good

habits

，

which

makes

my

life

easier

and

more

regular.

、

Thirdly,

being self-disciplined has prepared me for a better and brighter future.

等等。

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2018

年

题目①

假如你是李华，你们学校将要举办一场 关于京剧的讲座，你打算邀请你们班交换生

Peter

参加。请用

英语写一封电子邮件，告诉他讲座的时间和地点，以及需要做什么准备。

提示词语：

lecture

（讲座）

, invite, information, question, online

提示问题：

●When and where will you have the

lecture?

●What do you advise Peter to prepare for it?

Dear Peter,

How

is

it

going?

There’ll

be

a

lecture

on

Peking

Opera

in

our

school.

_________________________________

_________________________________________ __________________________________________________ _

_____________________________________ __________________________________________________ _____

_________________________________ __________________________________________________ _________

_____________________________ __________________________________________________ _____________

__________________________ __________________________________________________ ________________

______________________ __________________________________________________ ____________________

If there is anything that I can do, please let me know.

Yours,

Li Hua

题目②

＂静以修身，俭以养德＂，勤俭节约是 中华民族的传统美德。无论生活富足与否，我们都应该提倡节