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中考英语作文
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旅游交通
10
旅游交通篇
（一）
你正在组织一项暑假期间到山区为期一周的
游学和帮扶活动。作为发起人
，请你写一篇发言稿，在你校“英语
时光”广播中号召更多的同学参加。
要求：
1. 80
—
100
词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2.
文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
【满分范文】
Hello, everybody. I am planning a summer trip
called
“
Be a kid in the Mountains
“
. It will provide us
with a meaningful week staying with the
students in the
mountains. As many of
their parents leave for the city to
work, those students might feel lonely
and some may even
find it hard to go on
studying. So we can bring them some
school things like books and pens for
their study, and
prepare some
interesting stories to share. In the daytime,
we can go hiking and do some teamwork.
In the evening, we
can do such
activities as popular games and group dance
around the fire. Isn
＇
t that exciting? Come and join us.
Let
＇
s be
“
a kid in the mountains
“
.I believe it will
bring sunshine to the children in
the mountains as well as
more confidence to us. Thank you!
【名师点评】
（
1
）高分句
型一
As many of their parents leave for the city to work
，
those students might feel
lonely and some may even find it
hard
to go on studying.
由于很多父母都去城市工作，这些学生可
能会感到孤独，有些人甚至觉得很难继续学习。
it hard to go on < /p>
studying.
中的
it
是形式宾语。
（
2
）高分句型二
I believe it will bring sunshine to the
children
in the mountains as well as more confidence to us.
我相信它会给山里的孩子们带来阳光，也会给我们带来更多的信
心。句子
it will bring sunshine to the children in the
mountains as well as more
confidence to us.
是宾语从句。作
believe<
/p>
的宾语。
（二）
丰富初三学生课余生活，上周末你校组织了一次 社会实践活
动。请根据以下内容提示，用英语写一篇短文，介绍此次活动，并
谈谈自己的感想。
活动内容：
1
．上午游览人民公园：欣赏美景、歌舞联 欢、拍照留
念；
2
．下午参观市民广场：观看图片展， 了解祖国和家乡
70
年巨
变。
你的感想：
1
．师生情深，感谢老师和同学的帮助；
2
．倍受鼓
舞，决心勤奋学习报效祖国；
3.
……（考生自己发挥）
要求：
1
．词数
100
左右。开头已给出，不计人总词数。
2
．所写内容必须包括内容提 示中所提供的信息，并可作适当的发
挥。
【满分范文】
In order to enrich Junior 3 students
＇
after-
school
life, our school organized a social practice
activity last weekend. All the teachers
and students of our
grade took part in
it. In the morning, we visited the
People
’
s Park. In the park, we enjoyed the beautiful
scenery,
danced and sang, and took pictures. I would like
to thank my teachers and classmates for
their help. In the
afternoon, we
visited the Citizen
’
s Square. In People
＇
s
Square, we
watched the photo exhibition and learned about
the great changes of our country and
hometown in the past
70 years. After
seeing these photo exhibitions, I was
inspired and determined to study hard
to serve my country.
【名师点评】
【高分句型一】
I would like to thank my
teachers and classmates for their help.
我要感谢我的老师和
同学们的帮助。该句话用到了
would like to do sth.
丰富了语
言。
【高分句型二】
In People
＇
s Square, we watched the photo
exhibition and learned about the
great changes of our
country and
hometown in the past 70 years.
在人民广场，我们
看了
70
年来的摄影展，了解了祖国和家乡的巨大变化。该句话的 语
言简练，层次分明，语意明确，用简单的句子表达了丰富的内涵。
使人读起来朗朗上口。
（三）
假如你是李华，你校校报的英语专栏正在开展以 “美丽的黄
河风情线”
(The Beautiful Yellow River Custom Tourist Line)
为主题的英语征文活动，你打
算参加。请根据以下内容要点用英语
写一篇短文。
1.
风情线总览
(the Yellow River, run through the city of
Lanzhou, a famous road called Binhe
Road, along the Yellow
River)
；
2.
聚焦景观
(Zhongshan Bridge, waterwheel(
水车
),
many
parks)
；
3.
休闲娱乐
(fly kites, play chess)
；
4.
特色
游览
(go sightseeing, sheepskin raft(
羊皮筏子
),water bus)
。
要求：
1. 80
词左右；
2.
条理清楚，行文连贯，书写规范；内容
上可适度发挥。
注意：不得出现学校、姓名等个人信息
(
除所给身份外
)
。
【满分范文】
The Beautiful Yellow River Custom Tourist Line
The Yellow
River is our mother river. Do you know what
scenic spots the beautiful Yellow River
has? Let me ___
you! The Yellow River
flows through Lanzhou. There is a
famous highway called Binhe Road, which
runs along the
Yellow River. Along the
Yellow River there are many parks,
as
well as the picturesque Zhongshan Bridge,
beautiful
waterwheel and so on. There
are many places for leisure and
entertainment, such as flying kites,
playing chess and so
on. There, you can
enjoy special tours, such as
sightseeing, sheepskin raft and water
bus. The beautiful
Yellow River is
waiting for you!
【名师点评】
【高分句型
一】
There is a famous highway called Binhe Road, which
runs
along the Yellow River.
有一条著名的公路叫做滨河路，它
沿着黄河行驶。句子
which runs along the Yellow River.
是由
which
引导的定语从句。
【高分句型二】
There are many places for leisure and
entertainment, such as
flying kites, playing chess and so
on.
有很多休闲娱乐的地方，如放风筝、下棋等。该句话用
there
be
结构来写。
（四）
我们生活学习在美丽的甘肃。假设你所在的学校 正在组织一
个“让世界了解甘肃、让走向世界＂的活动，请根据以下思维导图
的提示，以“
The Introduction of Gansu Province
“为题，写一
篇介绍甘肃的英语短文。
要求：
1.
文中需包含思维导图中的主要内容；
2.
句子及篇章结构
准确、连贯，书写规范；
3.
可做适量拓展；
4.
词数：
80
词左
右。
(
标题需抄写在答题卡对应作答区域，不计入 总词数
) The
Introduction of Gansu
Province
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/p>
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【写作思路】
本文属于材料作文，介绍甘肃省。 根
据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻
辑，可适当增加内容。
【满分范文】
The Introduction of Gansu Province Gansu
Province lies in the
northwest of China. It covers an area
of 425,900 square kilometers. There are
26 million people
living there. Lanzhou
is the capital city of Gansu
Province.
The weather in Gansu is different from place to
place and the temperature is usually
quite different from
day to night. If
you want to go travelling in
Gansu
，
May to
October is
the best time. Mogao Grotto which is the world
famous art palace and Jiayuguan
Pass
，
the western end of
the Great Wall
，
are two of the must-see places of interest
in
Gansu.
【名师点评】
这是一篇优秀的作文，很好地完成 了试题
规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，
特别使用一些亮点词句，如
lie in, there be, the capital city
of, be different from, end
of, places of interest
以及
which
引导的定语从句，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准
确，句子通顺，
行文连贯。
（五）
如你参加了学校组织的“走近乡村”寒假社会实 践活动。请
根据要求，向某英语网站投稿，分享活动经历。
要求：
1.80~120
词， 可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.
文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考信息：
Have you ever got close to the countryside and
had a special
experience? Let me share mine!
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【写作思路】
本文属于一篇图表作文，根据表格提< /p>
供的信息来介绍“走近乡村”寒假社会实践活动的经历。人称为第
一人称，时态主要为一般过去时。动笔前先要注意认真阅读材料确
定写作内容；文章必须包括要点中所给的信息，既要写活动的
过
程，又要总结活动感受与收获。并补充两条个人的观点。表达要符
合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中
适当使用连词，注
意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条
理性。多种句式交叉使用来丰富文章的文
采。高分句型：
experienced the life in
the countryside, learned something
that
we couldn
’
t get from books before. < /p>
我们经历了农村的生
活，学到了一些我们以前从书中得不到的东西。
that we couldn
’
t
get
from books before.
是定语从句，修饰不定代词
somet hing
。
2. We really hope
we
’
ll have another activity like that
this winter vacation!
我们真的希 望今年寒假还能有这样的活
动！
hope
后面是省略
that
的宾语从句。
【满分范文】
Have you ever got close to the countryside and
had a special
experience? Let me share mine. During the
winter vacation my classmates and I
joined in the school
activity
“
Get close to the countryside
”
. We live in the
famers
’
homes. Their great living conditions surprised us
a
lot. Do you know where vegetables e from? We got
the
answer when working with the
farmers. Besides, we learned
about
other plants and some farm animals. How
interesting!
We experienced the life in
the countryside, learned
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