贺卡怎么写选择交通工具出行的英语小作文

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how do you get around the city



When we go out, there are some choices for our trip.

Fist, it is on foot. if the distance is short, we can choose this way. For most pepole live in big city, there are few chances to go on foot, so they have to chose other means of transportation, such as bike, e-bike, motorbike, taxi, private car, bus or coach, express, subway, train, airplane, and so on.



Fist, we can get around by bike. This vehicle has some advantages: first, it’s very convient for using, it needn’t any power or special place to park. Obvirsly, it’s very eco- friendly. Second, it’s a good way to take exercise. You could save money and time to go gym for keeping healthy. Riding bike has some disadvantages: first, it’s not available for long journey or emergency owning to the lower speed; secondly, it’s normally available for one person.



Second, we can choose e-bike. In recent years, the e-bike becomes more and more popular. There are some reasons: first, it’s not as expensive as motorcycle or car because the price is acceptalbe for common families. Second, it has enough flexibility and satisfactory speed. Third, it doesn’t generated pollution for our environment. But there are some disadvantages for e-bike: fist, it must be charged. Once it’s out of power on the way for doing something, the heavy vehicle should be pushed by manpower. On the other hand, it often causes some accidents due to its speed and out of traffic regulation.



Third, taxi. (As known to all)As we know, it’s very convenient to ride. Taxi will come just with a wave of hand. You just need to tell the driver where you want to go then you could arrvie the place that you want . But, the disavatage is obviors : if you often ride taxi, that mease you should pay a hansome sum of money. It just available for some high- paid.



About private car, the advantages are these: on one hand, its very convenient for the long distance. You don’t need to go to bus station and then wait the bus coming. On the other hand, it has a big advantage for the emergency. For example, something happened at midnight and there was no any cars. In particuler, it could be used for up to 5 pepole at the same time. However, the disavantages of car is obviours: high cost for fuel, insurance and taxes; emisson of polluted gases. In the worst-case senario, the speed will be very low in the rush hours and it even couldn’t catch up with bike.



For bus, the major advantage is it’s very cheaper. In big city, many peploe go to work by bus due to this reason. In addition, the route of bus is fixed, basically, you couldn’t miss it for the public vehicle. According to experts’ suggestion, bus is a good way to decrease the emisson of polluted gases. But bus has some disavantage. The major problem is that it is not availavle for emergency. Furthermore, it’s very crowded at the bus stop and in bus, which easier to produce some crimes.



As for subway, the a

dvantages include these aspects: first, it’s very fast to get around in the city; second, it’s very safe comparing to car, bus, coach and express. Because it runs underground. However, it’s not convenient for some pepole who lives far away from subway station, not to mention there is no subway in most smaller cities.



The train, it’s very comfortable for the long journey. Many pepole travels to somewhere usually choose this vehicle due to the lower ticket price. But, the delay happens very often when the train arrived the destination.



When it comes to airplane, from what I heared, plane is the safest vehicle except for the fastest speed. But, if airplane crashed, the chance of survival is next to impossible.