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2004
年
-2009
年高考英语满分作文及名师评析
2009
高考英语满分作文
【全国卷
I
海南、宁夏】
【试题回放】假定你是李华，正在英国接受英语培训 ，住在一户英国人家里。今天你
的房东
Mrs. Wilson
不在家，你准备外出，请给
Mrs. Wilson
写一留言条，内容包括：
1.
外出购物
2.
替房东还书
来电话留言：
1)
咖啡屋
(Bolton Coffee)
见面取消
2)
此事已告知
Susan
3)
尽快回电
注意：
1.
词数
100
左右
;
2.
可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Mrs. Wilson,
I’m going out shopping, and won’t be back until about 5:00 pm. I have taken
with
me
the
two
books
you
asked
me
to
return
to
the
City
Library.
At
about
1
o’clock
this afternoon, Tracy called, saying
that she couldn’t mee
t you at Bolton Coffee
tomorrow morning as she has something
important to attend to. She felt very sorry
about
that,
but
said
that
you
could
set
some
other
time
for
the
meeting.
She
wanted
you to call her back
as
soon
as you are home. She has already told Susan about this
change.
Yours,
Li Hua
[
名师点评
]
本文属于提纲式要点作文，是学生 比较熟悉的题材，体现了英语学习应该注意实用性，
生活型的原则。行文人称、时态运用
恰当、准确，各个要点间逻辑连贯，行文通顺。提纲类
书面表达不是简单的逐条翻译，
而是将所给的几个要点合理的组成比较通顺的 语句，
因此要
仔细组织语言，合理安排结构。在语言方面，要特别注意简
洁明了，开头要开门见山。
【江苏卷】
【试题 回放】
鼠标是计算机时代最佳的人机交互工具之一。
它极大地方便了人们的计算< /p>
机操作。但是，
过分依赖鼠标的习惯也会带来一些不利影响。
请你以鼠标为切入点，根据下
表所提示的信息，用英语写一篇短文。
鼠标的必要性对多数人来说，操作计算机，上网冲浪??
鼠标的便捷性点击、移动、插入、拷贝、删除??编辑文本，搜索信息??
收发邮件，选购商品??
点播音乐，下载电影??
如果过分依赖鼠标?? (请考生结合自身感受，列举两到三点
)
注意：
1.
对所给要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。
2.
词数
150
左右。开头已经写好，不计人总词数。
3.
作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。
The mouse is a most effective device used by people to communicate with a
computer.
For
most
people,
it’s
almost
impossible
to
operate
a
computer
without
a
mouse,
let alone surf the Internet. A well-
chosen mouse is really handy, flexible and
convenient in controlling the screen.
With the functions of inserting, deleting,
moving and copying, it enables us to
edit test, browse web page and download what
we want. It can even bring us a flood
of music, movies and PC games. Just imagine,
all this can be done with a cute mouse.
A convenient tool can certainly make our work easier, but it doesn’t always
help in
a positive way.
Too much ready information on our fingertips leaves little
room
for
knowledge
pursuing.
Too
many
ready
answers
make
us
less
excited
in
finding
truth. Relying too much on mouse
clicking makes us lazier and less creative both
mentally and physically.
【名师点评】本文为提纲式说明文体裁，
所选内容与我们生活相 关，考生只要把所给要
点逐条陈述，适度发挥，不要逐条翻译即可。文章说理清楚，语言
流畅，句式表达多样，用
词恰当、准确。不失为一篇满分作文。
2008
高考英语满分作文
【全国卷】
【试题 回放】假定你是李华，从小喜爱大熊猫
(panda),
一直通过有关网站
(website)
关
注三年前在美国圣迭哥动物园出生的大熊
猫“苏琳”和她的母亲“白云”。
现在苏琳即将三
岁。请根据以下要点给
动物园工作人员写一封信：
1
、
自我介绍
;2
、
祝贺苏琳生日
;3
、
感谢工作人员
;4
、
索取苏琳三岁生日照。
< p>注意：
1
、词数
100
左右
; 2
、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
;3
、开头语已为你写好。
例文：
Dear Sir/Madam,
Greetings from China!
I’m
Li
Hua,
a
student
in
Sichuan.
I’
ve
been
a
panda
lover
since
I
was
a
child.
About
three
years
ago
I
was
delighted
to
learn
that
Baiyun
gave
birth
to
her
daughter
Sulin
and
I’ve
been
watching
her
grow
on
your
website,.
Now
she’s
going
to
be
three.
I’d
like
to
wish
her
a
happy
birthday
and
to
express
my
thanks
to
you
for
your
hard
work, because of which Sulin and her
parents are living a happy and healthy life
in the US.
By the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday
ω
Thank
you very much in advance.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【名师点评】本文写作的内容要点如下：
1.
自我 介绍
;2.
信息来源
;3.
祝贺生日
;4.
感谢照顾
;5.
索取照片
;6.
合适的结尾。
这封信格式正 确，行文规范，描述有条不紊，称呼、正文中的开头及结尾、结束语均表
达到位。文章行
文活泼，
感情真挚，
语言表述准确，洋溢着作者因大熊猫得到精心照顾而对
美方人员的感激之情，以及希望自己愿望成真，得到照片的希冀之情。
长短句运 用合理，结
合了简单句和复合句，流畅自然，不露痕迹，的确是一篇佳作。
积累卡片英汉互译
好词
ted adj.
欣喜的，快乐的
s v.
表达
birth to v.
产生，
生育
好句
I’d like
to wish her a happy
birthday
and to express
my thanks to you for
your
hard
work,
because
of
which
Sulin
and
her
parents
are
living
a
happy
and
healthy
life in the US.
我祝福它生日快乐并且对你们的辛勤工作表达我的感 激之情，
正是你们的努力工作让苏
琳和它的父母在美国过着幸福和健康的
生活。
评析：定语从句的使用。
【江苏卷】
【试题 回放】
实现有效的沟通，
建立良好的人际关系，
不仅要善于言表，
更要学会倾听。
请你根据下表中所提供的信息，写一篇题为
“Being a Good Listener” 的英文演讲稿。
为何倾听表示尊重，增进理解，建立良好的人际关系
谁来倾听家长倾听孩子理解孩子，消除代沟，??
老师倾听学生了解学生，满足需求，??
同学相互倾听增进友谊，互帮互学，??
怎样倾听
(
请考生联 系自己拟定内容，列举两至三点。
)
注意：
1
、
对所给要点，逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。
2
、
词数
15 0
左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。
3
、
演讲稿中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名。
Good afternoon, everyone.
Th
e topic of my speech today is “Being a Good Listener”.
Good listening can always show respect, promote understanding, and improve
interpersonal relationship.
Many
people
suggest
that
parents
should
listen
more
to
their
children,
so
they
will
understand
them
better,
and
find
it
easy
to
narrow
the
generation
gap;
teachers
should listen more to
their students, then they can meet their needs
better, and
place
themselves
in
a
good
relationship
with
their
students;
students
should
listen
more to their classmates, thus they
will help and learn from each other, and a
friendship is likely to be formed.
What
I
want
to
stress
is
that
each
of
us
should
listen
to
others.
Show
your
respect
and never stop others
till they finish their talk; show you are
interested by a
supportive silence or a
knowing smile; be open-minded to different
opinions even
though you don’t like
them. In a word, good listening can really enable
us to get
closer to each other.
Thank you for your listening!
【名师点评】
这是 一篇感情真挚、
热情洋溢的演讲稿，
文中大量运用排比句型，
不但 准确流畅地表达
出题目中所提供的信息，
而且体现出作者熟练运用英语的 能力以及不俗的文采。
第三段中所
使用的相同结构的复合句式，将倾听的
对象及其作用阐述得淋漓尽致
;
而第四段中用一系列
的祈
使句议论应如何倾听，则更进一步地增强了这篇演说稿的说服力。
积累卡片英汉互译
好词
e v .
促进
2. interpersonal adj.
人际的
3. generation gap.
代沟
4. open-minded adj.
虚心的
好句
1. students should listen more to their classmates, thus they will help
and learn from each other,
and a friendship is likely to be formed.
同学之间应该互相倾听，这样他们可以互相学习和帮助，也会形成友谊。
评析：复杂句的组合，被动句的使用。
2. What I want to stress is that each of us should listen to others.
我想强调的是我们每个人都应该更多的倾听他人。
评析：复合句的使用。
【湖北卷】
【试题回放】假设你是卜曼宜，你购买了一部某外国 公司生产的手机，因有质量问题，
要求该公司更换。请根据下列要点，用英文写一封电子
邮件。
要点：
1.
问题：手机不响铃，不能发短信
;
该产品已售完，无法更换
;
型号新，无配件，
无法维修。
2.
要求：公司应尽快予以更换。
注意：
1.
词数为
100
左右
;
2.
参考词汇：配件——
spare part;
3.
电子邮件的开头 和结尾已为你写好
(
不计入你所写词数
);
4.
已给出的电子邮件的开头和结尾不得抄入答题卡。
Dear Sir
，
I
am
writing
to
you
for
the
mobile
phone
of
Dephone-S250
I
bought
on
20th
Apr.2008
at Tele Mall in Wuhan, P.R. China. Ten
days after that, it didn’t ring and send
short messages. Then I took it to the
seller, but was told that the model had been
sold out and I had to wait at least
three months for a new one. I had no choice but
to go to the repairman. To my
disappointment ,he said since it was a new model
in
China,
it
was
impossible
to
fix
it
without
the
right
spare
parts.
I
was
so
desperate
on
hearing
that
for
I
can
not
wait
that
long.
Therefore,
I
have
to
require
that
you
send me a new one of the
same model within a month.
Thank you for your consideration.
Sincerely yours,
Bu Manyi
【名师点评】
本文内容要点齐全，
语言丰富，
结构合理，
如头两句说明了购买手机后发现故障的情况，< /p>
中间部分说明了无法维修而必须让公司更换手机的原委，
最后明确提出自己 的要求，
明白流
畅，将题目所提出的要点全部表达清楚，
较好的完成了任务。
全文以一般过去时为基调，结
合主动语态与被动语态
，并使用了
so, but, therefore
等连接词，使文章结构完整严密。
固定短语，如
be sold out ,at least, had no choice but to go, to my disappointment,
on hearing that
等的使用，使文章的语言显得地道而精炼。
积累卡片英汉互译
好词
1. disappointment n.
失望
ate adj.
绝望的
3. consideration n.
体谅
好句
To my disappointment ,he said since it was a new model in China, it was
impossible to fix it without the right
spare parts.
令我失望的是，他说因为在中国是新款手机，所以没有配件来修理。
评析：复杂句的组织
; to my disappointment,
常用短语。
2007
高考英语满分作文
【全国卷
II
】
【试题回放】
一家宾馆新开业，为吸引外国宾客，希望在互联网上进行宣传。请你用英语为其
写一
篇文字介绍。主要内容包括：
1.
地点：距白山入口处
< p>500米
;
2 .
房间及价格：
单人间
(
共
20< /p>
间
)
，
100
元
/< /p>
天
;
双人间
(
共
15
间
)
，
150
元
/
天
;
热水淋浴
;3.
餐饮
：餐厅
(
中、西餐
)
，咖啡厅
(< /p>
茶、咖啡
);4.
游泳池：全天免费开放
; 5.
欢迎预定。
注 意：
1.
词数
100
左右，开头语已为你写好
;2.
可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel!
Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business.
500 meters far from the entrance of Baishan Mountain, it provides single
?
person room, of which the
price is RMB100 yuan per day and the number is 20,
and
15 double
?
person rooms, with a price of RMB 150 yuan per day. It also provides
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