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2015
年
06
月大学英语四级写作
2015
年
6
月的大学英语 四级考试刚刚落下帷幕,作为打头阵而出现的作文题目一直是令
广大考生备受瞩目且头疼
不已的专项。
此次考试还是沿续之前的出题风格,
以图画的形式来考
查,要求考生写一篇不少于
180
个单词的议论文。
由于是花卷形式出现,所以涉及到多个题目。本次四 级考试已知的三道作文题目是:
1.
人与电脑(电脑对人所产生的影响)
2.
人与手机
(人对手机的过分依赖性)
3.
父母在孩子成长过程中所发挥的作用
从作文题目来看,
在话题的难度上并 不是很大。
本文主要从以下三方面对今年的四级作文
真题给以解读。
p>
一、命题形式与考研接轨。
熟悉考研的同学会发现,考研英语一的大作文主要考查图画作文,英语二主要考查图表作
文,而近两年,至从四六级大纲革以后,四级的作文更改了考查形式由原来的话题作文,书信
p>
作文变为图画作文,
由原来的至少完成
120
个单词,
现在变成了不能超过
180
个单词,
足见 在
难度上加大。
二、内容紧紧围绕社会热点话题。
现在最为热门的话题就是科技给人们生活带来的便利及影响,
其 中科技就涉及到手机,
电
脑,网络。此类话题通常会有正反两面性。便利
需要侧重好的方面进行描述,而影响则需侧重
不好的有害的方面展开。
如 果图画的倾向性不明显的话,
可以采用正反对比的形式。
而这次四
级考试有两个题目一个是人与手机,
另一个是人与电脑,
从图画的侧重点 来看,
都是负面性的。
此类话题,对于广大考生来讲,比较容易驾驭。因
为不会涉及到太难的生词。
三、考查重点是语言用词。
英语作文一贯的考查目标是是否能够用正确丰富的语 言来表达思想。
各位考生需要注意的
是,在写句子时,首先得保证句子是
对的,其次再考虑用不同的字眼表达同一概念,也就是同
意替换的能力。
因此建议各位考生朋友以后在备考英语时,要有意识 地培养用英文表达的相关能力。
关于人与电脑这个话题,
我们在谋篇构局的时候,
可以按三段去写,
开头部分一定要对图
片进行描述,然后在中间段落展开
(
注意:本次图画侧重的是负面影响< /p>
)
,也可以从正反两个方
面进行对比分析。在行文时,要注
意文章的层次和逻辑梳理。
【参考范文】
作文题目一:
(电脑对人所产生的影响)
破题思路:
第一段:
描述漫画内容,
引出文章主题:
电脑的使用越来越广泛,
使用的时间也越来越长。
第二段:分析该现象的原因。
第三段:提出措施解决。或得出自己的结论。
This picture vividly describes that the
person uses a computer in the whole day even when
he
falls asleep at night. What the
cartoon conveys is the impact of computers on
people.
这幅图生动地描述了一个人在一天中使用电脑,
p>
甚至在晚上睡觉的时候。
卡通传达的是电
脑对人们的影响。<
/p>
New products are being invented
every minute of every day, all of which will hold
sway over
people in some respects.
However, in all these technologies and products,
computers have exerted
the most
important influence on people. Some people assert
that computers have made life more
complex and stressful, while some
people believe that computers have made life
easier and more
convenient. Now many of
my classmates like to surf the Internet in their
free time. I think Internet
can bring
us both advantages and disadvantages. For example,
if I have some trouble studying
,
I can
surf the internet to find more
helpful information. However, Internet can make
some problems at
the same time.
新产品每天都被发明出来,
这一切都将在某些方面对人们有着支配性的影响。
< p>然而,在所
有这些技术和产品中,
计算机已经对人们 产生了最重要的影响。
有人断言,
电脑使生活变得更
加复
杂和紧张,而有些人则认为电脑使生活更为复杂和有压力人们相信计算机使生活更容易,
更便利。
现在我的许多同学都喜欢在他们的空闲时间上网。
我认为互联网能给我们 带来好处和
缺点。例如,如果我有一些麻烦的学习,我可以上网找到更多有用的信息。然
而,互联网可以
在同一时造成一些问题。
In
a
word,
in
spite
of
the
fact
the
computer
appears
to
have
made
life
more
complex
and
stressful,
I
feel
that
the
advantages
are
more
obvious,
which
have
become
an
integral
part
of
everyday life
。
p>
总的来说,尽管电脑似乎使生活变得更加复杂和充满压力,但我觉得这一优势更加明显,
p>
这已成为日常生活不可或缺的一部分。
(电脑对人所产生的影响)
首段:
As is clearly depicted from a series of cartoons that a man is excessively dependent on
the computer whether in
working and playing or at home and sleeping. The
impact of the computer
on daily life is
such seriousness that it is high time we paid
attention to it.
显然是从一系列的漫画,
描绘一个男人过分地依赖计算机是否在工作和玩耍或在家里睡觉。
电脑对日常生
活的影响是如此的严重性,这是我们高度关注的问题。
展开段:
In the first place, due to the wide application of the computer, some people called net
friends always take priority
over our family and friends in real life. The bulk
of each day including
our time and
energy is spent on the Internet.
What
’
s more, the Internet deprives us of the delight
in communication with
others. When taking to someone by us, we can hear
their voices, see their
expressions,
and even hold their hands if we would like to.
Last but not least, the computer will lead
to a decline of our skills of face-to-
face communication. Thus we may feel embarrassed
and find it
harder to communicate with
people around us.
首先,
由于计 算机的广泛应用,
有些人叫网友总是优先于在现实生活中我们的家人和朋友。
每一天的大部分时间,
包括我们的时间和精力都花在了互联网上。
更重要的是 ,
互联网剥夺了
我们与他人沟通的喜悦。当我们的人,我们可以听到他们
的声音,看到他们的表达,如果我们
愿意的话,
甚至可以握住他们的手。
最后但并非最不重要的是,
电脑会导致我们面对面的沟通
技巧的下降。因此,我们可能会感到尴尬,发现很难与周围的人交流。
结论段:
To sum up, we shouldn
’
t be dependent on the computer excessively. No matter how
convenient and speedy it is, we should
remember the advantage of face-to-face
communication.
综上所述,
我们不应 该过分依赖电脑。
无论多方便和快速,
我们都应该记住面对面的交流
的优点。
(电脑对人所产生的影响)
This
modern life
(这种现代生活)
As is
shown in the above picture, people sit in front of
the computer all day and night, even in
their
dreams
they
’
re
still
playing
computer
games.
Such
thought-provoking
phenomenon
is,
especially
among young people, prevail in our modern life.
正如上图所示,人们整天坐在电脑前,甚至在梦里,他们还在玩电脑游
戏。这种耐人寻味
的现象,特别是在年轻人,在我们的现代生活中占上风。
It
’
s true that the computer has brought great convenience to our modern life. However, as is
illustrated
in the picture, the overuse of it may lead to
several bad consequences. To begin with,
there
is
evidence
that
long-term
exposure
to
electromagnetic
radiation
emitted
from
computers
may
cause
many
health
problems,
like
insomnia,
headaches,
and
even
cancer.
In
addition,
when
people
immerse
himself
in
the
world
of
computer,
they
tend
to
pay
less
attention
to
the
surroundings,
and
excessive
use
of
the
computer
means
much
less
chance
of
face- to-face
interactions with people who
populate their real lives.
电脑给我
们的现代生活带来了极大的方便。
然而,
正如图片中所示,
过度使 用它可能导致
几个坏的后果。首先,有长期暴露于计算机的电磁辐射可能会导致许多健康
问题,如失眠,头
痛,甚至癌症。此外,当人们沉浸在自己在电脑世界中,他们倾向于较
少关注周围的环境,计
算机的过度使用意味着与填充其重新的人进行面对面的互动的机会
更少了生活。
In conclusion, while
computers have contribute a lot to making our life
more convenient, we
should use them
appropriately.
总之,虽然电脑给我们的生活带来了
许多的便利,但我们应该适当地使用它们。
作文题目二:
(人对手机的过分依赖性)
As is illustrated in the picture, a
pupil is asking his father why he is going to
school if his phone
already knows
everything. It can be known that the pupil lacks a
thorough understanding of going
to
school.
如图所示,
一个学生问他的父亲为什 么他要上学,
如果他的手机已经知道了一切。
这可以
知道
,学生缺乏一个彻底的理解学校。
Compared
with
the
phone,
there
are
certain
things
that
can
be
only
achieved
by
going
to
school.
In
the
first
place,
going
to
school
endows
us
with
the
experiences
of
getting
along
with
others.
Only
by
contacting
people
can
our
interpersonal
skills
be
developed.
The
phone
only
provides
information in an environment where there is just
the phone and you. Secondly, you can
consult your teacher face to face about
any detail of your question, which cannot be done
on your
phone. Last but not least,
school is a place where you can learn to be
independent. If you stay with
your
parents all the time, you will never truly grow
up.
与手机相比
,
有些事情只能通 过上学。
首先
,
上学赋予我们与他人相处的经验。
只有联系人,
我们才能发展人际交往能力。电话只提供信息,在一个环境中,只有电话和
你。其次,你可以
向你的老师请教关于你的问题的任何细节,
不能在你的 电话上做。
最后但并非最不重要的,
学
校是一个你可以学
会独立的地方。如果你和你的父母一直呆在一起,你永远不会真正长大。
To
conclude,
it
’
s
a
necessity
for
kids
to
go
to
school.
It
is
a
truth
which
should
be
well
acknowledged that school can never be
replaced by the phone.
最后,
这是一个事实,
应该得到公认的是学校是不可 能被
电话取代的。
(人对手机的过分依赖性)
In the picture, there is a student
talking to his father with the words
that
“
Why am I going to
school
if
my
phone
already
knows
everything?
”
How
vivid
is
the
picture
to
show
the
young
generations
’
dependence
on
high
technologies
such
as
the
phone.
But
in
my
opinion,
high
technologies cannot replace going to
school at all.
在这幅图中,有一个学生和他的父亲
说:
“为什么我要去学校,如果我的手机已经知道一
切?”这幅图生动的
展现了年轻一代对高技术的依赖,比如电话。但在我看来,高科技不能取
代去学校。
p>
Three points can account for my
view. Firstly, without going to school, we cannot
learn basic
knowledge and ethics that
phones
are unable to teach us. Secondly, without going to school, we
cannot
learn
skills
to
make
good
use
of
high
technologies.
Thirdly,
without
going
to
school,
we
cannot
learn
disciplines
and
unity
with
people
around
us.
In
school,
not
only
do
we
acquire
knowledge but we learn
how to communicate with people.
三点可以解释我的观点。首先,如果不去学校,我们就不能学习基本的知识和道德,而手
机不能教我们。第二,如果不去学校,我们就不能学习技能,以充分利用高科技。第三,没有
< br>去学校,我们不能学习学科和团结在我们身边的人。在学校,我们不仅学到了知识,而且学会
了如何与人交流。
In a word, no
matter how high technologies are powerful, they
totally cannot replace going to
school.
总之,不管有多高的技术是强大的,他们完全不能取代去上学。
作文题目三:
(父母在孩子成长过程中所发挥的作用
)
Parents
’
role in their childrengrowth
破题思路:
第一段:
漫画描述,
重点是母女之间的对话内容,
从而引出文章的主题是有关孩子 的独立
性,家长干涉孩子过多。
第二段:可以分析此现象产生的原因。
第三段:采取措施解决此现象。
How
impressive
thecartoon
is
in
describing
the
most
widespread
social
phenomenon
concerning the independence of the
children. Let
’
s take a closer look at the drawing, the girl told
her
mother she was accepted by the university of her
mother
’
s choice with pride. The author
’
s
real purpose is
not the drawing itself, but to lead us to secure
what hides behind the picture
。
这漫画是如何描述的是最广泛的社会现象,
关于儿童的 独立性。
让我们看一看这画,
那个
女孩告诉她妈妈,
p>
她被妈妈选择的大学录取了是骄傲的。
作者的真正目的不是绘画本身,
而是
带领我们去取得在图画背后隐藏的东西。
What are the reasons for it? In the
following sentences, I
’
ll venture to explore the reasons. To
start with, the
only-one child policy in China has made more and
more parents pay much attention
to
their children that they would like to replace
their children to do everything. In addition,
parents
don
’
t believe that their children have enough ability to deal with their personal matters and make
any decisions.
< br>它的原因是什么?在下面的句子中,
我会去探索的原因。
从一开始,
中国的独生子女政策
已经让越来越多的家长对这一政策越来越重视了孩子们,<
/p>
他们想让他们的孩子做任何事情。
此
外,父母不相信他们的
孩子有足够的能力来处理他们的个人问题,并作出任何决定。
There are some suggestions given to our
parents
。
For one thing, it is quite important for our
parents to
realize that
their
children
will
grow up
and have
their own
ideas
as
time
goes by.
For
another,
children
should
be
encouraged
to
make
some
decisions
alone
so
that
they
are
able
to
pursue what they
really want. I contend that our parents should
give their children a free hand in
some
matters to help them to be
independent
。
有一些建
议给我们的父母。
一方面,
我们的父母是非常重要的,
以了解他们 的孩子会长大,
随着时间的推移有自己的想法。
另一方面,
应该鼓励孩子单独做一些决定,
使他们能够追求自
己真正想要的东西。
我主张我们的父母应该给他们的孩子一个自由的手在一些问题,
以帮助他
们独立。
(父母在孩子成长过程中所发挥的作用
)
第一段三句话,描写图中大体现象、细节描写对话内
容和人物反应、揭示图画的目的。
As
is
graphically
depicted
in
the
cartoon,
a
young
girl
is
talking
with
her
mother.
She
says
ironically,
“
Good news mom! I was accepted to the college of your choice!
”
Then, her mother
smiles
and
seems
content
with
this
result.
Apparently,
the
cartoon aims
to reveal
the
fact
that a
majority of modern parents play an
increasingly negative role in their
children
’
s growth.
如图中所描绘的那样,一个年轻的女孩正和她妈妈说话。她讽刺地说:
“好消息,妈妈! p>
我被你所选择的大学录取!
”然后,她的母亲微笑,似乎满足这个结果。显然 ,这幅漫画旨在
揭示一个事实,即大多数现代家长在孩子的成长过程中扮演着越来越消极
的角色。
There are several possible
reasons accountable for this
phenomenon
(中心句)
. To begin with,
family
in
growing
numbers
has
only
one
child;
therefore,
parents
oftentimes
focus
all
their
attentions on that child
and exert much pressure on him or
her
(原因一)
. Moreover, numerous
parents intend to realize their
unfulfilled dreams by letting their children learn
what they failed to
learn
and
apply
for
the
college
by
which
they
failed
to
be
accepted,
because
they
have
become
richer and they believe
that they have the power to make what they wanted
and want come true
now
(原因二)
. For instance, my uncle used to be a poor man and his dream that one day he would
become a violinist was
broken because of lack of money. But he made a
fortune by selling coals, and
then
forced his son, my younger brother to practice
playing violin. My brother was a huge fan of
sports, but now he has to play violin
everyday unwillingly and ofter quarrels with their
parents
(举
例:原来
-
然后 p>
-
结局)
.
这种现象的责
任可能有几个原因。首先,越来越多的家庭中只有一个孩子,因此,父母往
往把注意力集
中在孩子身上,对他或她施加多大的压力。此外
,
许多的父母打算去实现他们未< /p>
实现的梦想
,
让他们的孩子学习他们未能学习和申请的大学 是他们没能被录取的,因为他们变
得富有
,
他们相信他们 有能力使他们想要的东西成真了。
例如,
我的叔叔曾经是一个贫穷的人,
他梦想有一天,他会成为一个小提琴手,因为缺乏资金而破碎。但他靠卖煤发财,然后逼着他
p>
的儿子,我弟弟练习拉小提琴。我的弟弟是一个超级体育狂,但现在他拉小提琴每天不情愿,
经常与父母争吵。
To sum up,
it is unreasonable for parents to control their
children
’
s life
(总结句)
. In order to
help them grow happily and
healthily, parents are supposed to communicate
with their kids about
what they are
really interested
in
(建议一,
目的句型)
. Meanwhile, it is about time that parents let
their
kids make their own
choices
(建议二,
“是时候”
句型)
. Only in these ways will children grow
in a psychologically happy environment
and realize their own dreams.
总
之,家长要控制孩子的生活,这是不合理的。为了帮助他们幸福和健康地成长,父母应
该
与他们的孩子沟通他们感兴趣的是什么。
与此同时,
它是父母让孩子做他们自己选 择的时候
了。只有在这些方式中,孩子们在心理上快乐的环境上成长,并实现自己的梦想
。
(父母在孩子成长过程中所发挥的作用
)
As is prescribed in the
picture, the girl told her mother,
“
Good news mom! I was accepted to
the college of your
choice.
”
We can infer that the mom chooses college for her child, but should the
parents
make
such
decision
for
their
children?
As
far
as
I
concerned,
parents
can
give
advice
for
their children instead of making
decisions for them.