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范例一
For this
part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a
composition on the topic: Attend Y
our Classes Regularly
。
Y
ou
should write at least 120 words
following the outline given below in
Chinese.
1.
现在大学校园里,迟到、早退、旷课是常见的现象
2.
保证学生的出勤率对大学教育的重要性
3.
作为一个大学生应该怎样做
Attend
Y
our Classes Regularly
Nowadays
it is a very common phenomenon that some
university students are late for or even
absent from
classes. And still
there are some students who slip out of the
classroom before the class is over. Class
attendance
has become a thorny problem
to both the students and teachers.
In
fact, it is very important for the students to
attend their classes regularly. First, it will
ensure you to catch
up with
the teachers
in your
learning.
That
is
very
helpful
to you
if you
want to
do
a
good
job
in your
study.
Second,
attending classes regularly is a way of showing
respect to your teachers ,too. Y
our teachers will feel bad if
the students
do not attend their classes, which, in turn, will
affect their teaching and be no
good for the
students.
Third, attending
classes regularly will help to form a good habit
of punctuality, which is of great importance for
the students to do a good job in the
future.
Therefore, we university
students should form the good habit of attending
our classes regularly from now on.
And
some day we‘ll benefit from it.
点评
:
2008
年元月三日,中山大学博士发帖称遭导师 虐待;
2008
年元月四日,中国政法大学爆“杨帆门”事件;近几年,中
小学老师或打学生或猥亵学生、体罚学生等各类新闻不断曝光,进而引发了师生关系的大讨论。
本范例题为四级考试传统的问
题解决型的写作,与校园生活密切相关。
范例二
For
this
part,
you
are
allowed
30
minutes
to
write
a
composition
on
the
topic:
Students
’
Rating
of
Their
Teachers
。
Y
ou should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese.
1.
学生给老师打分已经普遍
2.
人们对其持不同态度
3.
我的看法
Students‘ Rating of Their
Teachers
Nowadays,
it
has
become
as
common
in
colleges
and
universities
for
students
to
grade
teachers
as
for
teachers
to grade students. In some universities students‘ rating has even become the only source of information on
teaching effectiveness..
This, however, has caused
great controversy. Some are in favor of the rating system, They hold that since
students
attend t
he teachers‘ classes every day, they should have their opinion about their teachers‘ effectiveness.
Others,
on
the
contrary,
are
strongly
against
it. They
believe
that there
is
much
more
to teaching
than
what
is
shown
on students‘ rating forms. Students sh
ould not be expected to judge whether the materials they use are up to
date or how well the
teacher knows about the subject. These judgments
require professional knowledge, which is
best left for the teachers‘
colleagues.
I think students‘
rating of their
teachers is necessary, but it should be conducted in a way that can really shed
meaningful
light
on
teachers‘
performance.
Instead
of
rating
the
teachers‘
knowledge
on
the
subject,
students
should be asked to estimate what they
have learned in a course, an
d to report on such things as a teacher‘s ability
to
communicate
with
students,
his
or
her
relationship
with students,
and
his
or
her
ability
to
arouse students‘
interest in the
subject.
点评
:越来越多的高校采取让学生给老师打分的形式 来了解教学反馈,并以此作为促进教学质量的有效手段。对此做法,管理
部门及教学双方
褒贬不一,看法迥异。本范例题为校园生活热议话题,值得关注。
范例三
Directions:
For
this
part, you
are
allowed
30
minutes
to
write
a
composition
on
the
topic
On
a
Harmonious
Dormitory Life. Y
ou should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
1.
宿舍生活有时会出现不和谐的情况
;
2.
一个和谐宿舍生活的必要性
;
3.
如何创造和谐的宿舍生活。
On a Harmonious Dormitory Life
Dormitory
life
is
an
indispensable
part
of
college
life.
But
sometimes
the
harmony
in
the
dormitory
be
disturbed in one way or another.
As is known to all, a
harmonious dormitory life is important to college
students and benefits all the members.
On one hand, we can have a good rest
and put our heart into study. On the other hand,
we will have a good mood
and enjoy
being together.
There are
several ways to create and maintain a harmonious
dormitory life. Firstly, you have to evaluate your
life-
style and try to get rid of your dirty habits, if there are any. Secondly, when an annoying situation arises, you‘ll
just have to learn to tolerate each
other and co-
exist. Thirdly, you‘ll have to share w
ith each other and make good
friends.
In
conclusion, we should try our best to build a
harmonious dormitory life for the sake of
good study and
good life.
点评
:
“和谐”成为我们当今社会词频 概率最高用词,就社会而言,倡导建立和谐社会;就家庭而言,提倡建设和谐家庭;就校
园来讲,则要建立和谐校园;和谐两字似乎无所不在,大学生宿舍生活同样需要和谐。本范例题与四级考试热点密
切相关,又
为典型的校园生活主题,值得关注。
范例四
Directions: For
this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write A
Brief Introduction to the University. Y
ou should
write at least 120 words
according to the following guidelines:
假设你是一名学生志愿者,要给来你们学校参观的外国朋友介绍学校情况。内容应包括学校历史
、规模、
教学现状以及未来目标等。
A Brief Introduction to the University
Distinguished guests,
Welcome
to
our
university.
Before you start to
look
around,
allow
me
to
give
you
a
brief
account
of
the
school.
Founded in
1927, our university is one of this city‘s
earliest u
niversities of liberal arts. It is staffed with an
excellent faculty,
and has a total enrollment of over 10,000
students. In the past years, it has turned out
numerous
well-qualified students and
found its graduates active in professions of all
walks of life.
Since its
establishment, the university has always steered
itself toward the objective that its students have
an
overall healthy development. Not
only does it provide the students with basic
academic courses, but it manages to
expose them to the up-to-date
knowledge. Besides, students are free to
participate in colorful campus activities and
social practice, which are intended for
broadening their mind and developing their
potential talent.
Currently,
both our faculty and students are making every
effort to improve the quality of our education in
the
direction of a first-rate
university. Thank you.
点评
:近几年,随着我国顺利加入世贸组织以及经济全球化步伐的加快,许多国内高校纷纷与国外大学合作办学,教 育走向国
际化成为人们关注的热点,也是大学生门比较关心的热点问题。本范例题为热议
校园生活话题,与
2004
年旅游景点介绍
2006
年考查的名校校园开放如出一辙。
范例五
Directions: For
this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a
letter to a friend who will come to your city to
see
you.
Y
ou should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
假设你是李明
,
你的一个朋友张伟准备到你所在的城市 来旅游,但你有事不能接待。写封信给他,解释你
不能接待的原因,并说明你所做的安排
。
A Letter to a Friend
Dear Zhang Wei,
I‘m glad to
know that you are coming to my city during the
summer vaca
tion.
However, I‘m
afraid there‘s some bad news. I‘m planning to take
part in an international
conference to be
held in another city during the time of
your visit. All the top scientists in my field
will show up at the conference.
More
importantly, I‘m luc
ky enough to have been selected to give a speech on behalf of my research team at the
Conference. I really can‘t
miss it.
I understand that it‘ll
be your first time to this city and I‘m your only
friend here. I‘ve asked my roommate to
meet you at the airport, and you can
stay in my room. He is a very nice person and he
will show you around the
city. Hope you
two will get on well and have a nice holiday!
Y
ours,
Li Ming
点评
:本范例题与
2001
年
6
月考查的
A
Letter to a Schoolmate
类似,所不同是写作提示有所不同,
2001
年
6
月作文题是写信对
校友来度假表示欢迎并在信中提出建议和注意事项,而本范例
题是对朋友来访不能接待,同时在信中说明原因及具体安排,内
容不一,但话题相仿,写
作思路相似,值得关注。
范例六
For
this
part,
you
are
allowed
30
minutes
to
write
a
composition
on
the
topic:
Living
alone
or
Living
with
Roommates? Y
ou should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in
Chinese.
1
.
有人认为大学里应独自生活
2
.
另一些认为大学里应与别人同住
3
.
你的看法
Living alone or Living with
Roommates
Nowadays, there has
appeared a heated discussion among the college
students as to whether they should live
alone outside the campus or live
together with other roommat
es in the students‘ dormitory. Opinions are divided
over the matter.
Those who
are in favor of Living alone maintain that it is
very convenient to live by themselves. They can
enjoy absolute freedom in a room of
their own. They can have their own timetable
without disturbing others. They
are
also free to equip the room with a personal
computer so that they can have easy access to the
Internet.
But others argue that living
with roommates has attractions of its own. With
several students sharing the same
room
, each person‘s experiences can be
greatly enriched. They can learn
a lot from talking to one
another. By
learning to tolerate the differences
between individuals, they can become more mature.
As far as I‘m concerned, I prefer to
live with roommates becaus
e I love the feeling of belonging. Besides, it is
a
lot cheaper to live in a dorm than to rent a
apartment outside the campus.
点评
:本文与校园生活密切相关,也是近年来出现的现象,人们对此的看法各异,
2003
< p>年后,四级作文考查加大了学校生活类
题目的考查,因为这类题材不存在地域的差异
,不同地域的同学都有话可说。本
范例题即为校园生活类话题,与刚考完的四级
< br>作文话题类似,符合命题者出题思路,值得引起重视。
范例七
Direction: For
this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a
composition on the topic :Cell Phones .Y
ou should
write no less than 120 words and
base your composition on the outline below:
1.
描述上图所示的手机用户数的变化情况
2.
出现这种情况的原因
3.
对此现象作出评价
Cell Phones
As is shown in
the chart, cell phones are becoming increasingly
popular within China. In 1999, the number of
cell phones in use was only 2 million,
but in 2002, the number reaches 5 million. And in
the year 2005, the number
has suddenly
soared to 9 million.
There are many
factors contributing to this development. Firstly,
a cell phone has no wires and can be carried
everywhere easily. Secondly, a cell
phone is something wonderful that we can have fun
with news, games, music
and
chat
through
sending
short
messages.
Thirdly, the
drop
in price
and
the
simultaneous
improvement
in
the
functions have made it
possible for an average person to make use of cell
phone.
The wide use of cell phones has
make them more and more indispensable
in people‘s daily life. The many
functions
of the cell phone have made certain people
reluctant to separate themselves from their cell
phone.
点评
:随着我国经济的快速发展,人民的生活水平不断改 善,通讯业的日新月异的发展,使得手机使用普及化,成为人们日常
生活的必需品,对此
的利弊人们看法各异。本范例题为热点话题,同样是年轻人较熟悉和经常讨论的话题,值得关注。
范例八
Directions: For
this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a
short essay on the topic
Advertisement.
Y
ou should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
1.
广告的作用
2.
广告的形式多样
3.
广告的夸张性
Advertisement
Advertisements are forcing their way
into people‘s lives. People refer to
advertisements in their daily lives
because they are consumers. The
advertisers are usually manufacturers, retailers
and salesmen. Their merchandise
needs
to be advertised to bring it to the attention to
the customers. Thus nearly every product is
advertised in some
way. To a large
extent, good advertising leads to success while
bad advertising can mean failur
e.
There are many ways to advertise and
?ads‘ come in different forms. Newspapers carry
advertisements. Some
products are
publicized on TV and radio which bring them
into notice of a wide audience. Billboards also carry
advertising. Advertising is
a big industry now and many agencies have been set
up to furnish a variety of forms..
However, advertising is not always
truthful. A product is often misrepresented. The
advertiser exaggerates the
benefits of
the merchandise he wants to sell. Thus, he
misrepresents the truth. The consumer falls victim
to such
advertising. Millions of people
have bought advertised products and have been
dissatisfied with them
。
点
评
:这是一篇说明文,用说明的表达方式来解说事物,阐明事理。写好说明文,不仅要抓住特征, 注意条理,而且要巧妙运
用说明方法,像下定义、举例子、作比较、分类别、列数字、打
比方等
范例九
Directions: For this part, you are
allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the
topic: A Letter to the President
of the
University about Improving the Sports Facilities
on Campus. Y
ou should write no more than 120 words, and
base your composition on
the outline given below in Chinese:
假设你
是李明,请你写一封信给校长,建议改善本校体育设施状况,内容应涉及体育设施对大学生的重要
性,对目前学校体育设施的状况可以表扬,可以提出批评建议,也可以兼而有之。
A Letter to the President of the
University
Dear Mr. President,
I am writing this letter to you to
express my concern about the sports facilities on
campus. I have noticed that
our
university has very limited resources in terms of
opportunities to participate in sports, especially
given that the
number of students on
campus is increasing every year.
As we
both know, sports are very important for the sound
growth of young people. If they have access to
quality sports
facilities, young people are able to choose a
healthier lifestyle, to boost self-esteem and
confidence,
and to build a positive
outlook and sense of achievement.
My
proposal is to build a new sports area. It should
be designed with soccer players, basketball
players, and
ping-pong players in mind.
It should have a different section for each
activity and be available to students all year
round. I believe such facilities will
meet our sporting needs.
Thank
you for your reading this letter.
Y
ours faithfully,
Li
Ming
点评
:本范例题仿真度颇高,为校园生活话题,与在校大学生 日常生活密切相关,是最近几年侧重考查的题材。
2002
年
1< /p>
月考
查了就本校食堂状况给校长写一封信
.
范例十
Directions: For
this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a
short essay entitled Blog. Y
ou should write at least
120 words based on the chart
and outline given below:
下图是
2007
年
1-10
月中国博客服务人均月度有效浏览时间及增长率,描述 变化,说明原因。
Blog
This
histogram shows the number of people using blog
services from January to October in 2007. From it
we
can
see
that
the
number
of
users
increased
monthly
from
January to
August,
except
February. After two peak
months,
July and August, the number dropped slightly in
September, while in October it picked up
again.
Possible
reasons
for
these
changes
are
first,
in
February
Chinese
people
celebrated
the
most
important
festival
——
Chinese
New
Y
ear.
This
means
more
people
spent
more
time
with their
families
and
friends,
and
therefore they didn‘t have
as much time for surfi
ng online.
Secondly, college students are the main users of blog
services.
While
in
July
and August
,
they
had summer
holidays,
which
enabled
them
to
have
more
spare time
reading and writing
blogs. Thirdly, with improvements of blog services
and the influenc
e of some ―star bloggers‖,
most
of
whom
are
celebrities,
blogs
are
becoming
an
important
way
for
people
to
express
themselves
and
communicate
with
others.
So
more
and
more
people
are
starting
to
use
these services,
which
help
explain
the
overall increase shown here.
点评
:这是一篇图表题。
可以看出,整 体呈增长趋势。但是,二月和九月有所下降。所以,分析的时候要照顾各个方面。
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范例十一
Directions:
F
or this part, you are allowed 30
minutes to write a short essay on the topic College Students‘ Job
Hunting.
Y
ou should write at least 120 words following the outline given below.
1.
近几年出现了大学生就业难的现象
2.
产生这种现象的原因(如大学生追求的目标过高,专业不对口等)
3.
如何解决这一问题(改变就业观念,大学生再培训等)
College Students‘ Job Hunting
In
recent
years,
college
students
find
it
increasingly
difficult
to
get
a
job.
It
sounds
strange
since
young
college
students are usually intelligent, well-educated
phenomenon, aspirant and
eager to bring their talent into
full play. Then what
underlies the strange phenomenon?
There
are several reasons for this. To begin with,
nowadays college students aim too high. All they
want are
―good‖
jobs
which
could
offer
good
salary,
comfortable
working
conditions,
high
social
statu
s
among
others.
Consequently, most college students are
unwilling to accept vacant jobs they consider not
―good‖ enough. Another
reason is that
there is a big gap between the majors some
students study in school and the demands of vacant
jobs.
So companies think some students
are not fit for the jobs.
Solution to
the problem requires efforts on both the society
and the students. The companies should value the
students,
talent
and
knowledge
while
the
latter
should
not
merely
aim
at
material
gains.
They
should
be
down-to
–
earth
in
building
up
their
career.
Furthermore,
they
should
face
their
weak
points
so
as
to
improve
themselves and be more
competent.
点评
:本范例题为社会热点话题。近年来大学生 就业难日益成为各级政府及社会各方面关注的焦点,媒体也广泛报道了大学生
就业形势严
峻,呼吁全社会共同努力;此外,该范例题也与大学生就业密切相关,也是四级作文选题重点之一。
范例十二
Directions: For this part, you are
allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the
topic of traffic jam. Y
ou should
write at least 120 words following the
outline given below.
1.在现代社会,城市交通问题变得越来越严重
2.城市交通问题的表现以及对人们生活的影响
3.解决的方法与措施
Traffic
Jam
There
is
no
doubt that
traffic
congestion
becomes
a
growing
worry
for the
residents
of
most
urban
areas.
Some
major
roads
are
regularly
choked
with
traffic
in
rush
hours.
The
limited
transport
capacity
contributes
largely to the
vexing problem. How to solve the headache?.
The existing solutions to traffic jam
mainly aim at creating metro bus systems and
broadening
major roads.
Widening
the existing roads can solve traffic snarls on
some level. Soaring car ownership compounds the
chronic
annoying
problem,
so
we
must
sharply
reduce
the
heavy
reliance
on
cars
and
drive
a
shift
to
the
mass
transportation.
It is a cheap and
good way. We can create a system of customized bus routes and highlight the
development of subways, trolleys and
light rail. The effective combination of these
solutions will enable the urban
areas
to possess a smooth traffic.
点评
:
交通话题一直是四级作文命题话题之一。
1990
年
6
月考查过
How to solve the problem of
Heavy Traff
ic,1994
年
1
月考题
The
World Is Getting Smaller and Smaller
也与交通有关,近年来,随着私家车的日益增多,城市交通拥堵凸显,出行难越来越成为人
们关注的焦点。
范例十三
Directions: For
this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a
short essay on the topic Environmental Protection.
Y
ou should write at least 120 words following the outline given below.
1.
全球变暖对地球环境造成了很大影响
2.
引起全球变暖的原因
3.
我们需要采取的措施
Environmental Protection
No
one
,
regardless of race, religion or nationality, can deny that the world we live in is becoming increasingly
intolerable
because of the effects of global warming.
According to many experts, even greater impacts
are still on
the way.
There
are
numerous
causes
for
this
problem.
On
one
hand,
human-related
emissions
of
carbon
into
the
atmosphere is
causing, and will in the future cause, significant
global warming according to the theory. On the
other
hand,
the
lack
of
knowledge
about
the
importance
of
protecting
environment
hinders
the
solving
of
the
problem.
It
is
urgent that
immediate
and
effective
actions
should
be
taken
right
away.
First,
more trees
need
to
be
planted
to
help
improve
and
beautify
the
environment.
Besides,
stricter
laws
concerning
global
warming
and
irresponsible use of fuel
resources have to be put into effect and achieved
good results. In a word, there is a long
way to go before we can take a
comfortable world for granted again .
点评
:环境问题也是四级作文命题重点话题之 一。大学英语
(Q
吧
)
四级考试曾经考过
Make
our Cities
Greener
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近年来,全球气候
异常,造成许多自然灾害的频繁,保护环境刻不容缓,已成
为全社会乃至全人类共同关注的热点。
范例十四
Directions: For
this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a
short essay on the topic of
Credit
Cards. Y
ou should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
1.
越来越多的人使用信用卡,
信用卡有哪些好处
2.
信用卡的弊端
3.
你自己的观点
Credit Cards
Personal
credit
cards
are
becoming
more
common
in
China.
Banks
and
other
financial
institutions
are
encouraging their customers to change
the way
they buy things. Credit cards, otherwise known as ―plastic money‖,
are
being offered on very good terms to encourage the
change. Consumers will be able to ―buy now, pay
later‖,
and many see this as an
advantage.
But people need to be
careful. There are dangers associated with credit
cards. Some people find it very easy
to
exceed their budget. They are tempted to purchase
goods that they do not really need, and can become
quickly
overburdened by debt. The
credit cards often charge a high rate of
interest, which exacerbates the problems for
these people.
However,
used wisely credit cards can improve the quality
of people‘s lives. They can give people access to
money to meet sudden unplanned
expenses. Properly handled, they can let people
control their expenditure and the
monthly statements provide a record of
where their money has gone.
点评
:这是一篇议论文,
关于信用卡的利弊。可以分成三部分:
第一部分,信用卡的好处 ,比如说应急等;第二部分,信用
卡的一些弊端,比如说鼓励一些无用的消费;第三部分
:你自己的观点,理性使用。
范例十五
Directions: For this part, you are
allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the
topic Pet Raising . Y
ou should
write at least 120 words following the
outline given below in Chinese:
1
.
有些人喜欢养动物作为宠物。
2
.
有些人反对圈养动物作为宠物。
3
.
你的观点。
Pet Raising
Nowadays, with
the improvement of the people‘s living standard,
some people form a habit of raising small
or domestic animals as pets. Some raise
small dogs or cats as their pets while others
raise various birds or fishes as
their
pets.
However, some people object to
the idea of raising animals as pets. To them,
animals have their own right to
live
a natural life like human beings. On the other hand, the way people raise animals
as pets have a negative
influence
on
the
surroundings
,for
example,
dogs‘
chasing
people
on
the
street
and so
on.
What‘s
more,
some
animals will transmit some diseases.
In my opinion, I do not like the idea
to raise animals at pets. We should not
dep
rive them of their natural right.
In this way, we will live in a peaceful
world in harmony with the other living
creatures.
范例十六
Directions: For this part, you are
allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the
topic How People Spend Their
Holidays.
Y
ou
should
write
at
least
120
words,
and
base your
composition
on
the table
and
the
outline
given
below:
1
、
根据上表,简要描述
1990
年、
1995
年、
2000
< p>年某城市人们度假方式的情况及其变化;