-
作文开头句型
1
．
现象法、问题法
1
）
Recently
the
problem
/phenomenon
of
+
n.(
that+
从句
)
has
aroused
wide
concern
/public
attention. According
to
a
recent
study
/investigation,
X%
of people
/
teenagers
/students
…
are interested in /addicted to /indulged in + n. /ving, as compared to only X
percent a couple of years ago. Several
factors may account for this phenomenon.
2
）
With
the
rapid
development
/improvement
/
expansion
of
+
n.,
people
become
increasingly aware
/conscious of the necessity /importance to + v.
3) One of the main problem with
today
?
s + n. is that
…
. The problem will exert a harmful /
destructive effect on
…
.
Sample 1
Why college students take a part- time job
1.
最近几年越来越多的大学生加入打工的队伍。
2
．为什么大学生要打工
3
．大学生打工的意义。
Recently the phenomenon that more and
more college students hold a part-time job has
aroused public attention. According to
a recent survey, about 35 percent of college
students
now take a part-time job.
Several factors may account for this phenomenon.
Sample 2
With
the
rapid
development
of
science
and
technology,
people
become
increasingly
aware
of
the
importance
of
internet.
According
to
a
recent
investigation,
nearly
70
percent
of
teenagers are interested in surfing the
net, as compare d to only 20 percent 3 years ago.
Several
factors may account for this
trend.
Task 1:
Children Attending Training Courses
1
．许多中小学生报名参加各种各样的培训班
2
．家长和学生选择培训班时所考虑的主要因素
3
．孩子参加培训班的益处和可能产生的弊端
Task 2: How to Deal with
Cheating
1.
学生作弊的现象比较普遍
2.
产生这种现象的原因
3.
怎样杜绝作弊
2
．
对立法
1)
There is a public debate today on the problem of +
n
. Those who criticize /object to
+
n.
argue that +
从句
.They believe that +
从句
. But people who advocate /favor it,
on the other hand,
maintain that
…
2)
There is no consensus
（
一致）
of opinion among people as to the view of + n. Some
people suggest that +
从句
, while some other people argue that +
从句
.
1
As far as I am concerned,
…
.
Sample
My View on Opportunity.
（
93
年
6
月六级真题）
Instructions
(given
in
Chinese):
有些人认为机会是极少的，
另一些人则
认为人人都有某种机会。你的看法如何？写出你的观点，说明你的理由并举
例。在你的文章结尾处不要忘记写出你的结论
There is no consensus of opinion among
people as to the view of opportunity.
Some people suggest that opportunities
are rare and only the luckiest person can
obtain
them,
while
some
other
people
argue
that
in
a
sense
everyone
has
opportunity from time to time.
Sample 2
Why I Take the College English Test Band 6
(1996
年
1
月
CET
作文题
目
)
1. <
/p>
有人认为没有必要参加大学英语六级考试（简称
CET-6
）。
2.
我参加
CET-6
考试的理由。
There is a public debate today on the
problem of taking the college English Test Band 6.
Those who object to it argue that there
is no need to take part in it. They believe that
the purpose
for us to learn English is
to be able to understand it and use it properly,
instead of having high
scores in the
test, or gaining the certificate.
But people who advocate it, on the
other hand, maintain that
…
I am one of them.
Task 1:
On the
“
Golden Week
”
Holiday
1.
有些人支持“黄金周”长假制
2.
有些人提出取消“黄金周”
3.
在我看来
Task 2:
My View on Job-hopping
1.
有些人喜欢始终从事一种工作。
2.
有些则喜欢经常换工作。
3.
你的看法。
3
．
比较法
1) People used to think that
+
从句
/ It was once thought that +
从句
. In the old days, +
句子
（使用过去时）
. But with the development of science and technology /economy, few people
now share this view. They
now tend to believe that +
从句
.
Sample : City Life and Suburban Life
1
．
最近几年越来越多的人迁往近郊居住
2
．
城市生活和近郊生活各有特点
3
．
比较起来，我喜欢的是
……
People
used
to
think
that
city
life
is
far
better
than
suburban
life.
But
with
the
development of
science and economy, few people share this view.
They now tend to believe
that living in
suburb is as good as living in city.
2
Your task
How do Students
Spend their Summer Vacations?
1.
过去学生是如何度过暑假的
2.
现在许多学生在暑假期间也非常繁忙
3.
我对此现象的看法
作文主体段写作模式
Paragraph Patterns
：
1. Cause and Effect
2. Comparison
and Contrast
3. Time Sequence
4. A Set of Sequential Actions
5. A General Point Supported by
Details, Examples,
and a List of Things
6.
A Problem-Solution Pattern
Pattern 1
A General Point Supported by Details, Examples,
and a List of Things
Sample 1
Although I love movies, I’ve found that
there are drawbacks to movie-going.
One problem is
just the
inconvenience of it all.
It can take me long time to drive to the theater and find a
parking spot.
Another problem is my lack of self-control at the theater.
I often stuff myself
with unhealthy calorie-laden snacks for
the limited choices.
The worst problem is some of
the other movie-
goers.
Kids run up and down the aisle.
It’
s noisy and messy in the theater.
All in all, I
would rather stay home and watch TV comfortably
Sample 2
Computers
will
play
an
increasingly
important
role
in
our
daily
life.
For
one
thing,
computers
could
measure
brain
activity
to
determine
the
quality
of
our
work.
For
another,
mechanics
will use computers to evaluate and identify motor
problems, figure out repair costs
and
locate
repair
shops.
Besides,
home
computers
will
take
care
of
regular
duties
at
home,
help with homework and
order food.
Link
Words in Listing
?
1.
For one thing, … For another, …. Finally, …
2. To be
gin with /To start with , …
3. In the first
place, … In the second place, …
4. On one hand, … On the other hand,
…
5.
除此之外
: in addition (to), besides, moreover, furthermore, what?s more,
3
About “Topic Sentence”
?
写好主题句的三条原则
:
?
1.
要有能说明段落中心的内容
;
?
2.
要有能体现中心思想的关键词
;
?
e.g.
A
new
way
of
controlling
cancer
has
been
developed.
/
There
is
a
new
way
to
control
cancer.
A
variety of reason have led me to choose this job.
Riding bicycles has quite a few
advantages over taking buses.
?
3.
尽量使用简洁明了的句子。
?
Compare the following two
sentences: Which is better?
?Pride and
Prejudice? was a book which in my opinion I
enjoyed reading very much.
I
enjo
yed reading ?Pride and Prejudice?
very much.
Now you try!
Task 1:
Children Attending Training Courses
1
．许多中小学生报名参加各种各样的培训班
2
．家长和学生选择培训班时所考虑的主要因素
3
．孩子参加培训班的益处和可能产生的弊端
Task 2: How to Deal with Cheating
1.
学生作弊的现象比较普遍
2.
产生这种现象的原因
3.
怎样杜绝作弊
Task 3: Why I Take the College English
Test Band 6
1.
有人认为没有必要参加大学英语六级考试（简称
CET-6
）
。
2.
我参加
CET-6
考试的理由。
Task 4: How do Students Spend their Summer Vacations?
1.
过去学生是如何度过暑假的
2.
现在许多学生在暑假期间也非常繁忙
3.
我对此现象的看法
More Tasks
How
to Keep Psychologically Healthy?
1.
心理健康问题往往是导致疾病的原因
?
2.
分析人们产生心理问题的原因
?
3.
你认为人们应该如何保持心理健康
Recently,
the
problem
of
people?s
psychological
health
has
aroused
public
attention.
According to a recent
survey, over 60% of people believe that the
problem in psychological health
may
lead to illness, as compared to only about 20% 2
years ago.
4