小度写范文写一篇“myschooltime”的英语作文模板

受，

最后阐述自己最喜欢的季节。

在实际的写作的时候我们 还可以

先写出自

己喜爱的季节及主要的活动内容，之后 再去讲其他几个季

节，还可以多讲解一下地域的季

节特 征和大自然中的其他景色，如：

秋天的田地里一片金黄，农民在收割等等，这样 写出

来的四季更贴

近实际。

时态：这篇习作讲的是

“

我的四季

”

，是比较惯常的一些行为，所以

我们最好采用一般现在

时和情态动词结合活动的写法。即：在什么

季节，天气如何，我们可以做什么。

注意：

季节，所以要写 明季节，

季节天气，季节性活动，活动的人，活动

的感受等，要 求句子顺序要正确，在写作中还要注意关联词的使用，

如用了

“

因为

”

，就不

能用

“

所以

”

，二者不可以同时出现。词量要控

制在

80

个词以内。

my family

there are five people in my

family. they are my grandma, grandpa, dad, mom and i.

look! grandma is watching tv. grandpa is reading a book. dad is writing an e-mail. mom is cooking

dinner. i am doing my homework. i love my family!

【要领点评】

写法：这篇习作介绍了自 己

家的家庭成员，以及此刻他们正在干什

么，表达了自己对家人的感情。

时态：由于本单元主要讲的是现在进行时态，所以建议采用现在进

行时态。

句型：主语

+be+

动词的现在分词。

注意：本单元的重点是现在进行时态，注意在写句子时要保持时态

的完整性，即系动词和

动词的

ing

缺一不可。

a field trip it is a nice day. our class will have a field trip today. the classmates are very excited.

look! here we are. there

’

re a lot of activities to do. amy is watching insects. peter is collecting

leaves. they want to write a report. mandy is catching butterflies in the woods. tim and bob are

playing chess. some of the classmates are having a picnic. there is a lot of delicious food to eat. oh,

who

’

s that over there? it

’

s miss white. what is she doing? she is taking photos. we had a very

good time. i

’

ll never forget this field trip.

【要领点评】

面来描述的，记叙了同学们分别

在郊游中做了哪些活动及郊游的感受。

时态：

这篇文章可以用一般过去时和现在进行时来写。

由于本单元

主要讲的是现在进行时，

所以，这里我们采用现在进行时比较合适。

注意：活动的相关表述法采用新旧知识相结合去写。注意时态的转

换、描写感受时用一般

现在时。

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小学英语六年级上册各单元作文范例及点评

li ying

’

s hobby li ying likes english very

much. she works hard at it. she reads english every morning. she likes speaking english. she often

listens to the radio. she watches tv only on saturday evening.

does she like dancing? no, she doesn

’

t. but she likes drawing and singing. her parents love her.

and all the teachers and her friends like her, too. she says her hobbies make her happy.

【要领点

评】

这一篇写爱好的文章

,

小作者的写作思路很值得我们学习

,

他没有具体

写到刘莹的某一

种爱好

,

而 是从学习到课余的多种爱好入手

,

对刘莹的

各种 爱好进行了粗线条地勾画

.

从

“

爱

好

”

这个角度来看刘莹的话，我

们会觉得这个形象很饱满。

小朋友们写这种

叙事写人

”

作文时，可以从两个角度下手：一是具

体地描绘；二是和上面

小朋友一样，粗线条地勾画，二者各有所 长，

另处在行文中使用一些问句，使用一些转述

的话，

可以使作文更有

灵气，

避免了平铺直叙的缺点。

比如上文的

“does she like danci

ng? no,

she doesn

’

t.”

和

“she says her hobbies make her happy.”

就

是十分不错的句子，使读者眼前为

之一亮。

don

’

t be against the traffic rules i go to school from monday to friday .i go to school by bike at

7:30 in the morning .i must cross two busy roads .if the traffic light is red or yellow,i know i can

’

t

cross the road ,so i wait. if the light turns green, i know it means “go”, and then i w alk across the

road .i always ride on the right side of the road .i am never against the traffic rules.

【要领点评】

这篇作文的题目是

“

不要违反交通规则

”

，

小作者没有说一些空话，

而是从自己的经历写起，

叙述自己以什么方式去上学，在上学 的路

上是怎么做的，很形象。

小朋友们在作文时注意不要图大，那样很容易使文章显得空洞，而

要写自己身边熟悉的事

情。要注意行文中字母的大小写、句子的标

点符号等。

i love my family here is a photo lf my family. these are four people in my family. they are my

father, my mother, my brother and i. my father is a doctor. he works in a hospital far away. he goes

to work by subway. my mother is a teacher. she works in a school near my home. she goes to work

by bike. after work, they like reading books. who is the tall boy? he is my brother. he is five years

older than me. he is a singer. he

’

s now in beijing. he goes there by plane. i love my family.

【要领点评】

一个平凡的题材，一篇生动的作文。这样的命题，我们可能面对几

次，甚至

几十次了。但这位小朋友的笔端很是灵巧，了了数言，让

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一个幸福的家庭跃然纸上，很值

得我们去思考，我们能做到吗？

小朋友的这篇作文除了语言优美之外，在结构上也有闪光

之处。先

总说，将自己的家人逐个介绍一遍，后分说，把家人的工作、上班

方式，爱好一

一细说。最后以一句话进行概括，起到点题的作用。

我们在写类似的作文的时候是不是也可以借鉴呢？

how to get to the science museum we are

going to the science museum tomorrow. there is an old thing show in the museum. do you know

how we can get to the science museum? the science museum is next to the people

’

s park. it

’

s isn

’

t far from our school. so we can go there on foot .walk straight to the west from our school, next

turn left at the post office and walk for about 5 minutes, then turn right at traffic lights. you can

find the people

’

s park on the right . walk straight, and you

’

ll see the science museum.

【要领点

评】

这篇作文的题目是

“

怎样去科学博物馆

”

。

怎样才算是一篇好作文呢？

通过你的叙述，

能让别人很容易找到博物馆，这应是最基本的要求。

小作者在文中告诉我们什么呢？首先他写了去博物馆的位置，最后

浓墨重彩，指明从学校

去博物馆的具体路线，这条路线够清晰吧！

小朋友们在写这类作文的时候，总有些无从下

手的感觉，

不知从何

说起。其实介绍路线，无非就是告诉他人某段路的起点和终点，还

有

就是如何从起点走到终点。

要给他人说清楚，

你自己 首先得清楚，

然后再通过自己的叙述，

将路线清清楚楚 得呈现出来。一定要注意

行文中一些关键的地方，如在哪儿转弯，向哪儿

转，

经过哪些重要

的交通标志或显眼的标志建 筑等。

这样，

你就能说清，

别人也能弄

明白。

let

’

s have a nice day it

’

s sunday tomorrow .i

’

m going to the bookstore with my friends tomorrow

morning .we are going to look for some good books .we all like reading books .we are going to eat

our lunch at the restaurant. i like chicken, beef and vegetables .after lunch, we are going to the

summer palace by bus. we are going to play near the kunming lake. maybe we are

going to row a boat on the lake .wow, that will be relaxing. we are coming back at 5pm.

【要领点

评】

怎样才称得上 是

“

美好的一天

”

？有两点不能忘记，一是安排得 充实，

二是安排得有意

义。这两点小作者无疑都想到了 ，上午去书店看书

买书，中午在饭店吃饭，下午去颐和园

玩耍、划船，丰富多彩！文

章以时间为线索，叙述清楚，文笔也很优美。

小朋友们在写这种叙事的文章时，要尽量给读者交代好时间、地点、

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人物和活动等，使文

章有血有肉。要看好是写过去发生的事情，还

是现在正在做的事情，或计划、打算要做的

事情，

以选择适当的句

型。

如果是写将来的事情，

那 么就要注意在表述时多用

“be going to+

动词原形

”

这种句型。

还有一点也很重要，

那就是 故

事的线索要交代好，

让读者在阅读时对

整个过程一目了然。

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小学英语六年级下册各单元作文范例及点评

my

friend

and

i

i

have

a

good

friend

at

school. his name is jack. jack is 12 years old now. i

’

m 11. he

’

s older than me. he

’

s 150 cm tall.

i

’

m 148 cm. he

’

s taller and stronger. he

’

s 43 kg and i

’

m 41 kg. he

’

s heavier. our favourite

colours are white and blue. we like summer best. we both like sports, too. on saturdays, we

【篇二：

小学六年级英语

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作文】我的学校

(my school) my school is very beautiful. it is in xx. it is

nan

yang

no.15

primary

school.

i

like

my

school

very

much.

there

is

a

big

playground

in

my

school. we have p.e. class on the playground and we often play sports on it ,

too. our teaching

building has five floors. my classroom is on the fifth floor. it is big and clean. the computer rooms

are on the third floor. there is a library on the second floor. there are many books in the library. i

often read books here. there are some music rooms and art rooms in the teaching building, too. the

teachers in my school are very kind . the students are very polite and smart. i am

happy in

my

school.

下周

(next week) its going to be spring festival next week. next monday i am going to my

cousins house. he lives in a village. i am going by ship. next tuesday i am going to have a

picnic. next wednesday i am going to go shopping in x xx and to have k.f.c. next thursday i am

going to xxxx to fly kites. in the

我喜爱的老师

(my favourite teacher) hello,my name is xxxx. i

have many good teachers, but my favourite teacher is miss li. she is a very good teacher. she is

very young, but her english is very good. she teaches usenglish every day. her class has so much

fun. she sings songs with us, plays games with us. we are so happy . and we learn english well. our

english are very very good. so i like her very much. she likes reading books and playing sports.

after class, miss li often plays sports with us. we are very happy. we all love her very much. this is

my favourite teacher. she is a good teacher .i like my english teacher very much. what about you?

do you have a good teacher, too? happy family everyone has a family. i have a family, too. i name

it “happy family”, because everyone in my family is happy. come and meet my family, please! my

mother is kind. i love her, and she loves me, too. my mother is pretty. she likes beautiful clothes. i

call her “dressy mum”. my father is a boss. he is tall and thin. he has a small head. i give him a

nickname “small head father”. i am fat and lovely. i have a big head. i give myself a nickname

“big

head

girl”.

i

study

hard

.

i

am

a

good

student.

we

are

happy

every

day!

我的教室

(my

classroom) my classroom is nice and big .there are forty desks and chairs in the classroom. there

are two black boards on the walls. and there are two pictures, classroom has eleven lights

and twelve fans. what colour are the fans? they are blue. at the corner, there is a shelf ,many books

are

shelf.

i

like

the

books

very

much.

this

is

my

classroom

,

it

is

very

nice.

i

like

my

classroom very much . do you have a nice classroom, too ?

母亲节是五月的第二个星期日。 今

年母亲节那天，我为母亲买了一

件毛衣和一束鲜花作 为礼物，感谢母亲为我付出的辛苦。

母亲收到

礼物后，非常高兴。

mother

＇

s day comes on the second

sunday in may each year. on that day this year, i bought a sweater and some flowers for my mother

to thank her for her hard work for me. receiving my gift, my mother was very happy.

我最喜爱春

天

(i love spring best) winter has gone, spring comes. i love spring best, because its very beautiful.

in spring, the weather is always sunny and rainy, its not cold and not hot, its warmer and warmer.

the flowers begin to open and the trees begin to turn green. the birds are singing in the sky, they

are happy. the animals will go out to play. many people like to go out and enjoy the sunshine. i

like

wearing

my

sweater

and

jeans,

i

like

to

fly

kites,

plant

trees

and

see

the beautiful

flowers.

spring is colorful, i think its a wonderful season. whats your favourite season ? please tell me.

春

游（

spring outing

）

many students are going spring outing. some students are boating. and some

students are having a picnic. the others are playing games. there is a girl sitting on a chair reading

a book. the sky is blue. the trees are green. the flowers are red. its a very beautiful park. they have

a

good

time!

家庭是什么

what

is

family

?

“

l”

means

“

love”

and

“

y

”

means

“you”.

so

“ family ” is the short form of “ father and mother , i love you.” don

’

t you think so ? father and

mother love us , and we love father and mother . that

’

s a happy family. my lovely father

我可爱

的爸爸

i have a busy father . he works in a big office . he has a big company. he is busy every

day . he has many thing to do . he has no time to go home for lunch . he gets home at 7:00 p.m . at

home he does the housework. he cooks nice dishes for mother and me . on weekends , he often

goes to the park with me .sometimes he goes to swim with me ,too. i like to stay with my father .

he is a good father , he is also a happy business man . my room i have my own room. it is big and

nice. there is a bed, a desk and a shelf. the doll is on the bed. the lamp is on the desk. the books are

on the shelf. the

everybody has his own family. what is family? i don

’

t trash bin is behind the door. the clothes are

in the think everyone really knows. there are six letters in the closet. there is a airconditioner over

the closet. look! word “ family ”. i think“ f ” means “father”, “a” there are many pictures on the

wall.

i

love

my

room

means

“and”,

“

m

”

means

“mother”

,

“

i

”

means“

i”,

very

much.

my

weekend i have happy weekend. so i love weekends. my birthday

yesterday was march 20th. it

was my birthday. i had a party. i ate too much. mike brought a carton of ice cream. jenny brought

some candy. mary brought a lot of cookies. my mom made a cake. my dad bought a toy car for me.

i was very happy. at the party we sang and danced. we had a good time. my favorite animal my

favorite animal is rabbit. its name is sweet. sweet has long ears. it

’

s very small. it

’

s white. it has

a short tail. it has red eyes. it likes eating carrots. it likes jumping. it goes jumping three times a

day. i like it very much. it

’

s lovely. it

’

s my best friend. i like the rabbit. my hobby

南阳市奥瑞

教育小学英语作文范文

my hobby is collecting stamps

（集邮）

. there are many stamps in my

room.

i

like

stamps

very

much.

there

are

many

things

on

the

stamps.

they

are

colorful

and

beautiful. after school i usually go to the post office and there are many people there. i learn a lot

from collecting stamps. i like collecting stamps very much. a happy day in spring it

’

s spring. it

’

s

sunny and cloudy today. there are many big trees in the park. mr. black

’

s family have a picnic in a

park. they bring many food there. they bring fruit, drink and bread. mr. black and mrs. black talk

with each other. they talk very happily. ann reads a magazine. tom likes flying a kite. the kite flies

very well. they are hungry now. they want to eat their food. they are very happy.

自我介绍

good

afternoon,

teachers!

today,

i`m

very

happy

to

introduce

myself

here.

my

name

is======.

my

english name is =====. i`m 14. i come from class== grade == of ====== primary school.