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图画作文(正面话题)
第一段(描述图画)
第一句:
As is shown above
,某个位置有中心事物——完全倒装描述;中心事物怎么样——
非谓语动词描述;周围事物怎么样或者在做什么——独立主格描述
第二句:
The drawing above does demonstrate certain informative implication
and certain thought-
provoking social phenomenon.
(总结句)
上图确实表明了某种令人深思的社会现象和某种有意义的暗示。
第二段(阐述图画含义)
第一句:
(提出观点)
the
picture tells us that nothing can be compared with
+
重要主题,
+
状语
the picture does reveal that
+
有害主题
is not only harmful,but also damaging,+
状语。
主题很重要:
nothing is more important than...
主题很有害:
...is not only harmful,but also damaging.
第二句:表明公众态度——
What
’
s more ,the public attaches due attention to...+
重要主题
What
’
s more ,the public fails to attach due attention to...+
有害主题
重视重要主题:
give priority to/emphasize the importance of ...
不重视有害主题:
fail to give priority to/ fail to emphasize the
importance of
...
第三句:句群——展开
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(选
4
个角度)
第四句:结尾句——
虚拟语气法
利弊句型
:The disadvantages overshadow the benefits
弊大于利
The benefits
overshadow the disadvantages
利大于弊
第三段(评论或者举例)
第一句:
(取其精华,去其糟粕)
It is imperative that the essence be absorbed and the drawbacks
be neglected ,during this process,especially in the times of knowledge explosion , when
the news , facts , opinions even rumors have been bombarding us from every corner of
the world (
万能时间状语)
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第二句:
(如何面对)
In view of the significance and complexity of such a favorable/unfavorable
situation
, we must treat it socially , economically , and culturally and maintain it the
very force that has driven our society forward.
考虑到这个问题的复杂性,
我们必须从
社会,经济,文化角度看待这个问题
第三句:
(展望未来)
Only in a reasonable , prosperous and healthy atmosphere can we hope to
witness the ideal scene in which people can enjoy their life to the uttermost.
只有在一
个理性的,繁荣的,健康的环境中,我们才能有希望去见证到一个理想的场景—人
们能够享受他们的生命直到永远。
图画作文(负面话题)
第一段(描述图画)
第一句:
As is shown above
,某个位置有中心事物——完全倒装描述;中心事物怎么样——
非谓语动词描述;周围事物怎么样或者在做什么——独立主格描述
第二句:
The drawing above does demonstrate certain informative implication
and certain thought-
provoking social phenomenon.
(总结句)
上图确实表明了某种令人深思的社会现象和某种有意义的暗示。
第二段(阐述图画含义)
第三段(评论或者举例)
第一句:情况很紧急
the phenomenon being so serious , it is high time that we took effective
measures to tackle this problem .
第二句:
立法很重要
it is imperative that laws and regulations be introduced and enforced to curb
and harness
this urgent problem
我们必须制定一些法律法规来解决这些问题
第三句:专家想对策
Beyond doubt ,researchers ,scholars,and experts must play their part in this
issue .they are expected to work out up-to- data solutions to deal with the situation.
在这
个问题上,研究人员,学者和专家应该找出与时俱进的方法来解决它
第四句:公众应教育
The general public is supposed to enhance their awareness of the harmful
effects of
主题
第五句:展望未来
In summary,while some may remain unconvinced by my discussion,but the
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