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如何写想象类作文
想象类作文不但考查大家的语言能力,而且给了大家更为广阔的思维
空间。
我们可以充分发挥想象力,畅想美好的未来。
【写作任务】
你校英语俱乐部
将举办主题为“未来的新型城市”的英语沙龙活动。请根据下
列要点,发挥自己的想象力用英语写一篇发
言稿。
1. 新型城市产生的原因;
2. 新型城市的运作模式。
注意:1.
词数120左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.
开头和结
尾已给出,但不计入总词数。
Good morning, everyone.
I’m glad to share my view on “the new city in the
future”.
Thank you!
【写作指导】
★审题定调
本篇习作形式上是一篇
发言稿,属于应用文。发言稿的正文要求描述未来的
城市,属于说明文,故时态应以一般将来时为主,多
用被动语态。另外,作为发
言稿,应使用口语化且较为正式的语言,要做到通俗易懂。
★谋篇布局
该发言稿正文可分三部分来写:
第一部分:阐述原因(如土地缺少、交通拥挤、污染严重等);
第二部分:介绍其运作模式;
第三部分:展望未来。
★组织语言
1.
第一部分:阐述新型城市产生的原因。
普通
表达
高级
The
world’s population is growing.
The oceans are
rising because of global warming.
Dry land
will become too crowded.
As a result of rising
sea levels caused by global warming and exploding
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population, our land is becoming too
crowded.
2. 第二部分:介绍新型城市的运作模式。
Islands full
of green plants will be created on the sea and
cities will be built
on them.
普通
In the
center of the city, there will be a huge tower for
people to work and
表达
live in.
The
city will be powered by solar, wind, and wave
energy.
There will be large gardens for people
to grow crops.
The floating city will be
located on a man-made island, which will be almost
entirely covered in the vegetation.
高级
A huge tower at the city center will act
both as workplace and housing for its
表达
citizens.
The city will use solar, wind,
and wave power to keep it functioning and use
its large gardens to supply food.
3.
第三部分:展望未来。
普通
表达
高级
表达
Anything
is possible if we keep making progress in science
and technology.
It will come true with the
development of science and technology.
【范文展示】
? 普通范文 ?
Good morning, everyone. I’m glad
to share my view on “the new city in the
future”.
As we all know, the
world’s population is constantly growing. At the
same time,
the oceans are rising because of
global warming. This means that dry land will
become too crowded. In my opinion, all of the
problems will be solved by building
floating
cities on the sea.
In the future, islands full
of green plants will be created on the sea and
cities will
be built on them. In the center of
the city, there will be a huge tower for people to
work and live in. The city will be powered by
solar, wind, and wave energy. And
there will
be large gardens for people to grow crops.
This is not a dream. I believe anything is
possible if we keep making progress in
science
and technology.
Thank you!
? 高级范文 ?
Good morning, everyone. I’m glad to share my
view on “the new city in the
future”.
As a
result of rising sea levels caused by global
warming and exploding
population, our land is
becoming too crowded. Therefore, I’ve come up with
the idea
of constructing floating cities on
the sea to solve the problems.
The floating
city will be located on man-made islands, which
will be almost
entirely covered in the
vegetation. A huge tower at the city center will
act both as
workplace and housing for its
citizens. The city will use solar, wind, and wave
power
to keep it functioning and use its large
gardens to supply food.
This is absolutely not
science fiction. I believe it will come true with
the
development of science and technology.
Thank you!
温馨提示:从上面的两篇范文中,我们可以看出想象类作文的写作特点
,即:
以实际生活为基础大胆想象,以写作主题为中心合理描写,语言简洁、准确、条
理。如高
级范文的第二段第一句,只用简单的介词短语和过去分词短语就可以表
达普通范文中三个句子的含义,这
样会让文章简洁、生动、活泼。大家在以后的
写作中应逐渐掌握这种写作技巧。
【实战演练】
假设某英语杂志社向中学生征文,题目是“Homes in
the future”。请根据下列
要点和你的畅想完成短文。
1. 如何智能化;2.
怎样服务人。
注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.
开头已给
出,但不计入总词数。
Homes in the future
Technology will allow homes in the future to
be “smart” and “caring”.
答案
One possible version:
Homes in the
future
Technology will allow homes in the
future to be “smart” and “caring”.
Controlled
by computers, the future house will learn about
the master’s likes and
dislikes and
communicate with him her. For example, it will
set the heat in the house
to his her favorite
temperature. The walls will be able to change
colors and patterns
according to his her
moods. And the stove will tell him her when the
food is
cooked and ready to eat.
Besides,
the house can even save the master from disasters
such as fires, floods
and earthquakes by
giving him her a warning.
I believe, with the
quick development of technology, such future homes
aren’t far
ahead.