专题09 人生与情感-2021年高考英语应用文写作必备素材与核心句式集锦

2021年高考英语应用文写作必备素材与核心句式集锦09
人生与情感
【真题再现】
（2016年，浙江卷）“Planning is good ,but doing is better”是一句英国名言。请以此为题
用英语写一篇100~120词的短文。
要求如下：
1.简述你对这句名言的理解；
2.用一个具体事例加以说明；
3.给出恰当的结尾。
注意：1.文章的标题已给出（不计词数）：
2.文中不得以任何形式透露地区、学校、老师或同学姓名等真实信息，否则按作弊行
为认定。
Planning Is Good,But Doing Is Better



【参考范文】
Planning Is Good,But Doing Is Better
Planning is good as it decides in detail how we do what we want to r,a plan can
bear no fruit without being actually carried out.
My experience in the English speech contest last October is a case in point.A month before
the event,I spent hours working out a schedule outlining my goals and practical that,I

set out to read widely for an inspiring topic,wrote a speech,and practiced its delivery in beautiful
pronunciation with good public speech skills.I finally came out of the contest as the first prize
winner.
I know how I achieved my success. It came from good planning and better doing combined.
【解析】
本 文为一篇开放式作文。题目给出标题和提纲。结合题目可判断出主要是介绍将计划付
诸实施的重要性。围 绕这个主旨去写，不能跑题。提纲部分还要求三个方面：1.简述你对这
句名言的理解；2.用一个具体 事例加以说明；3.给出恰当的结尾。这就确定了作文的结构框
架。在主旨和结构确定下来后，还要注意 文章应用第一人称和一般现在时和一般过去时。写
作时发挥自己的想象，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的 表达方式将文章完整地表述出来。注
意要主次分明、详略得当，语言力求准确、简洁，同时应选用合适的 连接词或过渡词，使文
章自然连贯。最后要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。考点 ：考查开
放式作文
【范文点评】
本篇范文短小精悍，结构合理，语言简洁，时态、 人称准确，很好地完成了写作任务。
在文章开头，作者紧扣题目，提出自己对plan的理解，同时引出 下文，然后用自己的亲身
经历表明要将计划付诸实施非常重要。在文中，作者用到了短语in detail, bear no fruit,carry
out, set out to等短语，避免了文章表达的单一。此外，还用到了宾语从句how we do和how
I achieved my success,以及句型It came from good planning and better doing combined等，这些
都给文章增加了亮点。
【经典演练1】
一家英语报社向中学生征 文，主题是”Genius is nothing but labor and diligence. ”。请
根据自己对这句话的理解,按以下要求写一篇英语短文。 要点包括：1.这句话的意义；2.举
例说明；3.结论。
注意：1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

[高分范文]
A well-known proverb goes that
that labor and diligence play a significant role if we want to be successful.
At the beginning of Senior Grade One,I was known for getting high marks in exams without
working hard，on account of which I was regarded as a genius by my classmates. I had been proud
of this for a long time until a girl named Lily appeared. She was very common at first, but she
studied very hard and got higher marks than me in one exam. Since then, she has been ranking
first in the whole grade. Apparently ,it is her labor and diligence that contribute to her success.
In conclusion，only by labor and diligence can we make our dreams come true.
[句子改写]用as引导的定语从句改写范文中划线的句子
[佳句临摹]
佳句1：A well-known proverb goes that
临摹1：一则著名的谚语说良药苦口利于病。
A well-known proverb goes that “Good medicine for health tastes bitter to the mouth”.
佳句2：I was known for getting high marks in exams without working hard, on account of which I
was regarded as a genius by my classmates.
临摹2：他再次没能完成任务，为此受到了老师的批评。
He failed to finish his assignment again, on account of which he was criticized by the teacher.
【经典演练2】
请你根据下面的提示写一篇短文。
健康之重要人人皆知。但许多青 少年不注重健康问题，假期尤甚。他们长时间看电视,
通宵上网聊天玩游戏。这导致了许多危害，如:视 力下降,身体虚弱,缺乏人际交往。
注意：词数100左右；标题已给出,不计人总词数。

参考词汇：交流communicate 精神健康mental health
Have a healthy lifestyle



[高分范文]
Have a healthy lifestyle
As we all know, health is very important. However, many teenagers don't pay any attention to
their health, especially during the holiday. And they spend too much time watching TV, playing
games and chatting on the Internet all night, which can be bad for their health. Firstly, this may
make them get nearsighted. Besides, their bodies become much weaker. Thirdly, they will lose the
chance to communicate with others face to face as they never go out, which may have a bad effect
on their mental health.
In my opinion, instead of watching TV, they should go out to take some exercise ，and visit
some friends to have a healthy lifestyle.
[句子改写]用as结构改写范文中划线的句子
As far as I am concerned, instead of watching TV, they should go out to take some exercise,
and visit some friends to have a healthy lifestyle.
[佳句临摹]
佳句1：As we all know, health is very important.
临摹1：正如我们所知,诚为上策。
As we know, honesty is the best policy.
佳句2：Thirdly, they will lose the chance to communicate with others face to face as they

never go out, which may have a bad effect on their mental health.
临摹2：熬夜对我们的健康有不好的影响。
Staying up too late has a bad effect on our health.
【写作宝典】
英语中“插入语”常见的种类和用法
插入语通常与句中其它部分没有语法上的联系，将它删掉 之后，句子结构仍然是完整的。
书写时我们多半用逗号把它与句子的主句分开。
一、插入语的种类较多，常见的有：
1.代词词组作插入语
能用作插入语的代词词组有all the same , all told , all in all等。例如：
His students was reduced to fifty—six all told.他的学生减少到总共56人。
All in all, her achievement is greatly improved.总的来说，她的成绩有很大的好转。
2. 形容词（短语）作插入语
常见的能用作插入语的形容词（短语）有：常见的能用作插入 语的形容词(短语)有excellent，
most important of all , true , wonderful, sure enough, strange to say , worst still等等。
例如：Wonderful , our team has won again.太好了，我们队又赢了。
Most important of all，we must hand in all the homework..最重要的是，我们要上交所有的作业。
True, it would be too late.真的，时间太晚了。
Strange to say, we have not got the news up to now.说来也奇怪，我们到现在还没有得到这个消
息。
3.副词(短语)作插入语

能用作插入语的副词(短语)有generally，frankly , indeed , surely , still , exactly， otherwise,,
certainly，however , personally , honestly，fortunately , though，besides， perhaps，maybe,
probably， or rather, lucki1y，等。例如:
When he got to campus，he found，however, that his knowledge was too limited.可是到了大学
之后，他发现他的知识太有限了。
Otherwise , he would still be working at factory.不然的话，他还会在工厂工作的。
4.介词短语作插入语
用作插入语的介词短语有: on the other hand, in fact, as a matter of fact，in one's opinion, as a
result , in general, in a word，in short, in other words，in a few words，of course, by the way, for
example, to one’s surprise, in conclusion, on the contrary， in brief等。例如:
To their surprise ， they saw not water this time but glass.使他们惊讶的是，他们这次看到的不
是水而是玻璃。
You can't wait any more----- in other words，you have to go at once.你不能再等了，换言之，你
得立即出发。
On the contrary , we should strengthen our ties with them on this aspect.相反，我们还应加强和他
们的联系。
5.不定式短语作插入语
能用作插入语的不定式短语有to be honest , to be frank , to be sure，to tell you the truth，to
make the matter worse， to start with , to begin with， to sum up等。例如
To be frank, I don not want to tell your truth.坦率地说，我不想告诉你真相。
To tell you the truth , I'm not so interested in your matter.跟你说实话，我对你的事情兴趣不大。
To sum up, success results from hard work.总而言之，成功来自艰苦
6.分词短语作插入语.
分词短语作插入语常见的有:Considering everything into consideration everything considered

into consideration taking everything into consideration； everything taken into consideration(考
虑到一切); grantinggranted that 即使);judging by from(通过......判断); talkingspeaking
of(谈到);seeing that(鉴于);given(考虑到); Supposing( that)(假定);assuming( that)(假定);strictly
speaking严格地说); compared to with(与....相比较);generally speaking(一般来说)等，例如:
Seeing that he is ill, he is unlikely to go to school.鉴于他病了，他不可能去学校了.
Compared with other good students, Liming is a more satisfying student.
和其它好学生相比，李明是一个较为让人满意的学生.
Given the general state of her health, Xiaohua may take her a while to recover from the operation.
考虑她的身体状况，可能要花一段时间她才能从手术中恢复健康。
Generally speaking, the weather in my hometown is neither too cold in winter nor too hot in
summer.一般来说，我家乡的气候冬天不太冷，夏大不太热。
judging by his clothes，he may be a doctor.从衣着来判断，他可能是个医生。
Talking of singing, will you go to the concert with me tomorrow? 说到唱歌，你愿意明天和我一
块去听音乐会吗?
7.分句 ( 在陈述句和一般疑问句 ) 作插入语
能用作插入语的分句有as we know , I am sure , I think, I suppose, I hope, I'm afraid, you see，I
believe ,it is said，what’s more，that is(to say), I know, as I see，believe it or not等。
例如: Some animals only half- hibernate, their sleep is not such a deep one.有些动物只是半冬
眠，就是说它们睡得不那么深沉.
I believe，we will make our dreams come true sooner or later.我确信，我们的梦想迟早会实现。
She can't pass the exam because she doesn't study hard.， what's more, she isn't so smart.他不会
通过这次考试，因为她学习不认真，更何况她又不太聪明。
How do you think dialect is different from standard language? 你认为方言和标准语言有什么不
同之处?

二、 在意思上，插入语在句中通常是对一句话的一些附加说明、解释或总 结，或者表达说
话者的看法和态度，或是起强调的作用，有时为了引起对方的注意，或起转移话题或说明 事
由的作用，或是承上启下，使句子与前面的语句衔接得更紧密一些。常见的插人语的用法有
以 下几种：

1、表示自己的看法、推测或态度。
可用作这类插人语的有:I hope(我希望), in one's opinion(在某人看来)，I think(我认为)，
I believe(我相信)，I guess(我猜想)， to tell the truth(老实说)，I am afraid(我想)，(我想)，
personally(就我个人而言), asso far as I am concerned (就我所知) ，generally speaking(一般说
来)，it seems to me(照我看来)等。
Personally，I don’t like his teaching style .就我个人而言，我不喜欢他的教学风格。
In my opinion，I believe in him .依我看，我信赖他这个人。
2、表示解释或说明。
这类插人语有: in other words(换句话说)，so to speak(可以说), as it were(可以说)， that is (to
say)(也就是说)等。
He is, so to speak, the brain of the organization.他可以说是该组织的智囊。
He hope you to teach him math, that is to say, he love you.
3、表示言语未尽。
这类插入语有：in addition(另外),（and）what’s more(而且)， besides(而且), most important of
all(最重要的是)，and moreover(另外), (and)what is worse, worse still(更糟的是)等。
What's more, many countries use English as a foreign language.此外，许多国家把英语作为一门
外语来学。
The price is too high, and moreover, the house isn't in a suitable position

房价太高，另外，房子的位置也不好。
4、用来转变话题。
可用作这类插人语的有:by the way(顺便说)，incidentally(顺便提一句)，however(然而)等。
By the way, could you tell me how much it is? 顺便问一下, 这个东西多少钱?
Incidentally, this would also help reduce your risk of developing diabetes.
顺便提一下, 这也有助于降低你患糖尿病的风险。
5、引起对方注意、倾听、观察或思考。
这类插人语有:don't you think(你说是吧),you know(你知道),you see(你瞧)，don't you know(你
是知道的，不是吗?)等。
Her performance was wonderful，don’t you think?她的表演非常精彩，你说是吧?
He can speak in English now , you know.你知道，他现在能用英语说话了。
6、 表示对事物的肯定或强调。
可用作这类插人语的有:to be sure(确实、的确),of course(当然),in fact(事实上),undoubtedly(毫
无疑l司)，certainly(当然)，nee dless to say(不用说)等。
Mr. Smith isn't rich, to be sure, he is a gentleman.的确，史密斯先生并不富有，但他是个绅士
Of course, she is a good singer. 当然了，她是一个不错的歌手。
7、表示概括和总结。
这类插人语有:to sum up(概括地说)，in short(总而言之)，All in all(总的说来)，in a word(简而
言之)，in conclusion总之On the whole(总而言之)等。
To sum up, this is a fantastic hotel. 总而言之，这是一间极棒的饭店。
In short, they are making art. 简而言之，他们在创造艺术。
英语的插入语是句子的附加成分，是说话者对句子的内容所持的态度和所作的解释、说

明等。插入语与句子的其它成分无语法上的联系，是一种独立成分。插入语能 够使语言丰富
多彩，富有表现力，在准确、鲜明地表达思想，增强语言表达效果上起着重要的作用。为更
好地掌握和运用英语，学好并运用好插入语是非常重要的。
【素材集锦】
[常用词语]
?态度类
optimistic乐观的
optimism乐观主义
pessimistic悲观的
pessimism悲观主义
attitude towards life 人生态度
?自我激励类
毅力perseverance
终身学习lifelong learning
激励inspire
鼓励encourage
挑战challenge
克服困难overcome difficulties
建立自信心build up self-confidence
[常用句子]
1. Change any negative thoughts about yourself and replace them with this positive thought: I am
doing the best I can.

改变关于你自己所有的负面想法,用这个正面的想法取代它们:我正在全力以赴。
2. Winning is not about being first, but it is about giving your best in every situation.
赢并不表示拿第一，赢表示在任何情况下都全力以赴。
3. Nothing is so big that it is impossible to get over, and hurt serves only to make us stronger.
没有什么东西强大到难以克服，伤痛反而使我们更加强大。
4. Life is filled with challenges. It is those challenges that make me who I am.
人生充满了挑战。正是那些挑战成就了今天的我。
5. After dealing with many challenges, we will come to realize that it is challenges that shape us.
应对许多挑战之后,我们将会意识到是挑战塑造了我们。
6. You cannot choose what you are given, but you can choose how you make use of it.
你不能选择你拥有什么，但你能选择如何利用你所拥有的。
7. My experience tells me that it is not what you are given but how you make use of it that
determines who you are.
我的经历告诉我:不是你所拥有的而是你如何利用你拥有的决定你是什么人。
8. To an optimistic person, difficulties are just an entrance to a bright future.
对于一个乐观的人来说，困难只是通往光明前程的通道。
9. It is also a virtue to forgive others, especially in such a highly competitive and stressful society.
特别是在这样一一个竞 争激烈、压力大的社会，宽恕别人也是一种美德。
10. Instead of blaming each other，we should communicate more and put ourselves in others' place.
不应该相互责怪，我们应该多沟通，设身处地替别人着想。
11.I am convinced that 10% of my life is what happens to me and 90% is how I react to it.

我深信，我生活的10%是事情本身,90%是我对事情所采取的态度。
as the old saying goes, “ No pain, no gain”.正如谚语所说：“不劳无获。”
13. A smile can help us get through a difficult situation and find friends in a world full of strangers.
微笑能够帮助我们渡过难关，帮我们在一一个充满陌生 人的世界里找到知己。
14. Yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery, but today is a gift. That is why it is called
present
昨天已成为历史，明天还是未知数，但今天是个礼物，那就是 今天被叫作present的原
因。
15. Please seize the hour, seize the day and treasure every moment that you have!
请抓住每一-小时、每一天，珍惜你所拥有的每-一刻!