导游小姐-春游作文
2020年山东高考英语作文题目:给美国朋友
Tom的回信
20xx年山东高考英语作文题目:给美国朋友Tom的
回信
第二节:写作(满分30分)
假设你是新华中学的学生李华,你的美国朋友Tom
一周前
给你发电子邮件,询问你暑假里的打算,但你因准备
期末考试未能及时回复。请根据以下要点给他回邮件
:
1. 未及时回复的原因;
2.
你假期的打算(如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等)。
注意: 1. 次数:120~150;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【试题点评】
今年的书面
表达题目延续山东省一贯的提纲作文
命题习惯,时隔一年之后重新回到书信题的大框架中,考了
一篇以道歉信为外衣,以活动安排为主体段的提纲作文,相
当于10年山东卷(道歉信)和07年四川卷
(假期安排)和合
体。这种作文是我们平时经常练习的,因此套路很完善、套
话很丰富。此外,
本文中需要同学们翻译的难句不多,因此,
只要在备考过程中有意识地了解过高考英语作文的提分方法,掌握了常用的亮点词汇、加分句型和过渡词,并加以针
对性训练,这道题目应该不难写。
【经典套路】
第一段:问候+写信背景+写信目的
第二段:道歉部分(相当于写信背景)
第三段:假期安排部分
第四段:补充说明+客套话
【高分范文】
Dear Tom,
How are you doing? (问候) You asked me in your
last letter about my plan for the coming
summer
vacation.(写信背景) I am sorry that I didnt
reply
without delay.(写信目的)
How I wish I
would read and reply your email
as soon as I
received it. However, I was busy preparing
for
my final exam at that time, which is vital for me.
As a result, I had no choice but to completely
focus
on my study. I believe that if you were
me, you would
make the same
choice.(第二段为道歉信常见套路)
By the way, I have a
busy schedule for my summer
vacation.(主题句)
First and foremost, I would do a part
time
job, so that my interpersonal skills would be
improved.(拓展句1) Additionally, I will take a
short
trip to Beijing to take a summer course
in the New
Oriental School.(拓展句2) Last
but not least, maybe I
will work as a
volunteer for the school as a teaching
assistant.(拓展句3)
These are my plan for
the summer vacation.
Whats yours? I am looking
forward to your earliest
reply.(以合理的客套话结尾)