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大学英语作文及评析


评析一篇英语作文，
在我们上了 大学之后，
这方面的能力是否增
强了呢
?
下面是

给大家整理的大学英语作文及评析，供大家参阅
!
大学英语作文及评析：
My First Year in CollegeMy First Year
in College
Many
high
school
graduates
wrongly
assume
that
university
life
is
totally
free
from
worries.
After
a
period
of
serious
and
solemn
study
in
senior
three,
the
hard
beavers
expect
to
take
a
break
and
develop
some
habits.
However,
many
may
find
later
that
the
situation
may
be
beyond
their
anticipation.
I've
tried
to
convince
the
adults
around
that
the
image
they
have
of
my
university
life
as
a
free
and
unrestrained
one
is
some
what
misunderstanding.
In
reality,
school life is so busy that I sometimes wonder if my energy is
enough.
About my first year in college, my life is mainly made up of
two
parts,
study and
practice.
As a
student, the main
task
is
study. In order to gain a high GPA, I have to get used to the
college
life
style
and
begin
a
new
pursue
in
study.
It
is
the
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learning
method
that
shows
off
most
of
the
differences
between
senior
study
and
college
study. !
have
a
roommate
who goes out to have lessons in the morning and comes back
in
the
evening
after
the
self-study
classroom
is
closed.
The
peers'
behaviors
make
me
feel
under
pressure.
In
university,
one%
view
of
life
is
integrally
formed
and
strengthened. I begin to program my future plan and realize
that study itself is an affair for me. The more courses I learn by
heart,
the
more
maturity
I
get.
University
education
ensures
students of better jobs. I usually reckon that time consuming
on
study
is
worthwhile
as
it
bears
such
important
events
as
occupation, career and responsibility.
To
some
extent,
study
and
practice
are
intertwined,
and
they begin from the very start of freshman year. Student Union
enjoys
almost
complete
acceptance.
It
is
a
place
where
one
can get his ability trained, have his competence applied and
make a lot of friends who share the same interests with him.
But
sometimes,
social
activities
and
practices
are
time
consuming, what's more, the sense of responsibility also
requires you to make effort to fulfill the task.
No one starts in one's present position all along that
it was what he or she wants to do. Sometimes, the chance will
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just lead you down some unforeseen trail only if you have a
prepared mind. My first year in college is not relaxed, but all
way along is full of curiosity and satisfaction.
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评

通过这篇作文，
我们看到了一个值得佩服的女大学生，
学习努力 ，
又积极参与社会实践，
具有明确的人生目标，
大一的生活过得充实而
幸福。

从
intertwine
，
time
consumin g
，
reckon
等词汇可以看得出
来，作者的语言功底较为扎实，词汇的使 用准确而地道。作者从学习
和实践两个方面进行阐述，
并在末尾进行了总结，
对文章开 头进行了
呼应，显示了作者娴熟的写作手法。

不过，
从标题来看，
这篇文章应当是写作者对大一的总结和感受。
论述提纲也是如此，但作者有点过于注重论证，去
justify
自己各方
面的行为，
而非从内心自我的角度出发去谈自己的感受，作者除了在
第二段用了几个
I
作为句子的主语以外，
文章的其余部分几乎 没有用
I
或
my
，反而是用了几次
you
，这样显得客观有 余，亲切不足，是
本文的美中不足之处。

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点评教师：孙东云
)
大学英语作文及评析：
The Life in FudanFudan University is
claimed to position the third in a chance to study
in Fudan as
an
exchange
student
for
one
semester, I
carried
my luggage with excitement and aspired to having a fruitful
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semester in Fudan.
But when I reached the campus, I was shocked by the first
sight of my room.
The
room
is
shared by
six
students
with
only
two tables
and
without
any
air- conditioning
system.
The
toilet
is
unbearably
dirty,
with
flies
and
mosquitoes,
germs
and
bacteria. The most unbelievable thing is that all students in a
hostel
share
one
bath
room
and
all
of
us
have
to
wash
our
clothes by 's more, there is no access to
the Internet and not any TV in our dormitory.
By then, I realized how fortunate I was being a Hong Kong
student.
Instead of complaining, I was simply confused about the
way students adapt their lives to such an environment. I doubt
my ability of adaptation as I am the kind of students, who are
easily succumbing to and beaten by difficulties.
But
after
living
with
my
classmates
a
few
weeks,
I
am
proud that I gradually get used to the life here and consider
the
poor
environment
as
a
challenge
to
me.
In
fact,
no
students in the faculty are immune from the kind of life here.
Those who are younger than me can live happily here, so can I.
They can concentrate on their studies here, why can't I?
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There
are
no
clean
toilets,
no
washing
machines
and
no
air-conditioning system, but at least I have electricity and fans
to stay cool; I have water and hands to wash clothes, which is
already enough.
If I had lived in hostel where we have a separate bathroom
for each room, I would not have had the chance to build up
relationship
between
students from different
rooms in times
of washing clothes and taking shower. The life here is a unique
experience.
In addition, the most precious lesson I learn from students
here
is
their
attitudes
of
studying.
They
are
so
devoted
and
industrious that they get up so early in the morning, queuing
for
a
seat
in
the
library
or
studying
in
classroom
till
late
at
ts
are
determined
to
achieve
their
far-sighted
target, like continuing their studies as postgraduates. Besides,
the
students
here
possess
knowledge
of
different
areas
instead of simply focusing on one specific area.
Studying and living with them is a priceless and inspiring
lesson to me, a surprise to me that causes me to treasure the
things
I
have,
even
some
minor
things
which
I
took
it
for
granted. I am sure that the coming year will be a fruitful one.
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