仿写金色花-
现象解释模板
试题八
一、题目:
Directions: For this part, you are
allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on
the topic
:
The
Impact
of
Pesticides
on
Public
Health
and
the
Environment.
You should write at least 120 words and
you should base
your composition on the outline (given
in Chinese) below:
1
. 随着城市的扩展与日益拥挤,广大农村也
成了各种农药的肆虐之所;
2
.农药对人们健康及生态环境的影响和表
< p>现;
3
.我的看法。
二、类型:现象解释型
三、方法提示:
1
.审题:第 一步:结合提纲推断题意:这是一个鲜明的观点。第二步:根据题目给出的提
纲可知文章
应包含如下三个基本部分:
①现象部分:随着城市的扩展与日益拥挤,
广大农村也成了各种农药的肆虐之所;
②解释部分:农药对人们健康及生态环境的影响和表现;
③表明作者态度部分:我的看法。
完全符合现象解释型作文的结构。
2
.选择王长喜十二句作文模板中的现象解释型模板。
3
.结合题意套用模板:现象解释四级作文模板。
四、范文与点评
1.
模板一:
①
It
is
true
that
________.
②
Nowadays,___________.
③
What
impresses
us
most
is ____________.
④
Of course, ________.
⑤
There is also a growing concern over _________.
⑥
The
main
reason
for
this
is
______________.
⑦
1
What
is
more,
____________.
⑧
As
a
result,
____________.
⑨
Considering
all
these
reasons,
personally,
_____________.
⑩
On
the
one
hand,
___________.
(11)
On
the
other
hand,
_______________.
(12)
In
a
word, ________________.
2.
范文
范文
The
Impact
of
Pesticides
on
Public
Health
and
the
Environment
①
It
is
true
that
over
the
past
thirty
years
or
so
the
quality
of
many
people’s
lives
has
deteriorated
in
some
respects
because
of
technological
progress.
②
Nowadays
while towns and
cities have become larger and overcrowded
due
to
the
growing
urban
population,
the
countryside
has
also
been
affected
by
the
large-scale
use
of
pesticides.
③
What
impresses
us
most
is
that
there
are
more
than
1
million human
pesticide poisonings and
over 20,000 deaths
each
year
according
to
a
WHO
report.
④
Of
course,
if
urgent
measures
were
not
adopted
to
limit
the
use
of
pesticides, more and more people would
become victims.
⑤
There
is
also
a
growing
concern
over
the
contributing
causes
among
which,
the
following
ones
are
particularly worth mentioning.
⑥
The main reason for this
is
that
fruit
and
vegetables
sprayed
with
chemicals
may
have some
poisonous effect upon the people who eat them.
⑦
What
is
more,
large
use
of
pesticides
will
pollute
the
groundwater
and
surface
water
.
⑧
As
a
result,
the
people,
domestic
animals,
fish,
birds,
plants
and
wildlife
living
in
and using the
water would be greatly endangered.
⑨
Considering
all
these
reasons,
personally,
despite
some
beneficial
effects
on
the
agricultural
industry,
large
use of pesticides would do considerable
harm to our health,
wildlife
and
the
environment.
⑩
On
the
one
hand,
the
killing
of
insects
has
resulted
in
a
loss
of
balance
in
the
ecology,
because
insects,
although
a
nuisance
to
farmers,
provide
food
for
birds.
(11)
On
the
other
hand,
research
indicates
that
long-term
effects
of
pesticide
exposure
can
2
点评
①
首
句
通
过
deteriorate
指出一
个
与
人
们
生
活
密
切相关的问题:在
某些领域,
科技进
步
恶
化
了
人
们
的
生活质量。
< /p>
②使用连词
while
点
出
城
市
和
农
村
的现
存问题,
对首
句进一步具体化。
③
世
卫
组
织
提
供
的
确
切
数
据
令
人
信
服
地
表
明
问
题
之严重。
④
urgent
measures
明
了
问
题
的
迫
切
性
起
到
了< /p>
承
上
启
下
的
作
用
;
该
句
运
了
虚
拟
语
气
。
<
/p>
⑥
分
词
结
构
sprayed
with
与
lead to cancer,
mutations
(异变)
and congenital defects
(先
天缺陷)
. (12) In a word, the farmers should limit the use of
pesticides
to
the
minimum
and
we
all
should
preserve
the
environment both for our children and
ourselves.
定
语
从
句
the
people
who
用得
不
错,
做到了句型
的多样化。
⑧
p>
endanger
进
一
步
阐< /p>
明
⑦
的
严
重
后果。
⑨
表
让
步
关
系< /p>
的
介词
despite
令作
者
的
观
点
更
加
< p>客
观全面。
⑩,
(11)
从生态及
人
类
健
康
两
方< /p>
面
再
次
总
结
出
农
药
的危害。
(12)
总结全文,提
出呼吁。
3.
模板二:
①
Nowadays,
wherever
you
go,
_______.
②
As
is
known
to
all,
_________.
③
In
a
word,_________.
④
There
are
plenty
of
contributing
causes
among
which,
the
following
ones
are
particularly
worth
mentioning.
⑤
First,
__________.
⑥
Second,
_________.
⑦
And
consequently,
__________.
⑧
And finally, __________.
⑨
In fact, __________ in the long run.
⑩
Besides, __________. (11) And what
’
s more,
__________.
(12) Therefore, let
’
s remember that __________.
4.
范文
范文
3
点评
The
impact
of
pesticides
on
public
health
and
the
environment
①
Nowadays, wherever you go,
you
will
find
that
the
quality
of p>
①
首
句
通
过
d eteriorate
many
people’s
lives
has
指出一个与人们生活密
deteriorated
in
some
respects
切相关的问题:
在某些领
because
of
technological
progress.
域,科技进步恶化了人们
②
As
is
known
to
all,
while
towns
的生活质量。
and
cities
have
become
larger
and
②使用连词
while
点出城
overcrowded
due
to
the
growing
市和农村的现存问题,
对
urban
population,
the
countryside
首句进一步具体化。
has
also
been
affected
by
the
large-scale use
of pesticides.
③
In a
word,
if
urgent
measures
were
not
③
urgent
measures
点< /p>
明
问
题
的
迫
切
性
起
到
adopted
to
limit
the
use
of
了
承
上
启
下
的
作
用
;
pesticides,
more
and
more
people
了
该
句
中
运
用
了
虚
拟
语
would become victims.
气
。
④
There
are
plenty
of
contributing
causes
among
which,
the
following
ones
are
particularly
worth
mentioning.
⑤
First,
fruit
⑤分词结构
sprayed with
and
vegetables
sprayed
with
< p>与
定
语
从
句
the
people
chemicals
may
have
some
who
用得不错,
做到了句
poisonous
effect
upon
the
people
型的多样化。
who eat them.
⑥
Second, large use
of
pesticides
will
pollute
the
groundwater and surface water.
⑦
And
consequently,
the
people,
⑦
endanger
进一步阐明
dom
estic
animals,
fish,
birds,
⑥的严重后果。
plants
and
wildlife
living
in
and
using
the
water
would
be
greatly
endangered.
⑧
And
finally,
the
killing
of
insects
by
pesticides
has
⑧
loss
of
balance
in
the
resulted
in
a
loss
of
balance
in
the
ecology
点明了农药对环
ecology
because insects, although a
境的最终危害。
nuisance
to
farmers,
provide
food
for birds.
⑨
limit the use
与
do good
⑨
In fact, it pays to limit the use
to
表明了作者的观点。
of pesticides
to the minimum in the
4
⑩,
(11)
从人类健康及生
态两方面再次总结出农
long
run, and this would do good to
both
public
health
and
the
environment.
⑩
Besides,
research
pesticide
exposure
can
lead
to
cancer,
mutations
and
congenital
defects.
(11)
And
what
’
s
more,
the
killing
of
insects
by
pesticides
will
药的危害。
p>
(12)
总结全文,呼吁人们
关注农药对人类健康及
环境的影响。
indicates
that
long-term
effects
of
break
the
balance
in
the
nature.
(12) Therefore,
let
’
s remember that
the
impact
of
pesticides
on
our
health,
wildlife
and
the
environment has become so urgent
a
problem
that
it
should
not
be
ignored any more.
5.
模板三:
①
As is known to all, _______.
②
For one thing,_______.
③
For another,_________.
④
It is obvious that __________.
⑤
There is an increasing concern over _________.
⑥
First of all, ______________.
⑦
In
addition, ____________.
⑧
Therefore, ____________.
⑨
As
far
as
I
am
concerned,
_____________.
⑩
As
we
all
know,
___________.
(11)
Furthermore,
_______________. (12) In a word, ________________.
6.
范文
The
impact of pesticides on public health and the
environment
①
As is known to all,
o
ver the past thirty years or so the quality of many people’s lives has
deteriorated
in
some
respects
because
of
technological
progress
.
②
For
one
thing,
nowadays,
5
while towns and cities have
become larger and overcrowded due to the growing
urban population,
the
countryside has also been affected by the large-
scale use of pesticides
.
③
For another,
there
are more than 1
million human pesticide poisonings and over 20,000
deaths each year
according to
a
WHO
report
.
④
It
is
obvious
that
if
urgent
measures
were
not
adopted
to
limit
the
use
of
pesticides, more
and more people would become victims
.
⑤
There is an increasing concern over
the contributing causes among which, the following
ones
are
particularly
worth
mentioning
.
⑥
First
of
all,
fruit
and
vegetables
sprayed
with
chemicals may have some poisonous
effect upon the people who eat them
.
⑦
In addition,
large
use
of
pesticides
will
pollute
the
groundwater
and
surface
water
.
⑧
Therefore,
the
people,
domestic
animals, fish, birds, plants and wildlife
living in and using the water would be greatly
endangered
.
⑨
As
far
as
I
am
concerned,
despite
some
beneficial
effects
on
the
agricultural
industry,
large use of pesticides would do
considerable harm to our health, wildlife and the
environment.
⑩
As we all know,
the killing of insects has resulted in a loss of balance in the ecology, because
insects,
although
a
nuisance
to
farmers,
provide
food
for
birds
.
(11)
Furthermore,
research
indicates that long-term effects of
pesticide exposure can lead to cancer, mutations
and congenital
defects
. (12) In a word,
the farmers should limit the use of pesticides to the minimum and we all
should preserve the environment both
for our children and ourselves
.
试题九
一、题目:
Directions: For this part, you are
allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on
the topic
:
College Students
Job- hunting
.
You
should write
at
least
100 words
and
you
should
base
your
composition on the outline (given in
Chinese) below:
1.
随着大学的不断扩招,越来越多 的毕业生体会到了找工作的压力;
2.
大学生就业难的原因;
3.
我的看法。
二、类型:现象解释型
三、方法提示:
1.
审题:第 一步:结合提纲推断题意:这是一个鲜明的观点。第二步:根据题目给出的提纲
可知文章
应包含如下三个基本部分:
①现象部分:随着大学的不断扩招,越来越
多的毕业生体会到了找工作的压力;
②解释部分:大学生就业难的原因;
③表明作者态度部分:我的看法。
完全符合现象解释型作文的结构。
2.
选择王长喜十二句作文模板中的现象解释型模板。
3.
结合题意套用模板:现象解释四级作文模板。
四、范文与点评
1.
模板一:
①
It
is
true
that
________.
②
Nowadays,___________.
③
What
impresses
us
most
is
____________.
④
Of course, ________.
⑤
There
is
also
a
growing
concern
over
_________.
⑥
The
main
reason
for
this
is
6
______________.
⑦
What is more, ____________.
⑧
As a result, ____________.
⑨
Considering
all
these
reasons,
personally,
_____________.
⑩
On
the
one
hand,
___________. (11) On the
other hand, _______________. (12) In a word,
________________.
2.
范文
College
Students Job-hunting
①
It is true that
with
2.12
million graduates from various universities flooding into the job
markets
this
year,
the
employment
situation
for
college
students
is
no
longer
as
optimistic
as
before.
②
Nowadays,
college
students’
employment
has
been
a
hot
topic
in
China.
③
What
impresses us most is
that a survey conducted recently suggests that about 80 percent of college
students listed
④
Of course,
many graduates fail
to get a satisfactory
job and have to lower their expectations
.
⑤
There is also a growing concern over
the various reasons for this phenomenon.
⑥
The
main reason for this is
that since Chinese colleges and universities enlarged their enrollment in
1999, the number of
college graduates in China has been on the steady
rise for the past four years
and
the
supply
of
graduates
is
greater
than
the
demand
of
the
market.
⑦
What
is
more,
most
graduates have too high
expectations for their future jobs.
⑧
As a result,
a lot of graduates would
rather stay in large
cities without suitable jobs than go to small
cities, let alone the countryside.
⑨
Considering all these reasons, personally,
if both colleges and students take measures,
the gap between the
employers
’
demands and college student
s’
expectations could be shortened.
⑩
On the one hand,
the universities' employment centers should play a vital role in
collecting job
information
through
different
channels
and
offering
comprehensive
job- hunting
services
to
graduates.
(11) On the other hand,
the students should improve themselves and develop special
skills
to meet the needs of the market.
(12) In a word,
it calls for the joint effort of the whole
society to
help graduates to cope with the intense
competition in the job market.
3.
模板二:
①
Nowadays, wherever you go, _______.
②
As is known to all, _________.
③
In a word,
_________.
④
There
are
plenty
of
contributing
causes
among
which,
the
following
ones
are
particularly
worth
mentioning.
⑤
First,
__________.
⑥
Second,
_________.
⑦
And
consequently,
__________.
⑧
And finally, __________.
⑨
In fact, __________ in the long run.
⑩
Besides, __________. (11) And what
’
s more,
__________.
(12) Therefore, let
’
s remember that __________.
4.
范文
College Students Job-
hunting
①
Nowadays, wherever you go,
you will find
college students’ employment has been a hot
topic
in
China.
②
As
is
known
to
all,
with
2.12
million
graduates
from
various
universities
flooding into the job markets this
year, the employment situation for college
students is no longer
as optimistic as
before.
③
In a word,
there is a growing concern over the great pressure college
graduates face in job-
hunting.
7
④
There
are
plenty
of
contributing
causes
among
which,
the
following
ones
are
particularly worth mentioning.
⑤
First,
since Chinese colleges and universities enlarged their
enrollment in 1999, the number of
college graduates in China has been on the steady
rise for the
past four years and the
supply of graduates is greater than the demand of
the market.
⑥
Second,
most
graduates
have
too
high
expectations
for
their
future
jobs.
⑦
And
consequently,
a
lot
of
graduates would rather stay
in large cities without suitable jobs than go to
small cities, let alone
the
countryside.
⑧
And finally,
many employers also raise their standards when recruiting new
staff.
⑨
In
fact,
if
both
colleges
and
students
take
measures,
the
gap
between
the
employers
’
demands
and college student
s’
expectations could be shortened
in the long run.
⑩
Besides,
the
universities' employment centers should
also play a vital role in
collecting job information through
different channels
and offering comprehensive job-hunting services to
graduates.
(11) And what
’
s
more,
the students should improve themselves and develop special skills to meet the needs of the
market.
(12) Therefore, let
’
s remember that
it calls for the joint effort of the whole society to
help graduates to cope
with the intense competition in the job market.
5.
模板三
:
①
As is known to all, _______.
②
For one thing,_______.
③
For another,_________.
④
It is obvious that __________.
⑤
There is an increasing concern over _________.
⑥
First of all, ______________.
⑦
In
addition, ____________.
⑧
Therefore, ____________.
⑨
As
far
as
I
am
concerned,
_____________.
⑩
As
we
all
know,
___________.
(11)
Furthermore,
_______________. (12) In a word, ________________.
6.
范文
College
Students Job-hunting
①
As is known to all,
nowadays,
college students’ employment has been a hot topic in
China.
②
For one thing,
with
2.12
million graduates from various universities flooding into the
job markets this year, the
employment situation for college students is no
longer as optimistic as
before.
③
For
another,
a survey
conducted
recently
suggests
that about
80
percent
of
college
students
listed
in
job- hunting
as
their
top
headache.
④
It
is
obvious
that
many
graduates fail to get a
satisfactory job and have to lower their
expectations
.
⑤
There is an increasing concern over
the various
reasons for this phenomenon.
⑥
First
of
all
,
since
Chinese
colleges
and
universities
enlarged
their
enrollment
in
1999,
the
number of college graduates
in China has been on the steady rise for the past
four years and the
supply of graduates
is greater than the demand of the market.
⑦
In
addition,
most graduates
have too high
expectations for their future jobs.
⑧
Therefore,
a lot of
graduates would rather
stay in large
cities without suitable jobs than go to small
cities, let alone the countryside.
⑨
As far as I am concerned,
if both colleges and students take measures, the gap between
the
employers
’
demands and college student
s’
expectations could be shortened.
⑩
As we all know,
the universities' employment centers
should play a vital role in
collecting job information through
different
channels
and
offering
comprehensive
job-hunting
services
to
graduates.
(11)
Furthermore,
the
students
should
improve
themselves
and
develop
special
skills
to
meet
the
8
needs
of
the
market.
(12)
In
a
word,
it
calls
for
the
joint
effort
of
the
whole
society
to
help
graduates to cope with the intense
competition in the job market.
试题十
一、题目:
Directions: For
this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write
a composition on the
topic
:
The role of man in
modern
family.
You should write at least 100 words and you should base
your composition on the outline (given
in Chinese) below:
1.
越来越多的男人参与到家务活或教育子女的活动中;
2.
男人在工作之余承担家庭义务的原因及优点;
3.
我的观点。
二、类型:现象解释型
三、方法提示:
1.
审题:第 一步:结合提纲推断题意:这是一个鲜明的观点。第二步:根据题目给出的提纲
可知文章
应包含如下三个基本部分:
①现象部分:越来越多的男人参与到家务活或教育子女的活动中;
②解释部分:男人在工作之余承担家庭义务的原因及优点;
③表明作者态度部分:我的观点。
完全符合现象解释型作文的结构。
2.
选择王长喜十二句作文模板中的现象解释型模板。
3.
结合题意套用模板:现象解释四级作文模板。
四、范文与点评
1.
模板一:
①
It
is
true
that
________.
②
Nowadays,___________.
③
What
impresses
us
most
is
____________.
④
Of course, ________.
⑤
There
is
also
a
growing
concern
over
_________.
⑥
The
main
reason
for
this
is
______________.
⑦
What is more, ____________.
⑧
As a result, ____________.
⑨
Considering
all
these
reasons,
personally,
_____________.
⑩
On
the
one
hand,
___________. (11) On the
other hand, _______________. (12)In a word,
________________.
2.
范文
The role
of man in modern family
①
It is true that
in the past men had no real place in the home and that their only real value
to
their
children
was
to
provide
for
their
financial
needs
.
②
Nowadays,
with
the
rapid
advancement of
our society, our family life have underwent many
changes
.
③
What impresses
us most is
that
more and more men recognize that bringing up children involves a partnership of
equals and their family roles are just
as important as their career roles
.
④
Of course,
men
’
s active
participation in doing family duties
besides earning money can do a lot of good to
their family life
.
⑤
There
is
also
a
growing
concern
over
the
benefits
of
male
participation
in
assuming
family responsibilities for the healthy
development of the child
.
⑥
The main reason for this is
9
that
fathers'
positive
and
sensitive
attitudes
toward
their
babies
are
related
to
their
children's
problem
solving competence later
in their children’s
lives.
⑦
What is more,
in a family where the
roles of men and women are
not sharply separated and where many household
tasks are shared to
a greater or lesser
extent, notions of male superiority are hard to
maintain
.
⑧
As a result,
in such
a
home,
the
growing
boy
and
girl
can
learn
to
accept
that
equality
more
easily
than
did
their
parents and to prepare
more fully for participation in a world
characterized by cooperation rather
than by the “battle of the
sexes.”
⑨
Considering all these reasons, personally,
fathers
’
role in their children
’
s up-bringing is
very important
.
⑩
On the one hand,
fathers
’
participation in family life can relieve the conflict
between
work
and
family
responsibilities
that
many
working
mothers
face
.
(11)
On
the
other
hand,
fathers' involvement is essential to children's intellectual and emotional development and
children who are disliked by their
peers commonly reported having poor relationships
with their
fathers
.
(12)
In
a word,
apart from the improvement of the quality of their family life,
fathers'
involvement in their
children's lives is strongly related to children's
life-long well-being.
3.
模板二:
①
Nowadays,
wherever
you
go,
_______.
②
As
is
known
to
all,
_________.
③
In
a
word,
_________.
④
There
are
plenty
of
contributing
causes
among
which,
the
following
ones
are
particularly
worth
mentioning.
⑤
First,
__________.
⑥
Second,
_________.
⑦
And
consequently,
__________.
⑧
And finally, __________.
⑨
In fact, __________ in the long run.
⑩
Besides, __________. (11) And what
’
s more,
__________.
(12) Therefore, let
’
s remember that __________.
4.
范文
The role of man in modern family
①
Nowadays, wherever you go,
you will find that with the rapid advancement of our society,
our family
life have underwent many changes
.
②
As is known to all,
in the past men had no real
place in the home
and that their only real value to their children
was to provide for their financial
needs
.
③
In a word,
men
’
s active participation in doing family duties besides earning money can
do a lot of good to
their family life
and especially the healthy development of the children
.
④
There
are
plenty
of
contributing
causes
among
which,
the
following
ones
are
particularly
worth
mentioning.
⑤
First,
fathers'
positive
and
sensitive
attitudes
toward
their
babies are related to
their children's problem solving competence later
in their children's lives
.
⑥
Second,
in a family where the roles of men and women are not sharply separated and where many
household
tasks
are
shared to
a
greater
or
lesser
extent,
notions
of
male
superiority
are
hard
to
maintain
.
⑦
And consequently,
in such a home, the growing boy and girl can learn to accept that
equality more easily than did
their parents and to prepare more fully for
participation in a world
characterized
by cooperation rather than by the “battle of the
sexes.”
.
⑧
And finally,
more and
more fathers are
reporting that involvement with their children and
families is a source of personal
satisfaction
.
⑨
In fact,
fathers
’
role in their children
’
s up-bringing is very important
in the long run.
⑩
Besides,
fathers
’
participation
in
family
life
can
relieve
the
conflict
between
work
and
family
10
responsibilities that many working
mothers face
. (11) And what
’
s more,
fathers' involvement is
essential
to
children's
intellectual
and
emotional
development
and
children
who
are
disliked
by
their peers commonly reported having
poor
relationships with their fathers.
(12) Therefore, let
’
s
remember
that
fathers'
involvement
in
their
children's
lives
is
strongly
related
to
children's
life-long well-being
.
5.
模板三
:
①
As is known to all, _______.
②
For one thing,_______.
③
For another,_________.
④
It is obvious that __________.
⑤
There is an increasing concern over _________.
⑥
First of all, ______________.
⑦
In
addition, ____________.
⑧
Therefore, ____________.
⑨
As
far
as
I
am
concerned,
_____________.
⑩
As
we
all
know,
___________.
(11)
Furthermore,
_______________. (12) In a word, ________________.
6.
范文
The role
of man in modern family
①
As is known to all,
nowadays, with the rapid
advancement of our society, our family
life have underwent many
changes
.
②
For one thing,
in the past men had no real
place in the
home and their only real
value to their children was to provide for their
financial needs
.
③
For
another,
more and more men now recognize that bringing up children involves a partnership of
equals and
their family roles are just as important as their
career roles
.
④
It is
obvious that
men
’
s active participation in doing family duties besides earning money can do a lot of good to
their family life
.
⑤
There is an increasing concern over
the benefits of male participation in assuming family
responsibilities
for
the
healthy
development
of
the
child
.
⑥
First
of
all,
fathers'
positive
and
sensitive
attitudes toward their babies are related to their
children's problem solving competence
later
in their children’s
lives.
⑦
In addition,
in a family where the roles of men and women are
not
sharply
separated
and
where
many
household
tasks
are
shared
to
a
greater
or
lesser
extent,
notions of male
superiority are hard to maintain
.
⑧
Therefore,
in such a home, the growing boy
and girl can learn to
accept that equality more easily than did their
parents and to prepare more
fully
for
participation
in
a
world
characterized
by
cooperation
rather
than
by
the
“battle
of
the
sexes.”
⑨
As far as I am concerned,
fathers
’
role in their children
’
s up-bringing is very important
.
⑩
As we all know,
fathers
’
participation in family life can relieve the conflict between work and
family responsibilities that
many working mothers face
. (11) Furthermore,
fathers' involvement
is essential to children's intellectual
and emotional development and children who are
disliked by
their peers commonly
reported having poor relationships with their
fathers
. (12) In a word,
apart
from the improvement of the quality of
their family life, fathers' involvement in their
children's
lives is strongly related to
children's life-long well-being.
试题十一
一、题目:
11
Directions: For this part,
you are allowed thirty minutes to write a
composition on the topic
:
On
stress
.
You
should
write
at
least
100
words
and
you
should
base
your
composition
on
the
outline (given in Chinese) below:
1.
随着生活节奏的加快,越来越多的现代人体会到了来自工作和生活的压力; p>
2.
太多的压力会给人们的健康带来危害;
3.
我的看法。
二、类型:现象解释型
三、方法提示:
1.
审题:第 一步:结合提纲推断题意:这是一个鲜明的观点。第二步:根据题目给出的提纲
可知文章
应包含如下三个基本部分:
①现象部分:
随着生活节奏 的加快,
越来越多的现代人体会到了来自工作和生活的压力;
②解释部分:太多的压力会给人们的健康带来危害;
③表明作者态度部分:我的看法。
完全符合现象解释型作文的结构。
2.
选择王长喜十二句作文模板中的现象解释型模板。
3.
结合题意套用模板:现象解释四级作文模板。
四、范文与点评
1.
模板一:
①
It
is
true
that
________.
②
Nowadays,___________.
③
What
impresses
us
most
is
____________.
④
Of course, ________.
⑤
There
is
also
a
growing
concern
over
_________.
⑥
The
main
reason
for
this
is
______________.
⑦
What is more, ____________.
⑧
As a result, ____________.
⑨
Considering
all
these
reasons,
personally,
_____________.
⑩
On
the
one
hand,
___________. (11) On the
other hand, _______________. (12) In a word,
________________.
2.
范文
On stress
①
It is true that
as the pace of modern life becomes faster and faster, stress has gradually
become a natural
part of our everyday life
.
②
Nowadays,
not only middle- aged businessmen
but
everyone may become ill as a result of
stress if they experience a lot of worry over a
long period
.
③
What impresses us most is
that
many people are in the habit of rushing through life
and find it
hard
to
slow
down
and
relax
.
④
Of
course,
a
certain
amount
of
stress
is
vital
to
provide
motivation and give purpose to
life.
⑤
There is also a growing concern over
the potential danger due to too much pressure in
our living
and working conditions
,
such as overcrowding in large cities, competition for jobs and
uncertainty about the
future
.
⑥
The main reason for this is
that stress can cause car accidents,
alcoholism, and may even
drive people to suicide particularly in times of
depression
.
⑦
What is
more,
doctors agree that stress is probably the biggest single cause of illness in the western world,
because
when we are very frightened and worried, our bodies produce certain chemicals to help us
fight what is troubling us
.
⑧
As a result,
i
f we don’t use up these chemicals, or if we produce too
12
many of them, they may actually harm
us, especially the stomach, heart, skin, head and
back
.
⑨
Considering all these reasons, personally,
our living and working conditions may put us
under
stress and if the stress gets out of control it
can lead to ill health
.
⑩
On the one hand,
such
serious
conditions as high blood pressure, coronary heart
disease and stomach disorders all have
established
links
with
stress
.
(11)
On
the
other
hand,
when
you
can’t
enjoy
an
evening
with
friends,
when you haven’t time for outdoor exercise
, that is the time to stop
and join a relaxation
class, or take up dancing,
painting or gardening
. (12) In a word,
since we cannot remove stress
from our lives (it would be unwise to
do so even if we could), we need to find ways to
cope with
it.
3.
模板二:
①
Nowadays, wherever you go, _______.
②
As is known to all, _________.
③
In a word,
_________.
④
There
are
plenty
of
contributing
causes
among
which,
the
following
ones
are
particularly
worth
mentioning.
⑤
First,
__________.
⑥
Second,
_________.
⑦
And
consequently,
__________.
⑧
And finally, __________.
⑨
In
fact,
__________
in
the
long
run.
⑩
Besides,
__________.
(11)And
what
’
s
more,
__________.
(12) Therefore, let
’
s remember that __________.
4.
范文
On
stress
①
Nowadays,
wherever
you
go,
you
will
find
that
as
the
pace
of
life
becomes
faster
and
faster, stress has gradually
become a natural part of our everyday life
.
②
As is known to all,
not
only middle-aged businessmen
but everyone may become ill as a result of stress if they experience
a lot of
worry over a long period
.
③
In a word,
we cannot ignore
the potential danger due to too
much
pressure
in
our
living
and
working
conditions
,
such
as
overcrowding
in
large
cities,
competition for jobs and
uncertainty about the future
.
④
There
are
plenty
of
contributing
causes
among
which,
the
following
ones
are
particularly
worth
mentioning.
⑤
First,
stress
can
cause
car
accidents,
alcoholism,
and
may
even
drive
people
to
suicide
particularly
in
times
of
depression
.
⑥
Second,
doctors
agree
that
stress is probably the
biggest single cause of illness in the western
world, because
when we are
very
frightened
and
worried,
our
bodies
produce
certain
chemicals
to
help
us
fight
what
is
troubling
us
.
⑦
And consequently,
i
f we don’t use up these chemicals, or if we produce too many
of them, they may
actually harm us, especially the stomach, heart,
skin, head and back
.
⑧
And
finally,
such
serious
conditions
as
high
blood
pressure,
coronary
heart
disease
and
stomach
disorders all have
established links with stress
.
⑨
In fact,
excessive stress will do great harm to your health
in the long run.
⑩
Besides,
you
should Pursue realistic goals which are
meaningful to you, rather than goals others have
for you
that you do not share
. (11) And what
’
s more,
when you can’t enjoy an evening with friends,
when
you haven’t time for outdoor
exercise
, that is the time to stop
and join a relaxation class, or take
up
dancing,
painting
or
gardening
.
(12)
Therefore,
let
’
s
remember
that
since
we
cannot
remove stress from our lives (it would
be unwise to do so even if we could), we need to
find ways
to cope with it.
13
5.
模板三
:
①
As is known to all, _______.
②
For one thing,_______.
③
For another,_________.
④
It is obvious that __________.
⑤
There is an increasing concern over _________.
⑥
First of all, ______________.
⑦
In
addition, ____________.
⑧
Therefore, ____________.
⑨
As
far
as
I
am
concerned,
_____________.
⑩
As
we
all
know,
___________.
(11)
Furthermore,
_______________. (12) In a word, ________________.
6.
范文
On stress
①
As
is
known
to
all,
as
the
pace
of
modern
life
becomes
faster
and
faster,
stress
has
gradually
become
a
natural
part
of
our
everyday
life
.
②
For
one
thing,
nowadays,
not
only
middle-aged businessmen
but everyone may become ill as a result of stress if they experience a lot
of
worry over a long period
.
③
For another,
many people are in the habit of rushing through life
and find it hard to slow down and
relax
.
④
It is obvious that
a certain amount of stress is vital to
provide motivation and give purpose to
life, but excessive stress is harmful to
one
’
s health.
⑤
There is an increasing concern over
the potential danger due to too much pressure in our
living
and
working
conditions
,
such
as
overcrowding
in
large
cities,
competition
for
jobs
and
uncertainty about the
future
.
⑥
First of all,
stress can cause car accidents, alcoholism, and may
even drive people to suicide
particularly in times of depression
.
⑦
In addition,
doctors agree that
stress is probably the biggest
single cause of illness in the western world,
because
when we are
very
frightened
and
worried,
our
bodies
produce
certain
chemicals
to
help
us
fight
what
is
troubling us
.
⑧
Therefore,
i
f we don’t use up these chemicals, or if we produce too many of them,
they may actually harm
us, especially the stomach, heart, skin, head and
back
.
⑨
As far as I am concerned,
our living and working conditions may put us under stress and
if the stress gets out of control it
can lead to ill health
.
⑩
As we all know,
such serious conditions
as
high
blood
pressure,
coronary
heart
disease
and
stomach
disorders
all
have
established
links
with
stress
. (11) Furthermore,
when you can’t enjoy an evening with friends, when you haven’t
time for outdoor exercise, that
is the time to stop
and join a relaxation class, or take up dancing,
painting or gardening
. (12) In a word,
since we cannot remove stress from our lives (it would be
unwise to do so
even if we could), we need to find ways to cope
with it.
试题十二
一、题目:
Directions:
For
this
part,
you
are
allowed
thirty
minutes
to
write
a
composition
on
the
topic
:
College
Students Owning Mobile Phones
. You should write at
least 100 words and
you should base your composition
14
on the
outline (given in Chinese) below:
1.
随着生活水平的提高,
越来越多的大学生拥
有手机;
2.
大量手机泛滥校园的忧虑;
3.
我的看法。
二、类型:现象解释型
三、方法提示:
1.
审题:第 一步:结合提纲推断题意:这是一个鲜明的观点。第二步:根据题目给出的提纲
可知文章
应包含如下三个基本部分:
①现象部分:随着生活水平的提高,越来越多的大学生拥有手机;
②解释部分:大量手机泛滥校园的忧虑;
③表明作者态度部分:我的看法。
完全符合现象解释型作文的结构。
2.
选择王长喜十二句作文模板中的现象解释型模板。
3.
结合题意套用模板:现象解释四级作文模板。
四、范文与点评
1.
模板一:
①
It
is
true
that
________.
②
Nowadays,___________.
③
What
impresses
us
most
is
____________.
④
Of course, ________.
⑤
There
is
also
a
growing
concern
over
_________.
⑥
The
main
reason
for
this
is
______________.
⑦
What is more, ____________.
⑧
As a result, ____________.
⑨
Considering
all
these
reasons,
personally,
_____________.
⑩
On
the
one
hand,
___________. (11) On the
other hand, _______________. (12)In a word,
________________.
2.
范文
College
Students Owning Mobile Phones
①
It
is
true
that
in
the
past
mobile
phones
were
expensive
status
symbols
of
wealthy
and
important
people.
②
Nowadays,
mobile
phones have evolved
from
an
isolated
15
luxury of the
rich to the new necessity of the
common
people.
③
What impresses us most
is
that cellular phones have become more and
more
popular
among
college
students.
④
Of
course,
mobile
phones
are
not
only
a
convenient
communication
tool
but
also
a
fashion symbol for
those young students.
⑤
There is also a growing concern over
the
widespread
use
of
mobile
phones
on
campus.
⑥
The
main
reason
for
this
is
that
students
’
mobile
phones
frequently
ring
in
classrooms,
libraries,
and
reading-rooms
and
thus
disturb
the
normal
order
of
study.
⑦
What
is
more,
chatting
through
mobile
phones takes up not only
a lot of their time but
also much
money.
⑧
As a result
, this
may in
turn have a
harmful effect on their study.
⑨
Considering
all
these
reasons,
personally,
mobile
telecommunications
will
bring
great
convenience
to
students’
life.
⑩
On the one hand,
it provides the quickest way
to
contact
their
friends
and
families.
(11)
On
16
the
other
hand,
students
can
always
use
mobile
phones
to
send
and
receive
short
messages
and
look
for
information
on
part-time
jobs
and
employment
after
graduation
(12)
In a word, with proper use of
mobile phones,
students can enjoy a better and
more
convenient school life.
3.
模板二:
①
Nowadays,
wherever
you
go,
_______.
②
As
is
known
to
all,
_________.
③
In
a
word,
_________.
④
There
are
plenty
of
contributing
causes
among
which,
the
following
ones
are
particularly
worth
mentioning.
⑤
First,
__________.
⑥
Second,
_________.
⑦
And
consequently,
__________.
⑧
And finally, __________.
⑨
In fact, __________ in the long run.
⑩
Besides, __________. (11) And what
’
s more,
__________.
(12) Therefore, let
’
s remember that __________.
4.
范文
College
Students Owning Mobile Phones
①
Nowadays,
wherever
you
go,
you
will
find
that
mobile
phones
have
evolved
from
an
isolated
luxury
of
the
rich
to
the
new
necessity
of
the
common
people.
②
As
is
known
to
all,
cellular phones have become more and
more popular among college
students.
③
In a word,
mobile
phones
has
brought
great
convenience
to
students’
life
,
but
there
is
a
growing
worry
about
the
widespread use of mobile phones on
campus.
④
There
are
plenty
of
contributing
causes
among
which,
the
following
ones
are
particularly
worth mentioning.
⑤
First,
many teachers complain that students
’
mobile phones
frequently
ring
in
classrooms,
libraries,
and
reading-rooms,
thus
disturbing
the
normal
order
of
study.
⑥
Second,
chatting through mobile phones takes up not only a lot of their time but also
much money.
⑦
And consequently,
this
may in turn have a harmful effect on their study.
⑧
And
finally,
some students often had their phones stolen and were even attacked and robbed of it.
⑨
In fact,
mobile phones are not only a convenient communication tool but also a fashion
symbol for those young students
in the long run.
⑩
Besides,
it enables the students to be more
independent and to
conduct conversations in secret.
(11) And what
’
s more,
students can always
use mobile phones to send and
receive short messages and look for information on
part-time jobs
and employment after
graduation.
(12) Therefore, let
’
s remember that
with proper use of mobile
phones, students
can enjoy a better and more convenient school
life.
17
5.
模板三
:
①
As
is
known
to
all,
_______.
②
For
one
thing,_______.
③
For
another,_________.
④
It
is
obvious that __________.
⑤
There
is
an
increasing
concern
over
_________.
⑥
First
of
all,
______________.
⑦
In
addition,
____________.
⑧
Therefore, ____________.
⑨
As far as I am concerned, _____________.
⑩
As
we
all
know,
___________.
(11)
Furthermore,
_______________.
(12) In a word, ________________.
6.
范文
College Students Owning Mobile Phones
①
As
is
known
to
all,
nowadays,
mobile
phones
have
evolved from an isolated luxury of the rich to the
new necessity of the common people.
②
For one thing,
in
the
past
mobile
phones
were
expensive
status
symbols
of
wealthy
and
important
people.
③
For
another, cellular
phones have now become more and
more
popular among college students.
④
It is obvious
that
mobile
phones
are
not
only
a
convenient
communication
tool
but
also
a
fashion
symbol
for
those young students.
⑤
There
is
an
increasing
concern
over
the
widespread use of mobile
phones on campus.
⑥
First
of
all,
students
’
mobile
phones
frequently
ring
in
classrooms,
libraries,
and
reading-rooms
and
thus
18
disturb
the
normal
order
of
study.
⑦
In
addition,
chatting
through
mobile
phones
takes
up
not
only
a
lot
of
their
time
but
also
much
money.
⑧
Therefore,
this may in
turn have a harmful effect on their study.
⑨
As
far
as
I
am
concerned,
mobile
telecommunications
will
bring
great
convenience
to
students’
life.
⑩
As
we
all
know,
it
provides
the
quickest way to contact their friends
and families.
(
11)
Furthermore, students can always use
mobile phones
to
send
and
receive
short
messages
and
look
for
information on part-time jobs and
employment after
graduation. (12) In a
word, with proper use of mobile
phones,
students
can
enjoy
a
better
and
more
convenient school life.
试题十三
一、题目:
Directions: For this part, you are
allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on
the topic
:
Juvenile
Delinquency.
You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition
on the outline (given in Chinese)
below:
1.
随着社会的发展,青少年犯罪成了一个重要的社会问 题;
2.
青少年犯罪的原因是错综复杂的;
3.
我的看法。
二、类型:现象解释型
三、方法提示:
1.
审题:第 一步:结合提纲推断题意:这是一个鲜明的观点。第二步:根据题目给出的提纲
可知文章
应包含如下三个基本部分:
①现象部分:随着社会的发展,青少年犯罪成了一个重要的社会问题;
②解释部分:青少年犯罪的原因是错综复杂的;
19
③表明作者态度部分:我的看法。
完全符合现象解释型作文的结构。
2.
选择王长喜十二句作文模板中的现象解释型模板。
3.
结合题意套用模板:现象解释四级作文模板。
四、范文与点评
1.
模板一:
①
It
is
true
that
________.
②
Nowadays,___________.
③
What
impresses
us
most
is
____________.
④
Of course, ________.
⑤
There
is
also
a
growing
concern
over
_________.
⑥
The
main
reason
for
this
is
______________.
⑦
What is more, ____________.
⑧
As a result, ____________.
⑨
Considering
all
these
reasons,
personally,
_____________.
⑩
On
the
one
hand,
___________. (11) On the
other hand, _______________. (12) In a word,
________________.
2.
范文
Juvenile
Delinquency
①
It is true that
with the rapid development of our society, the children face a more tempting
world
than
ever
before.
②
Nowadays,
the
trend
of
juvenile
delinquency
is
on
the
rise
in
many
countries.
③
What impresses us most is
that the forms of crime range from stealing, fighting to
robbing and even murdering.
④
Of course,
horrible news of school violence in China can also be
heard from time to time.
⑤
There
is
also
a
growing
concern
over
the
complicated
causes
contributing
to
such
adolescent crimes.
⑥
The main reason for this is
that children are frequently exposed to shows
and reports about crime and violence
from various sources such as TV
, films and newspapers.
⑦
What is
more,
in china the
“
little emperors
”
who have always been the focus of attention at home
have great
trouble getting along in the outside world.
⑧
As a result,
young people are inclined to
rebel against the adult
world and commit stupid blunders if the society
does not show proper care
or respect
for them.
⑨
Considering all these reasons, personally,
juvenile delinquency is as much a fault with
the
young
as
with
the
society.
⑩
On
the
one
hand,
proper
instruction
and
necessary
psycho-consultation
should
be
available
to
young
people.
(11)
On
the
other
hand,
the
young
should
also
learn
to
be
responsible
for
both
themselves
and
the
society.
(12)
In
a
word,
the
successful
prevention
of
juvenile
delinquency
requires
effort
of
the
entire
society
to
ensure
the
harmonious development of their
personality from early childhood.
3.
模板二:
①
Nowadays, wherever you go, _______.
②
As is known to all, _________.
③
In a word,
_________.
④
There
are
plenty
of
contributing
causes
among
which,
the
following
ones
are
particularly
worth
mentioning.
⑤
First,
__________.
⑥
Second,
_________.
⑦
And
consequently,
__________.
⑧
And finally, __________.
⑨
In fact, __________ in the long run.
⑩
Besides, __________. (11) And what
’
s more,
20
__________.
(12) Therefore, let
’
s remember that __________.
4.
范文
Juvenile Delinquency
①
Nowadays, wherever you go,
you will find with the rapid development of our society, the
children face a more tempting world
than ever before.
②
As is known to all,
the trend of juvenile
delinquency is on the rise in many
countries.
③
In a word,
there is a growing concern over the
complicated causes leading to such
adolescent crimes.
④
There
are
plenty
of
contributing
causes
among
which,
the
following
ones
are
particularly
worth mentioning.
⑤
First,
children are frequently exposed to shows and reports
about crime and violence from
various sources such as TV, films and
newspapers.
⑥
Second,
in
China
the
“
little
emperors
”
have
always
been
the
focus
of
attention
at
home.
⑦
And
consequently,
they
may
have
great
trouble
getting
along
in
the
outside
world.
⑧
And
finally,
young
people
are
inclined
to
rebel
against
the
adult
world
and
commit
stupid
blunders
if
the
society does not show proper care or
respect for them.
⑨
In fact,
juvenile delinquency is as much a fault with the young as with the society
in the
long run.
⑩
Besides,
proper instruction and necessary psycho-consultation should be available to
young
people.
(11)
And
what
’
s
more,
the
young
should
also
learn
to
be
responsible
for
both
themselves
and
the
society.
(12)
Therefore,
let
’
s
remember
that
the
successful
prevention
of
juvenile delinquency requires effort of
the entire society to ensure the harmonious
development of
their personality from
early childhood
5.
模板三
:
①
As is known to all, _______.
②
For one thing,_______.
③
For another,_________.
④
It is obvious that __________.
⑤
There is an increasing concern over _________.
⑥
First of all, ______________.
⑦
In
addition, ____________.
⑧
Therefore, ____________.
⑨
As
far
as
I
am
concerned,
_____________.
⑩
As
we
all
know,
___________.
(11)
Furthermore,
_______________. (12) In a word, ________________.
6.
范文
Juvenile
Delinquency
①
As
is
known
to all,
nowadays,
the
trend
of
juvenile
delinquency
is
on
the
rise in
many
countries.
②
For one thing,
the forms of crime range from stealing, fighting to robbing and even
murdering.
③
For another,
horrible news of school violence in China can also be heard from time
to
time.
④
It is obvious that
with the rapid development of our society, the children face a more
tempting world than ever
before.
⑤
There
is
an
increasing
concern
over
the
complicated
causes
contributing
to
such
adolescent
crimes.
⑥
First
of
all,
children
are
frequently
exposed
to
shows
and
reports
about
crime
and
violence
from
various
sources
such
as
TV,
films
and
newspapers.
⑦
In
addition,
in
china the
“
little emperors
”
who have always been the focus of attention at home have great trouble
getting along in the
outside world.
⑧
Therefore,
young people are inclined to rebel against the
21
adult world and commit stupid blunders
if the society
does not show proper care or respect for
them.
⑨
As far as I am concerned,
juvenile delinquency is as much a fault with the young as with
the society.
⑩
As we
all
know,
proper instruction and necessary psycho-consultation should be
available to young
people.
(
11) Furthermore,
the young should also learn to be responsible for
both themselves and
the society.
(12) In a word,
the successful prevention of juvenile delinquency
requires
effort
of
the
entire
society
to
ensure
the
harmonious
development
of
their
personality
from early
childhood.
试题十四
一、题目:
Directions: For this part, you are
allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on
the topic
:
The
Problem
of
Piracy
.
You
should
write
at
least
100
words
and
you
should
base
your
composition on the outline (given in
Chinese) below:
1.
盗版现象日益严重;
2.
盗版对厂家,作者及社会的危害;
3.
我的看法。
二、类型:现象解释型
三、方法提示:
1.
审题:第 一步:结合提纲推断题意:这是一个鲜明的观点。第二步:根据题目给出的提纲
可知文章
应包含如下三个基本部分:
①现象部分:盗版现象日益严重;
②解释部分:盗版对厂家,作者及社会的危害;
③表明作者态度部分:我的看法。
完全符合现象解释型作文的结构。
2.
选择王长喜十二句作文模板中的现象解释型模板。
3.
结合题意套用模板:现象解释四级作文模板。
四、范文与点评
1.
模板一:
①
It
is
true
that
________.
②
Nowadays,___________.
③
What
impresses
us
most
is
____________.
④
Of course, ________.
⑤
There
is
also
a
growing
concern
over
_________.
⑥
The
main
reason
for
this
is
______________.
⑦
What is more, ____________.
⑧
As a result, ____________.
⑨
Considering
all
these
reasons,
personally,
_____________.
⑩
On
the
one
hand,
___________. (11) On the
other hand, _______________. (12)In a word,
________________.
2.
范文
The
Problem of Piracy
①
It is true that
piracy is still a major and serious problem in China.
②
Nowadays,
books,
tapes, DVDs and other high-tech
products ,especially software and music files in
the mp3 format
22
all have been pirated.
③
What impresses us most is
that when a new product comes into market,
very
probably,
its
pirated
counterpart
will
soon
make
its
appearance
in
the
market
too.
④
Of
course,
p
iracy is against the Copyright Law and violates the intellectual property right.
⑤
There is also a growing
concern over
the harmful impact of piracy on producers, authors
and even our
society as a whole.
⑥
The main reason for this is
that the pirated products often
cost much less than the
genuine ones and sell pretty well in spite of
their relatively poor quality,
thus
causing big losses to the legitimate producers and
authors.
⑦
What is more,
piracy, an act of
disrespect
for
intellectual
property,
damages
our
country
’
s
image,
which
puts
our
country
in
a
disadvantageous
position in some international
negotiations.
⑧
As a result,
more than one in four
software
companies
in
China
believes
that
piracy
is
the
biggest
barrier
to
the
development
of
China's
software industry, according to a report on
People's Daily newspaper.
⑨
Considering
all
these
reasons,
personally,
I
think
we
have
a
long
way
to
go
to
fight
against
piracy
due
to
China's
consumer
culture.
⑩
On
the
one
hand,
consumers
have
not
developed the
consciousness to resist the pirated products and
rather, they tend to be tempted by
the
great
gap
between
the
two
prices.
⑩
On
the
one
hand,
government
have
adopted
some
effective
measures
to
tackle
this
problem,
but
some
writers
and
producers
are
forced
to
suffer
piracy in silence to avoid the troubles
of lawsuits.
(12) In a word,
only when the consumers think
it is immoral
to buy pirated products can piracy be checked in
China.
3.
模板二:
①
Nowadays,
wherever
you
go,
_______.
②
As
is
known
to
all,
_________.
③
In
a
word,
_________.
④
There
are
plenty
of
contributing
causes
among
which,
the
following
ones
are
particularly
worth
mentioning.
⑤
First,
__________.
⑥
Second,
_________.
⑦
And
consequently,
__________.
⑧
And finally, __________.
⑨
In fact, __________ in the long run.
⑩
Besides, __________. (11) And what
’
s more,
__________.
(12) Therefore, let
’
s remember that __________.
4.
范文
The Problem of Piracy
①
Nowadays, wherever you go,
you will find that piracy is still a major and serious problem
in
China.
②
As
is
known
to
all,
books,
tapes,
DVDs
and
other
high-tech
products
,especially
software and music
files in the mp3 format all have been
pirated.
③
In a word
,
there is a growing
concern over the harmful impact of
piracy on producers, authors and even our society
as a whole.
④
There
are
plenty
of
contributing
causes
among
which,
the
following
ones
are
particularly
worth
mentioning
.
⑤
First,
the
pirated
products
often
cost
much
less
than
the
genuine ones and sell pretty
well in spite of their relatively poor quality,
thus causing big losses to
the
legitimate
producers
and
authors.
⑥
Second
,
piracy,
an
act
of
disrespect
for
intellectual
property, damages our
country
’
s image, which puts our country in a disadvantageous position in
some international negotiations.
⑦
And consequently,
more than one in four software companies
in China
believes that piracy is the biggest barrier to the
development of China's software industry,
according to a report on People's Daily
newspaper.
⑧
And finally
,
piracy gives rise to low-quality
books, software, Vcds, etc
and what
’
s worse, there is no way to trace the sources.
23
⑨
In fact,
due to China's consumer culture
it is a massive task to fight against piracy
in the
long
run.
⑩
Besides,
consumers have not developed the consciousness to resist the pirated goods
and
rather,
they
tend
to
be
tempted
by
the
great
gap
between
the
two
prices.
(11)
And
what
’
s
more
,
government have adopted some effective measures to tackle this problem, but some writers
and
producers
are
forced
to
suffer
piracy
in
silence
to
avoid
the
troubles
of
lawsuits.
(12)
Therefore,
let
’
s
remember
that
only
when
the
consumers
think
it
is
immoral
to
buy
pirated
products can piracy be
checked in China.
5.
模板三
:
①
As is known to all, _______.
②
For one thing,_______.
③
For another,_________.
④
It is obvious that __________.
⑤
There is an increasing concern over _________.
⑥
First of all, ______________.
⑦
In
addition, ____________.
⑧
Therefore, ____________.
⑨
As
far
as
I
am
concerned,
_____________.
⑩
As
we
all
know,
___________.
(11)
Furthermore,
_______________. (12) In a word, ________________.
6.
范文
The
Problem of Piracy
①
As is known to all
,
piracy is still a major and serious
problem in China.
②
For one thing,
nowadays, books, tapes, DVDs and other
high-tech products ,especially software and music
files
in the mp3 format all have been
pirated.
③
For another,
when a new product comes into market,
very
probably,
its
pirated
counterpart
will
soon
make
its
appearance
in
the
market
too.
④
It
is
obvious
that
p
iracy is against the Copyright Law and violates the intellectual property right.
⑤
There is an increasing concern over
the harmful impact of piracy on producers, authors
and
even our society as a whole.
⑥
First of all,
the pirated products often cost much less than the
genuine ones and sell pretty well in
spite of their relatively poor quality, thus
causing big losses to
the legitimate
producers and authors.
⑦
In addition,
piracy, an act of disrespect for intellectual
property, damages our
country
’
s image, which puts our country in a disadvantageous position in
some
international
negotiations.
⑧
Therefore,
more
than
one
in
four
software
companies
in
China believes that piracy is
the biggest barrier to the development of China's
software industry,
according to a
report on People's Daily newspaper.
⑨
As far as I am concerned
,
I think we have a
long way to go to fight against piracy due to
China's consumer culture.
⑩
As we all know,
consumers have not developed the consciousness to
resist the pirated products and rather,
they tend to be tempted by the great gap between
the two
prices.
(11)
Furthermore,
government
have
adopted
some
effective
measures
to
tackle
this
problem, but some writers
and producers are forced to suffer piracy in
silence to avoid the troubles
of
lawsuits.
(12) In a word,
only when the consumers think it is immoral to buy pirated products
can piracy be checked in
China.
试题十五
一、题目:
Directions: For
this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write
a composition on the
topic
:
On Job-hopping
. You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on
24
the outline (given in
Chinese) below:
1.
随着社会的快速发展,不少人喜 欢经常更换工作,即跳槽;
2.
跳槽对求职者的影响及表现;
3.
我的看法。
二、类型:现象解释型
三、方法提示:
1.
审题:第 一步:结合提纲推断题意:这是一个鲜明的观点。第二步:根据题目给出的提纲
可知文章
应包含如下三个基本部分:
①现象部分:随着社会的快速发展,不少人喜欢经常更换工作,即跳槽;
②解释部分:跳槽对求职者的影响及表现;
③表明作者态度部分:我的看法。
完全符合现象解释型作文的结构。
2.
选择王长喜十二句作文模板中的现象解释型模板。
3.
结合题意套用模板:现象解释四级作文模板。
四、范文与点评
1.
模板一:
①
It
is
true
that
________.
②
Nowadays,___________.
③
What
impresses
us
most
is
____________.
④
Of course, ________.
⑤
There
is
also
a
growing
concern
over
_________.
⑥
The
main
reason
for
this
is
______________.
⑦
What is more, ____________.
⑧
As a result, ____________.
⑨
Considering
all
these
reasons,
personally,
_____________.
⑩
On
the
one
hand,
___________. (11) On the
other hand, _______________. (12) In a word,
________________.
2.
范文
On Job-
hopping
①
It
is
true
that
with
the
pace
of
modern
life
becoming
faster
and
faster,
many
people
change
their
jobs
frequently
.
②
Nowadays,
it
is
not
easy
for
young
people
to
stick
to
their
positions all the time like their
parents or grandparents used to do
.
③
What impresses us most is
that
a
lot
of
people
are
in
the
habit
of
job- hopping,
for
they
always
pursue
what
is
new
and
stimulating
.
④
Of
course,
job- hopping
may
bring
you
some
benefits
such
as
more
money
and
new
acquaintances
.
⑤
There
is
also
a
growing
concern
over
the
impact
of
job-hopping
on
the
persons
who
move from job to job
.
⑥
The main reason for this is
that job hopping indicates that some people
don't select
their jobs carefully, or they don't have a commitment to their jobs
.
⑦
What is more,
job hopping also shows that such
persons can't solve problems, or maybe that they
cause problems
.
⑧
As a result,
a record of job hopping makes it very difficult to get another job.
⑨
Considering
all
these
reasons,
personally,
I
don
’
t
mean
that
you
should
never
change
jobs,
but
I am not in favor of constant job-hopping
.
⑩
On the one hand,
constant job hopping is
not good for one
’
s career advance because
job hoppers are usually hired at the same or a lower
level
and rarely move up in a job.
(11) On the other hand,
I believe in a famous saying,
“
Jack of
25
all trades, master of
none.
”
(12) In a word,
you should be careful about job-hopping
and
when
you
decide you must change, take your time to choose a
job good for your career goals
.
3.
模板二:
①
Nowadays,
wherever
you
go,
_______.
②
As
is
known
to
all,
_________.
③
In
a
④
There
are
plenty
of
contributing
causes
among
which,
the
following
ones
are
particularly
worth
mentioning.
⑤
First,
__________.
⑥
Second,
_________.
⑦
And
consequently,
__________.
⑧
And finally, __________.
⑨
In fact, __________ in the long run.
⑩
Besides, __________. (11) And what
’
s more,
__________.
(12) Therefore, let
’
s remember that __________.
4.
范文
On Job-
hopping
①
Nowadays, wherever you go,
you will find that
with the pace of modern life becoming
faster
and faster, many people change their jobs
frequently
.
②
As is known to all,
it is not easy
for young
people to stick to their positions all the time
like our parents and grandparents used to
do.
③
In
a
word,
job-hopping
may
bring
you
some
benefits
such
as
more
money
and
new
acquaintances
,
bu
t
there is a growing concern over
the impact of job-hopping
on the persons who
move from job to
job
.
④
There
are
plenty
of
contributing
causes
among
which,
the
following
ones
are
particularly
worth
mentioning.
⑤
First,
job
hopping
indicates
that
some
people
don't
select
their jobs
carefully, or they don't have a commitment to
their jobs
.
⑥
Second,
Job hopping also
shows
that
such
people
can't
solve
problems,
or
maybe
that
they
cause
problems
.
⑦
And
consequently,
a record of job hopping makes it very difficult to get another job
.
⑧
And finally,
job hoppers often end up in jobs that
aren't right for them and then they have to change
again.
⑨
In
fact,
constant
job hopping
is
not good
for
one
’
s
career
advance
in
the
long
run.
⑩
Besides,
as the famous saying goes,
“
Jack of all trades, master of none
’’
. (11) And what
’
s more,
job
hoppers
are
usually
hired
at
the
same
or
a
lower
level
and
rarely
move
up
in
a
job
.
(12)
Therefore, let
’
s remember that
job-hopping is not always a good thing as some people imagine
and
when you decide you must change, take your time to choose a job good for your career goals
.
5.
模板三
:
①
As is known to all, _______.
②
For one thing,_______.
③
For another,_________.
④
It is obvious that __________.
⑤
There is an increasing concern over _________.
⑥
First of all, ______________.
⑦
In
addition, ____________.
⑧
Therefore, ____________.
⑨
As
far
as
I
am
concerned,
_____________.
⑩
As
we
all
know,
___________.
(11)
Furthermore,
_______________. (12) In a word, ________________.
4.
范文
word,_________.
26
On Job-
hopping
①
As is known to all,
with the pace of modern life becoming faster and faster, many people
change
their jobs frequently
.
②
For one thing,
nowadays,
it is not easy for young people to stick
to
their positions all the time like their parents or
grandparents used to do
.
③
For another,
a lot of
people are in
the habit of job-hopping, for they always pursue
what is new and stimulating
.
④
It
is
obvious
that
job-hopping
may
bring
you
some
benefits
such
as
more
money
and
new
acquaintances
.
⑤
There is an increasing concern over
the impact of job-hopping on
the persons who move
from
job
to
job
.
⑥
First
of
all,
job
hopping
indicates
that
some
people
don't
select
their
jobs
carefully, or they don't have a
commitment to their jobs
.
⑦
In addition,
job hopping also shows
that such persons can't solve problems,
or maybe that they cause problems
.
⑧
Therefore,
a record
of job hopping makes it very difficult
to get another job.
⑨
As far as I am concerned,
I don
’
t mean that you should never change jobs,
but
I am not in
favor
of
constant
job-hopping
.
⑩
As
we
all
know,
constant
job
hopping
is
not
good
for
one
’
s
career
advance because
job hoppers are usually hired at the same or a lower level
and rarely move
up in a
job.
(11) Furthermore,
I believe in a famous saying,
“
Jack of all trades, master of none.
”
(12) In a word,
you should be careful about job-hopping
and
when you decide you must change,
take your time to choose a job good for
your career goals
.
问题解决模板
试题十六
一、题目:
Directions: For
this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write
a composition on the
topic
:
Eliminating
Illiteracy-A
Big
Task
for
China
.
You
should
write
at
least
100
words
and
you
should base your composition on the
outline (given in Chinese) below:
1.
中国消除文盲的任务非常艰巨,但意义重大;
2.
消除文盲的各种途径;
3.
我的看法。
二、类型:问题解决型
三、方法提示:
1.
审题:第 一步:结合提纲推断题意:这是一个鲜明的观点。第二步:根据题目给出的提纲
可知文章
应包含如下三个基本部分:
①问题部分:中国消除文盲的任务非常艰巨,但意义重大;
②解决部分:消除文盲的各种途径;
③表明作者态度部分:我的看法。
完全符合问题解决型作文的结构。
2.
选择王长喜十二句作文模板中的问题解决型模板。
3.
结合题意套用模板:问题解决四级作文模板。
四、范文与点评
1.
模板一
:
①
With the development/opening of
…
in recent years, ____________________.
②
So it is
27
of great importance for us to
__________.
③
On the one hand, __________.
④
On the other
hand, __________.
⑤
However,
what
really
counts
is
__________.
⑥
Firstly,
__________.
⑦
So
long
as
__________.
⑧
Secondly, __________ as __________ as possible.
⑨
Thirdly, __________.
⑩
Lastly, ____________________.
⑾
In fact, __________.
⑿
In a word, __________.
2.
范文
范文
Eliminating
Illiteracy-A Big Task for China
①
With the opening of
our country toward
the
world
in
recent
years,
it
is
widely
acknowledged
that
education
has
become
the
very foundation and the key
to the achievement
of
our
modernization.
②
So
it
is
of
great
importance for us to
push forward educational
development
in
a
comprehensive
way
and
improve
the
quality
of
the
whole
nation
by
eliminating
illiteracy.
③
On
the
one
hand,
high
illiteracy
rates
in
poor
rural
regions
have
made
it
difficult
to
promote
family
planning,
agricultural
mechanization,
science
and
technology.
④
On
the
other
hand,
without
the
knowledge and means to raise
productivity, the
poor will inevitably
become poorer and poverty,
in turn , is
more apt to increase illiteracy.
⑤
However, what really counts is
not to
点评
①首句通过短语
the
very
foundation
and
the
key
强调了教育的重要性。
②通过短语
push forward, in a comprehensive
way,
improve
the
quality
by
eliminating
illiteracy
提出观点
:
当务之急是全面推进教
育发展
,
尤其是通过消除文盲来提高全民素
质。
③
made
it
difficult
to
promote
指出 高文盲率
的主要危害。
④
短语
in
turn
运用贴切
,< /p>
从另一方面强调了
文盲与贫穷之间的恶性循环
.
⑤作为本段的主题句,指出最重要
的是采用
有效方式在全国范围内消除文盲
,
引出下文 p>
的具体措施。
⑥
及
⑦
句
中
的
a
nine-year
compulsory
education,
universal
and
reduced
用词准确
,
指出九年制义
务教育是最重要的措施。
⑧进一步提出应将中西部落后地区作为教育
投资的重点。
argue about the
significance of education but to
find
effective
ways
to
eliminate
illiteracy
throughout
the
country.
⑥
Firstly,
China
has
made great advances
in a nine-year compulsory
education to
protect people
’
s right to receive an
education.
⑦
So
long
as
compulsory
education
could
be
made
basically
universal
throughout
the
country,
illiteracy
among
young
and
middle-aged people will be greatly
reduced.
⑧
Secondly,
in
order
to
widen
the
nine-year
compulsory
education
program
and
improve
educational facilities
in the central and western
areas,
where
educational
conditions
are
inadequate,
t
he
government
should
invest
money
as
much
as
possible
.
⑨
Thirdly,
in
28
addition
to
the
funds
provided
by
the
government,
educational
departments
in
more
encourage,
advance, donate,
developed
eastern
areas
should
be
encouraged
⑨⑩
in addition to
,
afford and quit
school
生动贴切
,
从社会
to
help
the
central
and
western
areas
advance
及个人两方面再次指出有效消除文盲的
education
by
donating
money
and
teaching
途径
,
增强文章的说服力。
instruments, or
sending teaching staff there.
⑩
Lastly,
such
programs
as
Project
Hope
should
be available to those poor students who
can not
afford the expenses
of schooling and are forced
to quit school.
(11)
运用具体数据
85
million
illiterates,
90
⑾
In fact,
plagued by 85 million illiterates,
percent
表明了我国的现状
:
彻底消除文盲
about
90
percent
of
whom
live
in
rural
areas,
仍重而道远
.
China
still has a long way to go to enable all its
citizens
to
read
and
write.
⑿
In
a
word,
with
12)
总结全文
,
< p>提出希望。
more and more people
realizing the importance
of
education,
the
goal
of
eliminating
illiteracy
will be reached eventually in
China.
3.
模板二
:
①
There has been a discussion recently about ___________.
②
It is true to the present
situation that
____________.
③
But
___________.
④
So it is high time that_________________.
⑤
That is because _______________.
⑥
In
addition,
_________________.
⑦
Consequently, _______________.
⑧
As
is
known
to
all,
there
are
many
ways
______________.
⑨
Above
all,
_____________.
⑩
Furthermore,
______________.
(11)
As
for
me,
__________.
(12)
All
in
all, ________________.
4.
范文
范文
Eliminating Illiteracy-A Big Task for
China
①
There
has
been
a
discussion
recently
about
how
to
push
forward
educational
development
in
a
comprehensive
way
and
to
improve
the
quality
of
the
whole
nation
by
eliminating
illiteracy.
②
It
is
true
to
the
present situation that
with the development of
our
county
in
recent
years
,
more
and
more
people
would
acknowledge
that
education
has
become the very foundation and the key
to the
achievement
of
our
modernization.
③
But,
the
点评
①
首
句
通
过
短
语
push
forward,
in
a
comprehensive
way,
improve
the
quality
by
eliminating
illiteracy
提出观点
:
如何全面推
进教育发展
,
尤其是通过消除文盲来提高全
民素质。
②通过短语
the very foundation and the key
强
调了教育的重要性。
③
but
语气一转
,
指出中国的教育发展还远
29
educational
development
in
our
country
is
far
远不够
.
from being adequate.
④
So it is high time that
we adopted some
effective
measures
to
eliminate
illiteracy
⑤
made
it
difficult
to
promote
指
出
高 p>
throughout
the
country.
⑤
That
is
because
文
盲
率
的
主
要
危
害
。作为 本段的主题句,
high
illiteracy
rates
in
poor
rural
regions
have
指出最重要的是采用有效方式在全国范围内
made
it
difficult
to
promote
family
planning,
消除文盲
,
引出下文的具体措施。
agricultural
mechanization,
science
and
technology.
⑥
In
addition,
without
the
knowledge and means to
raise productivity, the
⑦句短语
in < /p>
turn
运用贴切
,
从另一方面强调
了文盲与贫穷之间的恶性循环。
poor
will
inevitably
become
poorer.
⑦
Consequently,
poverty, in turn , is more apt to
increase
illiteracy.
⑧
As
is
known
to
all,
there
are
many
ways
for
our
government
and
society
to
fight
⑨句中的
a
nine-year
compulsory
education,
against
illiteracy
.
⑨
Above
all,
a
nine-year
universal
用词准确< /p>
,
指出九年制义务教育是
compulsory
education
is
the
basic
way
to
最重要的措施。
protect
people
’
s
right
to
receive
an
education
and
compulsory
education
should
be
made
universal
throughout
the
country.
⑩
⑩进一步提出应将
中西部落后地区作为教育
Furthermore,
enough
money
should
be
投资的重点。
invested
to
widen
the
nine-year
compulsory
education
program
and
improve
educational
facilities in the central and western
areas, where
(11) afford and quit
school
生动贴切
,
从作者
educational
conditions
are
inadequate.
(11)
As
的角度再次指出利用全社会的努力共同
for
me,
I think such programs as Project Hope
消除文盲的途径
,
增强文章的说服力
.
should be available to those poor
students who
cannot afford
the expenses of schooling and are
forced to quit school.
(12) All in all,
with more
12)
总结全文
,
提出希望。
and
more
people
realizing
the
importance
of
education, the goal of eliminating
illiteracy will
be reached eventually
in China.
5.
模板三
:
①
There is an increasing concern over ___________.
②
It is certain that ____________.
③
However, ___________.
④
There are some possible reasons for the present situation.
⑤
Above all,
____________.
⑥
Then, _________________.
⑦
Finally, _______________.
⑧
In
spite
of
all
these
problems,
there
are
some
ways,
personally,
to
solve
them.
⑨
First
of
all,
_____________.
⑩
In
addition,
______________.
(11)
Therefore,
__________.
(12) Only in this way, _____________.
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6.
范文
Eliminating Illiteracy-A Big Task for
China
①
There is an increasing concern over
how to push forward educational development in a
comprehensive way and to improve the
quality of the whole nation by eliminating
illiteracy.
②
It
is
certain that
with the development of our county in recent years
,
more and more people would
acknowledge that
education has become the very foundation and the
key to the achievement of our
modernization.
③
However,
the
educational
development
in
our
country
is
far
from
being
adequate.
④
There are some possible reasons for the present situation.
⑤
Above all,
high illiteracy
rates
in
poor
rural
regions
have
made
it
difficult
to
promote
family
planning,
agricultural
mechanization,
science
and
technology.
⑥
Then,
without
the
knowledge
and
means
to
raise
productivity, the poor will inevitably
become poorer, and poverty, in turn , is more apt
to increase
illiteracy.
⑦
F inally,
in rural areas, the dropout of girls remains a serious problem since women are
responsible for raising children and an
illiterate mother does no good to her child's
education.
⑧
In spite of all these problems, there are some ways, personally, to solve them.
⑨
First
of all,
a nine-year compulsory education is the basic way to protect people
’
s right to receive an
education
and
compulsory
education
should
be
made
universal
throughout
the
country.
⑩
In
addition,
enough
money
should
be
invested
to
widen
the
nine-year
compulsory
education
program
and
improve
educational
facilities
in
the
central
and
western
areas,
where
educational
conditions
are
inadequate.
(11)
Therefore,
I
think
such
programs
as
Project
Hope
should
be
available to those poor students who
cannot afford the expenses of schooling and are
forced to quit
school.
(12)
Only
in
this
way,
will
the
goal
of
eliminating
illiteracy
be
reached
eventually
in
China.
试题十七
一、题目:
Directions: For this part, you are
allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on
the topic
:
How to alleviate
the chaotic traffic conditions in big cities, such
as Beijing?
You should write
at
least 100 words and you should base your
composition on the outline (given in Chinese)
below:
1
.北京的交通状况非常糟糕;
1
.
改善北京交通状况的措施有很多;
3
.我的看法。
二、类型:问题解决型
三、方法提示:
1
.审题:第 一步:结合提纲推断题意:这是一个鲜明的观点。第二步:根据题目给出的提
纲可知文章
应包含如下三个基本部分:
①问题部分:北京的交通状况非常糟糕;
②解决部分:改善北京交通状况的措施有很多;
③表明作者态度部分:我的看法。
完全符合问题解决型作文的结构。
2
.选择王长喜十二句作文模板中的问题解决型模板。
31
3
.结合题意套用模板:问题解决四级作文模板。
四、范文与点评
1.
模板一
:
①
With the development/opening of
…
in recent years, ____________________.
②
So it is
of great importance for us to
__________.
③
On the one hand, __________.
④
On the other
hand, __________.
⑤
However,
what
really
counts
is
__________.
⑥
Firstly,
__________.
⑦
So
long
as
__________.
⑧
Secondly, __________ as __________ as possible.
⑨
Thirdly, __________.
⑩
Lastly, ____________________.
⑾
In fact, __________.
⑿
In a word, __________.
2.
范文
How to alleviate the chaotic traffic
conditions in big cities, such as Beijing?
①
With the development of
our economy
in recent years,
traffic congestion has become a
serious problem in Beijing with
automobiles increasing by 10 percent annually and
roads being
extended by only 2 percent.
②
So it is of great importance for us to
deal with the serious traffic
conditions in Beijing.
③
On the one hand,
nowadays traffic jams may happen anywhere.
④
On
the other hand,
traffic accidents killed and disabled a lot of people every year.
⑤
However, what really counts is
that we should find effective ways to improve the traffic
conditions in Beijing, which do not
meet the requirement of the 2008 Olympic
Games.
⑥
Firstly,
the government should invest billions
of Yuan on the construction of a better subway
system.
⑦
So long as
it is convenient, people would prefer subway, which, in many major western cities like
London and New York, carry millions of
passengers everyday.
⑧
Secondly,
the city should widen
old roads and build new ones
as
many
as possible
.
⑨
Thirdly,
the large number of taxis should
be cut down, for in Beijing now many
taxis often travel empty, which means a great
waste of the
traffic
resources
and
also
adds
to
the
traffic
burden.
⑩
Lastly,
campaigns
should
be
frequently
launched
to
raise
people
’
s
awareness
of
the
traffic
rules,
because
in
fact,
wrong
behaviors
of
drivers, cyclists and pedestrian all
contribute to problems of congestion and traffic
accidents.
⑾
In fact,
many other measures are being or should be taken, but because of the cost, time
and effectiveness, not all measures
produce quick results.
⑿
In a word,
it has to be a joint effort
of the whole society to make the
traffic in Beijing go faster.
3.
模板二
:
①
There has been a discussion recently about ___________.
②
It is true to the present
situation that
____________.
③
But
___________.
④
So it is high time that_________________.
⑤
That is because _______________.
⑥
In
addition,
_________________.
⑦
Consequently, _______________.
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⑧
As
is
known
to
all,
there
are
many
ways
______________.
⑨
Above
all,
_____________.
⑩
Furthermore,
______________.
(11)
As
for
me,
__________.
(12)
All
in
all, ________________.
4.
范文
How to
alleviate the chaotic traffic conditions in big
cities, such as Beijing?
①
There
has
been
a
discussion
recently
about
how
to
deal
with
the
traffic
problems
in
Beijing.
②
It
is
true
to
the
present
situation
that
with
the
development
of
our
economy
in
recent
years,
traffic
congestion
has
become
a
serious
problem
in
Beijing
with
automobiles
increasing by 10 percent annually and
roads being extended by only 2 percent.
③
But
it is unwise
to criticize the increase of cars for
traffic jams; instead we should improve the public
transport.
④
So
it
is
high
time
that
we
took
some
effective
measures
to
alleviate
the
chaotic
traffic
conditions and improve public transport
in Beijing.
⑤
That is because
traffic accidents killed and
disabled a lot of people every
year.
⑥
In addition,
nowadays traffic jams may happen anywhere.
⑦
Consequently,
one has to leave home much earlier than ever before if he or she wants to go to
work on time or
catch a train.
⑧
As is known to all, there are many ways
to
improve the traffic conditions in Beijing.
⑨
Above
all,
the government should invest billions of Yuan on the construction of a better subway
system,
which,
in
many
major
western
cities
like
London
and
New
York,
carry
millions
of
passengers
everyday.
⑩
Furthermore,
the
city
should
widen
old
roads
and
build
new
ones
as
many
as
possible.
(11)
As
for
me,
I
think
drivers,
cyclists
and
pedestrian
should
raise
their
awareness
of
the
traffic
rules,
because
their
wrong
behaviors
often
contribute
to
problems
of
congestion and traffic
accidents.
(12) All in all,
it has to be a joint effort of the whole society to
make the traffic in Beijing goes
faster.
5.
模板三
:
①
There is an increasing concern over ___________.
②
It is certain that ____________.
③
However, ___________.
④
There are some possible reasons for the present situation.
⑤
Above all,
____________.
⑥
Then, _________________.
⑦
Finally, _______________.
⑧
In
spite
of
all
these
problems,
there
are
some
ways,
personally,
to
solve
them.
⑨
First
of
all,
_____________.
⑩
In
addition,
______________.
(11)
Therefore,
__________.
(12) Only in this way, _____________.
6.
范文
How to
alleviate the chaotic traffic conditions in big
cities, such as Beijing?
①
There is an increasing concern over
how to deal with the traffic problems in Beijing.
②
It
is
certain
that
with
the
development
of
our
economy
in
recent
years,
traffic
congestion
has
become
a
serious
problem
in
Beijing
with
automobiles
increasing
by
10
percent
annually
and
33
roads being extended by only 2
percent.
③
However,
it is unwise to criticize the increase of cars
for traffic jams; instead we
should improve the public transport.
④
There
are
some
possible
reasons
for
the
present
situation.
⑤
Above
all,
traffic
accidents
killed
and
disabled
a
lot
of
people
every
year.
⑥
Then,
nowadays
traffic
jams
may
happen anywhere.
⑦
Finally,
one has to leave home much earlier than ever before if he or she
wants to go to work on time or catch a
train.
⑧
In spite of all these problems, there are some ways, personally, to solve them.
⑨
First
of
all,
the
government
should
invest
billions
of
Yuan
on
the
construction
of
a
better
subway
system,
which,
in
many
major
western
cities
like
London
and
New
York,
carry
millions
of
passengers everyday.
⑩
In addition,
the city should widen old roads and build new ones as many
as possible.
(11) Therefore,
I think drivers, cyclists and pedestrian should raise their awareness of
the
traffic
rules,
because
their
wrong
behaviors
often
contribute
to
problems
of
congestion
and
traffic accidents.
(12) Only in this way,
can the traffic conditions in Beijing be alleviated and the
vehicles go faster.
试题十八
一、题目:
Directions: For this part, you are
allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on
the topic
:
How to
Tackle the Housing Problem in Big Cities?
You should write at least 100 words and you
should base your composition on the
outline (given in Chinese) below:
1
.随着大量人口涌入城市,大城市的居住环境越来越拥挤;
2
.解决住房问题的不同方案;
3
.我的看法。
二、类型:问题解决型
三、方法提示:
1
.审题:第 一步:结合提纲推断题意:这是一个鲜明的观点。第二步:根据题目给出的提
纲可知文章
应包含如下三个基本部分:
①问题部分:随着大量人口涌入城市,大城市的居住环境越来越拥挤;
②解决部分:解决住房问题的不同方案;
③表明作者态度部分:我的看法。
完全符合问题解决型作文的结构。
2
.选择王长喜十二句作文模板中的问题解决型模板。
3
.结合题意套用模板:问题解决四级作文模板。
四、范文与点评
1.
模板一
:
①
With the development/opening of
…
in recent years, ____________________.
②
So it is
of great importance for us to
__________.
③
On the one hand, __________.
④
On the other
hand, __________.
⑤
However,
what
really
counts
is
__________.
⑥
Firstly,
__________.
⑦
So
long
as
34
__________.
⑧
Secondly, __________ as __________ as possible.
⑨
Thirdly, __________.
⑩
Lastly, ____________________.
⑾
In fact, __________.
⑿
In a word, __________.
2.
范文
How to Tackle the Housing Problem in
Big Cities?
①
With
the
development
of
modern
industry
in
recent
years,
more
and
more
people
are
flooding into
cities and the cities have become larger and
uglier and more densely populated
②
So
it
is
of
great
importance
for
us
to
improve
the
overcrowded
living
environment
in
big
cities
which has
become more and more serious.
③
On the one hand,
a large portion of the population
in the rural
areas is flowing into the cities due to the need
for fewer workers in agriculture.
④
On
the other
hand,
many people are living in ugly and overcrowded buildings which seem more like
breeding boxes than houses.
⑤
However, what really counts is
how to solve the housing problem in big cities.
⑥
Firstly,
it is a good idea to build
“
satellite cities
”
in the suburbs.
⑦
So long as
the
traffic conditions could
be improved, people would be attracted
by the fresh air and beautiful scenery and big
houses in
the satellite city.
⑧
Secondly,
the government should knock down old houses to make room for
new apartment buildings
as
many
as possible.
⑨
Thirdly,
developing the underground will help
solve
the
problem.
⑩
Lastly,
the
government
should
attach
great
importance
to
solving
the
housing problem of low-and medium-
income urban residents, especially those living in
poor and
dirty slums
.
⑾
In fact,
the housing problem is very complicated, involving many other problems such as
transportation.
⑿
In a word,
the city government should make further effort to better the living
environment for the ever-
increasing urban population.
3.
模板二
:
①
There has been a discussion recently about ___________.
②
It is true to the present
situation that
____________.
③
But
___________.
④
So it is high time that_________________.
⑤
That is because _______________.
⑥
In
addition,
_________________.
⑦
Consequently, _______________.
⑧
As
is
known
to
all,
there
are
many
ways
______________.
⑨
Above
all,
_____________.
⑩
Furthermore,
______________.
(11)
As
for
me,
__________.
(12)
All
in
all, ________________.
4.
范文
How to
Tackle the Housing Problem in Big Cities?
①
There has been a discussion recently about
how to improve the living environment for
the rapidly expanding
population in big cities.
②
It is true to the present situation that
with the
development of
modern industry in
recent
years,
more
and more people are flooding into
cities
and
the
cities
have
become
larger
and
uglier
and
more
densely
populated.
③
But
not
enough
attention has
been paid to the ever increasing demand of the
large urban population for housing.
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