低碳生活从我做起作文(解读)大学英语作文题型分析

7min

审题和构思是非常重要的。这里包括对题

目的理解，确定 主题思想，在心中或书面拟订一个提纲等。

20min

的写作时间，平均

1min

写

5

—

6

个词，这个速度不算快。但是，假如前面

7win

没有构思好，边构思边写作，或 边写

边改，就会远远低于这个速度。

3min

的修改、定 稿时间，包括语法结构、单词拼写、标点

符号、大、小写，都要一一认真仔细地去做。在 卷面上作一些改动几乎是难免的，但要尽量

保持卷面整洁、字迹清楚。

文章的长度规定为

100

—< /p>

120

个词，

写的时候对句子的长度心中要有数。

如 每句

10

个词

左右，

就写

10

—

12

句；

如每句

8

个词上下，

就大约可写

13

—

15

句，

这样可以避免写完后发

现词数太多或太少，再去想办法增删。 这段内容规定了写作内容、写作时间、文章长度、命

题方式和写作要求。

写作内容包括日常生活和一般常识，

这样既可以避免偏向任何一个专业，

影响考试结果的客观性，

又可让学生在一定程度上重视日常英语。

日常英语往往最 能反映语

言共性。此外，我们的学生也需要具备与外国人进行日常生活交流的能力。

我们对于写作的要求就是要“意义连贯，无重大 语法错误”

，是让考生重视交流、重视

表达，并适当地注意语法结构。< /p>

所以，

最值得我们注意的是命 题方式。

我们务必要熟悉这些命题方式，

并根据这些方式

作一定的练习，

这样我们才能练出并且能更好地发挥我们的水平。

根据大学英语四 、

六级考

试大纲，写作题型可分以下几种类型：

第一节

段首句作文

所谓段首句作文，

又称主题句作文。

命题者一般在试卷上给出题目，

首句，

令考生根据每段第一句的思路写文章。

这种作文，

其段首句多数表达该段的中心思想，

即为主题句．

那么准确地理解段首句的含义就成了写好文章的

因为主题句概括了全段的

主题思想，

段落必须以该段首句为中心去写，

即重点突出、

紧扣主题。

而要领会段首句的含

义，

其关键是反复推敲，

找 出句中的关键词。

然后，

按照段首句所限定的主题思想围绕着关

< br>键词这个核心去扩展、深化主题句的内容

+

而各段的中心思想都分别从不同 角度、不同层面

去展开全篇的主题思想。

同时，

各段落之 间或保持平列的横向关系，

或保持纵向的平属关系。

但有些作文，

尤其是记叙文，

段首句不一定是主题句，< /p>

而可能只是文章或段落的提示句

或开场白。因而审这种题型的第一步是看段 首句究竟是不是主题句。

还有些作文题给出 段首句及结尾句，

有的则给出了段首句及段首词，

要求我们的考生根

据所给作文题目、

句子或词语续写文章。

因为从题目和段首句上可以很 容易地判断出文章的

体裁和写作目的，

所以它也是一种控制性作文。

在写作时，

要分清各段之间的逻辑关系，

做

好 结构安排，避免各段在内容和语句上的重复。

例

1

Dirctions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition abou Happiness in

three paragraphs. Y

ou are given the first sentence of each paragraph are required to develop the

idea

in completing the paragraph. Y

our part of the composition should be

about 100 words, not

including the words given. Remember to write clearly.

Happiness

What is happiness?

Happiness is of great importance in everyone's life.

Happiness is related to health.

【范文】

Happiness

What is happiness? To this question different people give different answers. Chil-dren usually

think

it

happy

to

eat

something

delicious

or

play with

interesting

toys, whileparents

consider

it

joyful

to

see

their

sons

and

daughters succeed. For

a

stamp collector,

a rare

stamp

brings

more

delight

than

delicacies.

For

an

inventor,

a successful

design

more

than

anything

else

gives

him

greatest satisfaction. Although happiness varies fromperson to person in its meaning, it is the goal

all people are pursuing.

Happiness is of great importance in everyone’s life. This chief attracticharms people to work

hard,

making

success

still

more

successfui

and

helping

the

disap-pointed

cheer

up.

It

always

promises hope by which some people go on living. Whenone has suffered a great deal and comes

to the edge of despair, it is often happiness thathe imagines will come that gives him the courage

and desire to struggle again.

Happiness is related to health. A

happy mind often makes a strong body. A

gooddoctor w

ho

knows it notices whether his patient is happy or not. If his patient is not hap-py he tries to make

the

patient

in

good

mood.

In

this

way

he

can

cure

the

disease

soon-er.

On

the

other

hand,

unhappiness

itself

is

a

kind

of

disease

that

hurts

health

and shortens

life.

It

is well

known

that

anxiety makes young people turn gray - haired and is appointment deprives the victim of ambition.

Shakespeare

said,

who

is

unhappy can

never

get

a

beneficial

result.

Let's

remember

his

warning and keep a smile on ourface.

例

2

Dirctions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition abou Pollution in

three paragraphs. Y

ou are given the first sentence of each paragraph are required to develop the

idea

in completing the paragraph. Y

our part of the composition should be

about 100 words, not

including the words given. Remember to write clearly.

Pollution is become more and more serious all over the world.

People are showing a growing concern over the problem.

Fortunately, measures have been taken to cope with the situation.

【范文】

Pollution

Pollution

is becoming more and more serious all over the example, the poisonous

gas

sent

off

by

factories

and

automobiles

has

made

the

air

unhealthy

for

people

to

breath. For

another example, waste water keeps pouring into rivers and lakes; as a result, many water lives are

dying

out.

Furthermore,

everywhere

we

go

today,

we

can

find

rubbish

carelessly

disposed.

Pollution is, in fact, threatening our existence.

People

are

showing

a

growing

concern

over

the

example,

there

is

an

increasingly

loud voice from the public calling for firm action against pollution. Scientists have

warned that unless effective solutions are worked out, the problem of pollution will eventually get

out of hand. Indeed, the earth is our home and we have the duty to take care of it for ourselves and

for our later generations.

Fortunately, measures have been taken to cope with the , many new laws have

been

passed

to

place

strict control

over

industrial

pollution.

Secondly,

a

large-scale

program

is

now underway to educate people to be responsible citizens in fighting pollution. Finally, the plants

and has encouraged scientists to work out more and better ways to reduce pollution. It is hoped

that all these measures will be effective and bring back a healthful world.

第二节

提纲作文

提纲作文是各种英语考试的主要题型之一。

它限题比较具体，

对作文的立意、

范围和体

裁进行了较为明确的提示。

博思环球论文网

提示我们的考生应把 重点放在如

何紧扣文章题目、以提纲为线索发展组织文章上。

这时要注意正确处理提纲材料中所给出的句子，

不要只是生硬地把汉语提纲译为英文或

把英语提纲直接套用，

因为提纲 材料中的句子只是提供各段的中心思想，

并不一定都作为段

首句。

应该用自己的话，

按照提纲材料的提示写出明确清晰的主题句，

写出段与 段之间内容

统一、思想连贯的文章。

例

1

Directions:For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition onthe topic My

Favorite Form of Tranport in Traveling. Y

ou should write no less than 120 words and base your

composition on the outline (given in Chinese ) below

：

①有的人喜欢乘火车旅游。

②有的人则喜欢乘船旅游。

③比较起来，我更喜欢??

【范文】

My Favorite Form of T

ransport in T

raveling

Whenever we have decided on the place where we will spend a summer vacation, there are

various

forms

of

transport,

trains

are

the

most

popular

means,

but

I

prefer

to

travel

ship.

Admittedly, traveling by train is much faster than by sea. But hardly anyone can positively enjoy

sitting in a smoky, stuffy and crowded train compartment for more few hours. Stuck among human

flesh,

you

either

feel

too

uncomfortable

to

say

anything

or

fall

asleep

most

of

the

time

to

the

monotonous

rhythm

of

the wheels

clicking

on

the

rails.

By

comparison, traveling

by

ship

is

an

interesting and rewarding experience. Low cost apart, it offers us a rare opportunity to enjoy the

beautiful

scenery

at

sea

or

along

the

banks

of

a river.

And

the

trip

itself

is

part

of

the

holidy:

during

the

journey,

we can

make

new friends, meet

interesting

people,

play

games

of

different

kinds ,or simply relax ourselves on the spacious decks.

A

ship

is

to me

a

place

of refuge,

a restful

pause

in

life,

and

this

is what I

badly

need:

to

relieve the strain of a whole year’s studies on the campus.

例

2

：

Directions:For

this

part

you

are

allowed

30

minutes

to write

a composition

on

the

topic

of

Population Problems. Y

ou should write no less than 120 words and base your composition on the

outline below

：

Outline:

Present state of population

Some big problems of population

How to control the rapid increase of population

【范文】

Population Problems