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热点
02
手机
手机无疑是今年的火爆热点之一,它为我们的生活带来了极大
的便利。今天,选择的
2020
年中考英语
写作预测话题
是:手机。
【预测题目】
(一)
随着社会的发展,人们的生活似乎离不
开手机,但是手机占据人们的生活带来一个重要
的问题,人与
人之间交流少了,亲情、友情应该如何维系?请谈谈你的建议。
要点所示
1.
在现代社会中,手机的发明改变着社会,手机起着重要的作。
2.
手机让人们的联系更加容易,让地球变小了。
3.
但过去人们常常交谈,而现在却是交流少了,玩手机的多了。
4.
有些学生用手机玩游戏,浪费许多时间,严重影响学习。
5.
你的建议。(至少两条)
可用词汇:
手机:
cell phone
智能手机:
smart phone
要求:
1.
词数:
80
词左右
。
2.
文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和所在学校的名称。
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【参考范文】
One
possible version
With the
development of IT information industry ,there has
been ic rise in cell phone,which are now
essential to millions of people. But
everything has two sides.
On one
hand,cell phones contribute a lot to daily life.
firstly,cell phones enable people to easily and
quickly
communicate with one another
whenever and wherever you are. Secondly, it is the
multifunction of cell phones
that help us survive those boring
moments.
On the other hand, the disadvantages can never be denied. The most disadvantages is the unknown effects on
health in case of
over
-
use. Furthermore, if people become too reliant on the use of cell phones, our face to face
skills may decline.
From my perspective, any new invention
has its drawbacks,but such negative aspects cannot
always diminish
its popularity. I
strongly suggest that we use cell phones
moderately and appropriately to make them more
beneficial.
【解析】
试题分析:考生首先要认真
阅读前面的提示认真审题,确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。
要求介绍。同
时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒:考生必须认真查验
是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
写作亮点:
这篇文章语言规范,叙述清楚,词汇及时态运用正确,能够把提示的内容叙述清楚,语句
通顺,意思连贯是一篇不错的文章。
(二)
根据下面几
点提示,写一篇不少于
80
字的文章。
1.
手机发明于
1973
年
2.
手机用于和别人交
流(
communicate with
sb
)
3.
青少年们能不能使用手机,
4.
使用手机的利与弊
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【参考范文】
The mobile
phone was invented in 1973. Nowadays more and more
people use mobile phones. It is very
convenient for us to communicate with
others. This is the advantage of the phone. On the
other hand, the ringing
sound affects
others, meanwhile it does great harm to our
health. So we should use mobile phones in proper
way.
But should the middle
school students take their mobile phones to
school? I think the answer is “no”. Because
the mobile phones usually disturb the
teachers and other students who like study. It may
make the students being
lazy, they may
do bad in their study.
【解析】
这篇短文要求我们根据提示
写出手机的优势和劣势,还要写出自己的观点关于中学生是不是应该往学
校带手机。我们
在写作时要注意:
1.
注意时态,要用一般现在时。
2.
要
把提示内容全部写进去,避免生搬
硬套。
3.
要注意句式不要单一。
【亮点说明】
1.
本文紧扣要求写出
了手机的优势和劣势以及作者的观点,观点准确,内容完整。
2.
本文句
式不单一,有
it
做形式主语
的句子:
It is very convenient for us to
communicate with others.
有定于从句:
Because the mobile
phones usually disturb the teachers and other
students who like study.
(一)
现在智能手机(
smartphone
)越来越
普及,很多中学生都有智能手机。请你根据下面的提示,写一篇不
少于
< br>80
词的英语短文,谈一谈你对智能手机的看法,可适当发挥。
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提示:
1
、在生活中你用智能
手机做什么?
2
、智能手机对你的生
活产生了怎样的影响?
3
、你对中学
生使用智能手机有什么看法?
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【参考范文】
The smartphone is becoming more and
more popular nowadays .I also have a smartphone. I
usually use it to
send text messages,
play games, watch videos, listen to music and
learn English .It is very useful and convenient.
In
fact, the smartphone makes my life
colorful. However, every coin has two sides.
Sometimes I spend too much time
playing
games on the smartphone and get bad results in
exams.
So I think we students
should use our smartphones properly and don’t use
them too much .We should pay
more
attention to our studies.
【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文,要求
根据内容提示,写一篇英语短文,谈一谈你对智能手机的看法。文章时态
主要用一般现在
时,人称主要用第一、第三人称。首先认真审题,看清题目中的要求和要点;然后根据提
示内容,列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达;然后紧扣要点,动笔写作。在写作时,注意连句
成篇,保持文章的连贯性,要层次清楚,要点分明,中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语
法的结
构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯;尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,最好不要写太
长的复合句;尽量选取
简单的易拼写的单词,确保正确率;词
汇、句式要丰富多样,可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查,
确保正确无误。
p>
(二)
随着手机功能日增多
,
越来越多的年轻人沉迷于手机娱乐活动
,
成为
“
手机控
”
一族。假
定你某校学生
,
请
根据以下提示写一篇
短文
,
向某英文报投稿。谈谈你对该现象的看法和建议。
沉迷于手机娱乐活动
(
聊天、看电影等
),
与朋友和家人的交流减少
,
“
手机控
”
的表现
离开手机会有焦虑症等异常情绪表现
……
p>
“
手机控
”
的危害
你的建议
对健康不利
,
影响学习
……
……
参考词汇:
a phone
freak
手机控
anxious (adj)
焦虑
be addicted to…
沉迷于
注意:
1.
内容须包括所提示信息
,
可适当发挥
;
2.
文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和学校名称
;
3.90
个单词左右。开头已经给出
,
不计入总词数。
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【参考范文】
Today, many people especially young
people are phone freaks. They are addicted to
playing with mobile
phones. They often
use phones to chat with others, watch movies, play
games, listen to music or take photos and so
on. In fact, they will be anxious
without phones.
However, it is
harm to their study. Because they spend too much
time playing with phones. They can’t have a
good rest. It’s bad for their health.
They don’t have time to do their homework, either.
At last, they can’t get good
grades.
In my
opinion, we must use it in a right way. If we take
it to school, we mustn’t use it during the class.
And
remember that study is
our first work.
【解析】
1.
题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。根据所给的材料,文中一
一描述
“
手机控
”
的表现,
“
手机控
”
的危害,及
个人的建议。
2.
例文点评:本文采用的是第三人称,采用的是一般现在时。准确运用时态,并保持主
谓一致。逻辑性强,
意思准确,句子通顺。
3.
高分亮点:
短语:
chat with sb
与
某人聊天;
spend+
时间
+doi
ng sth
花费时间做某事;
be bad for
sth
对
……
有坏处。
Because they spend too much time
playing with phones
句中
because
引导的是原因状语从句;
If we take it
句子:
to school, we mustn’t use
it during the class
句中
if
引导的是条件状语从句。
(三)
21
世纪
p>
,
许多发明改变了我们的生活
,
智能手机
( smart phone)
的出现以
及对我们生活产生了巨大的影响
,
作为一名中学生
,
谈谈你对智能手机使用的看法。请你根据下面提示
,
写一篇短文。内容包括:
1.
智能手机使用的现状
2.
智能手机对生活的的影响
;(
包活优点和缺点)
3.
呼吁大家合理使用智能手机
要求:
1.
不得照抄原文
:
不得在作文中出现学校
的真实名称和学生的真实姓名
2.
语句连贯
,
词数
80
< br>左右。
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【参考范文】
As we all know, smart phones are
becoming more and more popular and they are
playing an important role in
our daily
life. There is no doubt that we have benefited a
lot from smart phones
.
We can
read news
,
watch
films
,
take
photos
,
chat with
friends
,
keep in touch with
our relatives
,
or play games
to get relaxed
.
But every coin has two
sides
.
Smart phones also have
bad effects on people
.
They
are very common for young
people to
lower down their heads to check on smart
phones
.
They don't have
face?to?face communication with
others
,
which is
not good
.
What's
worse
,
more and more students
are so addicted to playing games using their smart
phones that their grades have gone
down
.
As for
me
,
I think we should make good use of smart phones
,
which is just a tool
,
not the main part of our
life
.
【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文。要求
根据内容提示写一篇短文,谈谈自己对智能手机恒用的看法。文章时态用
一般现在时,人
称主要用第一、第三人称。首先认真审题,看清题目中的要求和要点;根据提示内容,列
出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达;然后紧扣要点,动笔写作。在写作时,注意连句成篇,保持
文章的连贯性,要层次清楚,要点分明,中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构,
造句应
该符合英语的表达习惯;尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,最好不要写太长的复合句
;尽量选取简单的易拼
写的单词,确保正确率;词汇、句式要丰富多样,可以为文章增色
添彩。最后要细心复核检查,确保正确
无误。
(四)
日常生活中
随处可见人们用手机,许多初中生、高中生都在使用手机,手机的优点主要是方便通信,
甚至上网,还体现在突发事件疾病、交通事故的求助上;手机的缺点主要是影响学习和干扰他人,因此建
议尽量少用,特别是在学校里。
Advantages and Disadvantages of mobile
Phones
手机的利弊
< br>1
.手机使用的普遍性;
2
.手
机的优点;
3
.手机的危害及我的建议。
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