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09
交友亲情篇
（一）
初中生活即将结束，这三年一定给你留下很多美好的回忆．英语俱乐部征文要求写篇
110
词左
右文章描述你难忘的校园生活、
师 生情或同学情．
以及在临别之际，
对他们说的感激和祝福的话．
文
中不得出现真实的人名和校名．
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【满分范文】
How
time flies!Our junior high school days are coming
to an end
，
and
I'd like to say a lot to you all
who
have
helped
me
and
stayed
with
me
．
【高分句型一】
（点题）
Firstly
，
I'd
like
to
thank
my
great
teachers
．
They teach me not only how to learn but also how to be a man
．
Though they look strict and
serious
，
they are always kind to me
．
（感谢老师）
Secondly
，
I want to thank my friendly classmates
．
As
long as I have
trouble
，
they are always around me
．
I miss the happy days when we stay with each other
．
I
love all of
you
．
（感谢同学）
Finally
，
I'm going to thank my parents
．
They always look after me very well to keep me healthy
．
And
they often
encourage me to work hard at
school
．
【高分句型二】
（感谢父母）
（二）
初三学生
Sandy< /p>
面临中考，面对父母和老师的期望及每天堆成山的作业感到非常苦恼，昨天因
为看了一小时的电视和妈妈吵架，最后摔门而去。于是她写信给老师倾诉烦恼，请你根据下列提示
以老师
Nancy
的身份用英语给她写一封回信。
提示：
1
．如何舒缓目前的压力；
2
．如何安排好每天的学习和休息；
3
．如何处理与父母的关系。
注意：
1
．必须包括要点中所有提示内容，并作适当发挥；
2
．文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
3
．表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；
4
．词数不少于
90
词（开头已给出，不计入 总词数）
。
Dear
Sandy
，
I’m
really
glad
that
you
can
share
your
problems
and
feelings
with
me
．
Here
is
my
advice
．
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Yours
，
Nancy
【满分范文】
Dear
Sandy
，
I’m really glad
that you can share your problems and feelings with
me
．
Here is my advice
．
（点题）
First
，
it’s a good choice to take up a hobby to help you relax and reduce your pressure
．
【高分句型
一】
Second
，
you can make plans for your everyday life
．
After you study for about two hours
，
you can
take a walk outside and try to
relax
．
Besides
，
don’t stay up late
．
It’s not good for your health
．
Third
，
never argue with your
parents
．
You should learn to understand them and spend some time communicating
with them
．
Discuss your problems with them and tell them your ideas
．
They will help you find better
ways to solve
them
．
（建议）
In a
word
，
you will have a happier life with less pressure as long as you study hard and often talk
with your
parents
．
【高分句型二】
（总结全文）
Yours
，
Nancy
（三）
假如你是英语校报编辑徐玲．
校报收到初一新生
Ben
的来信，
他提出了自己面临的两个 问题．
请
你根据
Ben
的来信，每个问题 结合自己的过往经历提出一些建议并陈述理由．
Dear Xu
Ling
，
My name is
Ben
．
I’m a Grade 7 student
．
Recently
，
I feel worried because I have trouble
getting
used to life in middle school
．
I always feel lonely because I have few
friends
．
Also
，
I have problem remembering new English words
．
Can you give me
some suggestions to help me
？
Thank you
．
Best
wishes
，
Ben
注意
：
（
1
）回信应包括所有要点；
（
2
）词数
90
左右（信的开头和结尾已 给出，不计入词数）
；
（
3
< p>）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分．
Dear
Ben
，
I’m sorry
to hear that you are having trouble getting used to life in middle school
．
In your letter you
said that you
always felt lonely because of having few
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．
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Good luck with
everything
．
Yours,
Xu Ling
【满分范文】
Dear Ben
，
I’m
sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting
used to life in middle
school
．
（表示理解）
In
your letter you said that you
always felt lonely because of having few
friends
．
I think it is a good choice to
join some
clubs
．
In this way
，
you can make more friends who share the same interest with you
．
【高分
句型一】
I used to go to the tennis club every day and that brought me good health as well as many good
friends
．
What’s more
，
you’d better be friendly to others
．
A smile costs nothing but gives much
．
Also
，
you found it difficult to remember
English words
．
Reading more English stories can help
you learn English words
．
Our English teacher once encouraged
us to
see English films to help us remember
words
．
If you can develop a habit of keeping an English diary
every
day
，
it will be helpful
．
【高分句型二】
（问题和建议）
I hope you will find these useful suggestions
．
（希望）
Good luck with
everything
．
Yours,
Xu Ling
（四）
根据所给图画，用英语写一篇
80
词左右的短文．要求完整叙述图画内容．< /p>
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【满分范文】
Last week
，
my parents and I decided
to
go to visit my grandmother
．
We went to a shop at half past
nine and bought some
gifts
．
（去商店买礼物）
We went there by bus
．
It took us forty minutes to get to my
grandmother's
house
．
（
坐汽车去那儿）
As soon as
we arrived there
，
my grandmother and my uncle went
out to meet
us
．
【高分句型一】
（外婆和舅舅出来接我们）
My uncle prepared lunch for us
．
（舅舅准
备午餐）
At noon
，
we had a wonderful lunch together
．
（聚餐）
In the evening
，
after we said goodbye
to my grandmother and my uncle
，
we went home
．
（告别，回家）
What
a
happy day we had!
【高分句型二】
I hope we can visit them as often as possible
．
（感受）
（五）
假如你叫
Paul
，是第一中学九年级学生，今年夏天即将毕业．初中三年你变化很大，请根据表格内
< br>容，用英语写一篇短文，记录自己的成长过程，并谈谈你的暑假计划．
过去
1
．性格内向，不敢在人前讲话．
2
．对学习不感兴趣，成绩不好．
3
．不爱运动，沉迷电脑游戏．
现在
1
．乐于分享，与同学相处很好．
2
．各科成绩优异，
…
（举一例）
3
．积极参加各类活动，
…
（举一例）
< p>
暑假计划
…
（一至两点）
要求：
1
）词数
100
左右， 文章开头已给，不计入总词数．
2
）短文需包括表格中所有要点，并适当发挥．
3
）字迹工整，条理清楚，行文连贯．
4
）文中请勿提及你的真实姓名和学校．
I'm Paul
，
a Grade 9 student in No.1 Middle School
．
I'll graduate this summer
．
I've changed a lot during
the
last
three
years
．
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【满分范文】
I'm
Paul
，
a Grade 9 student in No.1 Middle School
．
I'll graduate this summer
．
I've changed a lot during
the last three years
．
In the past
，
I was too shy to speak in front of others
．
【高分句型】
（性格内向，不敢在人前讲话）
I
wasn't
interested in study
，
so I was weak in all my subjects
（对学习不感兴趣，
成绩不好）
．
What's more
，
I didn't
like sports
．
Instead
，
I was crazy about computer games
．
（不爱运动，沉迷电脑游戏）
However
，
I've changed greatly now
．
I'm willing to share things with others and I get along well with
my classmates
．
（乐于分享，
< p>与同学相处很好）I study so well that I'm a top student in our class now
．
【高
分句型】
（各科成绩优异）
Moreover
，
I take an active part in all kinds of school acti vities
．
（积极参加各
类活动）
L ast term
，
I even won the prize in the school English Writing Competition
．
During the coming summer
holiday
，
I'll help my parents do some housework and do more reading to
improve
myself
．
【高分句型】
（暑假计划）
（六）
“
百
善孝为先
”,
孝敬父母是中华民族的传统美德。某英语报社正在
举办以
“
弘扬中华传统文化
”
为主题
的征文活动
,
请
你以
“We should honor our parents”
< br>为题
,
写一篇短文参加征文活动。内容包括
:
What do you often do for
your parents?
Why should we
honor our parents?
How should
we honor our parents?
要求：
1
）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2
）必须
包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；
3
）词数：
100
词
左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
；
4
）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
We should honor our parents
As we know, honoring our parents is an
excellent tradition of
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【满分范文】
We
should honor our parents
As we know,
honoring our parents is an excellent tradition of
China.I honor my parents.I often help
my parents do housework in my spare
time.I think it's our duty to honor our parents
take much
effort to raise us, so it's
important for us to honor love us so we should
love and respect them.
First of
all, we should try our best to study hard to make
them proud of , we can help our
parents
with some housework because they are tired after ,
we should respect them and never
talk
to them 'd better communicate with them patiently
if we have different 's also
important
to tell our parents we love them.
【解析】
本题要求考生以
“
我们应该尊敬我们的父母
”
为题结合所给的内容要点，写一篇作文。这是篇材料作
文，主要内容要点已给，所以
考生要围绕着要点，进行写作，不要遗漏，当然顺序可以适当调整。
这篇作文又句型亮点
，例如：
As we know
，
…<
/p>
众所周知；
.I think it's our duty
to do sth
等等，其次文
章结构也比较清晰，例如第二
段的衔接词，
First of all
，
Then
，
Next
，使用的简单
而恰当。
（七）
< br>在阳光雨露里，我已长高、长壮，但这还不是全部，长大还应包括什么？是关心帮助同学？是体贴、
理解父母？是感恩、
回报亲朋好友？还是
……
成长的点点滴滴，
久久不能忘记。
请以
“
I am not a child
anymore”
为题，
记叙你在学习生活中经历的事，表明你已经不再是一个小孩子。
（注意：短文中不能出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。
）
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【满分范文】
I am not a
child any more
I am a 16-year-old girl now. I used to be weak and thin. But now, I am stronger and as tall as my
mother. The most important
thing is that I have learned to care about others.
It was a Saturday evening. My
mother is
ill, so I cooked the meal. My mother said the meal
was very delicious, although it tasted salty.
After supper ,my mother said:“ Dear,
you have grown up.” I realized I was not a child
any more.
【解析】
1.
题干解读：本文属于话题作文，写作要点从我的改变和生活中经历的一件
事展开描述。
2.
例文点评：例文采
用第一人称描述，时态主要为一般过去时。准确运用时态，并保持主谓一致。
围绕主题展
开作文，逻辑性强，句子通顺。
3.
高分亮点：
used to do
sth
过去常常做某事；
as…as
如
……
一样；
My mother
said the meal was very
delicious,
although it tasted salty
句型中
“
although”
引导的让步状语从句。
（八）
请你根据上面五个问题的内容及你的回答，结合以下提示，以
“How
Can
We
Protect
Ourselves
at
School?”
为题，写一篇
80-100
词的英语短文。文中不得出现真实校名和人名。
提示：
1.
谨慎交友。
2.
不参与打架斗殴。
3.
面对校园欺凌怎样自我保护。
参考词汇：
1.
self- protection
（自我保护）
2. bully(n./v.
欺凌）
3.
personal safety
（人身安全）
4. have violent behaviors(
打架斗殴）
How Can
We Protect Ourselves at School?
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【
写作思路
】
这是一篇话题作文，以
“How
Can
We
Protect
Ourselves
at
School?”
为题，写一篇
80-10 0
词的英语短
文。本文人称主要第一人称，时态主要是一般现在时。仔细
阅读所给材料，认真审题，确定主题，确定
要点，根据要点适当发挥，列出提纲。短文必
须包含提示内容。字数
80-100
词。要运用合适的连接词或
< br>过渡词，使文章具有连贯性。根据提示要点，列出本文的写作提纲。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有
无单词拼写、标点、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。
【满分范文】
How Can We
Protect Ourselves at School?
School
bullies happen in almost every school. In my
school, we sometimes have bullies and some
students
are hurt, so it is really bad
for us to bully others or be bullied at school.
We are supposed to stop any school
bully when we are in the trouble of it. For
example, we should stay
calm before a
bullying behavior happens. We should always be
friendly and helpful when making friends with
others.
Here
are
some
of
my
ideas
about
stopping
school
bullies.
Firstly,
we
will
learn
how
to
have
a
self-protection
because our personal safety is the most important.
Secondly, we should be peaceful with others at
all times and can't have any violent
behavior. Finally, obeying school rules is also a
way to avoid school bullies.
I'm hoping
that no school bullies will happen at school in
the future, do you think so?
（九）
学校英语社团正在组织题为
“My Family”
的征文活动。假如你是李明，请根据以下内容提示用英
语完成征文。
内容要点如下：
1.
三口之家，家庭幸福，邻里和睦；
2.
父母为教师，在校深受欢迎；
3.
分担家务，周末户外活动；
4.
相互陪伴，经常交流，良好家规助我成长；
5.
请补充说明一至两点与家庭相关的情况。
注意：
1
．
文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；
2
．词数：
60
–
80
；
3
．内容连贯，不要逐条翻译；
4
．标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：
popular
adj.
受欢迎的
activity
n.
活动
rule
n
．
规矩
My Family
I’m Li Ming.
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