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Direction:
如今微信（
）走进了人们的生活，为大家带来诸多便利，但有些人也随之成
为“微信控”（
WeChataholic
），请你就此事写一篇文章。你的文章必须包括：
·对此现象的描述
·你对“微信控”的看法
①
In
present-day
society,
Internet
has
played
an
important
role
（
play
a
vitally
important
rol
e
）
in
our
daily
lives,
while
the
new
form.
of
communication
“WeChat”
is
②
gaining
increasingly
mor
e
popularity
among
people.
Naturally,
a
great
number
of
people
have
become
“WeChataholic”
or
“phubber”,
which
means
they
keep
staring
at
the
mobile
phone
all
the
time
and
can’t
live
withou
t
it.
WeChat
surely
brings
us
a
lot
of
convenience
of
keeping
in
contact
with
others,
③
whereas
t
he
negative
effects
of
being
addicted
to
far
overweigh
its
advantages
.
To
begin
with,
the
frequent
use
of
electric
devices
does
great
harm
to
our
health,
especially
for
teenagers
who
are
physically
immature.
In
addition
,
④
people
who
are
obsessed
with
WeChat may
easily
neglect
the
people
around
them
and
being
isolated
from
their
surroundings,
which
⑤
poses
a
potential
th
reat
to
people’s
interpersonal
relationships.
⑥
Last
but
not
least,
the
overuse
of
interferes
with
the
normal
running
of
our
lives,
directly
reducing
the
efficiency
of
people’s
daily
work
and
s
tudy.
In
conclusion,
we
should
make
full
use
of
the
merit
of
WeChat,
and
reduce
its
demerit
to
th
e
minimum
as
well.
⑦
Only
in
this
way,
can
we
definitely
make
a
better
use
of
WeChat.
内容分析：本篇文章考察的是典型的议论文，
要求学生针对最近热门的话题“微信热”
进行现象
的描述和观点的阐述
。
所以行文可以大致分为两大板块。
第一部分介绍背景和描述现象，
说明微
信在人们中的流行，
以及从而诞生的微信控一族。
这部分考察了学生的描写叙述能力。
而第二部
分的议论则更考察学生的
逻辑和分析能力，可从几个方面按顺序阐述你对于微信控的看法。
精彩亮点分析：
亮点一：开门见山，
说明互联网时代的重要性，介绍背景。使用短语
sth
plays
an
important
r
ole
in
（在
…
扮演着重要的角色）。
亮点二：引入话题，微信走进了人们的生活。
Sth
gains
increasingly
more
popularity
among
people
（在人们中悄然流行起来）。平日里积累的短语在写作时需要有效激活。
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/p>
亮点三：议论分析，弊大于利。表示利弊的词汇可以多背诵一些，如
adv antage
，
disadvantag
e
，
positive
effect
，
negative
effect
等。可用
far
overweigh
表示“远大于”。
亮点四：使用定语从句丰富句式的多样性。
be
obsessed
with
表示“对
…
沉迷” 适用于许多话
题。
亮点五：使用
pose
a
potential
threat
to
（对< /p>
…
构成潜在威胁），不失为议论必备短语。
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