触动心灵的力量作文八年级英语作文指导和范文

题句置于段落的开头，可以使文章结构更清晰，更有说服力。

4

、参照提纲，紧扣主题句，完成各段落，充实文章容。

有了段落主题句后，

还需要顺着段落主题句的方 向，参照提纲中的思路，

完成各个段落。

引导段要能引起读者的注意和兴 趣，为主题段铺路架桥。主题段应围绕文章和该段的主题来

展开。展开的方式包括：

顺序法、举例法、比较法、对比法、说明法、因果法、推导法、归

纳法，和下 定义等

。可以根据需要任选一种或几种方式。还是以“The English Teacher I

Admire Most”为例，主题段中就能用到举例法、说明法、因果法等。

除此之外，这一步骤还需注意三方面问题：

（

1

）确保提纲中段落结构的思路与各段主题句的一致性。

只有这样 ，才能保证所写段落

不偏题，不跑题。

（

2

）要综合考虑各个段落的容安排，避免段落容的交叉。

3

）

用好连接词，

注意段落间、< /p>

句子间的连贯性。

要做到所写文章层次分明，

思路清晰，

而连接词起的正是桥 梁作用。

如果说第一、二步是对文章的构思，那么第三、四步就是真正 地“写”了。用词是否贴

切，文法是否正确，句式是否多变，文采是否有生气，关系到写 作者的语言功底和水平。

以下这几点仅供参考。

1

、在整篇文章中，避免只是用一两个句式，要灵活运 用各种句式。如倒装句、强调句、省

略句、主从复合句、对比句、分词短语等。

2

、使用不同长度的句子，通过简单句和复合 句，增强句子的连贯性和表现力。

3

、改变句子的开头方式，不要一味以主、谓、宾、状的次序。可以把状语置于句首，或使

用分词短语等动词的非谓语形式。

4

、学会使用过渡词。

如：

1

）递进：

further more, moreover, besides, in addition, then etc.

2

）转折：

however, but, nevertheless, after all etc.

3

）总结：

finally, at last, in brief, to conclude

4

）强调：

really, indeed, certainly, surely, above all etc.

5

）对比：

in the same way, just as, on the other hand, etc.

5

、避免重复使用同一单词或词组。

6

、注意运用固定词组、习语、谚语来代替一些词表达意思，以增加文采。

●把好最后的检查关

1

、是否切题分三点看：一是整篇文章容是否切合文章 标题要求；二是段落主题句的容是否

与各段落提示句容相一致；三是段落部的容是否与段 落主题句的表达相一致。如果发现任何

一个层面不切题，应该尽可能弥补，删除那些多余 的或不切题的地方，

但切忌动“大手术”。

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、是否连贯：检查上下文是否连贯，句子衔接是否自 然流畅，检验的标准主要是句子是否

通畅，该用连词的地方用了没有，所用的连词是否合 适。

3

、是否有语法错误：主谓是否 一致，动词的时态、语态、语气的使用是否正确，词组的搭

配是否合乎习惯。还是以“T he English Teacher I Admire Most”为例，根据此标题，文章

肯定用第一人称“I”写，一般性的描述用现在时，举过去的事例用过去时。

4

、是否有大小写、拼写、标点错误，注意卷面整洁。要提高写作水平，最根本 是要大量实

践，必须多读多写，注意博览和精读相结合，甚至可以适当背诵一些名句名篇 。另外，还可

选些文，悉心领悟，多加模仿，以逐步达到运用自如。

（三）中考英语作文简介

中考英语作文的题材 新颖、形式多样，主要侧重灵活性、实用性和多样性，主要有以下

几种形式。

1

、以图画提供情景的作文应以“看”为主，通过细心观察图中 的人物、景物、文字、数字

等，弄清写作的意图，通过分析思考把握逻辑联系，找出主题 并借助所给的文字，把图中的

信息转化成文章，但要注意，文章不能停留在图画的表面，

而要表达出提供情景的意图和涵，

即“文在图上、意在画外”，触景生情 ，文章才能有灵魂。

2

、以图表提供情景的作文要以“ 读”为主，首先要读懂图表中的数据、时间、编码以及相

互间的变化关系，对所给的信息 加以分析、推断、筛选、概括、去粗取精；在写作时目的要

明确，要注意容的准确性和严 肃性，尤其是图表中的数据、时间等不得有误。

3

、以 提纲提供情景的作文。这种形式本身的要点已经很明确，重点也很突出，只要把各个

提纲 加以发挥，注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性，就不会造成审题不清而偏离主

题 ，但要注意，文章必须覆盖所提供的各个提纲的要点。

4

、以书信格式提供情景的作文。首先要了解书信的格式，英文书信格式与中文有所不同，

1

）、一般在信纸的右上角写上写信人的地址和日期，地址应按从小到大的顺序排列；

2

）、

左边顶格写上收信人的；

3

）、正文部分；

4

）、祝愿的话；

5

）、写信人签 名。信的容一定要

按所给的要求写，不要漏写。如果要求你的信件用

E- mail

发送，请同学们务必注意，对方的

网址一定要写准确，多一点或 少一点都不能发送成功，可谓“差之毫厘，失之千里”。

几点注意事项

用英文写作不同于用母语那样得 心应手，常常会受到生词、语法、惯用法的限制，只要

同学们平时注意两种语言的异同性 ，抓住写作要点，也可妙笔生花。

1

、为了保证文章层 次分明、条理清楚，要把时间固定下来，如：记叙一件事要用过去时；

写经常发生的事或 对人物的描写，要用一般现在时。整个文章中的人称要一致，首尾呼应，

不要随意改动， 以免造成误解。

2

、不要为了追求“一鸣惊人”而不愿 使用熟悉的常用词，去找一些生冷的词汇，

对这些一

知半解的词你不会用 ，不知道如何搭配，结果适得其反，使文章显得生硬、不协调，甚至错

误百出，所以要实 事地把握，避免不必要的失分。

3

、注意不同语言的表 达习惯，也是写好英语作文的重要环节，

如“我的理想是做一名建筑

师” ，很多同学写成“My ambition is to do/make an architect”，“to do”表示“做”

或者“干”，“to

make”表示“制作”，而“做一名建筑师”则表示“成为一名建筑师”应

该用“b e/become an architect”；又如“看书、看报”应用“read a book/newspaper”，

而不是“see a book/newspape r”。因此，平时应该注意不同语言的表达习惯，望文生义或

一味生搬硬套只会闹出“我 的理想是制作一名建筑师”的笑话。

4

、有些同学因噎 废食，因怕出错而只写短句或简单句，写出的文章过于幼稚、空洞贫泛、

言之无物，要使 文章有血有肉就要把平时学的知识用进去，如：从句、非谓语动词和比较等

句型，关键时 用上一、二个，就能使文章不同凡响，更有文采，特别是对关联词的使用，如

“now that”、“not…but”等，会使你的文章逻辑结构紧密、层次鲜明、条理清楚，更能

< br>显示出你的英文功底，但要做到这些并非一日之功，要靠平时的不断训练和积累。

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【典型例题】

2005

年

5

月

15

日（周三，晴天）你的一次经历，请根据其容，用英语写

一 篇

80

词左右的日记。日记的开头格式已给出，不计入文章总词数。注意要点完整 ，语确，

上下文连贯，并适当发挥。

要点：

1

、下午放学后

2

、爸爸出差，妈妈生病卧床

3

、照顾妈妈，送医院，买药，煮饭、洗衣服等等

4

、后来受父母表扬

5

、自己对该经历的感触

May,15, 2005, Wednesday Fine

__________________________________ ______________________________________________

___________________________________________ _____________________________________

__ __________________________________________________ ____________________________

___________ __________________________________________________ _______________

【参考答案】

One possible version:

May, 15, 2005, Wednesday Fine

When I got home this afternoon, I found my mother was lying in bed sick and my

father was away on business. What should I do then?

Since Mother was ill, I should take care of her. I first sent her to hospital

and bought some medicine.

When we got

home, I

began to cook dinner and wash clothes.

I was praised by my parents later for this. I think I have grown up now and I

should help do something for my family.

【模拟试题】

一、按照相应要求完成下列句子

假如你是

69

中学的白梅，请你根据下列信息给曾在你班任教过的美国教师

Mr Brown

写

一封信。介绍你班及你个人的情况，并希望他有时间再来你 校参观访问。

去年

今年

班级

45

名学生

47

名学生

王哲同父母去了加拿大

情况

篮球比赛输了

上周篮球比赛赢了

个人

英语和数学不太

英语和数学取得了进步

情况

好

< /p>

要求：

1

、信中应包括所提供的信息，但可以适当发挥；< /p>

2

、不少于

80

词；

3

、开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Mr Brown,

I

ha

ven’t

seen

you

for

a

long

time.

____________________________________ ____________________________________________

_____________________________________________ ___________________________________

____ __________________________________________________ __________________________

_____________ __________________________________________________ _________________

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_______________________________ _________________________________________________< /p>

________________________________________ __________________________________

【试题答案】

One possible version:

Dear Mr Brown:

I

haven’t

seen

you

for

a

long

time.

I

miss

you

very

much.

Here

I’d

like

to

tell

you something about my class and myself.

As you know, there were 45 students in our class last year, but now the number

has reached 47. By the way, Wang Zhe, the tallest boy, has left for Canada with his

parents.

Do you still remember that our basketball team was beaten last time? You can hardly

imagine we won the first place last week.

And

you

must

remember

I

was

weak

in

both

English

and

maths

before.

Can

you

believe

I’ve made great progress in them? I often go to the English Corner on Saturday to

practice my spoken English . What’s more, I’ve become more and more interested in

maths with t

he teacher’s help.

What about you? How are you getting along with your work?

I hope you can visit our school again if you have time.

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八年级上册英语作文文

Unit1.

介绍你的一个朋友，表达他的兴趣爱好，

同时写清他的习惯，他怎么样才能保持健康

（不少于

60

词）

He

thinks

he

isn't

pretty

healthy.

He

doesn't

like

exercise,

so

he

does

exercise

once a week. He is very fat. He doesn't like vegetables, so he hardly ever eats

vegetables. He likes

eating

junk food. He

thinks it

is very nice. He eats them

about

four or five times a week. He loves milk, but he doesn't drink it every day. He only

drinks them two or three times a week. He eats fruit once or twice a week. But he

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sleeps nine hours every night. His lifestyle is not very well. But he knows healthy

lifestyle helps him get good grades. He tries to eats some vegetables and eats lots

of fruit. And he wants his parents to play sports with him. He wants to be the

healthiest.

Unit2

假设平是 你的朋友，

他目前的身体状况不好

.

他从来不锻炼，

他经常感到很紧，

很疲倦，

他爱吃零食，有时会胃疼

.

这几天，他感冒了

.

头很痛

.

请写 一封信给他，并给他一些建议

.

Dear LiPing,

I am sorry to hear that you are not feeling well.I think you should see a doctor

，

then you should take some medicines

，

and drink a lot of water. You said you are

stressed out and not listen to music and go to bed early

？

You should also try to less junk more healthy food

，

like apple

，

orange and milk .I think they are good for your health.

I hope you feel better soon

！

Yours×××

Unit3

邀请好友

Dear Marry:

I'm XXX(

你的名字

). Tomorrow is my birthday, I want to invite you to take part in my

birthday,

can

you

come

tomorrow?

The

party

will

begin

at

half

past

six

in

the

evening.

My parents, friends and classmates will come, you can see them in the party. If you

come to my birthday party, please make a phone call to me, I will be pleased that

you can come.

Yours, XXX

委婉拒绝邀请

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Hi Henry,

Thanks for your invitation.I’m sorry I can’t come to your party this week. I am

really busy This evening I’m going to my cousin’s birthday party. And tomorrow,

I

have

to

go

to

the

dentist.

（

Yuck!

）

On

Wednesday,

I

have

tennis

training

with

the

school

team.

And

I

have

to

study

for

my

chemistry

test

on

Thursday.

On

Friday

evening,

I’m going to the movies with some friends. Can you come to the movies with us on

Friday?

Write soon,

Sonia

Unit4

根据下列育英中学八年级（

1

）班学生上学方式的调查表，用英语写一篇短文

.

不少于

70

个单词

.

上学方式

学生人数

Bus

15

Walking

10

Bike

25

Car

0

There

are

fifty

students

in

Class

1,

Grade

8

at

Yuying

Middle

School.

Every

day

they

go to school in different ways. Fifteen students take buses because they live far

from the school. Ten students walk. They think walking is good for their health and

they live near the school. Twenty-five students ride their bikes to school because

they like riding bikes very much and their homes are not very far from the school.

No one goes to school by car

Unit 5

一些英国朋友要来参加你们班举行的英语晚会

作为主持人，你需要用英语准备一份

60-80

个 词的欢迎辞

.

Good evening! Ladies and gentlemen,

Welcome to our class and welcome to our English Evening.

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First of all, let me say a few words about our class. There are 60 students in our

class. 32 of us are boys and the others are girls. Most of us like English and study

hard at it. In our free time we often read English books, newspapers and magazines.

Sometimes we learn English on the radio and sometimes on TV.

This

evening

you'll

enjoy

some

short

plays,

songs,

dances

and

so

on

by

our

classmates.

I hope you'll like these programs and have a good time.

Thank you!

根据中文提示写一

60

字以上的

E_mail.

（开头已给出）提示：

Tom

邀请

LiPing

参加他生日的

聚会，但是

LiPing

的父母出差

(be out on business)

要到下个月才回来

(come back home)

，

奶奶又生病在床，

需要人照顾，

而且他得为了 即将到来的英语考试而学习

.

因此无法来参加这

一生日聚 会

.

他感到很抱歉

.

Thank

you

very

much

for

inviting

me

to

your

birthday

party.I’d

love

togo,but

I

can’t.

My parents are both

out on business.

They are

coming back next month.

And now

I

have

to look after my grandma because she is ill in bed. And I also need to study for my

coming English exam. I am very sorry,but I can’t go to your party. Thank you for

asking me.I hope you will have a good time.

Unit6

Unit7

请你写 一篇制作玉米花

(popcorn)

的小短文

.

注 意使用

first, next, then, finally

等

表示过程的词

.

不少于

50

个词

.

How to make popcorn

I like popcorn very much. I learned from my mother how to make popcorn. Now let me

show

you

the

ways.

First

you

put

the

popcorn

into

the

popper.

Next,

turn

on

the

popper.

Wait for several minutes. Then you pour the popcorn into the bowl. And put salt on

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the popcorn. Finally you can eat the popcorn.

制作牛肉治

:

First,put the cheese on a slice of bread. Then cut up a green pepper and an onion.

Add

these

to

the

sandwich.

Next,

put

some

mushrooms

and

the

beef

slices

on

the

sandwich.

Put the relish on the beef. Finally, put the other slice of bread on the top.

Unit8.

My Last Day Off

On

my

last

day

off,

I

went

to

Shanghai

with

my

whole

ai

is

a

beautiful

and modern city with many tall ,I went to Shanghai Sea World to see

some big fish and some big octopus and so we took a walk along the wide and

busy we passed a restaurant,I felt hungry,so we ate some delicious

Shanghai

lunch,we

took

some

photos

of

Shanghai

Beach,and

saw

some

beautiful y,tired but happy,we took the subway back to the hotel.

What a great vacation I had!

good friend Mike

I have a good friend. His name is Mike. He was born in September, 1988 in a small

town near London. He is a middle school student. He came to China with his parents

two

years

ago.

His

parents

are

teaching

English

in

China

now.

He

and

his

parents

like

China and Chinese food very much.

根据信息完成下列短文，

50

词左右

.

Name: Yao Ming Date of Birth:09/12/1980

1988

：

starts to play basketball

1996: joins Shanghai basketball team 1997: joins the national basketball team

2002: joins NBA

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