以虫治虫小学六年级英语作文范文【三篇】

小学六年级英语作文范文【三篇】

Does she like dancing? No, she doesn’t. But she likes

drawing and singing. Her parents love her. And all the

teachers and her friends like her, too. She says her hobbies

make her happy.

【要领点评】

这个篇写爱好的文章

,

小作者的写作思路很值得我们学习

,

他没有

具体写到刘莹的某一种爱好

,

而是 从学习到课余的多种爱好入手

,

对刘

莹的各种爱好实行了 粗线条地勾画

.

从“爱好”这个角度来看刘莹的话，

我们 会觉得这个形象很饱满。

小朋友们写这种“叙事写人”作文时，能够从两个角度下手：一

是具体地描绘

;

二是和上面小朋友一样，粗线条地勾画，二者各有所长，

另处在 行文中使用一些问句，使用一些转述的话，能够使作文更有灵

气，避免了平铺直叙的缺点 。比如上文的“Does she like dancing?

No, she does

n’t.”和“she says her hobbies make her happy.”

就是十分不错的句子，使读者眼前为之一亮。

【第二篇：Don’t be against the traffic 】

I go to school from Monday to Friday .I go to school by

bike at 7

：

30 in the morning .I must cross two busy roads .If

the traffic light is red or yellow,I

know I can’t cross the

road ,so I wait.

If the light turns green, I know it means “Go”, and

then I walk across the road .I always ride on the right side

of the road .I am never against the traffic rules.

【要领点评】