初二英语作文附答案

第四板块 书面表达
【2011北京】十、文段表达（15分）
75. 成长中每个人都要面对烦恼，并解决问题。假设你叫刘明，是美国中学生艾丽的朋友，
你收到了她的电子 邮件，请给她回复，回答她的问题，提出你的建议，并就此事谈谈你的看
法。
Hi! Liu Ming,
I’m so sad. Angela is a close friend of mine. This morning she wanted to borrow some
money from me. If I lend her the money, I’m afraid she won’t pay me back. I don’t know
what to do. Do you have the same problem? I need your help.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Alice

Hi! Alice,
I’m glad to hear from. ______________________________________________
_________________________________________________ ________________________
______________________ __________________________________________________ _
_____________________________________________ ________________
I hope what I said can help you.
Yours,
Liu Ming
【解题要点】
1. 回答她的问题
2. 提出建议
3. 对于此事谈谈你的看法
来信内容简要说明：
Alice表示自己的好友Angela问自己借钱，但自己不知是否该借给 她，担心对方可能不
能归还。问刘明是否遇到同样的问题？请刘明给自己一些建议，期待回信。
【解题思路】
依旧牢记结构、要点、逻辑、语法、亮点五大要素，审题一定要仔细， 看准题目中的
要点为：回答她的问题；提出建议；对于此事谈谈你的看法。
1. 结构、要点
文章第一部分，首先要做的就是在来信中找问题，很明显，只有一个问句
same problem?，所以作文中应该开门见山：I have the same problem. I have never met things
like this. 而且，来信的第一句话为I'm so sad.， 所以第一部分内容可以表示安慰 Don't
worry或者表示理解对方的感受
文章第二部分，根据第二个要点，提出建议。可能涉及到如下几种建议，如：
If it's not a lot of money, you can lend it to her.（如果钱不多的话，可以借给她）
If she wants to borrow a lot of money from you, you'd better suggest her to ask her parents for
help. （如果她想要借很多钱的话，你最好建议她去问她的父母寻求帮助）
If you decide to help her, then trust her, because she is your close friend.（如果你决定把钱借
给她的话，就要信任她，因为她是你的好朋友。）
文章第三部分，根据第三个要点，谈谈自己的感受，其实，也就是回答，即：为什
么要给出 如上建议的原因。如：
Friendship is more important than money, if your close friend needs help, you are supposed to

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give him her a hand and trust him her. （友谊和信任比金钱更重要，如果你的好朋友需要帮
助，你应该帮助他她，并且给予信任。）
We students don't have jobs to earn money but depend on our parents, when we need some
money, it's always a better choice to ask our parents for help instead of turn to our friends.
Meanwhile, we should be honest to our parents. （我们学生没有工作，不挣钱，需要依赖我们的
父母。当我们需要用钱的时候，问父母要总比问同学借要 好。同时，我们应该对父母要保持
诚实）
2. 逻辑
如果考生能够找全题 目要点，并且按照要点所给顺序写下来，结构清晰，那么逻辑应该
是通顺的。因为全文基本是按照如下思 路：现身说法，对于对方所遇到的问题表示理解 --- 提
出建议 --- 说明感受，即说明所提建 议的原因。其中，可以使用大量的逻辑连词和状语从句
表示因果、条件、转折等逻辑关系。
3. 语法、亮点
根据题目要求，回信文体形式大体为说明文，议论参半，所以下笔前首先确定文 章时态
大体为一般现在时态。由于文章话题属于生活化细节问题，所以文章内容一般不涉及难度过
大的词或句子，只要句式灵活多变，用词准确、丰富，逻辑通顺，语法完全正确，多用词组，
向批卷老 师呈现出扎实的语法功底和丰富的词汇量，也就是文章的亮点所在。

One possible version:
Hi! Alice,
I’m glad to hear from you.
Yes, I sometimes have the same problem.
I think if she really needs the money, you’d better lend it to her. You don’t need to worry too
much. She’ll probably pay you back when she has money. If you don’t lend her the money, I’m
afraid you may lose the friend.
I think everyone may have trouble in life and we should help each other. So when my friends
need money, I will try my best to help them. Maybe I’ll get it back, or maybe I won’t.
I hope what I said can help you.
Yours,
Liu Ming


世界在发展，文化在交融，英语已经成为人们沟通 的桥梁。怎样学好英语是我们一直在
求索的问题。几年的学习经历你一定积累了许多成功的经验，请从听 、说、读、写四方面谈
谈你的建议。
要求： 1. 词数：80—100词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
2. 字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。
How to learn English well
English is important and useful to us. How can we learn it well? Here are my suggestions.

One possible version:
How to learn English well
English is important and useful to us. How can we learn it well? Here are my suggestions.
First, we should often listen to the tapes, English songs and programs. Watching English
movies is also helpful to us. Second, we should speak English in class as much as possible. Don’t
be afraid of making mistakes. The more you speak, the fewer mistakes you’ll make. We'd better join

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the English club and practice with others. Third, we can read more English newspapers and
magazines. It’s good for us. At last, we should recite some good passages and keep diaries.
In a word, as long as （只要）we do more listening, speaking, reading and writing, we will learn
English well.

74. 假设你叫张华，是美国中学生鲍勃的朋友。你收到了他的电子邮件，请给他回复，回答
他的问题，提出你的建议，并就此事谈谈你的看法。

青少年吸烟问题在我国是个严重的问题。据统计， 12-15岁的中学生约有35%以上的吸
烟。一些学生只是好奇，而一些学生已经逐渐上瘾。请你对此谈谈看法同时说说吸烟的危害，
并对那些吸 烟的学生提出你的建议。
提示语：smoking, serious problem, among teenagers, It is reported, students from 12 to 15,
curious(好奇的), used to, difficult, give up, harmful, pollute
One possible version:
Smoking is a serious problem among teenagers in China. It is reported that 35% students from
12 to 15 smoke. Some are just curious about it when they see others smoking. Unfortunately, others
fall into the habit. And it is difficult to give up.
I think it is not right for the students to smoke. Smoking is bad for people’s health. Many
smokers died of lung cancer. It also harms people’s mental development, especially for teenagers.
Smoking pollutes the air around us, and it can even cause fire. Every year, some people die from the
fire caused by smoking and at the same time many buildings are destroyed by the fire.
I hope those students who smoke should give up smoking as soon as possible, it is not only
good for yourself but also for your family and people around you. You should put your heart into
studies, and play ball games with your friends to make yourself a happy and healthy teenager.

75. 今天网络对我们生活和学习的影响无处不在。假设你是网名Free Dove网络冲浪手，
是你时常浏 览的一个网站。这次你在上面看到这样两份留言，请你选择其
中一份留言回复，针对她的问题，谈谈你的 看法，并给出几点建议。
Message 1
Memorizing English words is a big headache to me. I want to learn to use English and
I also spend some time learning words by heart. But I find I have forgotten them more
quickly than I remember them. Are there any good ways to memorize English words?
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From Lily
Message 2
In my teacher’s eyes, I am certainly a good student in English learning. I listen in
class and finish homework in time. But I’m not happy with the results. I don’t know which
way is good for me to learn English. Hopefully, someone can tell me.
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From Betty

I had the same problem as yours. I don’t think you need to worry too much. I have some good
ways for you.
First, why not write down the words on a small notebook and go over them every day? I tried it
and now I find it difficult to forget the words. You can give it a try.

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Second, try to use them. If you can use them when you speak or write English, you will
remember them better.
Last but not least(最后), organize a list of words in a song or a story. It will help you remember
them better.
I’m sure you’ll find these ways helpful. Hope you’ll have fun memorizing English words.
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Hi! Zhang Hua,
I have a big problem these days. I spend much time watching TV in the evening after doing my
homework. So I often stay up and get up late in the morning. As a result, I usually have no time for
breakfast and feel tired all day. My parents don’t allow me to watch TV now and force me to go to
bed before 10:30. That makes me unhappy. I don’t think they understand me. Do you have the same
problem? What should I do?
I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Bob

Hi! Bob,
I’m glad to hear from you.
I used to have the same problem. Cheer up! I’d like to give you some advice.
First, stop watching TV and go to bed earlier. Watching TV too much is bad not only for your
eyes but also for your study. Second, you’d better get up on time and have breakfast. Breakfast is
the most important meal of the day. Finally, you should understand your parents. All parents love
their children. If you listen to them, I’m sure you will become healthier and won’t often feel tired. I
think it’s important for everyone to keep healthy and good living habits help a lot.
I hope what I said can help you.
Yours,
Zhang Hua

书面表达（9）
假如你是Daniel。请你根据下面的提示内容，给你的笔友Kitty 写一封电子邮件，向她
倾述你的烦恼，并请求她的帮助。词数要求：80词。
1. 着迷于网上聊天，并花费很多时间；
2. 经常回家很晚，不能按时交作业；
3. 父母和老师不喜欢这样，要我放弃这个爱好；
4. 为此常感到有压力，也不知怎么办才好，希望给出一些建议


Dear Kitty,
How time flies! I haven’t seen you for a long time. I am in trouble now. Could you help me
with my problem? I love chatting on the Internet. I spend a lot of time talking with others so I go
home late every night. I’m too tired to do my homework and I can’t hand it in on time. Both my
teachers and parents don’t like me to do so. They hope I can give it up. I feel stressed and don’t
know what to do. Could you give me some advice? Please write to me soon.
Best wishes,

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Yours,
Daniel
74. 某英文报纸的“English Study”专栏向中学生征稿，要求同学们 介绍一下自己英语学习
的现状，谈谈对英语学习的感受，以及进一步提高英语水平的打算。请你投稿。
提示词语：talk about, learn English, useful, important, work hard, improve

Dear Li Fei,
I’m lucky to have you as my host family. I will stay in Beijing just for two days. I hope to go to
your school and study with you. I’m interested in your courses and after-class activities. I also want
to know more about Beijing? Could you please show me around Beijing? Would you mind telling
me the two-day life and activities? I’m looking forward to your letter.
Yours, Jack

某英文报纸就中学生带手机（cell phones）上学话题征文，请你投稿。
手机在人们生活中扮演着重要角色，许多同学带手机上学。 请你谈谈同学们经常用手机
做什么，你有什么体会，你对正确使用手机有哪些建议。
daily life，convenient， keep in touch， pass notes, during the class， affect
____________ __________________________________________________ _____
Cell phones are very important in our daily life. More and more children bring their phones to
school. At school, students use cell phones to pass notes, read novels and listen to music.
Sometimes cell phones ring during the class. Some people think it’s convenient（方便的） for
students to keep in touch with their parents, so schools should allow students to take cell phones to
school. In my opinion, with a cell phone to school will affect the student’s attention, students
shouldn’t bring cell phones to school. They should focus on the lessons and other activities in the
school. ( 98 words )


英语老师要组织一个经验交流会，他要求每位同学写一篇发言稿。内容包括： 谈谈你对
英语学习的认识，介绍你是怎样学习英语的，你希望英语老师在课外活动方面开展哪些活动。
提示词语：important, useful, read, listen, speak, English film…

English is used widely in the world. I think it’s important for us to learn it well.
English is one of my best subjects. But at the very beginning, I am not good at it. Then I did a
lot to improve my English.
Firstly, it's very important for me to listen to the teacher carefully in class and make some notes
so that I can go over my lessons later.
Secondly, I try to catch every chance to practice listening and speaking, both in and out of class.
I’m not afraid of making mistakes. I try to read more in English. I believe that nothing is impossible
if I put my heart into it.
I am so interested in English that I hope my English teacher will hold an English party or
English corner for us. Then we can listen to beautiful English songs and see interesting English
films. I think we can not only improve our listening ability but also have more chances to talk with
others in English.

某英文杂志正在举办以“How do you get on well with your classmates?”为主题的征文比赛，

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假设你是李明， 请你写一篇短文参赛，文中请先简单介绍自己，然后说说你平时是怎样与同
学相处的，并谈谈你对同学之 间友谊的认识或看法。
提示词语：name, together, help, fun, friendship

How I get on well with my classmates
My name is Li Ming, a fifteen-year-old boy in Grade 3 in No.1 Middle School. I like making
friends and most of my classmates are my good friends.
At school, we not only study but also play together. After school we either do homework or
have fun together. Besides, we often help each other when we meet difficulties.
No man is an island, as the saying goes: a man without friends is an angel without wings. I am
sure I can fly higher and farther with the wings of friendship.

某英文报纸就农民工子女（Migrant Workers’ Children）话题征文，请你投稿。
假设农民工子女李明是你的同学，两年前他随父母来到北京 上学。他遇到了很多困难，
例如：学习成绩不好，同学不愿意与他同组学习，不愿意和他聊天等。为此， 他很不开心。
请你简单介绍李明的情况，谈谈你的看法以及该为他做些什么。
英文提示词语：a migrant workers’ child, classmate, difficulties, gradesmarks, same, a lot ……

Li Ming is a migrant workers’ child. He is one of my classmates. He came to school in Beijing
with his parents two years ago. He met a lot of difficulties here, such as his grades are bad and
some of his classmates won’t work in his group or have a talk with him. He is unhappy with that.
I don’t think they are right. Migrant workers have done a lot for us. They’ve cleaned our city
and built roads and buildings for us. We shouldn’t look down upon their children.
I will regard him as one of my friends. I will not only help him with his study but also tell him
how to get along with others. If he has time, I’d like to talk about everything with him and tell him
to cheer up. (137 words)

Emily将她的烦恼写在了博客上并征求大家的建议。假如你是Chen Lin,请了解她的烦恼< br>并写出你的建议，要求字数在60词以上，建议的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总字数。
建议应 包括：(1)孩子应尊重父母；(2)父母经验丰富；(3)父母的要求是对你的成长有好处
的；(4) 多同父母交流沟通。
Possible new words: respect v. & n. 尊重: responsible adj. 有责任感的; demand v. & n. 要求
Here are Emily’s problems on the Blog:
My problem is my parents. They never stop going on about(唠叨) how I should keep my room
clean, keep my hair tidy and wear smart clothes. They even make me do the washing-up after
dinner every night! None of my friends have got such terrible parents. What should I do?
Emily,

Hi, Emily. I think it’s lucky for you to have such good parents. I know what your trouble is. I
can understand you very well because we are both teenagers. We have the same problems. As
children, I think we should respect our parents. They are more experienced and they are responsible.
And their demands are good for us. Why not communicate with our parents more often? I hope I
can get good news from you soon.
Chen Lin

某英文报纸就中学生业余生活话题征文，请你投稿。

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“中学生业余生活调查”的结果显示: 目前很多中学生喜欢“宅”在家里 上网或看电视，而不
去参加户外活动。请针对这种情况，谈谈你的看法并给同龄人一些建议。
提示词语： surf on the internet, watch TV , play sports, do outdoor activities…

Nowadays, many middle school students prefer to surf on the internet or watch TV all day in
their spare time. But they don’t want to do any outdoor activities.
I don’t think this is good for us to do so. Instead, we should spend our spare time in a better
way. First, we’d better do sports regularly. By doing this, we could not only keep healthy but also
relax ourselves. It is also a good idea to go out with our friends. Such as watching movies, climbing
hills or joining some clubs.
In a word, as middle school students, it is really important to lead a healthy life.


成长中每个人都要面对烦恼，并解决问题。假设你是李晶，你收到笔 友Lily的电子邮件。
请给Lily写一封回信，回答她的问题，谈谈你的看法，提出你的建议。
Hi! Li Jing,
I am so sad these days. I have many friends and one of them is called Jack. We often study and
do sports together. But my parents don’t allow me to play with him, just because he is a boy. I don’t
know what to do. Do you have the same problem? I need your help.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Your Lily
Hi! Li Jing
I’m glad to hear from you.
Yes, I have the same problem as you. I think it common that boys make friends with girls.
First, you’d better have a talk with your parents and tell them that Jack and you study together
and learn from each other. Second, it’s necessary to introduce Jack to your parents and let them
know what kind of person he is. What’s more, since you have many friends, you can also study and
play with them and your parents will understand you.
I hope what I said will help you.
Your Lily

某英文报纸就“绿色出行”话题开展征文活动，请你投稿。
环境保护，从我做起。目前越来越 多的人提倡骑自行车出行。你对此有何认识？你对骑
自行车上学有哪些感受？对未来环境你有哪些好的愿 望？
提示词语：duty, protect, environment, ride bikes, go out, helpful, air, clean, do
exercise, traffic jam, hope, believe

It’s our duty to protect our environment. More and more people ride bikes when they go out
nowadays. It’s helpful to keep the air clean.
I usually ride to school. I only take a bus on a rainy day. On my bicycle I can breathe the
fresh air and do some exercise to keep healthy. On the other hand, I can keep away from the traffic
jam and make sure I can arrive at school on time. To my joy, I can also do a bit for keep the air
clean by riding a bicycle.
I hope everybody will join us and take care of our environment in this way. I believe the air
around us will be cleaner with the help of us all.


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假设你叫李利，是英国中学生大卫的笔友 。你收到了他的来信，请你给他写一封回信，
回答他的问题，并就这些问题谈谈你的认识和对学校生活的 感受。
Hi! Li Li,
My teacher asks me to write a composition about school life in China. I want to know
something about it. I hear your teachers are very strict with you. Is that true? How long do you
have to stay at school every day? And do you have a lot of homework to do after class? How do
you like your school life?
I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours, David[来源:Z。xx。]



?74. 假设你 是某学生杂志社的编辑Diana。收到了读者Steve的一封来信，信中倾诉了
他目前的烦恼。请根 据提示内容，给Steve写一封回信。
要求：1. 词数：60词以上。
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
3. 文章必须包含以下提示的三方面内容，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
与人交流 be active , group work，express ideas, talk with…
class activities…
参加活动
……
表达善意









Dear Diana,
I just came to a new school. And I can’t get on well with my new classmates…What
should I do?
Steve
Dear Steve,
I’ve learned about your problems. I think_________________________________
Best Wishes,

Diana




Dear Steve,
I’ve learned about your problems. I think you should be active in group work in class and be
brave enough to express your ideas. Try to talk with your classmates at break. If you want to get on
well with your classmates, don’t forget to say hello when you meet them. Being friendly and helpful
is also very important. You need to take part in all kinds of class activities, such as sports meetings,
football games and singing competitions. I’m sure you will soon be among friends.
Best wishes,
75．假设你叫李平，是美国中学生斯蒂文的 笔友，你收到了他的来信。请给斯蒂文写一封回
信。根据中国人的性格特点和风俗习惯，告诉他在中国家 庭居住时应注意些什么。

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Dear Li Ping,
I’m going to China in September. I’ll study in No.1 Middle School in
Beijing for half a year. And I’ll live in a home of a Chinese student.
I’ve never been to China and I know very little about Chinese families.
Can you tell me something about it so that I can get on well with them?
I’m looking forward to hearing from you．
Yours,
Steven

Dear Steven,
I’m glad to hear that you will come to China soon． ____________
_________________________________ _________________________.
Take it easy. I’m sure you will get on well with them.
Yours,
Li Ping
Dear Steven,
I’m glad to hear that you will come to China soon
．
It’s great to stay with a Chinese family
because Chinese people are very friendly. But there are some differences between Chinese people
and American people. If you know these well, there will be no problem with your stay in a Chinese
family.
First , don’t call the mother or the father’s name. They will be glad if you call them mum and
dad. Second, prepare a little gift for the family. Give it to them when you get to their home. Third,
eat together. Remember，don’t start eating before the parents do at meals unless they ask you to do
so. Above all, tell them beforehand if you can’t get home on time.
Take it easy. I’m sure you will get on well with them.
Yours,
Li Ping

66. 假设你叫张明，收到了你的笔友Tom的一封信，请你给他写一封 回信。在信中回答他
的问题，提出你的建议，并就此事谈谈你的看法。
I have a problem these days. I don’t think our English teacher likes me. She wasn’t satisfied
with me because I got a C in the exam. My classmate Lucy got a C, too. But she praised her. She
said Lucy had tried her best and spent most time on English, but I didn’t. It makes me unhappy. I
think it’s unfair. Do you have the same problem? What do you think of my English teacher? What
should I do?
Yours,
Tom
___ __________________________________________________ _________
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I have the same problem as you. I can understand you. But I don’t think your idea is right. She
wasn’t satisfied with you because she thought you should work harder. She is strict with you. It’s
good for your study. I think you had better spend more time on your study, and try to improve your
English. Your teacher will be pleased when you have a great progress. As a student, we should work
hard at our lessons and try to understand our teachers.


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健康一 直是人们关注的问题，我校要举行以“关爱健康”为题的主题班会,请根据以下内容谈谈
你的看法。

(1)、保持健康的重要性；
(2)、保持健康的方法：.多吃水果蔬菜；每天锻炼一小时；再睡早起；勤洗手；
（3）、自己的看法（至少一条）。
注意：1.文中不能出现校名和自己的姓名；2. 内容可适当扩展。3. 字数为60—80词；
4. 文章开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。
Boys and girls,
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Thank you.
One possible version
It is very important for us students to keep healthy.
There are many ways to be healthy. We’d better eat more fruits and vegetables. Take exercise
for at least one hour every day. We need enough sleep and rest so it is important to go to bed early
and get up early. Besides, we should wash our hands as often as possible. In my opinion, we mustn't
drink wine or smoke .They are bad for our health.


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