周末祝福短信2013如何在作文中举例子

2021年1月19日发(作者：被囚禁的亡国公主)

例子三部曲


人物背景→过程→结局

1)

人物背景：例如姓名，身份，职业，与理由有关的细节
1
句

2)

故事因为本段理由逐步发展的过程。
2~3

何人何时何人及其感受

3)

故事的结局（回到全文观点）
1~2

例一

全文观点：人们要选择一个开心的工作

主题句：因为做一份工作时候没有快乐，他们会失去激情

解释部分：这样的话，他们 的收入带来消极影响。当工作成为一个不快乐任务的时候，它
再也不激励人们努力了


例子部分：


1
设计谁？

至少准备
3
类我们熟悉的人物

①

高中生②大学生③工作者

2
如何设计呢？

加入多元素：任务的学校，公司


①

高中生：
the example of my little brother Tom, who is studying in the high school attached
to the Tsinghua University, can support my idea.

句
型
：
the
example(case/fact/instance)
of
…
,
who
is
studying
in
…
.,
can
support
my
idea(opinion/viewpoint/standpoint)
The example of my confidante Alice

②

大学生

This
provides(proves/offers/shows)a
good(typical/concrete/notable/striking)instace
of
a
student called
…
.., majoring in
…
.in/at
……
University of California at Los Angeles

③

作者（
smith
）

Take
my
uncle
Smith
as
an
example.
He
is
in
charge
of
business
while
working
in
the
Microsoft Corporation.


Take
…
as
an
example/instance.
He/she
is
in
charge
of
(is
responsible
for/manages/takes
charge of)
…
while working in the corporation (company/firm) of
…
.


花样例子

让例子更丰富

①

人物背景→曾经情况→变化过程→结果

②

人物对比（有共性）

人物背景
1~2
→没有 在本理由影响下的
A1~2
→在本段理由影响下的
B
的情况
2~3< br>句


Explanation:


Sport s
→
healthy
→
happy
→
beneficial to life
Example:
Grandpa retired from Microsoft Corporation and aunt work in university
A
not
like
playing
sports
but
instead
watching
TV
at
home
→
every day
spent 12
hours
on
various TV programs t
→
turn into a couch potato
→
unhealthy

In a team, those who do not accept others
’
criticism cannot succeed.
To
begin
with,
there
is
no
doubt
that
people
can
improve
themselves,
when
they
accept
team members
’
criticism.
In a group, humans who are not good at listening to others
’
advice
can know about their own strength and weakness more completely. Thus, they have enough
capacity to achieve success through promoting themselves.
The example of my friend Alice,
who is studying in University of California at San Diego and majoring in microeconomics, can
support my standpoint. Last semester, she was a leader in an academic team conducting a
research on aging population. At first, she was too pretentious, refusing any advice. Such the
paper, merely consisting of her own view, definitely failed to satisfy her professor. Later, the
whole
team
gathered
and
discussed
the
research
topic
together.
Unlike
the
previous
performance, she adopted their suggestions this time, deleted useless contents and added a
key point of the aging impacts on the industrial upgrade. Finally their essay achieved a high
score thanks to Alice
’
s taking suggestions.




伴随状语：是主句主语的形式主语

结果状语：是整个句子的形式主语



Which
way
do
you
think
is
the
best
way
for
a
student
to
make
new
friends?
A.
joining
a
sports team.


To
begin
with,
there
is
no
doubt
that
students
can
cooperate
with
teammates
and
learn
more about each other during sports game. In a sports game, taking the basketball game for
example, players have to communicate and exercise together, thus winning the game. The
instance of my friend Tommy, who is studying in the University of California at San Diego,
can
support
my
view
perfectly.
He
is
the
international
student
and
had
a
quite
miserable
time for everything was new and no friend could lend him a hand when he was new here.
Nevertheless,
he
participated
in
the
school
basketball
team.
As
a
team
member,
doing
exercises
with
partners
was
an everyday routine
and
he
had
no
choice
but
had
to
follow.
During
this
process,
the
relationship
between
him
and
the
team
members
gradually
got
improved.
Soon
he
made
friends
with
his
teammate,
having
a
brilliant
time
in
a
foreign
country.




Nowadays it is easier to maintain good health than in the past.