绿色小岛上海中考英语作文专题指导

2021年1月26日发(作者：灵摆)
上海中考英语作文专题指导
一、中考英语作文写作模式——“四审四注意”写作法

“四审”
：

一审标题文体格式。
这样可以为下面的写作，
如人称、
时态、
内容、格式等奠定基础；

二审人称。
如是以第一人 称
I
或
we
为主还是以第二人称
you
或第三人称
she, he, it
或
they
为主；
< br>三审时态。一般而言，写作时文章应多以现在时（包括一般
现在时、一般将来时、现在完成时和现 在进行时）或过去时
（一般宜用一般过去时和过去进行时）
为主，
切忌时态混乱；
四审内容。如有提示，应尽量按照所给提示来写，不可偏题
乱发挥，
可将有关内 容提炼分解成几句展开叙述，
不可遗漏，
这是很重要的一点，
一般文章按
wh o
，
when
，
where
，
what
，
how
，
why
等要素展开。

“四注意”
：
< br>一注意如果文章没有给出开头结尾，一定要写开头结尾。当
然，开头和结尾的方式不能太落于俗套 ，要有一定的新意，
一般一两句即可，结尾要点题，有所立意；

二注意句式要富于变 化，不能通篇只有一种句式或句式过于
单调，否则即使无语言和内容错误也难得高分，如可适当运
用
if, when, although
等状语从句，
I think / I hope / I
believe that
等宾语从句，如用定语从句必须有绝对把握；

三注意适当运用连接词，如
on
one
hand,
on
the
other
hand; what
’
s more; however
等，这样使文章更有层次、
更富逻辑性，若语言和内容没问题
,
做到第二、三项
“注意”
就很有希望拿组织结构分。

四注意善于运 用有把握的词汇和句型，尽量运用课本所学词
句，
坚决避免不正确的
“中国式英语”< br>，
更不能乱
“发明”
,
一
般一篇文章能用
8
个左右的好短语或句式已很不错。

最 后需要提醒考生的是，
中考作文要取得高分
,
词数不能太少
也不能太多
,
笔者觉得
,
以
80
词左右为宜。另外，书写一定
要认 真、工整，以免造成不必要的失分。

二、中考英语作文常见语言错误调查分析

1.
时态错误

2.
时间状语错误


3.
名词单复数错误


4.
动词误用



5.
语态错误


6
．

词性误用


7.
介词误用


8
．

某些搭配和惯用法误用



中考英语总复习专项训练题


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写作专项训练

A.
中考英语热门写作话题

1.
关于学习

Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic
“
How to learn English well
”
.
（以“怎样学好英语”为
题写一篇不少于< br>60
个词的短文，标点符号不占格。
）

Use the following points as a reference. (
以下内容供参
考
)
●

When
did
you
start
learning
English?
(in ...
/ ...
years ago)
●
How do you learn English? (listen carefully, study
with a group, read English every day ...)
●

What is difficult to learn? (listening, grammar ...)
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2.
关于兴趣

Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic
“
My
interest
”
.
（以“我的兴趣”为题写一篇不少于
60< br>个词的短文，标点符号不占格。
）

Use the following points as a reference. (
以下内容供参
考
)
●

What is your interest?
●

Why do you like it so much?
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3.
关于写事

Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic
“
Unforgettable
memories
”
.
（以“难忘的回忆”为题
写一篇不少于60
个词的短文，标点符号不占格。
）

Use the following points as a reference. (
以下内容供参
考
)
●

What is your unforgettable memory?
●

Why do you think it is unforgettable?
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4.
关于计划

Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic
“
My plan for summer holiday
”
.
（以“我的暑期计划”
为题写一篇不少于
60
个词的短文，标点符号不占格。
）

Use the following points as a reference. (
以下内容供参
考
)
●

What
are
you
going
to
do
during
the
coming
summer holiday?
●

Give at least two points.
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5.
关于朋友

Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic
“
My good friend
”
.
（以“我的好朋友”为题写一篇不少
于
60
个词的短文，标点符号不占格。
）

Use the following points as a reference. (
以下内容供参
考
)
●

Who is your good friend?
●

What do you often do with him or her?

●

Why do you regard him or her as a good friend?
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6.
关于写人

Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic
“
My English teacher
”
.
（以“我的英语老师”为题写一
篇不少于
60
个词的短文，标点符号不占格。
）

Use the following points as a reference. (
以下内容供参
考
)
●

Who is your English teacher?
●

Do you like him or her?
●

Why do you like him or her?

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7.
关于英语

Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic
“
I changed my ways of learning English
”
.
（以“我
改变了我学习英语的方式”为题写一篇不少于
60
个词的短
文，标点符号不占格。
）

Use the following points as a reference. (
以下内容供参
考
)
●

How did you learn English in the past?
●

Why do you change your ways of learning English?

●

How do you learn English now?
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8.
关于旅行

Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic
“
An unforgettable trip
”
. (
以“一次难忘的旅行”为题写
一篇不少于
60
个词的短文，标点符号不占格。
）

Use the following points as a reference. (
以下内容供参
考
)
●

Where did you go?
●

What did you do during that trip?

●

Why do you think it is unforgettable?
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9.
关于动物

Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic
“
My
favourite
animal
”
.
（以“我最喜欢的动物” 为题
写一篇不少于
60
个词的短文，标点符号不占格。
）

Use the following points as a reference. (
以下内容供参
考
)
●

What
’
s your favourite animal?
●

Why do you like it so much?

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