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2021年1月4日发(作者:严震直)


中考英语作文写作技巧及万能模板


中考英语作文写作技巧及万能模板



第一部分

写作技巧



话题一:写人记事


例文:

初中阶段你印象最深的又是哪位老师?请用英语写一篇题为

The Teacher I Never Forget

的作文。


内容包括:

1.

简要介绍老师的性格或特长;

2.

列举一个事例,说明老师是如何在学习上帮助或鼓励你取得


进步的;

3.

感谢老师,祝愿老师。


The Teacher I Never Forget


How time flies! Three years has passed since I became a middle school student. I had very good memories of


my

classmates

and

teachers.

The

teacher

I

never

forget

is

Mr.

Zhang,

an

English

teacher.

He

is

very

kind

and


friendly. He helped us not only in class but also after class. About two years ago, Mr. Zhang noticed that I was


worried about my poor pronunciation. So he

offered me many suggestions to improve it, and he also gave

me


every chance possible to speak in class. With his help, my pronunciation has greatly improved.


I must say many thanks to Mr. Zhang. I wish him a healthy and happy life in the future! < /p>


例文:

假如你是某中学的一名学生。

6

月< /p>

3

日,是星期五,在放学回家的公交车上,你所经历的一件事情

让你印象深刻。请根据以下要点用英语写一篇日记。


要点:

1.

一位老爷爷和十来岁的孙子上了车,老人拿着书包和小提琴;

2.

你给老人让座,老人的孙子却


坐了下来,老人只得站在旁边;

3.

孩子大声喊着向老人要水喝,并将空水瓶扔到车上;

4.

你认为孩子应


该尊敬、照顾老人,保持环境卫生。


On my way home on the bus, I saw an old man get on with his grandson of about ten. He was carrying the


boy’s schoolbag and a violin. I

gave my seat to the old man at once. However, the boy sat down first. The old man


had to stand nearby. After a while, the boy shouted to his grandpa for water and then dropped the empty bottle on


the bus.


When I saw this, I got very angry. I think the boy should not only respect and take care of the old man but


also keep the environment clean.


话题二:环保污染


例文:

节约资源

,

保护环境

.

从我们身边的小事做起,

假设你是一 个注重

“低碳”

生活的中学生

,

请以

My


Low-

carbon Life”

为题,写一篇短文,简单描述自己的“低碳生活”

。提示

: (1)

每天步行上学

; (2)

离丌教室


时,关灯、电扇、电视等;

3)

不用水时

, < /p>

记住关水龙头,循环使用水;

4)

充分使用纸张;

5)

不使用塑料


袋。


中考英语作文写作技巧及万能模板


My Low-carbon Life


It

s

our

duty

to

protect

the

environment.

The

environment

is

becoming

worse

and

worse,

so

we

must

do


something to prevent people from polluting the environment. First, we should go to school on foot and tell our


parents to walk to work instead of driving the car. Second, we should save water and electricity by turning off the


taps, fans, TV sets and lights in time when we don

t need them. What

s more, water should be reused by us. Third,


it is good to make full use of paper. We should use the both sides of the paper. By doing this, we can save many


trees. At last, remember to go shopping with basket rather than plastic bags. I believe our life will become better


and better if we can do these things.


Lower carbon, happier life. Let

s take actions.


例文:

目前,

我们的家乡正在实施

城乡清洁工程

< p>” (cleaning

project).

请你根据以下信息,

给某英文报写一


短文,就清洁卫生和食品安全两个方面谈谈你的看法和建议。

状况:

1.

垃圾到处可见,污染空气、土地和


水源。

2.

摆卖不安全食品,危害人们的健康。

建议

:

1.

城乡统一堆放垃圾。

2.

禁止生产不合格食物,不卖 不


买有害食品。


Presently,

a

cleaning

project

is

carried

out

in

our

hometown.

It

is

necessary

for

us

to

clean

our

living


environment, because rubbish can be seen everywhere. The air, the soil and the water are all polluted. Some kinds


of unsafe food which is harmful to people's health appear in the stores and some supermarkets.


I think we must stop the pollution and the harm. People must throw the waste into the rubbish bins. Don't


allow anyone to produce and sell any unsafe food. Pay attention to the food before eating, sure it is safe. If we can


do that all, our hometown will soon be cleaner and more beautiful


话题三:体育健康

< br>例文:

每个人都有不同的生活习惯,养成良好的生活习惯,会使我们拥有健康的体魄。良好 的生活习惯有


哪些呢?例如:每天按时起床和睡觉;饭前洗手;多吃水果和蔬菜,不吃垃 圾食品;多参加体育锻炼;不


乱扔垃圾和随地吐痰;不要再马路上玩耍,横过马路注意交 通安全等。


How to Develop Good Living Habits


Everyone has different living habits. Good habits can make us keep healthy. As teenagers, what should we


do?


In my opinion, everyone should get up and sleep on time every day. Don

t play or watch TV all night. That is


bad

for

our

health

and

affect

our

work.

We

should

eat

more

vegetables

and

fruit,

and

eat

less

meat.

I

advise


everybody to take more physical exercises. Don't eat junk food, for example instant noodles. Don't litter and spit.


Don't play on the road. Remember to obey the traffic rules. No jaywalking.


In a word, if we want to keep healthy and happy, we must develop good living habits.


中考英语作文写作技巧及万能模板


例文

:

请以

I Love Sports

为题写一篇英语短文。

1.

你喜欢的体育 活动有哪些?

2.

进行体育活动有哪些好


处?

< p>3.

你最喜欢的体育活动是什么?


I love sports


I love swimming, running, ball games in my spare time. I think it is good for us to do some sports. Sports


help to build up our body and make us strength. It can also keep illness away. By doing sports, I

m becoming


stronger and more confident(

有信心的

) than before. My favorite sport is swimming. I like swimming because I


like playing with water. Also I think swimming is more popular than other sports and it

s easier to learn. I feel


relaxed when I swim. I love sports! I think everyone should spend some time on sports every day because health


is more important than other things in modern life.


话题四:语言学习


例文:

假设 你校要举办一期英语墙报

,

交流学习英语的感受

,

请你按下面表格中的内容要点提示写一篇题为


Find your own way to learn English

” ,

介绍你学习英语的体会。


1.

最初的情况

:

学习困难。如:拼写听力差、语法 出错、阅读速度慢。

2.

现在的情况

:

学习方法。如:记


单元词汇表

(vocabulary

list)

多听磁带借书阅读

3.

< p>学习体会

:

学好英语的关键。如:专心致志、自有方


法。


Find your own way to learn English


There are many ways to learn English, but everyone should have his or her own wa


At first, I had many difficulties in Learning English. For example

, I couldn’t

spell some English words, and


couldn’t

understand what people said when they were talking fast. I often

made mistakes in grammar and read



Now I have found some ways to improve my English. I copy down the vocabulary lists for each unit and keep


them in my mind. I listen to English tapes every day and I can understand mostly what people talk about. I often



The most important thing to learn English well, I think, is to keep your mind on it, so that you can find your


own ways to improve your English.


< br>例文:

假如你是张华,你的加拿大朋友

Dave

来信向你了 解学习汉语的方法,清根据以下要点用英语写封


回信。除以下外再提出一条建议。


要点:

1.

加入汉语班学习 ,可向老师学习并与同学练习汉语;

2.

看中文电视、读中文书、报纸、杂志;< /p>


3.

听、唱汉语歌,有助于汉语词汇;

4.

交中国朋友,即可练习口语又可了解中国。


Dear Dave,


中考英语作文写作技巧及万能模板


I’m glad to get your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.

Here is my advice. First, As a


foreign, you need to go and join a Chinese learning activity group, the most important thing is to remember as


many Chinese words as possible.


Second, if you want to improve your listening ability, you

d better read Chinese books, listen to the tapes and


radio programs in Chinese. You can watch the Chinese TV programs or DVDs.


Third, you make some Chinese friends. Your friends can teach you a lot of Chinese songs and introduce some


Chinese festivals to you, too.


In a word

I think we will have a good time .write to me soon.


话题五:旅游及交通安全


例文:

越来越多汽车进入我们的家庭生活,

改善了我们的生活,

但同时也带来了很多问 题,

如塞车和车祸,


给家庭和社会带来极大的危害。作为中学生,我们应 该怎样做呢?

内容包含:

1.

遵守交通规则,如走人行

< p>

/

过斑马线。

2.

别在街道上或马 路上玩耍和踢球。

3.

劝父母不能酒后驾车。


With more and more cars coming into our families, we are happy that it has greatly improved our life. But


unluckily, it has also brought many problems, such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents.


Traffic safety is everybody's business. We must obey the rules. For example ,we must walk on walk side .when


we cross zebra -crossing ,stop and look right and left ,then go across fast. Don

t play football on the road .we can


tell our parents not to drink before they drive, not to run through red lights, not to talk and laugh while driving etc.


We can say cars are coming into our life, but only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybody's business


can we be safe driving on roads and walking on walk side.


例文:

目前,许多中学生不重视课外阅读。请你根据下 表内容写一篇短文,对这一现状进行分析并提出建


议。要点:

一、不重视课外阅读的原因:

1.

作业太多

2.

没有读书习惯

3.

时间花在电脑或网络上。

二、


课外阅读的好处

1.

更多地了解世界

2.

学会如何思考

3.

生活更加丰富多彩。

三、

对学校或同学的建议

(至


少一点)


At present only a few students do some reading after class. Here are several reasons.


First of all, quite a lot of students are burdened with too much homework. Still others haven

t formed a habit


of reading. They would rather spend their spare time on TV or on the Internet.


However, reading has many benefits. Through reading we can learn more about the world. Besides, it can help


us think better. Last but not least, reading can make our life more colorful.


Here are my suggestions. For one thing, teachers are supposed to limit the amount of our homework so that we


can have more time to read. For another, it

s a good idea to form reading clubs and learn from each other.


话题九

:

提出解决问题


中考英语作文写作技巧及万能模板


例文:

保持健康的体魄,

拥有健康的生活方式对于我们每个人来说都是重要的。

请以

How to keep fit

为题,


从健康饮 食、体育锻炼和养成良好的生活习惯等方面写一篇文章。


How to keep fit


As we all know, it is important for us to keep healthy and have a healthy life. How to keep fit? First, we


should eat healthy food, such as apples, vegetables and so on

. We mustn’t eat junk

food, which

is bad for our


health. Second, to do sports is necessary for us. It is a good idea to run and play ball games. Last, it is useful for us


to have a good living habit. We should go to bed early and get up early. We must wash our hands before meals.


What’s more

, we should brush our teeth twice a day.


例文:

你的笔友

Tom

上周来信想你倾诉了他在班上学习成绩很好 ,但朋友很少,感到孤独的烦恼,并向你


寻求帮助。请根据提示给他写回信,给他以帮助 。


写作要点提示:

1

)简述

< p>Tom

的烦恼;

2

)针对他的烦恼提出几点建议;

3

)表达你对他的鼓励与祝愿


Dear Tom,


I got your letter last week. I hear that you do very well in all the subjects. Congratulations

But you have few


friends. You feel lonely.

You don’t know what you should do. I give some advice:


First, you should help the students who are in trouble, both in study and in life. They think you can get on well


with them.


Then, join them. You can play and sing with them. Doing that can make you a member of them.


Last, after class you can talk with them. Share the sadness and happiness with them.


I hope you can make more friends and become happy.


Yours,


Lisa


例文

Life is just like a mirror, you smile at it, and it smiles at you, too.

请你以

“Learn to Smile”

为题,根据下表


所列的要点写一篇

100

词左右的文章(文章开头已给出)


1

、面对困难与烦恼学会微笑(考试失利 、被别


人误解等)


2

、使你自信,击败你的人有时就是你自己。


学会对自己微笑

3

、有益于身心健康。


1

、便于与他人之间的交流。


学会对他人微笑


2

、给别人带 来快乐

,

自己也快乐。


微笑是一种语言

人人都能懂,传递友谊,拉近距离。


Learn to Smile


I remember a song by Westlife, the first sentence of it is “Just a smile and the rain is gone.” Do you like


smiling? I think you should learn to smile.


First, we should learn to smile at yourself when something unpleasant happens in your life. If you fail an


exam or you are misunderstood by your friends, don’t be sad.

Just smile at yourself. Smiling at yourself brings


中考英语作文写作技巧及万能模板


back your confidence. Sometimes the one who beats you is not others, but yourself. And smile can also keep you


healthy.


Second, it is important for you to learn to smile at others. It will make you communicate better with people.


Smiling at others makes you happy as well.


In a word, smile is a kind of language belonging to everyone. It passes love and friendship and helps shorten


the distance between you and other people. Living with a smile, every day will be shiny.


例文:

假如你是李华,你的美国笔友

Lucy

计划今年暑假来江西度假,她向你了解江西城市生活和农村生


活的情况,以便选择度假地点,给她写一封邮件,先介绍城市生活和农村生活的相同点和不同点,然后说


说你自己更喜欢哪种生活,并说明理由


Dear Lucy,


I'm very happy that you are coming to Jiangxi to spend your summer holiday. There are some similarities and


differences between city life and country life. Both in the city and in the country, people's life is getting better and


better. They pay more and more attention to keeping fit. However, there are some differences. In the city people


go to supermarkets to buy what they need. They eat at home or in restaurants. They live in apartments and travel


around by car or bus. After work, they go to cinemas, clubs or parks to relax themselves. In the country, people


grow vegetables and rice by themselves.

They live in houses and ride motorbikes or bicycles to go around. In


their spare time they would like to visit their neighbors or watch TV at home. As for me, I prefer to live in the city


because there are more places to enjoy myself. I often go to libraries, bookstores and science museums, where I


can learn much about the world.


I am looking forward to meeting you! Best wishes!




中考英语作文写作技巧及万能模板


作文训练


一、


在初中 三年的学习生活中,父母、老师给了我们很多帮助。假设你是李明,在即将毕业之际,用英语

写一段文字以表达感激之情。感谢的对象在父母、老师中任选其一。


内容必须包括以下提示点:

1

、感谢的对象及原因;

2

、举例说明帮助你的事由、经过和结果;

3

、你的感


受和打算。


注意:

1

、文中不得出现 真实的人名、校名及地名;

2

、词数在

80-100

之间,已给出的文字不计入总词数。


Dear __________


Words can

t show my thanks to you,


_____________________________________________ ______________________________


________ __________________________________________________ _________________


_____________________ __________________________________________________ ____


__________________________________ _________________________________________

< br>_______________________________________________ ____________________________


Best wishes
































Yours


Li Ming


【答案】


Dear Mr/Mrs/Miss X,


Words can

t show my thanks to

ve helped me a lot in my studies since I came to this


I

was

in

trouble,you

used

to

encourage

me

and

give

me

some

one

time

I

failed


to pass an English test and I was very sad about came and cheered me told me some


good

ways

to

improve

your

help,I

ve

made

great

progress

in

English.I

m

so

thankful


to you for your kind help that I

ll work harder and try to do better in the future.


Best wishes





Dear Mum/Dad/Mum and Dad,


Words can

t show my thanks to

ve taken good care of me in the past three


I was in trouble,you used to encourage me and cheer me I argued with my classmates and


I didn

t know how to deal with talked with me the whole evening and gave me a lot of


advice on how to get along with your help,I

ve become a popular boy/girl and made


a lot of friends.I

m so thankful to you for your love and care that I

ll work harder and try


to do better in the future.


Best wishes






























Yours


Li Ming

























Yours


Li Ming


【亮点说明】本文用了一些短语和句式,增加了文章的色彩。如:

in

trouble

At

one

time

make

great


progress in; take good care of; argue with; talk with; work hard

等。短文中还用了一些连词如:


中考英语作文写作技巧及万能模板


when

that

and

等,使句子结构更加复 杂化,增加了文章的亮点。


二、英语课上,老师向同学们介绍了

2015

年度“最美孝心少年”的感人事迹,你深受感动。请你用英语

< br>写一则日记,写出自己的感受。


内容要点及要求:


1.

表明自己将向“孝心少年”学习;


2.

你将在日常生活、学习中做些什么来孝敬父母;


3.

词数:

80

左右。开头部分已给出,不计入总词数。


提示词(可选用)

learn from, respect, care for, do some housework, study hard


Monday, June 30

Sunny


This morning, our English teacher told us some stories about

the most beautiful filial


piety youth in 2015

.


【答案】


Monday, June 30

Sunny


This morning, our English teacher told us some stories about

the most beautiful filial


piety youth in 2013

. I was deeply moved. Those teenagers set us a good example in respecting


and caring for parents.


I used to make my parents unhappy and now I feel ashamed about it. I think I should learn


from them. I will help do some housework and take good care of my mum and dad when they are ill.


I will try my best to study hard so that I can enter the key high school in our city. I hope


I can become a filial piety youth like them.


(88 words)


【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增 色不少。如

:set an example for

为……


树立榜样;

used to do sth

过去常常做某事;

take care of

照顾;

try one

s best to do sth

尽力做某


事;强调句式

It is adj for sb to do sth

,做某事对某人来说怎么样等。学习中注意总结

,

牢记一些固


定句式及短语

,

写作时就 可以适当引用

,

让文章更出彩。


三、 为了配合“足球进校园”活动,你们班开展了一次主题班会。请你以足球迷的身份,根据下列表格中


的要点提示,用英语向同学们介绍足球这项运动并谈谈自己的梦想。



历史悠久,深受喜爱


世界杯

4

年举行一次


男生女生皆可参加


利于培养团队精神


考生自拟

(

至少

1

)




梅西,有足球天赋


考生自拟

(

至少

1

)


注意:

1.

词数

90

左 右。短文的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数;


2.

短文须包括所有要点,不要逐词翻译,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺;


3.

短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。


参考词汇:梅西

Messi


Dear classmates,


中考英语作文写作技巧及万能模板


I

m very excited to hear that China will build 20,000 football-themed schools by 2020.





Thank you for your attention.


【答案】


Dear classmates,


I

m

very

excited

to

hear

that

China

will

build

20,000

football-themed

schools

by

2020.


Football has a very long history. It is liked by people all over the world. The World


Cup takes

place every

four years.

Playing

football has lots of advantages. First,

both boys


and girls can take part in it. Second, it helps develop team spirit. What

s more, playing


football is good for our health.


I

m a football fan. Messi is my hero. He has a gift for playing football. My dream is


to become a famous football player like Messi. I hope China will hold the World Cup some


day.


Thank you for your attention.


写作亮点:本文语言精炼,像第二自然段的

Football has a very long history. It is liked by people


all over the world. The World Cup takes place every four years. it helps develop team spirit.


What

s more, playing football is good for our health.

等等 句子,简洁,但是句意表达清楚;同


时,本文用了被动语态、动名词作主语、不定式作表 语等等语法形式,使表达生动;用了

first, second


等使得短文层次清楚。


四、每年夏天,溺水事故频发。

请你就此写一篇短文谈谈你的看法。


内容包括:


1.

我们应该如何防止此类事故发生?(两点建议)


2.

如果看到有人落水,我们应该如何施救?


3.

呼吁同学们热爱生命,注意安全。

< p>
作文要求:

1.

不能照抄原文;不得在作文中提到出现的学校真实姓 名。


2.

语句连贯,词数< /p>

80

个左右。作文的开头已经给出,不计入总词数。


Almost every year in summer, many people are reported dead from drowning accidents. How to


prevent such sad accidents?




【答案】


Almost

every

year

in

summer,

many

people

are

reported

dead

from

drowning

accidents.

How

to

prevent


such sad accidents?In my opinion, we shouldn

t go swimming in dangerous places or places we


know little abou, such sa reservoies and rivers . Second , we had better not swim when we feel


tired or hungry.


If we see someone fall into the water, we shouldsave him in a perpor way . For example , we


can shout loudly as we can to get those with good swimming skills to help him.


Life

is

valuable

.

We

should

take

it

seriously.

We

must

remember

that

safety

should

always


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come first while swimming.


写作亮点:这篇短文内容切题,意思连 贯,表达清楚、完整。词汇和句型句式运用恰当。如提建议的句式:


In my opinion, we shouldn

t go

, we had better not swim

.

条件状语从句等。


五、假定你是李华,你的英国笔友

Peter

来信询问汉语中一些流行的 网络语言的意思,请根据下列提示回


一封电子邮件。


点赞(

Dianzan

:赞同、喜爱


任性(

Renxing

:随心所欲


秒杀(

Miaosha

:快速达到目的


土豪(

Tuhao

:很富有



注意:

1.

词数

80-100


2.

请不要逐句翻译,可适当发挥;


3.

文中不能出现真实的校名和人名;


4.

邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。


Dear Peter,


As the Internet is developing fast, more and more new words and phrases have been created


in Chinese. Here are some examples.




Yours,


Li Hua


【答案】


Dear Peter,


As the Internet is developing fast, more and more new words and phrases have been created


in China. Here are some example.


One

of

the

most

popular

words

is

Dianzan,which

is

often

used

when

you

quite

agree

with

someone.


Another

example

is

Renxing.

When

you

say

somebody

is

Renxing,you

mean

that

they

will

do

whatever


they

like.

The

phrase

Miaosha

first

came

from

online

shopping,

which

means

you

can

complete

your


shopping order before others. But now it

s widely used when you achieve your purpose in a very


short time. If you descibe somebody sa a Tuhao, you mean that he is very rich.


You

can

find

lots

of

such

new

Chinese

words.

Keep

learning

,

you

ll

know

more

about

our

language


and culture.


All the best!


Yours


Li Hua


写作亮点:这篇短文语言无误,行文连贯,表达 清楚。在具体的写作中句式丰富,如:定语从句

which

is


often used when you quite agree with someone. Another example is Renxing.

,宾语从句

; you mean


that they will do whatever they like,

条件状语从句

: If you descibe somebody sa a Tuhao, you mean


that he is very rich.

等。


All the best!


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六、

你校将开设一些特色课程,学生可根据兴趣进行选 择。请根据以下内容提示为学校英文网页写一篇


短文,介绍这些课程、提出你建议增设的 课程并说明理由。




Students in our school are free to choose some special courses according to their interest.


注意:

1.

参考词汇:模型制作

model making


2.

词数

80

左右(文章开头已给出, 不计入词数)


3.

不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。


【答案】


Students in our school are free to choose

some special courses according to their interest.


These

courses

will help

students relax themselves after school. There are many courses for them


to choose, such as English drama, football, or model making. Here is more information.


If you want to improve your oral English, English drama may be the first choice. It is a


good

chance

to

practice

not

only

oral

English,

but

also

performing

skills.

If

you

are

interested


in football, take the football course. It is good for your physical health. Besides, you can


learn more about teamwork. What about model making? You will be amazed by the science world and


become interested in it.


For my part, a painting course can be added, because students like drawing so much. I hope


these courses would be helpful and each student would enjoy a bright and colorful school life


here!


写作亮点:这是一篇优 秀的范文。短文中作者按照题目的要求给我们介绍了学校即将开设的三个特色课程


的活动 内容,又发挥想象力补充了第四个课程

painting

course,

内容完整,要点全面,语句通顺,符合题


目要求。短文中作者使用了正确的时态 和人称,句式表达符合英语的规范。作者还使用了丰富的句型和句


式,如

here

are

many

courses

for

them

to

choose,

such

as

English

drama,

football,

or

model

making


It is a good chance to practice not only oral English, but also performing skills.

Besides,


you

can

learn

more

about

teamwork

For

my

part,

a

painting

course

can

be

added,

because

students


like drawing so much

等。这些句型的使用从整体上提高了作文的档次,显示了作者较 高的写作能力。


七、假设你叫李磊,请你针对这封信的内容,给这位父 亲写封回信,谈谈你的看法。要求:条例清楚,语


义连贯,句式规范,字迹工整。词数< /p>

80

左右。


Dear editor,


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I'm sorry to trouble you. I have a daughter. She is 13 years old. She likes making telephone


calls.

As

soon

as

he

gets

back

from

school,

she

picks

up

the

telephone

and

calls

her

classmates.


She talks and talks, sometimes for 2 or 3 hours. We can't use it. I tell him not to do it, but


she is unhappy. What should I do?


A worried father


【答案】


Dear Sir,


Don't worry. You can have a word with her and tell her what to do. As a student, she must


put her heart into the study. Making telephones too much is bad for her study. If she goes on


doing it, you can tell it to her teachers. I think they can help you.


You can also find out whom your daughter calls up. You may ask their parents for help.


You may buy a telephone for her. She can make telephone calls with her own telephone, but


she must pay for it by herself.


Yours,


Li Lei


书面表达做题策略:


1.

详细审题,判定体裁

2.

明确题材,确定时态、人称

3.

按照要求,锁定要点

4.

根据要点,


选定词句

5.

文笔流畅,结构紧凑

—→

6.

一气呵成,誊写清楚

7.

审慎推敲,消灭遗漏

8.


单词拼写,时态、语态、语气,主谓、标点皆须细致

9.

遵我八法,水到渠成!


八、卫生健康饮食:健康一直是人们关注的问题。我校要举行以“关爱健康”为题的主题班会

,

请根据下


面提示内容谈谈你的看法

,

< p>写一篇

80

字左右的发言稿(开头已给出,不计入总词数)


主要内容有:

保持健康的重要性,

保持健康的方法或结论

你对健康的看法

(如:

多吃水果蔬菜,


保持饮食平衡,多锻炼以健身强体,减少 不良习惯


Dear boys and girls







【答案】


Dear boys and girls


Here

is

my

advice

about

how

to

keep

healthy

As

a

middle

school

student

,

first

you

d

better


do more exercise such as playing ball games running swimming and jumping rope

Then you should


pay attention to your diet or meals

Don

t eat too much meat and sugar but more vegetables and


fruit

Third

you

need

enough

sleep

or

rest

Next

keep

yourself

happy

As

people

often

say

smiling


makes younger

Last you mustn

t drink wine or smoke

They are bad for your health


That is my advice

I hope you are healthy and enjoy your life

Thank you, bye!


九、

人生要经历很多次考试,

很多人都有不同程度的考试压力,

请你根据表格中提示的内容以

How

to

Deal


with the Exam Stress

”为题写一篇英语短文。


适当的压力

积极思考,认真学习

;

及时复习,防止遗忘。


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过重的压力


应对的措施


无法入睡,非常疲倦

;

害怕考试,导致失败

;


合理计划,好 的习惯,足够的锻炼,健康的饮食,


才能感到轻松并取得好成绩。


提示词:

actively(

积极的

),

review(

复习

),

fear

the

exams(

害怕考试

),

fail(

失败

),

form

some

good


habits(

养成好的习惯

), diets(

饮食

), relaxed(

轻松的

)


要求

:1.

用上所给要点和提示词(可适当发挥)

,使短文连贯、通顺

;


2.

词数

80

左右,短文 首句已给出,不计入总词数

;


3.

文中不得提及考生所在学校及自己的姓名。


How to Deal with the Exam Stress


Everyone may have the exam stress. A little bit of stress can be a good thing to us.





【答案】


Possible version:


How to Deal with the Exam Stress


Everyone may have the exam stress. A little bit of stress can be a good thing to us. If we


have proper stress, we can think actively and work harder. Besides it can remind us to review


our lessons in time to remember them. So we can pass the exams easily.


However, if we have too heavy stress, we can

t sleep well at night and we may feel too tired.


We may fear the exams too much and fail in the end.


In my opinion, to deal with stress, we

d better plan and prepare well. We should also form


some good habits, such as enough exercise and healthy diets. Then we

ll feel relaxed and do


well in the exams.


写作亮点:本文结构 紧凑,语言简练。开头考试带来的压力的好处,接下来介绍考试压力的不利之处,最


后指 出我们解决考试压力。此处用了

remind us to

feel too tired

too heavy stress

in the end


form some good habits, do well in

等短语。这些短语的运用也让文章增色不少。

< br>十、假设你们班在毕业前夕讨论填报高中志愿问题,基本上有两种观点,有点同学认为在本地就读高中比< /p>


在外地就读高中有利,但有的同学认为在外地比在本地有利,他们的观点如下:假设你是李 明,九年级三


班学生,请根据以下的信息写一篇报道。











有利因素



1.

周围有很多同学,容易结伴

2.

上网

3

不利于独


.




1.

费用高

2.

往返时间长,生活不便



外地就读

1.

条件好

2.

易独


不利因素



本地就读

1.

便利

2.

费用少


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提示词:

study in our city., study out of our city, convenient, be independent (

独立

), good


condition


Dear Editor:


___________________________________________ ___________________________________


___ __________________________________________________ _________________________


_____________ __________________________________________________ ______________


________________________ __________________________________________________ ____


__________________________________ ____________________________________________

< p>
____________________________________________ __________________________________


Yours,


Li Ming



Dear editor,


I

m a student in Class One , Crade Three . In the class meeting we had a discussion about


which senior high school we

d beter enter , the schools in or out of our city .


Some students think it

s convenient to study in our city while studying out of our city


costs lots of money and wastes much time on the way.


Other students think that the schools out of our city may have good conditions and it

s


helpful

for

students

to

learn

to

be

independent.

Besides,

without

so

many

old

classmates

around,


they would have less chance to play or go to the net bars together.


The discussion was very heated.I think studying in or out of our city has some advantages


and disadvantages. As for me, I prefer studying in my own city.


Yours ,


Li Ming


写作亮点:

这篇文章语言规范,

叙事清 楚,

词汇及时态运用正确,

能够把提示的内容叙述清楚,

语句通顺 ,


意思连贯是一篇不错的文章。


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1,

对成长过程中可能遇到的问题进行简要描述,

提 出自己的观点、

建议等。

主要涉及如何释放学习压力、


调 节情绪,如何处理同学关系等。句型


1

Molly is an easygoing girl who gets along well with everyone.


2

We should put more time and energy into study and try to be a student with both a kind heart


and good grades.


3

We all want to grow happily and healthily, so we have to do some things.


4

Life is not always full of sunshine. When we are in trouble, we should be brave enough to


deal with problems.


5

The more knowledge you have, the more confidence you will have.


【佳作赏析】

Han Mei is an easygoing girl who_gets_along_well_with_everyone. She is also


talented_in (be talented in

“有……的天赋”

,高级词汇

) performing. What's the most important,


she is warmhearted (

结合要点:写同学的情况

). Once she knew a girl in her neighborhood who had


so serious an illness that a large amount of money was needed. She called on all the kids to


give away pocket money to the unlucky girl. Besides, she organized a charity show to raise more


money (

结合要点:描写同学的所做的事情

). When_the_girl_and_her_parents_got_the_money_, they


were

really

moved.

Han

Mei

should

also

put

more

time

and

energy

into

study

and

try

to

be

a

student


with both a kind heart and good grades(

结合要点:提出建议

).


假如你是李华,准备参加学校举办的主题为“快乐成长”的英语演讲比赛。请按要求写一篇短文,主要内


容包括:

1.

保持快乐的心情;

2.

努力学习;

3.

积极参加体育锻炼。


Dear friends, we all want to grow happily and healthily, so we have to do some things. First,


we should keep ourselves happy. Life is not always full of sunshine. When we are in trouble,


we should be brave enough to deal with problems. Next, we must study hard. The more knowledge


we have, the more confidence we will have. Finally, we have to do sports to keep fit. We can


go running, play ball games or take a walk after a day's study. If we do those things well, we


will grow happily and healthily.


2,

语言学习困难,要求考生针对该现象进行描述,并提出合理的建议并阐述自己的观 点。主要涉及教学方


式的变化、课堂学习方式、英语学习方法等。


1

I enjoy learning English, but I am not good at it.


2

It is hard for me to understand other people when they talk. 3

I find English grammar is


very hard to learn.


4

Could you please tell me how to improve my spoken English? 5

In English class, we should


listen to the teacher carefully and take notes when necessary.


6

We

should take

part in all

kinds of activities, such as reading, writing, having discussions


and playing games.


7

It's very important to be confident when you learn a foreign language.


8

I think that doing lots of listening, speaking, reading and writing practice is the secret


of becoming a good language learner


假如你是韩梅,对英语很感兴趣,但不 知如何提高英语听、说、读、写的能力,语法对你来说也是一大难


题。因此,你打算给你 远在加拿大的笔友

Kate

发一封电子邮件,谈谈这些问题。


中考英语作文写作技巧及万能模板


Dear Kate


I'm writing to you for some questions about learning English. I enjoy_learning_(enjoy doing


的用法

) English, but_(

转折词的使用,流畅自然

) I don't do well in it (

结合要点:写学习英语很


棘手

). It isn't easy for me to understand other people when they talk. So_(

连词的使用,过渡


)

I

feel

worried._I_think_(

)

that


doing_lots_of_li stening,_speaking,_reading_and_writing_practice_ is the secret of becoming a


good

language

learner

(

< p>为

).

Another

thing


that_I_find_very_hard_ is English grammar (

结合要点:写出了英语语法很难

). However_(

副词的使


用,自然连贯

), it is very necessary for me. Could you please tell me how you learn English in


Canada (

结合要点:提出问题

)? Are you the same as we Chinese students?


I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.


回想三年的英语学习历程,< /p>

丰富多彩的英语课堂活动一定给你留下了许多难忘的回忆。

请你以

What

should


we do in English class

?”为题写一篇英语短文,谈谈在英语课堂上学生应该怎样做,才能 使英语学习


更有效。


提示:

to the teacher. 2

Take part in activities.


3

Be confident in ourselves.


What should we do in English class?


In English class, we should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes when necessary. Try


to answer questions in English. We should take part in all kinds of activities, like reading,


writing, having discussions and playing games. We need to work in groups with our classmates


to

help

each

other

and

learn

from

each

other.

It's

very

important

to

be

confident.

Speak

English


loudly in front of the class and never be afraid of making mistakes. In this way, we can make


much progress.


3,

健康生活问题,试题主要涉及健康问题、饮食习惯、食品安全等。

1

Many young people like eating


junk food very much. 2

Here is some advice on how to keep healthy.


3

We must have healthy food rather than junk food.


4

Though junk food is delicious, I prefer traditional Chinese food. 5

To keep healthy, we


should eat less junk food.


6

It's a good idea to have more healthy food like fruit and vegetables.


近来,中小学生的健康问题日益引起人们的关注。请用英语就该问题谈谈你的看法。


内容包括:

1.

列举中小学生面临的健康问 题。


2

.谈谈怎样才能保持健康。


Many

students

like

eating

junk

food

very

much

(

结合要点:写中学生面临的饮食健康问题

).

They

have


poor

eyesight

(

)


because_they _don't_have_the_right_way_to_read_ . And (

连接词,使之与上文连贯

) they often


play

computer

games

for

several

hours

(

< p>中

).


Here_are_some_suggestions on how_to_keep_healthy in our life. We must have healthy food,


rather

than

junk

food.

Reading_in_a_right_way

is

good

for

our

eyesight.

We

should

stay

away

from


computer games. If_we_can_do_these_things, I think(

结合要点:明确提出观点

) we will keep fit.



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健康生活关系到青少年的成长。最近,你们班就

KFC(

肯德基< /p>

)

食品的优缺点进行了讨论。请你根据下表提


示简要描述同 学们的看法,并发表自己的观点。


Recently, our class held a discussion about


优点

(advantages)


◆美味


◆时尚


◆体验西餐



(disadvantages)


◆太贵


◆不安全


◆垃圾食品



the

advantages

and

disadvantages

of

KFC.

Here


are the results of it.


On the one hand, KFC has its advantages. It's


delicious

and

eating

in

KFC

is

a

kind

of


fashion. It's also a good way to experience


western food.


学生的


看法


你的观点

……


On the other hand, KFC also has its disadvantages. Most food in KFC is junk food, which is bad


for our health. Besides, the food may not be safe because it's not fresh. What's more, the food


in KFC is usually very expensive.


Though

KFC

is

delicious,

I

prefer

traditional

Chinese

food

which

is

more

delicious.

To

keep

healthy,


we should eat less junk food. It's a good idea to have more healthy food like vegetables and


fruit, just as the saying goes,

An apple a day keeps the doctor away.


4,

< p>未来的计划和设想,对计划或打算进行描述,同时表达自己的愿望及计划实施的效果等。


1

The summer/winter holiday is coming.


2

I'm going to have a good rest and relax myself.


3

I'm sure I'll have an interesting and meaningful holiday.


4

If possible, I'd like to go to Beijing for a visit of the Great Wall. 5

We are going to


meet at the school gate at 7

00 on Sunday morning.


6

I am going to take part in the social activities so that I can know more about the society.


7

I

will try to spend more time in chatting with my parents and help

them to do some

housework.


8

I will read more useful books because reading more books is not only interesting but also


can make me learn more knowledge.


紧张的初中学习生活就要结束了,你即将迎来一个 轻松的暑假。请根据下面方框内的提示写一篇短文,谈


谈你的假期计划。


【佳作赏析】

The summer holiday is coming . I'm


going to have a good rest and learn to relax



myself (

结合要点:描写好好休息,学会放松

). I


1.

好好休息,学会放松


will

read

more

useful

books

because

reading

more


2.

读书,因为读书既有趣又能学到很多知识


books is not only interesting but also can make


3.

陪父母聊天,帮他们做家务


me learn more knowledge . I will try to spend


4.

参加社会活动,了解社会


more time in chatting with my parents and help


5.

……


them to dosome housework (

结合要点:写陪父母聊


天,帮他们做家务

). I am going to take part in the social activities (

结合要点:描写参加社会


活动

) so that I can know more about the society. If possible, I'd like to go to Beijing for a


visit

of

the

Great

Wall (

适当发挥拓展

).

I'm

sure

I'll

have

an

interesting

and

meaningful

summer


holiday.


初三毕业在 即,你班将组织一次课外活动。假如你是班长,请根据提示内容,用英文写一篇

80

词左右的


中考英语作文写作技巧及万能模板


活动计划。


内容要点:

1

下周日早上

8

点在校门口集合,

下午

2

点返回;

2

坐公交车前往寸金公园

(Cunjin

Park)


3

.唱歌、跳舞、野餐、与老师合影;


Daniel


4

.带齐食物、饮料等;

5

.注意安全和防火。


Our

class

is

going

to

have

a

picnic

in

Cunjin


Park

next

Sunday.

We

are

going

to

meet

at

the


Appearance


Likes


Dislikes



sports


school

gate

at

8

00

a

m.

on

Sunday

morning.


And we will be back at 2

00 p

m. We plan


to take a bus to Cunjin Park. We will have


helpful

help the old cross the road


many

activities

there,

for

example,

singing,


kind

work at the Helping Hands Club


dancing, having a picnic and taking photos


Personality


creative

create a TV program


with our teachers. I'm sure we will have a



lot

of

fun.

I

will

ask

my

classmates

to

take


What can you learn from him


plenty

of

food

and

drink.

We

should

pay


attention to the safety. And we must keep away from fire all the time.



5,

人物故事类要求考 生对人物进行描写。主要涉及描写人物的简历、变化以及自己对此人物的看法等。


1

My friend Jenny comes from New York.


2

She has a round face and often wears a pair of glasses.


3

He often helps his classmates with the homework, and also helps the people in trouble.


4

I want to be a person like Helen from now and get along well with everyone.


5

I

miss

so

many

good

friends,

especially

my

best

friend

David. 6

He

is

a

15yearold

student,


who is outgoing.


7

He is good at playing basketball.


8

I hope that he will become a famous person in the future and we can keep in touch with each


other

在初中三年的英语学习中,

Daniel

的善良和助人为乐等优秀品质给同学 们留下了深刻的印象。

请根据下表


提示,用英语写一篇题为“

< p>My Friend Daniel

”的短文。



My friend Daniel comes from Beijing Sunshine Secondary School. He has a round face and often


wears a pair of glasses (

结合要点:描写图片中人物的长相

). He is good at playing computer games


(

结合要点:

写擅长玩电脑游戏

),

but_(

转折词的使用,

使行文跌宕起伏

)

he

dislikes

sports.

He

has

many


good

personalities.

He

is

helpful

(

结合要点:写乐于助人

).

He

often_(

使文章流畅自然

)

helps

his


classmates with the homework, and also_(

使文章过渡自然

) helps the old cross the road. He is


kind

to

others

(

结合要点:写对人友善

).

He

works

at

the

Helping

Hands

Club.

He

is

willing

to

help


the people in need. He is also creative (

结合要点:写有创造性

). For_example_(

举例说明,使文


章生动

),

he

can

create

a

TV

program.

He

is

generous

to

his

friends

(

结合要点:适当展开

).

He

likes


to share his things with them. So (so

一词引出作者学到的内容

) I want to be a person like Daniel


from now and get along well with everyone.



中考英语作文写作技巧及万能模板


亲爱的同学 ,你即将初中毕业了。在这三年的学习生活中,你一定结交了许多好朋友,请你用英语写一篇

短文,介绍一下你的好朋友

Li Lei


要点如下:

1

.他乐于助人,性格外向,兴趣广泛;


2

< p>.他成绩优秀,经常在学习上帮助我;

3

.我准备送他一个……以表达感谢;

4

.我对他的祝福和希望。


We are graduating from school soon. I miss so many good friends, especially my best friend


Li Lei.


He is a 15yearold student, who is outgoing. He is always willing to help others. He has lots


of interests such as swimming, reading and drawing. He is good at all the subjects and he often


helps me with my lessons so that I can keep up with my classmates.


We are going to leave school. I'll send him a pen to thank him for helping me so much. I hope


that he will become a famous person in the future. And we can keep in touch with each other.



6,

节假日活动、旅游景点 、旅游线路以及写游览日记等。


1

It's a good idea to go traveling during the summer vacation. 2

I think the best place to


visit is the Great Wall.


3

We can see many ancient buildings, including palaces, temples and towers in Xi'an.


4

You'd better go with your friends or family.


5

I am going to travel to London with my parents after the final exam. 6

We'll be away for


about seven days.


7

I hope that you can provide me with some information about the customs of France.


8

I would like to travel to some exciting places this summer holiday.


旅游可以让人身心放松,增长见识……初中毕业在即,很多同学想利用暑假去旅游。请你根据下面 的内容


提示,写一篇短文,并给出旅行建议。


内容提示:

1

Where is the best place to go?2

What is the place special for? 3

What should


you pay attention to?


It's a good idea to go traveling during the summer vacation. I think the best place to visit


is the Palace Museum(

结合要点:点明旅游的最好的地方

). As_we_all_know (

高级用法

), the Palace


Museum, also known as the Purple Forbidden City, is_wonderful and famous_for (

增加了文章的


亮点

) its long history in the world. We can see a lot of ancient buildings, including palaces,


temples and towers (

结合要点:描述其特殊的地方

). If_we_want_to_visit_the_Palace_Museum , we


should

pay_attention_to

(pay

attention

to

“注意”

高级短语

)

our

safety.

We_had_better

(had

better


“最好”

,后跟 动词原形,增强了语言表达能力

) go with our friends or our family(

结合要点:提出


合理的建议

).



假如你叫李华,是某中学初三学生。你计划于毕业考试后去英 格兰旅行。请根据下列提示给你的英格兰笔


友写一封信,告诉他你的安排并就相关问题向 他询问。


1

.考试结束后和父母一起去英格兰旅行;< /p>

2

.计划在英格兰停留十天;

3

.向他询问英格兰的 风俗习惯;


4

.请他建议去英格兰哪些地方旅行。


Dear Ben


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