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如何写想象类作文
写作任务
你校英文报向全校同学征文,主题为Schools in the future,
请你展开合理想象,用英语写一篇短文向报
社投稿。
注意:1. 词数100左右;2.
可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
写作指导
一、审题定调
本写作任务要求同学们展开合理想象,用英
语写一篇描述未来的学校的文章,体裁属于说明文。要写好想
象类作文,首先,一定要从实际生活出发,
借助已有的知识,展开合理的、丰富的想象。其次,内容要具
体,根据题目的要求和提示,围绕主题想象
相关的材料,材料越丰富充实,文章才会越生动,切忌说空话。
二、谋篇布局
针对本篇习作而言,我们可以把全文分为三部分:
第一部分:引出话题(说明写作目的);
第二部分:具体描述(分层次、多方面对未来的学校展开描述);
第三部分:总结全文。
三、组织语言
第一部分:引出话题。
普通表达 高级表达
★What
future schools might be like is difficult to
★Have you ever thought about ...?
★What do
you think believe suppose ...?
predict.
★Can you imagine ...?
★It’s hard to
imagine predict ...
★It is fascinating to
imagine them in the future.
I think they must
be different from what they are now.
★No one
knows for sure but it’s certain that they will
change a lot.
第二部分:具体描述。
普通表达 高级表达
When someone is close to comes near ..., it
can When someone draws near approaches ..., it
can
recognize ..., let them in and stop
prevent keep identify ... automatically, letting
them in and shutting
other persons from
entering ... for the safety of ... others out to
ensure ... safety.
There will be neither
blackboard in classrooms nor Having a larger
capacity and being convenient to use,
text
books, because the blackboard will be replaced by
a big screen will take the place of a blackboard
and ...
a big screen and ... rather than on
the textbooks.
★Robots doing the cleaning, ...
Robots will do the cleaning instead of ..., so
that
★With robots to do the cleaning, ...
they ...
第三部分:总结全文。
普通表达 高级表达
★Robots will do the cleaning, which will set
aside
more time for students to ...
I
believe every one of us will hope to study in such
a You can’t wait to go to such a wonderful school,
can
wonderful school.
范文
you?
普通范文
What do you think schools in
the future will be like? I think they must be
different from what they are now.
Firstly,
when someone is close to the school gate, it can
recognize the students and teachers from the
school,
let them in and prevent other persons
from entering the school for the safety of
students. Secondly, there will be
neither
blackboard in classrooms nor text books, because
the blackboard will be replaced by a big screen
and
students will get knowledge from the
Internet. Thirdly, robots will do the cleaning
instead of students, so that they
will have
more time for after-class activities.
I
believe every one of us will hope to study in such
a wonderful school.
高级范文
It’s hard to
predict what future schools will be like. However,
it is fascinating to imagine them in the future.
First of all, when someone approaches the
school gate, it can identify the students and
teachers from the
school automatically,
letting them in and shutting others out to ensure
students’ safety. Secondly, having a larger
capacity and being convenient to use, a big
screen will take the place of a blackboard and the
students will get
more knowledge from the
Internet rather than on the textbooks. Thirdly,
with robots to do the cleaning, students
will
have more time for after-class activities.
You
can’t wait to go to such a wonderful school, can
you?
练习
某英文报社An Outlook
on Future栏目向中学生征稿,主题为Cars in the future,
请你展开合理想象,用
英语写一篇短文向报社投稿。
注意:1. 词数100左右;2.
可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
答案
It’s hard to imagine what
cars might be like in the future, but it’s certain
that they will change greatly.
As far as I’m
concerned, powered by solar or wind energy, cars
will be more energy-saving and do less harm
to
the environment as well. In addition, with high-
tech equipment being installed, cars will be so
intelligent that
they will be able to drive
themselves. What’s more, the equipment in cars
will monitor conditions around the
roads and
fly in the sky if the traffic is terrible.
Isn’t it amazing? I believe all these will
come true in the near future.
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