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图表描述专题训练(一)
这类作文时,注意以下几点:
第一,审题时,
除了要把握好图表的
表层信息
外,
还要分析图标 的深层含义,
如
原因、
根源、
可能的发展 趋势
等。
图表中所提供的说明文字往往是问题
的切入点,
一定要仔细分析。
第二,描述数据时要
抓住重点, p>
为中心服务
,
不必面面俱到,
切忌毫无目的地罗
列图表中的数据。如果数据较多,抓住图表中的极端点(如最大或最小、
最多或最少,最好或最差)和基本相同进行描述。
第三,
,最好放在文章的开头,这样会使重点突出,主题明了。
图表范例一
Students Use of Computers
14
12
10
8
6
4
2
0
199
0
1995
2002
2002
Hours
例文:
Students Use of Computers
提纲:
1.
上图所示为某校大学生平均每周使用计算机的时间:
1990
年(
2 hours
)
, 1995
年
(4 hours), 2002
年
(14 hours)
,请
描述其变化;
2.
请说明发生这些变化的原因(可从计算 机的用途、价格或
社会发展等方面加以说明)
;
3.
你认为目前大学生在计算机使用中有什么困难或问题。
参考范文
(1)
Student Use of Computers
As
is clearly shown in the chart, the number of hours
students spent
on
computers
increased
from
two
to
four hours per
week
from
1990 to
1995. Especially, the
number rose to about 14 hour per week in 2002.
There
are
three
factors
leading
to
the
change.
To
begin
with,
the
price
of
computers
is
getting
much
lower
than
before
so
that
many
students
can
afford
it.
In
addition,
it
is
very
convenient
for
us
to
study
with
the
help
of
computers.
For
example,
e-mails
enable
us
to
keep
in
touch
with
our
teachers
and
friends.
Last
but
not
least,
with
fast
development
of the modern
society,
a
computer
has become
a
must
for
many people. To
sum up, low price, convenience and wide use
contribute
to the increase in the use
of computers.
As for me, student use of
computers is a double-edged sword. On the
one
hand,
it
is
a
good
helper
in
searching
for
information,
drawing
pictures, etc. One the
other hand, various computer games might distract
students from their studies. In brief,
computers can serve us well if they
are
used in the right way.
参考范文(
2
)
Student Use of Computers
As
is
clearly
shown
in
the
chart,
the
average
number
of
hours
a
student
spent
on
computers
increased
from
two
to
four
hours
per
week
from
1990
to
1995.
Especially,
the
number
reached
approximately
14
hour per
week
in
2002.
Why
are
there such
great
changes during
these
days?
There are three
factors leading to this
phenomenon. Firstly, because
of the sharp decline
in the price of computers, most college students
can
afford
one.
Secondly,
the
Internet
provides
access
to
various
kinds
of
information
students are interested in. Finally, playing
computer games or
surfing
online
is
relaxing.
To
sum
up,
low
price,
easy
access
to
information and
wide use make students use computers a lot.
As for me, computers do bring
convenience to students; however, it is
no good fro students to spend too much
time chatting online or playing
computer games. In brief, in spite of
the problems concerning the use of
computers, we can
’
t deny that computers are of more merits than defects.
Financial
Sources of College Students
1.
描述中美大学生经济资助状况
2.
分析这种状况的成因
3.
预测中国大学生经济资助的可 能变化
examinees
financial source
s
parents
45%
Part-time
jobs
40%
scholarship
15%
American Students
Chinese Students
90%
5%
5%
Sa
mple 1
Financial Sources of
College Students
From the table, we can
see clearly that Chinese college students and
their American peers rely on different
financial sources for their life and
study. About 90% of Chinese students
get money from their parents. In
contrast, only 45% of American students
resort to this way. About 40% of
American students depend on part-time
jobs for income, but only 5% of
Chinese
students
do
so.
Scholarship
is
the
financial
source
for
15%
of
American students,
whereas only for 5% of Chinese students.
There are several reasons leading to
this difference. On the one hand,
independence is greatly honored in
American society, and students would
be
proud
to
depend
on
themselves.
Besides,
they
have
a
more
flexible
schedule so they can have more time to
do part-time jobs. On the other
hand,
some
Chinese
students
take
their
parents
’
financial
support
for
granted.
Similarly,
parents
believe
it
’
s
their
duty
to
finance
their
children
’
s education
I think with the reform in college
education, this tendency in China
may
be
changed.
The
widespread
adoption
of
credit-system
will
give
Chinese students more time and
flexibility to pursue part-time jobs and
get more independence from their
parents. Also, with the passage of time,
both the students
’
and the parents
’
ideas will change greatly. Thus, more
and more Chinese
college students are sure to rely on themselves
rather
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